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** No calves can be seen on the [=MacLeod=] dairy farm. Fiona the highland cattle is even referred to as a "heifer" as she's being milked.
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** No calves can be seen on the [=MacLeod=] dairy farm. Fiona the highland cattle is even referred to as a "heifer" as she's being milked.milked, albeit by Malcolm, whose farm specializes in sheep.
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* CoolHorse: Malcolm obtains a horse named Hazel in an auction, and while she's stubborn and her loyalty is questionable, she remains by her new master's side no matter what he gets involved with.
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* CoolHorse: Malcolm obtains a horse named Hazel in an auction, and while she's stubborn and her loyalty is questionable, she remains by her new master's side no matter what he gets involved with. [[spoiler:There are also indications, both in the story itself and in supplemental material, that she is actually sentient.]]
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* MobySchtick: The moment Douglas catches a glimpse of Grace partially transformed, he becomes dead set on capturing the Uilepheist lurking in Loch Finlay, believing them to be bad omens. [[spoiler:Luckily, Grace has no trouble escaping his net, and after [[{{Troll}} toying with him]] for a bit, she manages to talk him down.]]
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* ChildhoodFriendRomance: The [=MacLeod=] sisters were Malcolm's playmates during his childhood, their families having been well acquainted due to the small size of Ach-na-Creige.
** [[spoiler:Jessie]] actually had a one-sided crush on Malcolm before he left to go to war. Her sisters' routes subtly hint at her continued feelings towards Malcolm, [[IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy though she gracefully keeps out of their way]].
** [[spoiler:Jessie]] actually had a one-sided crush on Malcolm before he left to go to war. Her sisters' routes subtly hint at her continued feelings towards Malcolm, [[IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy though she gracefully keeps out of their way]].
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* GossipyHens: The Whist Club, of which Malcolm's grandmother is a member.
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* RedheadsAreRavishing: Jessie is the best exemplar of the trope, a sexy singer-dancer with bright red hair, but auburn-haired Marion and strawberry blonde Grace are no slouches either.
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* SheIsAllGrownUp: Malcolm remarks this upon meeting each of the sisters.
** Marion has changed the least, having been an adult when Malcolm shipped off to war, so he's able to quickly recognize her voice, followed by her other physical features.
** Jessie has completely reinvented herself, so she has to identify herself to him, leaving him dumbfounded that the once mousy neighbor's daughter is a flapper.
** Grace was so shy as a child that Malcolm barely even remembers her, but he invokes this trope anyways out of politeness.
** Marion has changed the least, having been an adult when Malcolm shipped off to war, so he's able to quickly recognize her voice, followed by her other physical features.
** Jessie has completely reinvented herself, so she has to identify herself to him, leaving him dumbfounded that the once mousy neighbor's daughter is a flapper.
** Grace was so shy as a child that Malcolm barely even remembers her, but he invokes this trope anyways out of politeness.
