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* This would be tied to his avoidance of alcohol - he CantHoldHisLiquor, sure, but possibly because he hasn't built up a tolerance, because he's been afraid of losing control when drunk.
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Tuff is repressed and scared of hurting people in his shark form. Possibly this is why he can't transform - because he doesn't want to want it. Being a good guy, Dragonfly won't stoop to MindControl here, but he can prod Tuff to relax.
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Tuff is repressed and scared of hurting people in his shark form. Possibly this is why he can't transform - because he doesn't want to want it. Being a good guy, Dragonfly won't stoop to MindControl here, but he can prod Tuff to relax.relax.
[[WMG: Steller was "overlooked" because has too much EvilVirtues to be the Raven's herald]]
* He's more of an evil overlord material - he doesn't want to destroy the world, he wants to rule it, maybe even not too evilly, because that's counterproductive ("promised the world in exchange for his soul"). Steller is lawful to Snow's chaotic: he cares about efficiency and things going smoothly, while Snow only wants everything to burn in an amusing manner. So, while Snow's going to do evil [[ForTheEvulz anyway]], Steller might become a problem for the omnicidal spirit in the long run.
[[WMG: Steller was "overlooked" because has too much EvilVirtues to be the Raven's herald]]
* He's more of an evil overlord material - he doesn't want to destroy the world, he wants to rule it, maybe even not too evilly, because that's counterproductive ("promised the world in exchange for his soul"). Steller is lawful to Snow's chaotic: he cares about efficiency and things going smoothly, while Snow only wants everything to burn in an amusing manner. So, while Snow's going to do evil [[ForTheEvulz anyway]], Steller might become a problem for the omnicidal spirit in the long run.
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but he doesn't actually have any, and I shouldn't put wmg's before getting to that point in my reread
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Tuff is repressed and scared of hurting people in his shark form. Possibly this is why he can't transform - because he doesn't want to want it. Being a good guy, Dragonfly won't stoop to MindControl here, but he can prod Tuff to relax.
[[WMG: Raven's suicidal tendencies are caused by an interpretation of the prophecy.]]
* He is to choose "the one who made him" over the one he loves. At the moment he thinks it's about literally being made, and his literal creator is The Great Raven, but that doesn't necessarily mean betrayal. The Great Raven associates himself with death. Raven, desperate not to betray Credenza, may latch on this interpretation and decide he needs to choose death, to die (i.e. leave her) - that he's being called for a HeroicSacrifice.
[[WMG: Raven's suicidal tendencies are caused by an interpretation of the prophecy.]]
* He is to choose "the one who made him" over the one he loves. At the moment he thinks it's about literally being made, and his literal creator is The Great Raven, but that doesn't necessarily mean betrayal. The Great Raven associates himself with death. Raven, desperate not to betray Credenza, may latch on this interpretation and decide he needs to choose death, to die (i.e. leave her) - that he's being called for a HeroicSacrifice.
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Tuff is repressed and scared of hurting people in his shark form. Possibly this is why he can't transform - because he doesn't want to want it. Being a good guy, Dragonfly won't stoop to MindControl here, but he can prod Tuff to relax.
[[WMG: Raven's suicidal tendencies are caused by an interpretation of the prophecy.]]
* He is to choose "the one who made him" over the one he loves. At the moment he thinks it's about literally being made, and his literal creator is The Great Raven, but that doesn't necessarily mean betrayal. The Great Raven associates himself with death. Raven, desperate not to betray Credenza, may latch on this interpretation and decide he needs to choose death, to die (i.e. leave her) - that he's being called for a HeroicSacrifice.relax.
[[WMG: Raven's suicidal tendencies are caused by an interpretation of the prophecy.]]
* He is to choose "the one who made him" over the one he loves. At the moment he thinks it's about literally being made, and his literal creator is The Great Raven, but that doesn't necessarily mean betrayal. The Great Raven associates himself with death. Raven, desperate not to betray Credenza, may latch on this interpretation and decide he needs to choose death, to die (i.e. leave her) - that he's being called for a HeroicSacrifice.
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* There's [[http://archipelagocomic.com/comic/?id=131 her dad's magic]], and frankly [[http://archipelagocomic.com/comic/?id=632 Credenza's magic]]. Behold the [[AnimalMotifs dragonfly motif]].
* Olivia and Credenza's faces [[http://archipelagocomic.com/comic/?id=1083 are very similar]]. And after the ArtEvolution, we know that this isn't just a case of OnlySixFaces.
* Credenza's [[http://archipelagocomic.com/comic/?id=131 dad]] and [[http://www.archipelagocomic.com/comic/?id=458 Dragonfly]] also look very similar.
* Olivia and Credenza's faces [[http://archipelagocomic.com/comic/?id=1083 are very similar]]. And after the ArtEvolution, we know that this isn't just a case of OnlySixFaces.
* Credenza's [[http://archipelagocomic.com/comic/?id=131 dad]] and [[http://www.archipelagocomic.com/comic/?id=458 Dragonfly]] also look very similar.
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* There's [[http://archipelagocomic.com/comic/?id=131 her dad's magic]], magic (Dragonfly green), and frankly [[http://archipelagocomic.com/comic/?id=632 Credenza's magic]]. magic (ditto). Behold the [[AnimalMotifs dragonfly motif]].
wings]].
* Olivia and Credenza's faces[[http://archipelagocomic.com/comic/?id=1083 are very similar]].similar. And after the ArtEvolution, we know that this isn't just a case of OnlySixFaces.
* Credenza's[[http://archipelagocomic.com/comic/?id=131 dad]] dad and [[http://www.archipelagocomic.com/comic/?id=458 Dragonfly]] Dragonfly also look very similar.
* Olivia and Credenza's faces
* Credenza's
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* Heck, even ''The Great Raven'' [[http://thearchipelago.smackjeeves.com/comics/1991661/book-10-page-38/ mistakes her for Dragonfly!]]
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* Heck, even ''The Great Raven'' [[http://thearchipelago.smackjeeves.com/comics/1991661/book-10-page-38/ himself mistakes her for Dragonfly!]]Dragonfly!
[[WMG: Tuff's inability to transform is largely psychological.]]
* What did Dragonfly say?
-->'''Dragonfly''': Your heart is like a watch wound too tight. If you continue like this, you will most certainly break. What do you keep so desperately inside yourself, Tuff?
Tuff is repressed and scared of hurting people in his shark form. Possibly this is why he can't transform - because he doesn't want to want it. Being a good guy, Dragonfly won't stoop to MindControl here, but he can prod Tuff to relax.
[[WMG: Raven's suicidal tendencies are caused by an interpretation of the prophecy.]]
* He is to choose "the one who made him" over the one he loves. At the moment he thinks it's about literally being made, and his literal creator is The Great Raven, but that doesn't necessarily mean betrayal. The Great Raven associates himself with death. Raven, desperate not to betray Credenza, may latch on this interpretation and decide he needs to choose death, to die (i.e. leave her) - that he's being called for a HeroicSacrifice.
[[WMG: Tuff's inability to transform is largely psychological.]]
* What did Dragonfly say?
-->'''Dragonfly''': Your heart is like a watch wound too tight. If you continue like this, you will most certainly break. What do you keep so desperately inside yourself, Tuff?
Tuff is repressed and scared of hurting people in his shark form. Possibly this is why he can't transform - because he doesn't want to want it. Being a good guy, Dragonfly won't stoop to MindControl here, but he can prod Tuff to relax.
[[WMG: Raven's suicidal tendencies are caused by an interpretation of the prophecy.]]
* He is to choose "the one who made him" over the one he loves. At the moment he thinks it's about literally being made, and his literal creator is The Great Raven, but that doesn't necessarily mean betrayal. The Great Raven associates himself with death. Raven, desperate not to betray Credenza, may latch on this interpretation and decide he needs to choose death, to die (i.e. leave her) - that he's being called for a HeroicSacrifice.
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* And it makes sense that Olivia and Dragonfly would be able to have descendants at all; if Dragonfly and Olivia loved each other, and she built his body, it might have occurred to her to give him ... ''those'' parts.
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* And it makes sense that Olivia and Dragonfly would be able to have descendants at all; if Dragonfly and Olivia loved each other, and she built his body, it might have occurred to her to give him ... ''those'' parts.parts.
* Heck, even ''The Great Raven'' [[http://thearchipelago.smackjeeves.com/comics/1991661/book-10-page-38/ mistakes her for Dragonfly!]]
* Heck, even ''The Great Raven'' [[http://thearchipelago.smackjeeves.com/comics/1991661/book-10-page-38/ mistakes her for Dragonfly!]]
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[[WMG: Credenza is descended from Dragonfly and Olivia.]]
There is ''lots'' of evidence for this. Warning: Unmarked spoilers.
* There's [[http://archipelagocomic.com/comic/?id=131 her dad's magic]], and frankly [[http://archipelagocomic.com/comic/?id=632 Credenza's magic]]. Behold the [[AnimalMotifs dragonfly motif]].
* Olivia and Credenza's faces [[http://archipelagocomic.com/comic/?id=1083 are very similar]]. And after the ArtEvolution, we know that this isn't just a case of OnlySixFaces.
* Credenza's [[http://archipelagocomic.com/comic/?id=131 dad]] and [[http://www.archipelagocomic.com/comic/?id=458 Dragonfly]] also look very similar.
* And it makes sense that Olivia and Dragonfly would be able to have descendants at all; if Dragonfly and Olivia loved each other, and she built his body, it might have occurred to her to give him ... ''those'' parts.
There is ''lots'' of evidence for this. Warning: Unmarked spoilers.
* There's [[http://archipelagocomic.com/comic/?id=131 her dad's magic]], and frankly [[http://archipelagocomic.com/comic/?id=632 Credenza's magic]]. Behold the [[AnimalMotifs dragonfly motif]].
* Olivia and Credenza's faces [[http://archipelagocomic.com/comic/?id=1083 are very similar]]. And after the ArtEvolution, we know that this isn't just a case of OnlySixFaces.
* Credenza's [[http://archipelagocomic.com/comic/?id=131 dad]] and [[http://www.archipelagocomic.com/comic/?id=458 Dragonfly]] also look very similar.
* And it makes sense that Olivia and Dragonfly would be able to have descendants at all; if Dragonfly and Olivia loved each other, and she built his body, it might have occurred to her to give him ... ''those'' parts.
