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* FoodSlap: In Chapter 11, Blake and Casey can expose that Brent was stringing three different people along. They proceed to throw drinks and food on him.
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* AbhorrentAdmirer: Downplayed, but Brent acts like this to Blake. He drunkenly hits on them early in the book, resulting in them getting into a public brawl with Casey. He still hits on Blake in later chapters, not getting the hint that they're not interested in him.
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* ItsAllAboutMe: Brent gets a big ego when he's promoted to Casey's former position. During an interview, Blake can bring up how some fans don't like that he isn't a team player.
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''Hot Shot'' is an ice hockey-themed book and one of the many stories under the ''VisualNovel/ChoicesStoriesYouPlay'' collection. It was released on January 26, 2024 on VIP early access, with the general release it being released to all players on March 6, 2024.
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''Hot Shot'' is an ice hockey-themed book and one of the many stories under the ''VisualNovel/ChoicesStoriesYouPlay'' collection. It was released on January 26, 2024 on VIP early access, with the general release released on March 6, 2024.
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''Hot Shot'' is an ice hockey-themed book and one of the many stories under the ''VisualNovel/ChoicesStoriesYouPlay'' collection. It was released on January 26, 2024 on VIP early access, with the general release slated for released on March 6, 2024.
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''Hot Shot'' is an ice hockey-themed book and one of the many stories under the ''VisualNovel/ChoicesStoriesYouPlay'' collection. It was released on January 26, 2024 on VIP early access, with the general release slated for March 2024.
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''Hot Shot'' is an ice hockey-themed book and one of the many stories under the ''VisualNovel/ChoicesStoriesYouPlay'' collection. It was released on January 26, 2024 on VIP early access, with the general release slated for March 6, 2024.
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* HistoryRepeats: This isn't the first time a book with mature, sexual content (complete with a ContentWarning) lacks a 17+ rating. It first happened with the initial release of ''VisualNovel/RoommatesWithBenefits'', Book 1, and PB added the Mature tag later on, but only after the general release.
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* HistoryRepeats: This isn't the first time a book with mature, sexual content (complete with a ContentWarning) lacks lacked a 17+ rating.rating initially. It first happened with the initial release of ''VisualNovel/RoommatesWithBenefits'', Book 1, and PB added the Mature tag later on, but only after the general release. The same thing happened with this book, albeit only the week after the early-access release.
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[[caption-width-right:320:[[IntrepidReporter Blake Clarke]] and [[LovableJock Casey Jameson]].]]
[[caption-width-right:320:[[IntrepidReporter Blake Clarke]] and [[LovableJock Casey Jameson]].]]
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''Hot Shot'' is an ice hockey-themed book and one of the many stories under the ''VisualNovel/ChoicesStoriesYouPlay'' collection. It will be was released on January 26, 2024 on VIP early access, with the general release slated for March 2024.
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* SportsStories: Pixelberry have confirmed that it's a book about ice hockey.
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* SportsStories: Pixelberry have confirmed that it's a book about ice hockey.hockey.
* WorthIt: Casey's reaction after getting benched due to fighting a {{jerkass}} hockey player from the other team.
* WorthIt: Casey's reaction after getting benched due to fighting a {{jerkass}} hockey player from the other team.
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''Hot Shot'' is an ice hockey-themed book and one of the many stories under the ''VisualNovel/ChoicesStoriesYouPlay'' collection. It will be released in January on January 26, 2024 on VIP early access, with the general release slated for March 2024.
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''Hot Shot'' is an ice hockey-themed book and one of the many stories under the ''VisualNovel/ChoicesStoriesYouPlay'' collection. It will be released in January 2024 on VIP early access, with the general release slated for March 2024.
!!''Hot Shot'' includes examples of:
* CharacterCustomization: In the December 2023 Choices Insiders, Pixelberry confirmed that the main character's gender is customizable.
* GenderBlenderName: In the December 2023 Choices Insiders, the love interest's name was revealed to be Casey.
* PunBasedTitle" "Hot Shot" can refer to either an important person (i.e. the team captain) or the fact that it's a book about ice hockey where the players take ''hot'' shots. Additionally, the team captain is stated by PB to be '''hot'''headed.
* SportsStories: Pixelberry have confirmed that it's a book about ice hockey.
!!''Hot Shot'' includes examples of:
* CharacterCustomization: In the December 2023 Choices Insiders, Pixelberry confirmed that the main character's gender is customizable.
* GenderBlenderName: In the December 2023 Choices Insiders, the love interest's name was revealed to be Casey.
* PunBasedTitle" "Hot Shot" can refer to either an important person (i.e. the team captain) or the fact that it's a book about ice hockey where the players take ''hot'' shots. Additionally, the team captain is stated by PB to be '''hot'''headed.
* SportsStories: Pixelberry have confirmed that it's a book about ice hockey.
