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Definitely not the first ally Morgana or enemy Merlin.
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* AdaptationalHeroism: Morgana has been a villain in all adaptations of the [[Myth/ArthurianLegend Arthurian Legends]]. In this adaptation, [[spoiler:she is an ally]].
* AdaptationalVillainy: Merlin has been an ally in all adaptations of the [[Myth/ArthurianLegend Arthurian Legends]]. In this adaptation, [[spoiler:he is the BigBad]].
* AdaptationalVillainy: Merlin has been an ally in all adaptations of the [[Myth/ArthurianLegend Arthurian Legends]]. In this adaptation, [[spoiler:he is the BigBad]].
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* AdaptationalHeroism: Morgana has been is usually a villain in all adaptations of the [[Myth/ArthurianLegend Arthurian Legends]]. In this adaptation, [[spoiler:she is an ally]].
* AdaptationalVillainy: Merlinhas been an is usually ally in all adaptations of the [[Myth/ArthurianLegend Arthurian Legends]]. In this adaptation, [[spoiler:he is the BigBad]].
* AdaptationalVillainy: Merlin
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I'll just get rid of the green link entirely.
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Never mind i can't figure out how to fix this.
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Fixed a green link.
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** Merlin to Pendragon, who saw him as a father figure, upon discovering that he was the one plotting against Guinevere and his intentions to kill her and erase all memory of her before Camelot.
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** Merlin to Pendragon, who saw him as a father figure, upon discovering that he was the one plotting against Guinevere and his intentions to kill her and erase all memory of her Camelot before Camelot.her.
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** Merlin to Pendragon, who saw him as a father figure, upon discovering that he was the one plotting with against Guinevere and his intentions to kill her and erase all memory of her before Camelot.
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** Morgana twice: the first was when she heard from her boyfriend, Lord Calhoun, the intention to conspire against Pendragon and she broke up with him immediately; it was the second that she discovered that her cousin Agravaine was directly involved in Merlin's schemes.
** Pendragon to Merlin, who saw him as a father figure, upon discovering that he was the one plotting with Guinevere and his intentions to kill her and erase all memory of her before Camelot.
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** Morgana twice: the first was when she heard from her boyfriend, Lord Calhoun, the intention to conspire against Pendragon and she broke up with him immediately; it was the second was that she discovered that her cousin Agravaine was directly involved in Merlin's schemes.
**Pendragon Merlin to Merlin, Pendragon, who saw him as a father figure, upon discovering that he was the one plotting with Guinevere and his intentions to kill her and erase all memory of her before Camelot.
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* CanonForeigner: Almost all minor characters in particular, Lord Calhoun, who was created especially to justify Morderd's birth and being his biological father, which in legends, he was born through the [[BrotherSisterIncest incestuous relationship]] between Arthur and Morgana.
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* LoveConfession[=/=]LoveHurts: In chapter 9, Lady Elaine confesses her love for Lancelot after (s)he participated in a competition and then she fell ill and decided to give in to the disease. After learning of Elaine's death, Lancelot bore the blame and Guivenere decided to keep this vision a secret.
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* LoveConfession[=/=]LoveHurts: In chapter 9, Lady Elaine confesses her love for Lancelot after (s)he participated in a competition and then she fell ill and decided to give in to the disease. After learning of Elaine's death, Lancelot bore the blame felt guilty, and Guivenere decided to keep this vision a secret.
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* BrainwashedAndCrazy: In chapter 16, if Pendragon or Lancelot are not Guinevere's love interest, they will attack her and her love interest under Merlin's influence.
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** Morgana twice: the first was when she heard from her boyfriend, Lord Calhoun, the intention to conspire against Pendragon and she broke up with him immediately; it was the second that she discovered that her cousin Agravaine was directly involved in Merlin's schemes.
** Pendragon to Merlin, who saw him as a father figure, upon discovering that he was the one plotting with Guinevere and his intentions to kill her and erase all memory of her before Camelot.
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** Morgana twice: the first was when she heard from her boyfriend, Lord Calhoun, the intention to conspire against Pendragon and she broke up with him immediately; it was the second that she discovered that her cousin Agravaine was directly involved in Merlin's schemes.
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* RewardedAsATraitorDeserves:
** Agravaine is arrested for his involvement in Merlin's plans.
** Merlin may be killed or imprisoned by Guinevere for plotting against her life from the beginning of the book.
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** Merlin may be killed or imprisoned by Guinevere for plotting against her life from the beginning of the book.
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* {{Irony}}: While many adaptions have Merlin as an ally and Morgana as a villain, [[spoiler:in this adaptation their roles are switched: Morgana is the ally while Merlin is the BigBad who tried to manipulate Pendragon into killing Guinevere and Lancelot.]]
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* {{Irony}}: While many adaptions adaptations have Merlin as an ally and Morgana as a villain, [[spoiler:in this adaptation their roles are switched: Morgana is the ally while Merlin is the BigBad who tried to manipulate Pendragon into killing Guinevere and Lancelot.]]
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* NotHisSled: Morgana is instantly suspicious as the one plotting against Guinevere. However, [[spoiler: she's actually loyal to Camelot, and Merlin is the real culprit, starkly contrasting with canon.]]
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** You can choose the gender of Pendragon and Lancelot, to become women, as well as their ethnicity.
** Lady Yvaine, who is a woman in this book, in the [[Myth/ArthurianLegend legend]] is a man named [[spoiler:Yvain]] and is [[spoiler:Sir Percival's son]].
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** Lady Yvaine, whois a woman in this book, in the [[Myth/ArthurianLegend legend]] is a man named [[spoiler:Yvain]] and Yvain (of ''Literature/YvainTheKnightOfTheLion'' fame), is [[spoiler:Sir Percival's son]].a woman in this book.
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* CharacterTitle: Guinevere will be if the protagonist's name is retained.
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