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Given that there is only one GoodEnding and that all the other endings lead to the same GameOver page, this would fit better in the VisualNovel sub-genre of a KineticNovel.
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Given that there is only one GoodEnding and that all the other endings lead to the same GameOver page, this would fit better in the VisualNovel sub-genre SubGenre of a KineticNovel.
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* {{Flanderisation}}: While Smoldep was a HeroicComedicSociopath CatGirl in the original ''An Extreme Adventure'', her [[{{Pun}} more cattier]] personality traits are taken UpToEleven here. For example, she definitely wasn’t a SirSwearsALot. However, she was still just as much of a DeadpanSnarker.
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* {{Flanderisation}}: While Smoldep was a HeroicComedicSociopath CatGirl in the original ''An Extreme Adventure'', her [[{{Pun}} more cattier]] personality traits are taken UpToEleven up to eleven here. For example, she definitely wasn’t a SirSwearsALot. However, she was still just as much of a DeadpanSnarker.
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The game begins with Smoldep, a CatGirl whose sprite is ripped from ''UsefulNotes/RPGMaker VX Ace'', interrupting the player character’s InnerMonologue to shill her RPG and her Youtube channel.
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The game begins with Smoldep, a CatGirl whose sprite is ripped from ''UsefulNotes/RPGMaker VX Ace'', interrupting the player character’s InnerMonologue to shill her RPG and her [[PleaseSubscribeToOurChannel Youtube channel.
channel]].
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* {{Flanderisation}}: While Smoldep was a pop-culture referencing, PluckyComicRelief murderhobo CatGirl in the original ''An Extreme Adventure'', her [[{{Pun}} more cattier]] personality traits are taken UpToEleven here. For example, she definitely wasn’t a SirSwearsALot. However, she was still just as much of a DeadpanSnarker.
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* {{Flanderisation}}: While Smoldep was a pop-culture referencing, PluckyComicRelief murderhobo HeroicComedicSociopath CatGirl in the original ''An Extreme Adventure'', her [[{{Pun}} more cattier]] personality traits are taken UpToEleven here. For example, she definitely wasn’t a SirSwearsALot. However, she was still just as much of a DeadpanSnarker.
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** Smoldep also casts *fucking die* on the player when [[spoiler:they refuse to like and comment on her Youtube channel]].
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** Smoldep also casts *fucking die* on the player when [[spoiler:they refuse to like and comment on her Youtube channel]].channel]].
* {{Troll}}: Most of the links are an attempt to JustForFun/RickRoll you. The game even assumes you’ve been rick rolled by it enough times to have memorised the link for the PopQuiz.
* {{Troll}}: Most of the links are an attempt to JustForFun/RickRoll you. The game even assumes you’ve been rick rolled by it enough times to have memorised the link for the PopQuiz.
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''[[https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1NZbxcxJ0sMnqVRxXzR-e8ztkRygDgt1kr5lzK7PY16Q/edit Smoldep’s Magickal Adventure]]'' is a [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin Google Slides Visual Novel]] written by Athanasynt/Ash S. It is notable for StylisticSuck, [[https://youtu.be/dQw4w9WgXcQ making you question your life decisions]], and for having been created with a presentation maker.
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''[[https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1NZbxcxJ0sMnqVRxXzR-e8ztkRygDgt1kr5lzK7PY16Q/edit Smoldep’s Magickal Adventure]]'' is a [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin Google Slides Visual Novel]] written by [[Tropers/{{athanasynt}} Athanasynt/Ash S.S]]. It is notable for StylisticSuck, [[https://youtu.be/dQw4w9WgXcQ making you question your life decisions]], and for having been created with a presentation maker.
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[[https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1NZbxcxJ0sMnqVRxXzR-e8ztkRygDgt1kr5lzK7PY16Q/edit Smoldep’s Magickal Adventure]] is a [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin Google Slides Visual Novel]] written by Athanasynt/Ash S. It is notable for StylisticSuck, [[https://youtu.be/dQw4w9WgXcQ making you question your life decisions]], and for having been created with a presentation maker.
Smoldep’s Magickal Adventure (Also officially known as Smoldep’s Magickal Acid Trip) is the first instalment of the eponymous MetaFiction series. However, unlike it’s continuations ''VisualNovel/SmoldepsMagickalAdventure2EvenGayer'' and ''VisualNovel/SmoldepsMagickalAdventure3TheBigdep'', it does not contain any plot and [[WordOfGod was made to be Athanasynt’s practice run of making visual novels in Google Slides]].
Smoldep’s Magickal Adventure (Also officially known as Smoldep’s Magickal Acid Trip) is the first instalment of the eponymous MetaFiction series. However, unlike it’s continuations ''VisualNovel/SmoldepsMagickalAdventure2EvenGayer'' and ''VisualNovel/SmoldepsMagickalAdventure3TheBigdep'', it does not contain any plot and [[WordOfGod was made to be Athanasynt’s practice run of making visual novels in Google Slides]].
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[[https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1NZbxcxJ0sMnqVRxXzR-e8ztkRygDgt1kr5lzK7PY16Q/edit Smoldep’s Magickal Adventure]] is a [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin Google Slides Visual Novel]] written by Athanasynt/Ash S and is notable for StylisticSuck, [[https://youtu.be/dQw4w9WgXcQ making you question your life decisions]], and for having been created with a presentation maker.
Smoldep’s Magickal Adventure (Also officially known as Smoldep’s Magickal Acid Trip) is the first instalment of the eponymous MetaFiction series, however, unlike it’s continuations VisualNovel/SmoldepsMagickalAdventure2EvenGayer and SmoldepsMagickalAdventure3:TheBigdep, it does not contain any plot and [[WordOfGod was made to be Athanasynt’s practice run of making visual novels in Google Slides.]]
Technically a SpinOff series. However the original game featuring Smoldep as a side character, AnExtremeAdventure, is not out for public release and was made by Athanasynt’s friend TampliteSiphronKents to be shared in their puny little social circle.
The game begins with Smoldep, a CatGirl whose sprite is ripped off RPGMakerVXAce interrupting the player character’s InnerMonologue to shill her RPG and her Youtube channel.
Smoldep’s Magickal Adventure (Also officially known as Smoldep’s Magickal Acid Trip) is the first instalment of the eponymous MetaFiction series, however, unlike it’s continuations VisualNovel/SmoldepsMagickalAdventure2EvenGayer and SmoldepsMagickalAdventure3:TheBigdep, it does not contain any plot and [[WordOfGod was made to be Athanasynt’s practice run of making visual novels in Google Slides.]]
Technically a SpinOff series. However the original game featuring Smoldep as a side character, AnExtremeAdventure, is not out for public release and was made by Athanasynt’s friend TampliteSiphronKents to be shared in their puny little social circle.
The game begins with Smoldep, a CatGirl whose sprite is ripped off RPGMakerVXAce interrupting the player character’s InnerMonologue to shill her RPG and her Youtube channel.
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[[https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1NZbxcxJ0sMnqVRxXzR-e8ztkRygDgt1kr5lzK7PY16Q/edit Smoldep’s Magickal Adventure]] is a [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin Google Slides Visual Novel]] written by Athanasynt/Ash S and S. It is notable for StylisticSuck, [[https://youtu.be/dQw4w9WgXcQ making you question your life decisions]], and for having been created with a presentation maker.
Smoldep’s Magickal Adventure (Also officially known as Smoldep’s Magickal Acid Trip) is the first instalment of the eponymous MetaFictionseries, however, series. However, unlike it’s continuations VisualNovel/SmoldepsMagickalAdventure2EvenGayer ''VisualNovel/SmoldepsMagickalAdventure2EvenGayer'' and SmoldepsMagickalAdventure3:TheBigdep, ''VisualNovel/SmoldepsMagickalAdventure3TheBigdep'', it does not contain any plot and [[WordOfGod was made to be Athanasynt’s practice run of making visual novels in Google Slides.]]
TechnicallySlides]].
Technically, this is a SpinOff series.However However, the original game featuring Smoldep as a side character, AnExtremeAdventure, ''An Extreme Adventure'', is not out for public release and was made by Athanasynt’s friend TampliteSiphronKents [=TampliteSiphronKents=] to be shared in their puny little social circle.
The game begins with Smoldep, a CatGirl whose sprite is rippedoff RPGMakerVXAce from ''UsefulNotes/RPGMaker VX Ace'', interrupting the player character’s InnerMonologue to shill her RPG and her Youtube channel.
Smoldep’s Magickal Adventure (Also officially known as Smoldep’s Magickal Acid Trip) is the first instalment of the eponymous MetaFiction
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Technically, this is a SpinOff series.
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* {{Flanderisation}}: While Smoldep was a pop-culture referencing, PluckyComicRelief murderhobo CatGirl in the original AnExtremeAdventure, her [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/Pun more cattier]] personality traits are taken UpToEleven here.
** For example, she definitely wasn’t a SirSwearsALot. However, she was still just as much of a DeadpanSnarker.
** For example, she definitely wasn’t a SirSwearsALot. However, she was still just as much of a DeadpanSnarker.
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* {{Flanderisation}}: While Smoldep was a pop-culture referencing, PluckyComicRelief murderhobo CatGirl in the original AnExtremeAdventure, ''An Extreme Adventure'', her [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/Pun [[{{Pun}} more cattier]] personality traits are taken UpToEleven here.
**here. For example, she definitely wasn’t a SirSwearsALot. However, she was still just as much of a DeadpanSnarker.
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* MediumAwareness: Invoked almost [[IBangedYourMom as many times as Smoldep fucks your mom.]]
** The title screen has Smoldep realising that the player can just click anywhere to go to the next page instead of using a new game button.
** The title screen has Smoldep realising that the player can just click anywhere to go to the next page instead of using a new game button.
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* MediumAwareness: Invoked almost [[IBangedYourMom as many times as Smoldep fucks your mom.]]
mom]].
** The title screen has Smoldeprealising realizing that the player can just click anywhere to go to the next page instead of using a new game button.
** The title screen has Smoldep
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** Smoldep also casts *fucking die* on the player when [[spoiler:they refuse to like and comment on her Youtube channel.]]
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** Smoldep also casts *fucking die* on the player when [[spoiler:they refuse to like and comment on her Youtube channel.]]channel]].
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[[https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1NZbxcxJ0sMnqVRxXzR-e8ztkRygDgt1kr5lzK7PY16Q/edit Smoldep’s Magickal Adventure]] is a [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin Google Slides Visual Novel]] written by Athanasynt/Ash S and is infamous for StylisticSuck, [[https://youtu.be/dQw4w9WgXcQ making you question your life decisions]], and for having been created with a presentation maker.
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[[https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1NZbxcxJ0sMnqVRxXzR-e8ztkRygDgt1kr5lzK7PY16Q/edit Smoldep’s Magickal Adventure]] is a [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin Google Slides Visual Novel]] written by Athanasynt/Ash S and is infamous notable for StylisticSuck, [[https://youtu.be/dQw4w9WgXcQ making you question your life decisions]], and for having been created with a presentation maker.
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Smoldep’s Magickal Adventure (Also officially known as Smoldep’s Magickal Acid Trip) is the first instalment of the eponymous MetaFiction series, however, unlike it’s continuations SmoldepsMagickalAdventure2EvenGayer and SmoldepsMagickalAdventure3:TheBigdep, it does not contain any plot and [[WordOfGod was made to be Athanasynt’s practice run of making visual novels in Google Slides.]]
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Smoldep’s Magickal Adventure (Also officially known as Smoldep’s Magickal Acid Trip) is the first instalment of the eponymous MetaFiction series, however, unlike it’s continuations SmoldepsMagickalAdventure2EvenGayer VisualNovel/SmoldepsMagickalAdventure2EvenGayer and SmoldepsMagickalAdventure3:TheBigdep, it does not contain any plot and [[WordOfGod was made to be Athanasynt’s practice run of making visual novels in Google Slides.]]
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Smoldep’s Magickal Adventure (Also officially known as Smoldep’s Magickal Acid Trip) is the first instalment of the eponymous MetaFiction series, however, unlike it’s continuations SmoldepsMagickalAdventure2:EvenGayer and SmoldepsMagickalAdventure3:TheBigdep, it does not contain any plot and [[WordOfGod was made to be Athanasynt’s practice run of making visual novels in Google Slides.]]
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Smoldep’s Magickal Adventure (Also officially known as Smoldep’s Magickal Acid Trip) is the first instalment of the eponymous MetaFiction series, however, unlike it’s continuations SmoldepsMagickalAdventure2:EvenGayer SmoldepsMagickalAdventure2EvenGayer and SmoldepsMagickalAdventure3:TheBigdep, it does not contain any plot and [[WordOfGod was made to be Athanasynt’s practice run of making visual novels in Google Slides.]]
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* ButWaitTheresMore: Be sure not to miss out on this once-in-a-lifetime offer of Smoldep’s PopQuiz!
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* CaptainErstatz: Thanos, T-pose shrek and Ron weasly.
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* CaptainErstatz: CaptainErsatz: Thanos, T-pose shrek and Ron weasly.
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* CaptainErstatz: Thanos, T-pose shrek and Ron weasly.
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* PopQuiz: The main climax of the game is one.
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* {{Flanderisation}}: While Smoldep was a pop-culture referencing, ComicRelief murderhobo CatGirl in the original AnExtremeAdventure, her [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/Pun more cattier]] personality traits are taken UpToEleven here.
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* {{Flanderisation}}: While Smoldep was a pop-culture referencing, ComicRelief PluckyComicRelief murderhobo CatGirl in the original AnExtremeAdventure, her [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/Pun more cattier]] personality traits are taken UpToEleven here.here.
** For example, she definitely wasn’t a SirSwearsALot. However, she was still just as much of a DeadpanSnarker.
** For example, she definitely wasn’t a SirSwearsALot. However, she was still just as much of a DeadpanSnarker.
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* SpecialAttack: The Dorito Storm — Pest Edition.
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* SpecialAttack: The Dorito Storm — Pest Edition.Edition.
** Smoldep also casts *fucking die* on the player when [[spoiler:they refuse to like and comment on her Youtube channel.]]
** Smoldep also casts *fucking die* on the player when [[spoiler:they refuse to like and comment on her Youtube channel.]]
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* LittleBitBeastly: Smoldep’s physical appearance includes real cat ears and a tail, plus in some depictions, a FurBikini.
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* LittleBitBeastly: Smoldep’s physical appearance includes real cat ears and a tail, plus and in some depictions, a FurBikini.
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* NoFourthWall: Pretty sure this game is just Smoldep torturing the player directly for the 5 or so minutes they take to finish it.
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* NoFourthWall: Pretty sure this game is just Smoldep torturing the player directly for the 5 or so minutes they take to finish it.it.
* SpecialAttack: The Dorito Storm — Pest Edition.
* SpecialAttack: The Dorito Storm — Pest Edition.
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* {{Flanderisation}}: While Smoldep was a pop-culture referencing, [[CharacterAlignment chaotic neutral aligned]] murderhobo CatGirl in the original AnExtremeAdventure, her [[Pun cattier]] personality traits are taken UpToEleven here.
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* {{Flanderisation}}: While Smoldep was a pop-culture referencing, [[CharacterAlignment chaotic neutral aligned]] ComicRelief murderhobo CatGirl in the original AnExtremeAdventure, her [[Pun [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/Pun more cattier]] personality traits are taken UpToEleven here.
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* {{Flanderisation}}: While Smoldep was a pop-culture referencing, [[CharacterAlignment chaotic neutral aligned]] murderhobo CatGirl in the original AnExtremeAdventure, her [[Pun cattier]] personality traits are taken UpToEleven here.
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* MediumAwareness: Invoked almost as many times as Smoldep fucks your mom.
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* MediumAwareness: Invoked almost [[IBangedYourMom as many times as Smoldep fucks your mom.]]
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* BetterThanABareBulb: Given the limitations of using Google Slides, this trope is used a lot, especially in RuleOfFunny situations.
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*KickTheDog: Smoldep casually saying that it’s ‘time for her to kill innocent children’ counts as this trope.
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* NoFourthWall: Pretty sure this game is just Smoldep torturing the viewer directly for the 5 or so minutes you take to finish it.
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* NoFourthWall: Pretty sure this game is just Smoldep torturing the viewer player directly for the 5 or so minutes you they take to finish it.
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** And then her giving you a surprisingly friendly reminder to check if all the transitions have finished playing before clicking on any options.
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** And then her giving you a surprisingly friendly reminder to check if all the transitions have finished playing before clicking on any options.options.
*NoFourthWall: Pretty sure this game is just Smoldep torturing the viewer directly for the 5 or so minutes you take to finish it.
*NoFourthWall: Pretty sure this game is just Smoldep torturing the viewer directly for the 5 or so minutes you take to finish it.
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* MakesJustAsMuchSenseInContext: The title screen background? Smoldep’s Dorito Storm? The uh… [[https://sites.google.com/view/legendaryprize/home Legendary prize at the end of the game?]] Yeah, those make just as much sense in context.
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* MakesJustAsMuchSenseInContext: The title screen background? Smoldep’s Dorito Storm? The uh… [[https://sites.google.com/view/legendaryprize/home Legendary prize at the end of the game?]] Yeah, those make just as much sense in context.context.
* MediumAwareness: Invoked almost as many times as Smoldep fucks your mom.
** The title screen has Smoldep realising that the player can just click anywhere to go to the next page instead of using a new game button.
** Smoldep LampshadeHanging the illusion of free will.
** And then her giving you a surprisingly friendly reminder to check if all the transitions have finished playing before clicking on any options.
* MediumAwareness: Invoked almost as many times as Smoldep fucks your mom.
** The title screen has Smoldep realising that the player can just click anywhere to go to the next page instead of using a new game button.
** Smoldep LampshadeHanging the illusion of free will.
** And then her giving you a surprisingly friendly reminder to check if all the transitions have finished playing before clicking on any options.
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* MakesJustAsMuchSenseInContextMakesJustAsMuchSenseInContext: The title screen background? Smoldep’s Dorito Storm? The uh… [[https://sites.google.com/view/legendaryprize/home Legendary prize at the end of the game?]] Yeah, those make just as much sense in context.