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** Subverted with Viscount Westonly, who pursued Annabelle because he didn’t want to become a lonely old man and stops pursuing her once he realizes that [[AllLoveIsUnrequited she doesn’t love him back]].
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* UnwittingPawn: A premium option in Book 2 Chapter 12 reveals that the co-conspirators are using Duke Richards as a figurehead so they could control him from behind the throne should he become king.
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* DeathByChildbirth: Ernest’s late wife Roselyn [[spoiler:died giving birth to Duke Richards’s child]].
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* DeathByChildbirth: Ernest’s late wife Roselyn [[spoiler:died died giving birth to Duke Richards’s child]].[[spoiler:Duke Richards’s]] child.
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-->'''Duke Richards (to a non-white!Clara):''' A woman of your status and... complexion ought to be thanking whatever god she prays to that a man like me wishes to wed her.
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* GayOption: Annabelle Parsons
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* OohMeAccentsSlipping: Starting in Book 3 Chapter 12, [[spoiler:Gideon Payne]] drops his fake French accent when threatening [[spoiler:Viscount Harry]] into overthrowing the monarchy.
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* BastardAngst: Clara spends much of the first book trying to prove herself worthy of Edgewater despite being an illegitimate child. A HopeSpot appears when she realizes her parents were married, but their marriage was annulled before she was born.
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* HateSink:
** Henrietta shows no sliver of redeeming qualities at all throughout her appearance. Aside from being a WickedStepmother, she acts [[MyBelovedSmother domineering towards her son Edmund Marlcaster]], attempts to break his engagement with Theresa Sutton because the latter has no social standing, never shows any love for Earl Vincent, keeps Annabelle Parsons in her sewing circle just for being Harry’s fiancée, and [[BadBoss treats servants like dirt]].
** Duke Richards earned the fandom's ire as soon as he was introduced thanks to his arrogance and ego. He gets worse and worse when he continues making unwanted advances toward Clara and refusing to take no for an answer.
** Henrietta shows no sliver of redeeming qualities at all throughout her appearance. Aside from being a WickedStepmother, she acts [[MyBelovedSmother domineering towards her son Edmund Marlcaster]], attempts to break his engagement with Theresa Sutton because the latter has no social standing, never shows any love for Earl Vincent, keeps Annabelle Parsons in her sewing circle just for being Harry’s fiancée, and [[BadBoss treats servants like dirt]].
** Duke Richards earned the fandom's ire as soon as he was introduced thanks to his arrogance and ego. He gets worse and worse when he continues making unwanted advances toward Clara and refusing to take no for an answer.
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* GoodParents: Vincent immediately shows his love for Clara upon meeting him. Likewise, Mary raised Clara with love and care.
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* MultipleChoicePast: Clara’s mother Mary’s origins depend on her ethnicity. If white, she was found singing in a meadow on the continent (Mainland Europe) when employees of Opera St. James noticed her singing and hired her. If Chinese, she had been performing in her native China since three and was taken to England by a captain. If Indian, a captain discovered her singing for coins and took her to England. If black, she was shipped to England from the Caribbean when a first mate heard her singing.
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* PoliticallyIncorrectVillain: It's highly implied that Duke Richards is racist towards anyone who isn't white, as evidenced by his disparaging remarks towards Prince Hamid and a non-white!Clara.
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* DirtyOldMan: Played for drama with Duke Tristan Richards, who made numerous unwanted advances towards Clara, culminating in him [[spoiler:attacking her as she was on the way to Edgewater]].
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* HiddenHeartOfGold: Ernest secretly delivers food and supplies to “fallen women” at night.
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* KnightOfCerebus: Duke Richards. Unlike most examples, the darker tone he establishes in the series is a gradual buildup since he is first introduced as an arrogant prick who has eyes on Clara, followed by unwelcome gestures towards her and culminated with [[spoiler:an attack on her]].
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* WhyWasteAWedding: After the wedding with Duke Richards is stopped, the bishop is disappointed that he does not get to unite anyone. This leads to the diamond option of [[spoiler:getting Briar to marry one of her suitors]].
* WickedStepmother: Countess Henrietta constantly makes insulting remarks towards Clara and [[spoiler:tries to have Vincent’s will changed so Clara won’t inherit Edgewater]].
* WickedStepmother: Countess Henrietta constantly makes insulting remarks towards Clara and [[spoiler:tries to have Vincent’s will changed so Clara won’t inherit Edgewater]].
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* WhyWasteAWedding: After the wedding with Duke Richards is stopped, the bishop is disappointed that he does not get to unite anyone. This leads to the diamond option of [[spoiler:getting Briar to marry one of her suitors]].
* WickedStepmother: Countess Henrietta constantly makes insulting remarks towards Clara and [[spoiler:tries to have Vincent’s will changed so Clara won’t inherit Edgewater]].suitors]].
* WickedStepmother: Countess Henrietta constantly makes insulting remarks towards Clara and [[spoiler:tries to have Vincent’s will changed so Clara won’t inherit Edgewater]].
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: At the climax of Book 3, after EVERYTHING, [[ChronicBackstabbingDisorder Countess Henritta]] [[{{Determinator}} is still deadset on claiming Edgewater]]. [[spoiler: Not even a high-manners Clara [[TheLastStraw is going to tolerate]] her WickedStepmother's scheming forever, and [[PersonaNonGrata personally banishes the countess]]. They'll only have a [[VideoGameCaringPotential chance to reconcile during First Winter]], and even then, it's not enough to lift the band, and the countess will be forced to find a new home with the help of her sons.]]
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: At the climax of Book 3, after EVERYTHING, [[ChronicBackstabbingDisorder Countess Henritta]] [[{{Determinator}} is still deadset on claiming Edgewater]]. [[spoiler: Not even a high-manners Clara [[TheLastStraw is going to tolerate]] her WickedStepmother's scheming forever, and [[PersonaNonGrata personally banishes the countess]]. They'll only have a [[VideoGameCaringPotential chance to reconcile during First Winter]], and even then, it's not enough to lift the band, ban, and the countess will be forced to find a new home with the help of her sons.]]
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!!''Desire & Decorum'' contains examples of:
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* AlliterativeName: David Danforth.
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* AlliterativeName: David Danforth.'''D'''avid '''D'''anforth.
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** Duke Richards for Clara.
** Viscount Westonly for Annabelle Parsons.
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** Duke Richards for Clara.
Clara. [[spoiler: Unfortunately for Clara, he doesn't take no for an answer.]]
** Viscount Westonly for Annabelle Parsons. Luckily, he grows out of it, [[GracefulLoser and proves to be a gentleman about it.]]
** Viscount Westonly for Annabelle Parsons. Luckily, he grows out of it, [[GracefulLoser and proves to be a gentleman about it.]]
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* CartwrightCurse: Viscount Westonly was married four times, and all of his wives are dead.
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* CartwrightCurse: Viscount Westonly was married four times, and all of his wives are dead. [[spoiler: His final wife is the one who outlives him, but loved him all the same.]]
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: At the climax of Book 3, after EVERYTHING, [[ChronicBackstabbingDisorder Countess Henritta]] [[{{Determinator}} is still deadset on claiming Edgewater]]. [[spoiler: Not even a high-manners Clara [[TheLastStraw is going to tolerate]] her WickedStepmother's scheming forever, and [[PersonaNonGrata personally banishes the countess]]. They'll only have a [[VideoGameCaringPotential chance to reconcile during First Winter]], and even then, it's not enough to lift the band, and the countess will be forced to find a new home with the help of her sons.]]
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* TheLostLenore: Subverted with Ernest’s late wife Roselyn. [[spoiler:She [[GoldDigger married him for his wealth]] and [[YourCheatingHeart cheated on him for Duke Richards]].]]
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* TheLostLenore: Subverted with Ernest’s late wife Roselyn. [[spoiler:She [[GoldDigger married him for his wealth]] and [[YourCheatingHeart cheated on him for Duke Richards]].Richards.]]
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* HistoricalDomainCharacter: Queen Charlotte, also known as Charlotte of Mecklenburg-Strelitz, appears in Books 2 and 3.
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* HistoricalDomainCharacter: Queen Charlotte, also known as Charlotte of Mecklenburg-Strelitz, appears in Books 2 and 3. Her son Prince Regent George, who becomes King George IV, appears in Book 3.
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* ObfuscatingDisability: There are hints implying that Viscount Westonly really isn’t as hard of hearing as he acts, the final chapter of book 3 allows you to call him out on it.
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* BiTheWay: Like most Choices stories, Clara has both male and female love interests.
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* MarriageOfConvenience: If Clara pursues Annabelle Parsons or Luke Harper, Mr. Chambers offers to marry her to fulfill the conditions of her will. [[spoiler:This no longer applies for Luke, who becomes a SuddenlySuitableSuitor after his status was elevated for saving the queen from Duke Richards.]]
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* MarriageOfConvenience: At the duke's ball, Mr. Chambers offers to marry Clara to fulfill the conditions of her will in the event that she's in love with someone who wouldn't be considered suitable. If Clara pursues chooses to "marry" Annabelle Parsons or Luke Harper, Mr. Chambers offers to marry her to fulfill she automatically accepts the conditions offer. [[spoiler:By the end of her will. [[spoiler:This book 2, this no longer applies for Luke, who becomes a SuddenlySuitableSuitor after his status was elevated for saving the queen from Duke Richards.Richards, but the option remains for Annabelle.]]
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* HistorialDomainCharacter: Queen Charlotte, also known as Charlotte of Mecklenburg-Strelitz, appears in Books 2 and 3.
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* HistorialDomainCharacter: HistoricalDomainCharacter: Queen Charlotte, also known as Charlotte of Mecklenburg-Strelitz, appears in Books 2 and 3.
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* ClosetKey: If you romance her, Clara is this for Miss Parsons who didn’t even realize she was capable of feeling attraction to anyone before.
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* OpenSecret: If you marry her, by the end of book 3 nearly everyone you know is aware Clara and Miss Parsons are a couple.
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* TakingTheBullet: In the ending of Book 3 Chapter 16, [[spoiler:Viscount Harry]] shielded Prince Regent George from a bullet fired by [[spoiler:Gideon Payne]].
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* OohMeAccentsSlipping: Starting in Book 3 Chapter 12, [[spoiler:Gideon Payne]] drops his fake French accent when threatening [[spoiler:Viscount Harry]] into overthrowing the monarchy.
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* BirdsOfAFeather: Viscount Westonly and Lady Lavinia bond over their tendency to mishear things
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* BirdsOfAFeather: Viscount Westonly and Lady Lavinia bond over their tendency are both significantly hearing-impaired. At one point, Lavinia tells Clara that she liked him because he was the first person who didn't react badly to mishear thingsher own difficulties.
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** If Briar marries at the end of Book 2, Book 3 will refer to her by her married last name in the dialogue tags, although Clara still calls her Briar no matter what.
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* BirdsOfAFeather: Viscount Westonly and Lady Lavinia bond over their tendency to mishear things
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* TricksterTwins: Annabelle's sisters Cordelia and Constance enjoy playing tricks on Viscount Westonly by exploiting his tendency to mishear things and say one thing so he'll mishear it as another.
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** Book 3 Chapters 7 and 8 reveal that [[spoiler:Duke Richards and Roselyn Sinclaire's son Percival is raised by Gideon Payne and is being used by him to seize power from Queen Charlotte.]]
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* MultipleChoicePast: Clara’s mother Mary’s origins depend on her ethnicity. If white, she was found singing in a meadow when employees of Opera St. James noticed her singing and hired her. If Chinese, she had been performing in her native China since three and was taken to England by a captain. If Indian, a captain discovered her singing for coins and took her to England. If black, she was shipped to England from the Caribbean when a first mate heard her singing.
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* MultipleChoicePast: Clara’s mother Mary’s origins depend on her ethnicity. If white, she was found singing in a meadow on the continent (Mainland Europe) when employees of Opera St. James noticed her singing and hired her. If Chinese, she had been performing in her native China since three and was taken to England by a captain. If Indian, a captain discovered her singing for coins and took her to England. If black, she was shipped to England from the Caribbean when a first mate heard her singing.
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* MarriageOfConvenience: If Clara pursues Annabelle Parsons or Luke Harper, Mr. Chambers offers to marry her to fulfill the conditions of her will.
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* MarriageOfConvenience: If Clara pursues Annabelle Parsons or Luke Harper, Mr. Chambers offers to marry her to fulfill the conditions of her will. [[spoiler:This no longer applies for Luke, who becomes a SuddenlySuitableSuitor after his status was elevated for saving the queen from Duke Richards.]]