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[[caption-width-right:350: ''[[Literature/TheFourGospels "Do not hold on to me, for I have not yet ascended to the Father. Go instead to my brothers and tell them, 'I am ascending to my Father and your Father, to my God and your God'."]]''\\
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[[caption-width-right:350: ''[[Literature/TheFourGospels "Do not hold on to me, Jesus saith unto her, "Touch me not; for I have am not yet ascended to the Father. Go instead my Father: but go to my brothers brethren, and tell say unto them, 'I am ascending to I ascend unto my Father Father, and your Father, Father; and to my God God, and your God'.God."]]''\\
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->''Dicit ei Jesus, "Noli me tangere, nondum enim ascendi ad Patrem meum: vade autem ad fratres meos, et dic eis: Ascendo ad Patrem meum, et Patrem vestrum, Deum meum, et Deum vestrum."''
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[[caption-width-right:350: '''Clockwise from top left''': Neil Lowell, Gabriel Levi, Cecil Coward, Michael Levi and Leonid Owen. [[labelnote: Not pictured...]] August Macleod... [[HiddenInPlainSight probably]]. [[/labelnote]]]]
-> ''"Do not hold on to me, for I have not yet ascended to the Father. Go instead to my brothers and tell them, 'I am ascending to my Father and your Father, to my God and your God.'"''
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-> ''"Do not hold on to me, for I have not yet ascended to the Father. Go instead to my brothers and tell them, 'I am ascending to my Father and your Father, to my God and your God.'"''
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[[caption-width-right:350: '''Clockwise ''[[Literature/TheFourGospels "Do not hold on to me, for I have not yet ascended to the Father. Go instead to my brothers and tell them, 'I am ascending to my Father and your Father, to my God and your God'."]]''\\
[[labelnote: Clockwise from topleft''': left]] Neil Lowell, Gabriel Levi, Cecil Coward, Michael Levi and Leonid Owen. [[labelnote: Not pictured...]] (Not pictured: August Macleod... [[HiddenInPlainSight probably]]. [[/labelnote]]]]\n\n-> ''"Do not hold on to me, for I have not yet ascended to the Father. Go instead to my brothers and tell them, 'I am ascending to my Father and your Father, to my God and your God.'"''\n--> -- '''[[Literature/TheFourGospels John 20:17]]'''\n) [[/labelnote]]]]
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A manga adaptation of the visual novel illustrated by Kai Natsumi was released in 2011, and covers the story of Neil's route. As of 2023, there is still no English localization for the game, although it is included in a survey from [=MangaGamer=] regarding which game to localize next, leaving the hope that it may be picked up for an official translation someday.
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A manga adaptation of the visual novel illustrated by Kai Natsumi was released in 2011, and covers the story of Neil's route. As of 2023, 2024, there is still no English localization for the game, although it is has been included in a survey multiple surveys from [=MangaGamer=] regarding which game to localize next, leaving the hope that it may be picked up for an official translation someday.
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-> ''"Do not hold on to me, for I have not yet ascended to the Father. Go instead to my brothers and tell them, 'I am ascending to my Father and your Father, to my God and your God."''
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-> ''"Do not hold on to me, for I have not yet ascended to the Father. Go instead to my brothers and tell them, 'I am ascending to my Father and your Father, to my God and your God."''
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-> ''"Do not hold on to me, for I have not yet ascended to the Father. Go instead to my brothers and tell them, 'I am ascending to my Father and your Father, to my God and your God."''
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* MakingLoveInAllTheWrongPlaces: As the visual novel takes place in a seminary, it's almost inevitable that Michael and some of his love interests would do it in the chapel or the nave.
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* MakingLoveInAllTheWrongPlaces: As the visual novel ''Shingakkou'' takes place in a seminary, so it's almost inevitable that Michael and some of his love interests would do it in the chapel or the nave.
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** Michael is named after the archangel Michael, especially as he is born on September 29, which just so happens to be the feast day of St. Michael himself. September 29 is also the feast day of the archangel Gabriel, and Michael and Gabriel Levi are twins.
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** Michael is named after the archangel Michael, especially as he is born on September 29, which just so happens to be the feast day of St. Michael himself. Likewise, September 29 is also the feast day of the archangel Gabriel, and Michael and Gabriel Levi are twins.
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** [[spoiler: August]]'s route isn't really so much as a romance route as much as it is a route that explores [[spoiler: August's character and his relationship with Michael]] in greater depth. In spite of the abundance of sex scenes in the route, it becomes obvious that whatever is going on between the two [[spoiler: is anything ''but'' a genuine romance, or anything resembling such, even with the complicated emotions they share]]. It helps that [[spoiler: the ending doesn't actually have them get together]]. The only resolution achieved in the climax is that [[spoiler: both Michael and August finally find peace and closure with their respective personal demons]], but no more than that.
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** [[spoiler: August]]'s route isn't really so much as a romance route as much as it is a route that explores [[spoiler: August's character and his relationship with Michael]] in greater depth. In spite of the abundance of sex scenes in the route, it becomes obvious that whatever is going on between the two [[spoiler: is anything ''but'' ''not'' a genuine romance, romance or anything resembling such, even with the complicated emotions they share]]. It helps that [[spoiler: the ending doesn't actually have them get together]]. The only resolution achieved in the climax is that [[spoiler: both Michael and August finally find peace and closure with their respective personal demons]], but no more than that.
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* SoundtrackDissonance: The ending theme of the visual novel, "We Are One", is a peppy modern J-pop piece that doesn't really fit in with the game's entire setting.
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* SoundtrackDissonance: The ending theme of the visual novel, "We Are One", is a peppy modern J-pop piece that doesn't really fit in with the game's entire ReligiousHorror setting.
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* {{Uke}}: Michael is the bottom by default with his love interests. That being said, compared to most other visual novels of the BoysLove genre, he and any of his love interests can switch roles of who tops or bottoms during sex.
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* {{Uke}}: Michael is the bottom by default with his love interests. That being said, Though compared to most other visual novels of the BoysLove genre, he and any of his love interests can switch roles of (with regards to who tops or bottoms and who bottoms) during sex.
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* InterfaceSpoiler: A subtle one. In any opening sequence in a BLVN, August is introduced as one of the main characters, which then allows the player to know that he is a love interest. The fact that he is a priest, however, means that for him and Michael to have that sort of relationship would indicate that August harbors at least a few deep-seated issues. [[spoiler: And even before the player can access his route, they will soon see that he's not as normal as he seems...]]
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* InterfaceSpoiler: A subtle one. In any opening sequence in a BLVN, August is introduced as one of the main characters, which then allows the player to know that he is a love interest. The fact that he is a priest, however, means that for him and Michael to have that sort of relationship would indicate that August harbors at least a few deep-seated issues.issue or two. [[spoiler: And even before the player can access his route, they will soon see that he's not as normal as he seems...]]
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* HolyPipeOrgan: The opening theme, which is sung like a choir hymn, makes good use of the trope from start to finish.
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