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**** That 'moment' is just dated '1966', and Nightingale muses about getting himself 'a new model' Jaguar. In the UK new model cars are almost always 'released' in September and October. So the Thames getting a new goddess is very likely to be the cause.
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* Issue #2 of "Black Mould" gives extra credence to the theory that it is Peter. Literally his [[YourWorstNightmare worst fear]], even worse than his mother and father splitting up, is him having to leave London forever. That is not a natural level of attachment to a city.
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* Issue #2 of "Black Mould" gives extra credence to the theory that it is Peter. Literally his [[YourWorstNightmare worst fear]], fear, even worse than his mother and father splitting up, is him having to leave London forever. That is not a natural level of attachment to a city.
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[[WMG: The pub Zach offered to take Lesley to visit near the end of ''Broken Homes'' was the Goat and Crocodile.]]
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[[WMG: The pub Zach offered to take Lesley to visit near the end of for a date in ''Broken Homes'' was the Goat and Crocodile.]]
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It's described as a fae-friendly establishment that's not so welcoming to wizards or the Thames clan, which is consistent with Lulu's attitudes and with the Faceless Man's interest in the place.
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It's described as a fae-friendly establishment that's not so welcoming to wizards or the Thames clan, which is consistent with Lulu's attitudes and with attitudes. Given the Faceless Man's later interest in the place.
place, it's plausible that Lesley asked to go there specifically to case the location. Granted, it's not "up west" from Skygarden as Zach tells it ... but since when has Zach Palmer stated the location of ''anything'' accurately, the first time he's asked about it?
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[[WMG: The pub Zach offered to take Lesley to visit near the end of ''Broken Homes'' was the Goat and Crocodile.]]
It's described as a fae-friendly establishment that's not so welcoming to wizards or the Thames clan, which is consistent with Lulu's attitudes and with the Faceless Man's interest in the place.
It's described as a fae-friendly establishment that's not so welcoming to wizards or the Thames clan, which is consistent with Lulu's attitudes and with the Faceless Man's interest in the place.
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* Brandon Coopertown, Punch's first sequestration victim, visited Los Angeles for three days before returning home to commit another two homicides. During that time, he could've [[spoiler: crossed paths with the already-unhinged Anthony Lane and fomented the man's brewing [=ASU=] paranoia via the 'boundary splash' effect. A few years later, when Peter releases Punch to foil Chorley's schemes, a mental ripple-effect strikes everyone on Earth whom the spirit of riot and rebellion had previously touched upon, causing the mentally-fragile Lane to lose it entirely and go postal on a tech start-up.]]
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* Brandon Coopertown, Punch's first sequestration victim, visited Los Angeles for three days before returning home to commit another two homicides. During that time, he could've [[spoiler: crossed paths with the already-unhinged Anthony Lane and fomented the man's brewing [=ASU=] paranoia via the 'boundary splash' effect.'splash' effect Punch has on the frustrated. A few years later, when Peter releases Punch to foil Chorley's schemes, a mental ripple-effect strikes everyone on Earth whom the spirit of riot and rebellion had previously touched upon, causing the mentally-fragile Lane to lose it entirely and go postal on a tech start-up.]]
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[[WMG: Mr. Punch is to blame for the events of ''False Value''.]]
* Brandon Coopertown, Punch's first sequestration victim, visited Los Angeles for three days before returning home to commit another two homicides. During that time, he could've [[spoiler: crossed paths with the already-unhinged Anthony Lane and fomented the man's brewing [=ASU=] paranoia via the 'boundary splash' effect. A few years later, when Peter releases Punch to foil Chorley's schemes, a mental ripple-effect strikes everyone on Earth whom the spirit of riot and rebellion had previously touched upon, causing the mentally-fragile Lane to lose it entirely and go postal on a tech start-up.]]
* Brandon Coopertown, Punch's first sequestration victim, visited Los Angeles for three days before returning home to commit another two homicides. During that time, he could've [[spoiler: crossed paths with the already-unhinged Anthony Lane and fomented the man's brewing [=ASU=] paranoia via the 'boundary splash' effect. A few years later, when Peter releases Punch to foil Chorley's schemes, a mental ripple-effect strikes everyone on Earth whom the spirit of riot and rebellion had previously touched upon, causing the mentally-fragile Lane to lose it entirely and go postal on a tech start-up.]]
