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Sierra's introduction is portrayed as an excuse to get rid of her. She is, however, highly competent and both fanatically loyal to, and in love with, Ravenna. Ravenna herself is a lesbian and, notably, the decision to send Sierra was made overnight. I suggest that Sierra is acting as Ravenna's agent in Gwen's operation and was sent because Ravenna trusted her, not because of her abrasive personality.
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Sierra's introduction is portrayed as an excuse to get rid of her. She is, however, highly competent and both fanatically loyal to, and in love with, Ravenna. Ravenna herself is a lesbian and, notably, the decision to send Sierra was made overnight. I suggest It's likely that Sierra is acting as Ravenna's agent in Gwen's operation and was sent because Ravenna trusted her, not because of her abrasive personality.
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Sierra's introduction is portrayed as an excuse to get rid of her. She is, however, highly competent and both fanatically loyal to, and in love with, Ravenna. Ravenna herself is a lesbian and, notably, the decision to send Sierra was made overnight. I suggest that Sierra is acting as Ravenna's agent in Gwen's operation and was sent because Ravenna trusted her, not because of her abrasive personality.
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Sierra's introduction is portrayed as an excuse to get rid of her. She is, however, highly competent and both fanatically loyal to, and in love with, Ravenna. Ravenna herself is a lesbian and, notably, the decision to send Sierra was made overnight. I suggest that Sierra is acting as Ravenna's agent in Gwen's operation and was sent because Ravenna trusted her, not because of her abrasive personality.personality.
* If nothing else it has been confirmed that [[spoiler: She and Ravenna are lovers and she's hiding the real reason she was sent.]]
* If nothing else it has been confirmed that [[spoiler: She and Ravenna are lovers and she's hiding the real reason she was sent.]]
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[[WMG: Sierra was NOT ReassignedToAntarctica]]
Sierra's introduction is portrayed as an excuse to get rid of her. She is, however, highly competent and both fanatically loyal to, and in love with, Ravenna. Ravenna herself is a lesbian and, notably, the decision to send Sierra was made overnight. I suggest that Sierra is acting as Ravenna's agent in Gwen's operation and was sent because Ravenna trusted her, not because of her abrasive personality.
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[[WMG: Kylie was illegally trained]]
Gunmages are described as being weaker than other mages, which is why they cannot use repeaters. Nothing stops a stronger mage learning their powers, but this would upset the delicate balance of power between other mage factions. Kylie was too strong to become a gunmage, but someone hid that fact.
Gunmages are described as being weaker than other mages, which is why they cannot use repeaters. Nothing stops a stronger mage learning their powers, but this would upset the delicate balance of power between other mage factions. Kylie was too strong to become a gunmage, but someone hid that fact.
