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* EmergencyTransformation: After Amy discovers Lily was attacked, she asks Adrian to turn her into a vampire in order to save her life. [[spoiler: This happens to Amy herself at the end of Book 2, thanks to her love interest.]]
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* EmergencyTransformation: After Amy discovers Lily was attacked, she asks Adrian to turn her into a vampire in order to save her life. [[spoiler: This happens to Amy herself at the end of Book 2, thanks to 2. Book 3, Chapter 1 reveals that the deed was done by her love interest.]]
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* EmergencyTransformation: After Amy discovers Lily was attacked, asks Adrian to turn her into a vampire in order to save her life. [[spoiler: This happens to Amy herself at the end of Book 2.]]
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* EmergencyTransformation: After Amy discovers Lily was attacked, she asks Adrian to turn her into a vampire in order to save her life. [[spoiler: This happens to Amy herself at the end of Book 2.2, thanks to her love interest.]]
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** Played straight with [[spoiler:Jax or Lily]] at the end of Book 3, Chapter 15 after [[spoiler:s/he had to be staked due to being infected with the blood of the First Feral]].
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** The only way to kill vampires are [[RemovingTheHadOrDestroyingTheBrain Removing the Head or Destroying the Heart]].
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** The only way to kill vampires are [[RemovingTheHadOrDestroyingTheBrain [[RemovingTheHeadOrDestroyingTheBrain Removing the Head or Destroying the Heart]].
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** The only way to kill vampires are beheading or impaling the heart.
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** The only way to kill vampires are beheading or impaling [[RemovingTheHadOrDestroyingTheBrain Removing the heart.Head or Destroying the Heart]].
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** In Book 3, Chapter 16, after Amy [[spoiler:kills Rheya by draining her life force]], she starts to become more like Rheya due to the corruptive power she absorbed. Her chosen love interest begs her to stop and listen to them. She can either embrace the DarkSide or snap out of it. If she chooses the former, she [[spoiler:drains the life force from everyone, essentially ending the world]], which results in the story returning to a checkpoint.
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** In Book 3, Chapter 16, after Amy [[spoiler:kills Rheya by draining her life force]], she starts to become more like Rheya due to the corruptive power she absorbed. Her chosen love interest begs her to stop and listen to them. She can either embrace the DarkSide or snap out of it. If she chooses the former, she [[spoiler:drains the life force from everyone, essentially ending the world]], which results in the story returning to a checkpoint.world]].
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** In Book 3, Chapter 16, after Amy [[spoiler:kills Rheya by draining her life force]], she starts to become more like Rheya due to the corruptive power she absorbed. Her chosen love interest begs her to stop and listen to them. She can either embrace the DarkSide or snap out of it. If she chooses the former, she [[drains the life force from everyone, essentially ending the world]], which results in the story returning to a checkpoint.
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** In Book 3, Chapter 16, after Amy [[spoiler:kills Rheya by draining her life force]], she starts to become more like Rheya due to the corruptive power she absorbed. Her chosen love interest begs her to stop and listen to them. She can either embrace the DarkSide or snap out of it. If she chooses the former, she [[drains [[spoiler:drains the life force from everyone, essentially ending the world]], which results in the story returning to a checkpoint.
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* NonstandardGameOver: In Book 2, Chapter 5, there is a diamond option to hook up with Priya. The flavor text warns that it won't end well. Buying this scene results in Amy's death and a return to the checkpoint.
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* NonstandardGameOver: NonstandardGameOver:
** In Book 2, Chapter 5, there is a diamond option to hook up with Priya. The flavor text warns that it won't end well. Buying this scene results in Amy's death and a return to the checkpoint.
** In Book 3, Chapter 16, after Amy [[spoiler:kills Rheya by draining her life force]], she starts to become more like Rheya due to the corruptive power she absorbed. Her chosen love interest begs her to stop and listen to them. She can either embrace the DarkSide or snap out of it. If she chooses the former, she [[drains the life force from everyone, essentially ending the world]], which results in the story returning to a checkpoint.
** In Book 2, Chapter 5, there is a diamond option to hook up with Priya. The flavor text warns that it won't end well. Buying this scene results in Amy's death and a return to the checkpoint.
** In Book 3, Chapter 16, after Amy [[spoiler:kills Rheya by draining her life force]], she starts to become more like Rheya due to the corruptive power she absorbed. Her chosen love interest begs her to stop and listen to them. She can either embrace the DarkSide or snap out of it. If she chooses the former, she [[drains the life force from everyone, essentially ending the world]], which results in the story returning to a checkpoint.
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* VanHelsingHateCrimes: Adam Vega hates all clanless vampires [[SlidingScaleOfVampireFriendliness regardless of whether or not they're good people]] because of the risk of turning Feral that they pose.
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* VanHelsingHateCrimes: VanHelsingHateCrimes:
** Adam Vega hates all clanless vampires [[SlidingScaleOfVampireFriendliness regardless of whether or not they're good people]] because of the risk of turning Feral that they pose.
** Adam Vega hates all clanless vampires [[SlidingScaleOfVampireFriendliness regardless of whether or not they're good people]] because of the risk of turning Feral that they pose.
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** [[spoiler:Kano, the strongest psychic vampire. Amy is caught off guard to find he was turned at such a young age.]]
** Vampires in Paris used to live in an elaborate one under the catacombs until the order found them and raided them resulting in a massacre.
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* VampiresAreSexGods: All four of the love interests. Priya and Adam as well. Averted with Lester and The Baron.
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* VampiresAreSexGods: All four of the love interests. Priya and Adam as well. Averted with Lester and The Baron. Dracula is definitely this.
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* DefiniteArticleTitle: All chapter titles start with "The".
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** The answer: [[spoiler:The little boy. The older man is the assistant.]]
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** The answer: [[spoiler:The [[spoiler:Kano is the little boy. The older man is the assistant.]]
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* SchmuckBait: Book 2 Chapter 6 allows Amy to hook up with Priya in a premium scene. No matter what, you will die and have to restart from the checkpoint.
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* SchmuckBait: Book 2 Chapter 6 5 allows Amy to hook up with Priya in a premium scene. No matter what, you will die and have to restart from the checkpoint.
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* OutWithABang: If Amy hooks up with Priya in Book 2, Chapter 6, Priya tells her not to make a sound or she'll bite. Amy can't stay quiet, so Priya sucks her blood until she dies.
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* OutWithABang: If Amy hooks up with Priya in Book 2, Chapter 6, 5, Priya tells her not to make a sound or she'll bite. Amy can't stay quiet, so Priya sucks her blood until she dies.
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** In Book 3, Chapter 15, Amy, Adrian, Kamilah, Jax and Lily pretend to be Gaius' prisoners to be handed over to Rheya so that they can launch a surprise attack and kill her. [[spoiler:Rheya sees through the act though.]]
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** The Order of Dawn is dedicated to exterminating vampires regardless of whether or not they're good people, as they view all vampires as bloodthirsty killers.
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* NonstandardGameOver: In Book 2, Chapter 6, there is a diamond option to hook up with Priya. The flavor text warns that it won't end well. Buying this scene results in Amy's death and a return to the checkpoint.
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* NonstandardGameOver: In Book 2, Chapter 6, 5, there is a diamond option to hook up with Priya. The flavor text warns that it won't end well. Buying this scene results in Amy's death and a return to the checkpoint.
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** The answer: [[spoiler:The little boy. The older man is the assistant.]]
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** A second time in book Book 2 with Jax, Amy and Adrian.
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* WritersCannotDoMath: According to Kamilah herself, she is around 2000 years old, and she claims to be Cleopatra’s cousin, who was born around the year ''69 BC'' and died around the year ''10 or 12 BC'' (making Cleopatra 39 when she died), making Kamilah a lot younger than Cleopatra could have been. Though it's possible Kamilah was simply rounding down.
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* WritersCannotDoMath: According to Kamilah herself, she is around 2000 years old, and she claims to be Cleopatra’s cousin, who was born around the year ''69 BC'' and died around the year ''10 or 12 BC'' (making Cleopatra 39 when she died), making Kamilah a lot younger than Cleopatra could have been. Though That said, it's possible Kamilah was simply rounding down.down a bit.
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* ReallySevenHundredYearsOld: Most of the clan leaders are implied to be older than a century. Adrian mentions that Priya Lacroix is the youngest of the Clan Leaders, being only ''150'' years as a vampire. Kamilah tells Amy that she was Cleopatra's cousin (meaning more than ''2,000 years'' old).
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* ReallySevenHundredYearsOld: Most of the clan leaders are implied to be older than a century. Adrian mentions that Priya Lacroix is the youngest of the considered a young vampire, particularly for a Clan Leaders, Leader, being only ''150'' years as a vampire.vampire[[note]]originally, it was stated that she was the youngest Clan Leader, but that created a continuity problem with the Baron's origin story and was subsequently edited out[[/note]]. Kamilah tells Amy that she was Cleopatra's cousin (meaning more than ''2,000 years'' old).
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* WritersCannotDoMath: According to Kamilah herself, she is around 2000 years old, and she claims to be Cleopatra’s cousin, who was born around the year ''69 BC'' and died around the year ''10 or 12 BC'' (making Cleopatra 39 when she died), making Kamilah a lot younger than Cleopatra could have been.
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* WritersCannotDoMath: According to Kamilah herself, she is around 2000 years old, and she claims to be Cleopatra’s cousin, who was born around the year ''69 BC'' and died around the year ''10 or 12 BC'' (making Cleopatra 39 when she died), making Kamilah a lot younger than Cleopatra could have been. Though it's possible Kamilah was simply rounding down.
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* BookEnds: The first two chapters of Book 1 were released at the same time. It has been confirmed that the final two chapters of Book 3 (the last book in the series will also be released at the same time).
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* BookEnds: The first two chapters of Book 1 were released at the same time. It has been confirmed that the The final two chapters of Book 3 (the last book in the series will series) were also be released at the same time).time.
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* ContentWarning: A warning is issued at the start of the book, stating that it contains violence and mature situations.
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* ContentWarning: ContentWarning:
** A warning is issued at the start of the book, stating that it contains violence and maturesituations.situations.
** The penultimate chapter of Book 3 starts with a warning, stating that the chapter contains [[spoiler: violence and death]].
** A warning is issued at the start of the book, stating that it contains violence and mature
** The penultimate chapter of Book 3 starts with a warning, stating that the chapter contains [[spoiler: violence and death]].
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* TheTheTitle: Every chapter starts with the word "the" and ends with a noun.
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* BiTheWay:
** As usual with Choices Games, your character can date both girls and guys.
** Lily is a more realistic and nuanced example than usual, as she’s said she admits to finding certain guys attractive and has fooled around with both guys and girls, but in relationships she dates girls nearly exclusively.
** Kamilah. She states that she has been with a prince and several princesses... at the same time.
** As usual with Choices Games, your character can date both girls and guys.
** Lily is a more realistic and nuanced example than usual, as she’s said she admits to finding certain guys attractive and has fooled around with both guys and girls, but in relationships she dates girls nearly exclusively.
** Kamilah. She states that she has been with a prince and several princesses... at the same time.
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* FissionMailed: In Book 2, chapter 16, [[spoiler:Amy and Gaius mutually stab each other to death, and Amy the player character gets a moving death scene. The game even gives you a "The End" screen--but keep playing, and Amy wakes up a vampire, having been Turned to save her life.]]
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* ActuallyThatsMyAssistant: When you meet the psychic vampire Kano in Japan, there’s two people in the room, a little boy and an older man. Guess which one is Kano.
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** Aiko Nakamura is a straighter example admitting to Kamilah while she’s still human that she thinks she has no desire for men.
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* WhereAreTheyNowEpilogue: Collecting all the portrait fragments in Book 3 reveals the fates of various characters a year after the events of the story.
** Humans and vampires have learned to coexist peacefully.
** Lula Jacobs plays with a fellow vampire child in a cabin in upstate New York.
** If Dracula lives, he tries to make a living in Las Vegas, but nobody is interested in his show.
** If Priya lives, she moves to the Caribbean, where she expresses disappointment in her new life until the sight of a shirtless muscular cabana boy changes her mind.
** If Serafine is persuaded to abandon Rheya, she toasts to life in a newly rebuilt nightclub in Paris. Otherwise, she seeks to [[AvengingTheVillain avenge Rheya]] by forming a [[LaResistance resistance movement called the Daughters of Rheya]].
** The Japanese vampires (except Takeshi and Akeyo) express annoyance at the influx of American vampires while Kano [[SoProudOfYou expresses his pride in Amy]].
** If Gaius lives, he becomes a vigilante and saves a woman from a werewolf in Sweden.
** A youth center is built in Lily or Jax's honor, depending on who died in the penultimate chapter, and the instructor is either Jax or Akeyo Kwangi.
** If Lily lives, she serves as a script supervisor for a movie based on the events of the story, with [[VisualNovel/RedCarpetDiaries Tommy Phelps]] as its director.
** Adrian has become the new Senator for New York and the chairman of the Vampire-Human Relations Committee, with Nikhil as his Chief of Staff, if the latter lives.
** Kamilah takes up a new hobby by tending plants.
** Amy has either married or officially moved in with her love interest.
** Humans and vampires have learned to coexist peacefully.
** Lula Jacobs plays with a fellow vampire child in a cabin in upstate New York.
** If Dracula lives, he tries to make a living in Las Vegas, but nobody is interested in his show.
** If Priya lives, she moves to the Caribbean, where she expresses disappointment in her new life until the sight of a shirtless muscular cabana boy changes her mind.
** If Serafine is persuaded to abandon Rheya, she toasts to life in a newly rebuilt nightclub in Paris. Otherwise, she seeks to [[AvengingTheVillain avenge Rheya]] by forming a [[LaResistance resistance movement called the Daughters of Rheya]].
** The Japanese vampires (except Takeshi and Akeyo) express annoyance at the influx of American vampires while Kano [[SoProudOfYou expresses his pride in Amy]].
** If Gaius lives, he becomes a vigilante and saves a woman from a werewolf in Sweden.
** A youth center is built in Lily or Jax's honor, depending on who died in the penultimate chapter, and the instructor is either Jax or Akeyo Kwangi.
** If Lily lives, she serves as a script supervisor for a movie based on the events of the story, with [[VisualNovel/RedCarpetDiaries Tommy Phelps]] as its director.
** Adrian has become the new Senator for New York and the chairman of the Vampire-Human Relations Committee, with Nikhil as his Chief of Staff, if the latter lives.
** Kamilah takes up a new hobby by tending plants.
** Amy has either married or officially moved in with her love interest.
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* JackassGenie: Discussed in the first chapter, during Amy's interview. Adrian tells a story of a man who came across a genie lamp and was granted three wishes. His first two wishes were for great wealth and immortality, which lead to the rest of the village population going hungry and the man's family dying, respectively. Adrian asks Amy what the man should wish for as his third and final wish. One of the choices is to "murder the genie", with Amy stating that the genie is evil, tempting good people and using their wishes to do horrible things and that the only way to keep this from happening is to "kill that bastard".
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* JackassGenie: Discussed in the first chapter, during Amy's interview. Adrian tells a story of a man who came across a genie lamp and was granted three wishes. His first two wishes were for great wealth and immortality, which lead led to the rest of the village population going hungry and the man's family dying, respectively. Adrian asks Amy what the man should wish for as his third and final wish. One of the choices is to "murder the genie", with Amy stating that the genie is evil, tempting good people and using their wishes to do horrible things and that the only way to keep this from happening is to "kill that bastard".
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* JackassGenie: Discussed in the first chapter, during Amy's interview. Adrian tells a story of a man who came across a genie lamp and was granted three wishes. His first two wishes were for great wealth and immortality, which lead to the rest of the village population going hungry and the man's family dying, respectively. Adrian asks Amy what the man should wish for as his third and final wish. One of the choices is to "murder the genie", with Amy stating that the genie is evil, tempting good people and using their wishes to do horrible things and that the only way to keep this from happening is to "kill that bastard".
