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* MinorWithFakeID: Implied with Kathy. At 19, she is a regular at Heidi’s Bar. The story takes place in the United States, where the legal drinking age is 21. And given how straight-laced Heidi is, she would definitely be diligent about checking IDs.
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* MinorWithFakeID: Implied with Kathy. At 19, she is a regular at Heidi’s Bar. The story takes place in the United States, where the legal drinking age is 21. And given how straight-laced Heidi is, she would definitely be diligent about checking IDs.[=IDs=].
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* TeensAreShort: Averted. Heidi, who is in her thirties, is the shortest female character, and Lily, a teenager of Korean descent, is relatively tall.
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* ADateWithRosiePalms: MC has a moment near the beginning where he needs release (either from nudes of Kathy, or from “normal porn”).
** Amanda has a scene where MC sees her masturbating in her bedroom.
** Amanda has a scene where MC sees her masturbating in her bedroom.
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* CoitusEnsues: The sex scene between MC and Olivia. She is a one-shot character who fixes the broken jukebox, sleeps with MC “because [he’s] a good person,” and is never heard from again in the story.
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* SexStartsStoryStops: Olivia is a one-shot character who fixes the broken jukebo and sleeps with MC "because [he’s] a good person," and is never heard from again in the story.
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* BareYourMidriff: Olivia wears a skimpy cowgirl outfit whenever she appears.
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* MostCommonCardGame: While waiting for customers to show up for the grand reopening of the diner, Amanda and Kathy pass the time by playing Go Fish.
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* MostCommonCardGame: While waiting for customers to show up for the grand reopening of the diner, Amanda and Kathy pass the time by playing Go Fish.''TabletopGame/GoFish''.
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* GoodPeopleHaveGoodSex: MC seems to enjoy himself all around, and so do all the girls.
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* SexIsGood: MC seems to enjoy himself all around, and so do all the girls.
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* CourtroomAntic: Parodied at [[spoiler:MC’s trial, and also one of the few examples when the prosecution uses this trope]]. When questioning Mortelli on the witness stand, they double-, triple-, quadruple-, quintuple-, and sextuple-check Mortelli’s answers before the judge puts a stop to it.
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* CourtroomAntic: Parodied at CourtroomAntics: At [[spoiler:MC’s trial, and also one of the few examples trial]], when the prosecution uses this trope]]. When questioning Mortelli on the witness stand, they the prosecution double-, triple-, quadruple-, quintuple-, and sextuple-check sextuple-checks Mortelli’s answers before the judge puts a stop to it.
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* PlotPivotPoint: If MC decides to sell the diner into liquidation, saving it would be out of the question, and plus, in all likelihood, Cecilia would have no trouble convincing Amanda to abandon him.
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* BadReviewThreat: A customer once comes into the diner for the ambience - but not to order any food. When Kathy ejects her, she promises to leave a bad review for the diner online.
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* AdultFear: MC has several:
** Concern for Amanda when she doesn’t come home at night.
** His fear of his business failing early in the story.
** Fear of his secrets getting out regarding Lainie and Amanda.
** Fear of the other inmates while in prison.
** Concern for Amanda when she doesn’t come home at night.
** His fear of his business failing early in the story.
** Fear of his secrets getting out regarding Lainie and Amanda.
** Fear of the other inmates while in prison.
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! This game provides examples of:
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!! This game provides examples of:
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* TwoTimingWithTheBestie: Even after getting romantically involved with Amanda, MC can also maintain a relationship with Kathy.
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* TwoTimingWithTheBestie: Even after getting romantically involved with Amanda, MC can also maintain a relationship with Kathy.
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* MandelaEffect: MC, when searching his mind for a restaurant to take Heidi, suggests a place named “Mortelli’s.” However, Heidi knows that the restaurant in question is ''really'' named “Mortadella’s.” Then, Heidi lampshades it, using this exact term to describe MC’s train of thought.
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* MandelaEffect: In-universe. MC, when searching his mind for a restaurant to take Heidi, suggests a place named “Mortelli’s.” However, Heidi knows that the restaurant in question is ''really'' named “Mortadella’s.” Then, Heidi lampshades it, using this exact term to describe MC’s train of thought.
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* MandelaEffect: MC, when searching his mind for a restaurant to take Heidi, suggests a place named “Mortelli’s.” However, Heidi knows that the restaurant in question is ''really'' named “Mortadella’s.” Then, Heidi lampshades it, using this exact term to describe MC’s train of thought.
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* PunctuatedForEmphasis: Heidi can do this to MC ''twice in one night'' when he comes to her bar, hoping to pick up a girl:
** Since MC called her a “Nazi bitch” the last time he was in her bar, she charges him double for any drink he orders. And when he expresses surprise:
--->'''Heidi:''' You heard me. Double. For. Drinks.
** Later, if MC decides to hit on Heidi anyway, he can offer to tend the bar for her (simulated by a minigame). And if he fails:
--->'''Heidi:''' Just as I expected. You. Suck.
** Since MC called her a “Nazi bitch” the last time he was in her bar, she charges him double for any drink he orders. And when he expresses surprise:
--->'''Heidi:''' You heard me. Double. For. Drinks.
** Later, if MC decides to hit on Heidi anyway, he can offer to tend the bar for her (simulated by a minigame). And if he fails:
--->'''Heidi:''' Just as I expected. You. Suck.
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* BirdsOfAFeather: MC and Heidi (both responsible owners of small restaurant-like businesses).
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* BirdsOfAFeather: MC and Heidi (both responsible owners of small restaurant-like hospitality businesses).
