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* HotterAndSexier: The first chapter establishes that the story will be steamier than Choices' usual standard, with Niamh and Cassian having bondage games and the sex being described in a bit more detail than normal.
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* HotterAndSexier: The first chapter establishes that the story will be steamier than Choices' usual standard, with Niamh and Cassian having bondage games and the sex being described in a bit more detail than normal. This is also the very first book to be rated Mature due to this.
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* AllegedlyFreeGame: To a significantly worse degree than other Choices stories. Options that cost diamonds in Choices are usually for powerful weapons, clues, combat training, sex scenes, or outfits (though the latter two also show up in this one). ''Witness'' includes diamond choices for things like ''eating breakfast'' and ''treating a burn'', in addition to multilayered sex scenes that end up costing twice as many diamonds as they normally do. Whenever speculation arises about Niamh’s cover, it is a premium option to successfully dispel suspicion, and most of the free choices end up making Niamh look like an ungrateful {{Jerkass}}. The most insane example is in Chapter 27, in which ''dodging a taser'' is a premium choice (meaning that if you don't spend diamonds, Niamh gets tasered and complains about it), whereas it would be a timed choice in just about any other story.
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* AllegedlyFreeGame: To a significantly worse degree than other Choices stories. Options that cost diamonds in Choices are usually for powerful weapons, clues, combat training, sex scenes, or outfits (though the latter two also show up in this one). ''Witness'' includes diamond choices for things like ''eating breakfast'' and ''treating a burn'', in addition to multilayered sex scenes that end up costing twice as many diamonds as they normally do. Whenever speculation arises about Niamh’s cover, it is a premium option to successfully dispel suspicion, and most of the free choices end up making Niamh look like an ungrateful {{Jerkass}}. The most insane example is in Chapter 27, in which ''dodging a taser'' is a premium choice (meaning that if you don't spend diamonds, Niamh gets tasered and complains about it), whereas it would be a timed choice in just about any other story. Fortunately, while diamond choices still exist in Choices books to this day, no other book since has tried to replicate the system from ''Witness''.
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* ArtisticLicenseGeography: People familiar with Nantucket, MA had an issue with the game's version. While there are scenic beaches, there are no [[TheMountainsOfIllinois mountains or hills]]. You also cannot see Boston from Nantucket.
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* CommitmentIssues: Niamh is terrified of the thought of falling in love.
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* NoPronunciationGuide: Niamh's name is pronounced like "neeve."
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* TimeSkip: Chapter 15 and beyond takes place two years after Chapter 14.
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* TimeSkip: Chapter 15 and beyond The second half takes place two years after Chapter 14.the first.
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* AllegedlyFreeGame: Even worse than other games, as there are simple dialogue options that cost diamonds. Whenever speculation arises about Niamh’s cover, it is a premium option to successfully dispel suspicion.
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* AllegedlyFreeGame: Even To a significantly worse degree than other games, as there are simple dialogue options Choices stories. Options that cost diamonds. diamonds in Choices are usually for powerful weapons, clues, combat training, sex scenes, or outfits (though the latter two also show up in this one). ''Witness'' includes diamond choices for things like ''eating breakfast'' and ''treating a burn'', in addition to multilayered sex scenes that end up costing twice as many diamonds as they normally do. Whenever speculation arises about Niamh’s cover, it is a premium option to successfully dispel suspicion. suspicion, and most of the free choices end up making Niamh look like an ungrateful {{Jerkass}}. The most insane example is in Chapter 27, in which ''dodging a taser'' is a premium choice (meaning that if you don't spend diamonds, Niamh gets tasered and complains about it), whereas it would be a timed choice in just about any other story.
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-->'''Harika''': You can’t keep hooking up with random guys without catching feelings!
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-->'''Harika''': You can’t keep hooking up with random guys guys/girls without catching feelings!
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!! ''Witness: A Bodyguard Romance'' includes examples of:
