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%%* TrademarkFavoriteFood: Donuts for both Chou and Yoru.

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%%* * TrademarkFavoriteFood: Donuts for both Both Chou and Yoru.Yoru are very fond of donuts.
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It's about the amnesiac Kaoru Sera who wanders down a flight of stairs into a forest and stumbles upon a ominous, old looking western style mansion. He opens the gate and enters the house and is greeted by a stoic boy clad in black who is surrounded by black butterflies. The boy introduces himself as Yoru Mutsuki. He lets Sera in and gives him a job to do, which is to occupy a girl locked in a basement. Yoru then gives him the keys to the basement where he finds the albino girl in white, Chou. After he finishes this task, Yoru tells him that Chou is a [=ChouTsuki=] (a vampire-like species) and Kaoru was brought to be her sacrifice.

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It's about the amnesiac Kaoru Sera Sera, who wanders down a flight of stairs into a forest and stumbles upon a ominous, old looking western style old-looking mansion. He opens the gate and enters the house and is greeted by a stoic boy clad in black who is surrounded by black butterflies. The boy introduces himself as Yoru Mutsuki. He lets Sera in and gives him a job to do, which is to occupy a girl locked in a basement. Yoru then gives him the keys to the basement where he finds the albino girl in white, Chou. After he finishes this task, Yoru tells him that Chou is a [=ChouTsuki=] (a vampire-like species) and Kaoru was brought to be her sacrifice.



* DownerEnding: The story ends with [[spoiler: Yoru shooting both Sera and Chou dead when they to escape the mansion]].
* EeriePaleSkinnedBrunette: Yoru has raven hair, pale skin and is pretty enigmatic and creepy. He doesn't go outside much due to being weak to sunlight like Chou(although he's not as vulnerable to it as she is).
* EtherealWhiteDress: Chou, the CuteMute vampire girl is clad in a pretty white dress, which seems to add to her enigma. It also contrasts her with Yoru, her twin, who's completely in all black.

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* DownerEnding: The story ends with [[spoiler: Yoru shooting both Sera and Chou dead when they try to escape the mansion]].
* EeriePaleSkinnedBrunette: Yoru has raven hair, pale skin and is pretty enigmatic and creepy. He doesn't go outside much due to being weak to sunlight like Chou(although he's not as vulnerable to it as she is).
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* EtherealWhiteDress: Chou, Chou the CuteMute vampire girl is clad in a pretty white dress, which seems to add adds to her enigma. It also contrasts her with Yoru, her twin, who's completely in all black.



* MysticalWhiteHair: Chou has white hair. It probably has to do with her albinism, the fact she's from a unusual species (which is very similar to vampires) and her mysterious powers.

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* MysticalWhiteHair: Chou has white hair. It probably has to do with her albinism, the fact she's from a unusual species (which is very similar to vampires) vampires and her mysterious powers.
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* DownerEnding: The story ends with [[spoiler: Yoru shooting both Sera and Chou dead when they to escape the mansion]].

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* CurtainsMatchTheWindows: Yoru has black eyes and hair.

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* CurtainsMatchTheWindows: Yoru has black eyes and hair.DelicateAndSickly: Chou is a very cute yet frail girl due to her albinism (and she's already weak to the sun because of her species). If she goes out in the sun, she will die in five minutes. This is why she lives most of her life in the basement.



* IllGirl: Chou, due to her albinism (and she's already weak to the sun because of her species). If she goes out in the sun, she will die in five minutes. This is why she lives most of her life in the basement.
* MeaningfulName: Chou ('butterfly'), [[spoiler: Asa ('there is')]].

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* IllGirl: Chou, due to her albinism (and she's already weak to the sun because of her species). If she goes out in the sun, she will die in five minutes. This is why she lives most of her life in the basement.
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%%* MeaningfulName: Chou ('butterfly'), [[spoiler: Asa ('there is')]].



* TrademarkFavoriteFood: Donuts for both Chou and Yoru.

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* %%* TrademarkFavoriteFood: Donuts for both Chou and Yoru.
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* EeriePaleSkinnedBrunette: Yoru, has raven hair and pale skin and is pretty enigmatic and creepy. He doesn't go outside much due to being weak to sunlight like Chou(although he's not as vulnerable to it as she is).

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* EeriePaleSkinnedBrunette: Yoru, Yoru has raven hair and hair, pale skin and is pretty enigmatic and creepy. He doesn't go outside much due to being weak to sunlight like Chou(although he's not as vulnerable to it as she is).
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* StoicSpectacles: Yoru wears these and he never seems to lose his cool, no matter how dangerous the situation is.

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* StoicSpectacles: Yoru wears these glasses and he never seems to lose his cool, no matter how dangerous the situation is.

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It's about the amnesiac Kaoru Sera who wanders down a flight of stairs into a forest and stumbles upon a ominous, old looking western style mansion. He opens the gate and enters the house and is greeted by a stoic boy clad in black who is surrounded by black butterflies. The boy introduces himself as Yoru Mutsuki. He lets Sera in and gives him a job to do, which is to occupy a girl locked in a basement. Yoru then gives him the keys to the basement where he finds the albino girl in white, Chou. After he finishes this task, Yoru tells him that Chou is a [=ChouTsuki=] (a vampirelike species) and Kaoru was brought to be her sacrifice.

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It's about the amnesiac Kaoru Sera who wanders down a flight of stairs into a forest and stumbles upon a ominous, old looking western style mansion. He opens the gate and enters the house and is greeted by a stoic boy clad in black who is surrounded by black butterflies. The boy introduces himself as Yoru Mutsuki. He lets Sera in and gives him a job to do, which is to occupy a girl locked in a basement. Yoru then gives him the keys to the basement where he finds the albino girl in white, Chou. After he finishes this task, Yoru tells him that Chou is a [=ChouTsuki=] (a vampirelike vampire-like species) and Kaoru was brought to be her sacrifice.


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* AmnesiacHero: Kaoru starts the visual novel with no memory of his identity or past. He remembers everything towards the end of the visual novel though.
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* TechinicolorEyes: Chou's eyes are blood red. They are most likely a trait she got from her albinism.

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* TechinicolorEyes: TechnicolorEyes: Chou's eyes are blood red. They are most likely a trait she got from her albinism.
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* TechinicolorEyes: Chou's eyes are blood red. They are most likely a trait she got from her albinism.
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* IllGirl: Chou, due to her albinism (and she's already weak to the sun because of her species). If she goes out in the sun she will die in five minutes. This is why she lives most of her life in the basement.

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* IllGirl: Chou, due to her albinism (and she's already weak to the sun because of her species). If she goes out in the sun sun, she will die in five minutes. This is why she lives most of her life in the basement.
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* SplashOfColor: The entire work is completely monochrome save for the colour red, which shows up in Chou's eyes, blood, and the text. Given the fact that the world is described as achromatic, it seems this applies in-universe as well.

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* SplashOfColor: SplashOfColour: The entire work is completely monochrome save for the colour red, which shows up in Chou's eyes, blood, and the text. Given the fact that the world is described as achromatic, it seems this applies in-universe as well.
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* SplashOfColour: The entire work is completely monochrome save for the colour red, which shows up in Chou's eyes, blood, and the text. Given the fact that the world is described as achromatic, it seems this applies in-universe as well.

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* SplashOfColour: SplashOfColor: The entire work is completely monochrome save for the colour red, which shows up in Chou's eyes, blood, and the text. Given the fact that the world is described as achromatic, it seems this applies in-universe as well.
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It's about the amnesiac Kaoru Sera who wanders down a flight of stairs into a forest and stumbles upon a ominous, old looking western style mansion. He opens the gate and enters the house and is greeted by a stoic boy clad in black who has black butterflies. The boy introduces himself as Yoru Mutsuki. He lets Sera in and gives him a job to do, which is to occupy a girl locked in a basement. Yoru then gives him the keys to the basement where he finds the albino girl in white, Chou. After he finishes this task, Yoru tells him that Chou is a [=ChouTsuki=] (a vampirelike species) and Kaoru was brought to be her sacrifice.

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It's about the amnesiac Kaoru Sera who wanders down a flight of stairs into a forest and stumbles upon a ominous, old looking western style mansion. He opens the gate and enters the house and is greeted by a stoic boy clad in black who has is surrounded by black butterflies. The boy introduces himself as Yoru Mutsuki. He lets Sera in and gives him a job to do, which is to occupy a girl locked in a basement. Yoru then gives him the keys to the basement where he finds the albino girl in white, Chou. After he finishes this task, Yoru tells him that Chou is a [=ChouTsuki=] (a vampirelike species) and Kaoru was brought to be her sacrifice.

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