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* CouldHaveAvoidedThisPlot: As part of the "honesty is the best policy" [[AnAesop lesson]] presented in the first story, Twilight writes that if everypony had been more open and trusting of each other, the case would have been solved much more quickly. [[spoiler:In fact, there wouldn't even ''be'' a case if the thieves had just ''asked'' Rarity for the gem in the first place]].
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* CouldHaveAvoidedThisPlot: As part of the "honesty is the best policy" [[AnAesop lesson]] lesson presented in the first story, Twilight writes that if everypony had been more open and trusting of each other, the case would have been solved much more quickly. [[spoiler:In fact, there wouldn't even ''be'' a case if the thieves had just ''asked'' Rarity for the gem in the first place]].
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* AnAesop: Two, in Chapter 1.
** Be honest about your wrongdoings; true friends will forgive you.
** The best way to put an end to cruelty is to show it kindness.
** Be honest about your wrongdoings; true friends will forgive you.
** The best way to put an end to cruelty is to show it kindness.
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* SuperOCD: For once, it's not Twilight. Rarity cleans up her boutique completely, even though it is a crime scene, because she can't stand the disorder.
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* GeniusDitz: {{Discussed|Trope}}; Twilight is flabbergasted by the Diamond Dogs' keen and frequent understanding of legal procedures, such as demanding she produce a search warrant before she starts investigating their caves, that she can't help but point it out internally. Their fascination with [[AttentionDeficitOohShiny shiny things]] shows they're still otherwise the same old dull-witted dogs.
** Also, Sweetie Belle, who made the CMC capes with deeper meaning behind them, but otherwise seems to be quite scatterbrained.
** Also, Sweetie Belle, who made the CMC capes with deeper meaning behind them, but otherwise seems to be quite scatterbrained.
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* GeniusDitz: {{Discussed|Trope}}; Twilight is flabbergasted by the Diamond Dogs' keen and frequent understanding of legal procedures, such as demanding she produce produces a search warrant before she starts investigating their caves, that she can't help but point it out internally. Their fascination with [[AttentionDeficitOohShiny shiny things]] shows they're still otherwise the same old dull-witted dogs.
** Also, Sweetie Belle, who made the CMC capes with a deeper meaning behind them, but otherwise seems to be quite scatterbrained.
** Also, Sweetie Belle, who made the CMC capes with a deeper meaning behind them, but otherwise seems to be quite scatterbrained.
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* HeyYou: None of the Diamond Dogs are addressed by proper name in the story, Twilight only referring to them as, [[CaptainObvious well,]] dogs. Only their name tags in the dialogue bubbles distinguish them as such. Possibly justified as they never formally introduced themselves in their prior outing with the ponies.
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* SequelHook: Case 2 would've involved Trixie Lulamoon in some fashion, [[DeadFic but alas...]]
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* LighterAndSofter: When compared to the ''Franchise/AceAttorney'' series due to averting AlwaysMurder.
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* LighterAndSofter: When compared to the ''Franchise/AceAttorney'' series due to averting AlwaysMurder. And because most of the characters are so nice. Chapter 1 takes quite a bit of setting up to make a situation where they will actually lie to you.
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I don't think it was. Should have written up a reason if you wanted to make a case for it being.
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* DarkerAndEdgier: When compared to ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic''.
