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''For my whole life, I never had a girlfriend. People could laugh at me all they want, but I refused to give up on my ideals when it came to love. I had always pictured a first encounter where I knew right away she was my destined one. After several chance run-ins, we would exchange numbers. Then we would hang out together on the weekends. Only once we'd grown close enough would it be time for a real date.''
''I wouldn't have accepted any love that didn't develop like a storybook romance. Picking up girls at a club or going on blind dates was out of the question for me. And so was arranged dates. How could it be romantic when someone else set you up?''
''I had stood unwavering in my beliefs for my entire life. Until, that is, when the words of a certain girl turned my view on love inside-out...''
''I wouldn't have accepted any love that didn't develop like a storybook romance. Picking up girls at a club or going on blind dates was out of the question for me. And so was arranged dates. How could it be romantic when someone else set you up?''
''I had stood unwavering in my beliefs for my entire life. Until, that is, when the words of a certain girl turned my view on love inside-out...''
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-->'''Saki:''' The Romance Novice Meteorologist
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-->'''Mashiro:''' An Enigmatic Neighbor with a Unique Perspective
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** Ako: [[spoiler: Ten years after you and Ako declare your feelings for each other, you are still together, deciding to forgo marriage and simply live together as lovers.]]
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** Ako: [[spoiler: Ten years after you and Ako declare your feelings for each other, you are still together, deciding to forgo marriage and simply live together as lovers.]]
** Reina: [[spoiler: You are already married with a daughter. Your daughter is looking to potentially follow in the footsteps of her mom.]]
** Karen: [[spoiler: You are already married(?) And are going on a date at a carnival.]]
** Mashiro: [[spoiler: You and Mashiro get married at the Leviathan since that's where your relationship first started.]]
** Reina: [[spoiler: You are already married with a daughter. Your daughter is looking to potentially follow in the footsteps of her mom.]]
** Karen: [[spoiler: You are already married(?) And are going on a date at a carnival.]]
** Mashiro: [[spoiler: You and Mashiro get married at the Leviathan since that's where your relationship first started.]]
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** Saki references ''Series/BreakingBad'' as one of her favorite TV shows.
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** Without naming it, Saki references ''Series/BreakingBad'' as one of her favorite TV shows.
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* BrutalHonesty: A trait of the protagonist and most of his family, with only Ako having some tact and then not much. Also a quality noted in Karen's genderfluid boss Becky.
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* StoodUp: At the beginning of Saki's route both she and the protagonist are stood up at the same bar at the same time leading to both assuming the other is their BlindDate.
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* NotBloodSiblings: Ako is the protagonist's step sister, him having been adopted by her parents after losing his own at a young age.
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[[caption-width-right:400: [[LittleSisterHeroine My little sister, to whom I was too close to even consider]]; [[{{Ojou}} an older girl I met by chance]]; [[AggressiveSubmissive a young girl who enthusiastically expressed her love]]; [[{{Tsundere}} an acquaintance from college]]; [[CloudCuckoolander a girl my age who took an inexplicable liking to me.]] ]]
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[[caption-width-right:400: [[LittleSisterHeroine My little sister, to whom I was too close to even consider]]; [[{{Ojou}} an older girl I met by chance]]; [[AggressiveSubmissive a young girl who enthusiastically expressed her love]]; [[{{Tsundere}} an acquaintance from college]]; and [[CloudCuckoolander a girl my age who took an inexplicable liking to me.]] ]]
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** Ako: [[spoiler: Ten years after you and Ako declare your feelings for each other, you are still together, deciding to forgo marriage and simply live together as lovers. You become a web designer and she becomes a dietician.]]
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** Ako: [[spoiler: Ten years after you and Ako declare your feelings for each other, you are still together, deciding to forgo marriage and simply live together as lovers. You become a web designer and she becomes a dietician.]]
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** Saki: [[spoiler: Three years after meeting the protagonist, Saki and you get married, and are expecting a child.]]
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** Saki: [[spoiler: Three years after meeting the protagonist, each other, Saki and you get married, and are expecting a child.]]
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** Ako: [[spoiler: Ten years after you and Ako declare your feelings for each other, you are still together, deciding to forgo marriage and simply live together as lovers. You become a web designer, and she becomes a dietician, achieving your goals.]]
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** Ako: [[spoiler: Ten years after you and Ako declare your feelings for each other, you are still together, deciding to forgo marriage and simply live together as lovers. You become a web designer, designer and she becomes a dietician, achieving your goals.dietician.]]
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** During one karaoke date, [[Music/TaylorSwift "Taylor Whatsherface"]] is mentioned.
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** During one karaoke date, [[Music/TaylorSwift "Taylor Whatsherface"]] [[YouWannaGetSued is mentioned.]]
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** [[YouWannaGetSued Without explicitly naming it]], Saki references ''Series/BreakingBad'' as one of her favorite TV shows.
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** [[YouWannaGetSued Without explicitly naming it]], Saki references ''Series/BreakingBad'' as one of her favorite TV shows.
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** Ako: [[spoiler: Ten years after you and Ako declare your feelings for each other, you are still together, deciding to eschew marriage and simply live together as lovers. You become a web designer, and she becomes a dietician, achieving your goals.]]
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** Ako: [[spoiler: Ten years after you and Ako declare your feelings for each other, you are still together, deciding to eschew forgo marriage and simply live together as lovers. You become a web designer, and she becomes a dietician, achieving your goals.]]
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''Making Lovers'' is a SliceOfLife [[RomCom rom-com]] VisualNovel developed by Smee and published by Nekonyan. It’s rather unique from other visual novels in a number of ways, most notably that it stars an adult protagonist, (mostly) does not take place in a school setting, and each route is unique to each heroine with very little overlap between the routes. You are also locked into a route very early on, and your choices after that are inconsequential. Routes are also somewhat short compared to other VisualNovels, as the game eschews an overall plot in favor of focusing on interpersonal relationships - or more accurately, how they are built between the protagonist and the new woman in his life.
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''Making Lovers'' is a SliceOfLife [[RomCom rom-com]] VisualNovel developed by Smee and published by Nekonyan. It’s rather unique from other visual novels in a number of ways, most notably that it stars an adult protagonist, (mostly) does not take place in a school setting, and each route is unique to each heroine with very little overlap between the routes. You are also locked into a route very early on, and your choices after that are inconsequential. Routes are also somewhat short compared to other VisualNovels, as the game eschews an overall plot in favor of focusing on interpersonal relationships - or more accurately, how they are built between the protagonist and the new woman in his life.
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** Saki: [[spoiler: Three years after meeting the protagonist, Saki and you get married, and are expecting a child.]]
** Ako: [[spoiler: Ten years after you and Ako declare your feelings for each other, you are still together, deciding to eschew marriage and simply live together as lovers. You become a web designer, and she becomes a dietician, achieving your goals.]]
** Saki: [[spoiler: Three years after meeting the protagonist, Saki and you get married, and are expecting a child.]]
** Ako: [[spoiler: Ten years after you and Ako declare your feelings for each other, you are still together, deciding to eschew marriage and simply live together as lovers. You become a web designer, and she becomes a dietician, achieving your goals.]]
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** During one karaoke date, [[Music/TaylorSwift "Taylor Whatsherface"]] is mentioned.
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** Ako watches you play ''Videogame/DemonsSouls'', but it is spelled ''Dae''mon's Souls in the game.
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* WhereAreTheyNowEpilogue: Each girl has one, as is usual in visual novels.
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* WhereAreTheyNowEpilogue: Each girl has one, as is usual in visual novels.WhereAreTheyNowEpilogue
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-->'''You:''' A man managing a girls' dorm? [[LeaningOnTheFourthWall What is this, some sort of {{RomCom}}?]]
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-->'''You:''' A man managing a girls' dorm? [[LeaningOnTheFourthWall What is this, some sort of {{RomCom}}?]]Rom-Com?]]
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-->'''You:''' A man managing a girls' dorm? [[LeaningOnTheFourthWall What is this, some sort of RomCom?]]
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-->'''You:''' A man managing a girls' dorm? [[LeaningOnTheFourthWall What is this, some sort of RomCom?]]{{RomCom}}?]]
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** [[Manga/LoveHina Your mother manages a girl's dorm, and asks you to take over it temporarily.]]
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** [[Manga/LoveHina Your mother manages a girl's girls' dorm, and asks you to take over it temporarily.]]
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-->'''You:''' A man managing a girls' dorm? [[LeaningOnTheFourth Wall What is this, some sort of RomCom?]]
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-->'''You:''' A man managing a girls' dorm? [[LeaningOnTheFourth Wall [[LeaningOnTheFourthWall What is this, some sort of RomCom?]]
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-->'''You:''' A man managing a girls' dorm? [[LampshadeHanging What is this, some sort of RomCom?]]
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-->'''You:''' A man managing a girls' dorm? [[LampshadeHanging [[LeaningOnTheFourth Wall What is this, some sort of RomCom?]]
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** [[Manga/LoveHina Your mother manages a girl's dorm, and asks you to take over it temporarily.]]
-->'''You:''' A man managing a girls' dorm? [[LampshadeHanging What is this, some sort of RomCom?]]
-->'''You:''' A man managing a girls' dorm? [[LampshadeHanging What is this, some sort of RomCom?]]
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* TitleIn: Each girl (minus Saki) is introduced with a unique title card describing herself:them:
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* TitleIn: Each girl (minus Saki) is introduced with a unique title card describing herself.herself:
-->'''Ako:''' Big Wife Energy! A Wifely Little Sister
-->'''Reina:''' Making Up for a Lonely Year with an Energetic Charm
-->'''Karen:''' A College Classmate Who's Never Honest With Herself
-->'''Ako:''' Big Wife Energy! A Wifely Little Sister
-->'''Reina:''' Making Up for a Lonely Year with an Energetic Charm
-->'''Karen:''' A College Classmate Who's Never Honest With Herself
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''Making Lovers'' is a SliceOfLife [[RomCom rom-com]] VisualNovel developed by Smee and published by Nekonyan. It’s rather unique from other visual novels in a number of ways, most notably that it stars an adult protagonist, (mostly) does not take place in a school setting, and each route is unique to each heroine with very little overlap between the routes. You are also locked into a route very early on, and your choices after that are inconsequential. Routes are also somewhat short compared to other VisualNovels, as the game eschews an overall plot in favor of focusing on interpersonal relationships - or more accurately, how they are built between the protagonist and the women in his life.
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''Making Lovers'' is a SliceOfLife [[RomCom rom-com]] VisualNovel developed by Smee and published by Nekonyan. It’s rather unique from other visual novels in a number of ways, most notably that it stars an adult protagonist, (mostly) does not take place in a school setting, and each route is unique to each heroine with very little overlap between the routes. You are also locked into a route very early on, and your choices after that are inconsequential. Routes are also somewhat short compared to other VisualNovels, as the game eschews an overall plot in favor of focusing on interpersonal relationships - or more accurately, how they are built between the protagonist and the women new woman in his life.
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* TheEpilogue
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* TitleIn: Each girl is introduced with a unique title card describing herself.herself.
* WhereAreTheyNowEpilogue: Each girl has one, as is usual in visual novels.
* WhereAreTheyNowEpilogue: Each girl has one, as is usual in visual novels.