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Fixing formatting i promise i am not doing this on purpose. won't happen again, sorry
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* PunctuatedForEmphasis: Pom gets irritated when she realizes the free Wi-Fi at the cafe is actually [[spoiler:**Wi**tty **Fi**do]] and spells out "OMFG" with a different text box for every letter.
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* PunctuatedForEmphasis: Pom gets irritated when she realizes the free Wi-Fi at the cafe is actually [[spoiler:**Wi**tty **Fi**do]] [[spoiler:Witty Fido]] and spells out "OMFG" with a different text box for every letter.
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for anyone, mod or otherwise, i'm sorry about the last 2 edits. those were unfinished edits (that's why there's some broken grammar/spelling in the first one). i tried pressing enter to line-break my edit note, but it saved the edit instead. anyways, my edits might not be perfect, but i figured this page needs a little cleaning, ZCEs and all
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** Pom says "adios bitches" sometime in the middle of the game. "Bitch" can be an insult, as well as refer to a female dog
** "What's brown and sticky?" [[spoiler:A stick.]]
** "What kind of dog will laugh at anything?" [[spoiler:A Chi-ha-ha.]]
** "What's brown and sticky?" [[spoiler:A stick.]]
** "What kind of dog will laugh at anything?" [[spoiler:A Chi-ha-ha.]]
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** Pom says "adios bitches" sometime in the middle of the game. "Bitch" can be an insult, as well as refer to a female dog
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** Witty Fido tells two lame puns. "What's brown andsticky?" [[spoiler:A sticky? A stick.]]
**" "What kind of dog will laugh at anything?" [[spoiler:A anything? A Chi-ha-ha.]] "
** Witty Fido tells two lame puns. "What's brown and
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* OneHitKill: Pom can pull this on [[spoiler:Shibe]] during the final battle by using Incinerate, burning him for over all of his heal
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* OneHitKill: Pom can pull this on [[spoiler:Shibe]] during the final battle by using Incinerate, burning him for over all of his healhealth and ending the fight instantly.
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* PunctuatedForEmphasis: O... M... F... G.
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* PunctuatedForEmphasis: O... M... F... G.Pom gets irritated when she realizes the free Wi-Fi at the cafe is actually [[spoiler:**Wi**tty **Fi**do]] and spells out "OMFG" with a different text box for every letter.
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* StalkerWithACrush: Bernard towards Crest.
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* StalkerWithACrush: Bernard towards Crest.seems to be attracted to Crest, but it manifests into asking Pom and Shibe to secretly follow and take pictures of her, then show them to him afterwards.
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* IncrediblyLamePun: "adios bitches".
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* IncrediblyLamePun: IncrediblyLamePun:
** Pom says "adiosbitches".bitches" sometime in the middle of the game. "Bitch" can be an insult, as well as refer to a female dog
** Pom says "adios
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* IShallTauntYou: This is how Pom attacks her enemies.
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* IShallTauntYou: This is how Pom attacks her enemies.enemies exclusively by insulting them, with yo-mama jokes or otherwise.
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* OneHitKill: Pom can pull this on [[spoiler:Shibe]] during the final battle.
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* OneHitKill: Pom can pull this on [[spoiler:Shibe]] during the final battle.battle by using Incinerate, burning him for over all of his heal
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* DieForOurShip: If you don't [[spoiler:stalk Crest for him]] Bernard will insinuate that Shibe has a thing for Crest. Pom attacks him... and then reveals that the reason she attacked was because he insulted Hus/Shibe.
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* HowDoIShootWeb: [[spoiler:If you're on the path to the good ending, Pom will agree to fix doggy heaven... only to realise she has no idea how. [[SugarWiki/FunnyMoments Luckily, threats of urination prove effective]]]].
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* HowDoIShootWeb: [[spoiler:If you're on the path to the good ending, Pom will agree to fix doggy heaven... only to realise she has no idea how. [[SugarWiki/FunnyMoments Luckily, threats of urination prove effective]]]].effective]].
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** DieForOurShip: If you don't [[spoiler:stalk Crest for him]] Bernard will insinuate that Shibe has a thing for Crest. Pom attacks him... and then reveals that the reason she attacked was because he insulted Hus/Shibe.
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** "[[VideoGame/EarthBound You cannot grasp the true form of Dog's attack!]]"
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** "[[VideoGame/EarthBound "[[VideoGame/EarthBound1994 You cannot grasp the true form of Dog's attack!]]"
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* AmbiguousEnding: [[spoiler:The good ending; while it is certain that Pom won't crash doggy heaven into Earth, and seems content to make it better for everyone, she still hasn't got her [=WiFi=], and isn't sure where to start [[AGodAmI now that she can do anything she wants]]]].
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* AmbiguousEnding: [[spoiler:The good ending; while it is certain that Pom won't crash doggy heaven into Earth, and seems content to make it better for everyone, she still hasn't got her [=WiFi=], and isn't sure where to start [[AGodAmI now essentially gets [[NowWhat choice paralysis]] over the fact [[PhysicalGod that she can do anything she wants]]]].
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Up To Eleven is a defunct trope
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* GratuitousJapanese: Pom sprinkles her dialogue with random Japanese words and phrases. [[UpToEleven Her online friend Malty manages to be even worse.]]
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* GratuitousJapanese: Pom sprinkles her dialogue with random Japanese words and phrases. [[UpToEleven Her online friend Malty manages to be even worse.]]
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Cry Cute now dewicked
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* CryCute: Shibe. Especially during [[spoiler:the FinalBattle, where even his battle sprite is crying while he makes his speech]].
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-->'''Pom:''' If normal roses r [[Manga/KurokoNoBasuke Kuroko then this one is Kagami]]
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-->'''Pom:''' If normal roses r [[Manga/KurokoNoBasuke [[Manga/KurokosBasketball Kuroko then this one is Kagami]]
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** "[[VideoGame/Mother2 You cannot grasp the true form of Dog's attack!]]"
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** "[[VideoGame/Mother2 "[[VideoGame/EarthBound You cannot grasp the true form of Dog's attack!]]"
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''Pom Gets Wi-Fi'' is an indie Comedy-RPG about [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin a Pomeranian called Pom who is desperately looking for internet access]], made in VideoGame/RPGMaker 2003 and released in late 2013.
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''Pom Gets Wi-Fi'' is an indie Comedy-RPG about [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin a Pomeranian called Pom who is desperately looking for internet access]], made in VideoGame/RPGMaker UsefulNotes/RPGMaker 2003 and released in late 2013.
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** Attempting to leave the machine's interior before investigating anything gets Pom to jab at Franchise/AceAttorney.
-->'''Pom:''' unlike miles edgeworth im not going 2 b stopped by anything [[VisualNovel/AceAttorneyInvestigations not even north american localization]]
-->'''Pom:''' unlike miles edgeworth im not going 2 b stopped by anything [[VisualNovel/AceAttorneyInvestigations not even north american localization]]
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** To drive the point home, look no further than the actual motivation behind Pom wanting her wifi back so desperately. At the beginning of the game, there's a choice of four social medias that Pom can check, in any order the player may please, to continue onward with the story. Pom gives a dismissive one-liner about the news in these, lampshading how dull and boring they've become recently... Except she doesn't have a chance to check on the one left for last, [[SkewedPriorities because she was too busy dying IRL]]. The whole game happens because she's way too anxious to check what news she missed there, maybe make this whole shebang worth the trouble, which is exactly what happens in the Bad Ending. [[spoiler: No, it wasn't. It was yet another canned, jaded one-liner, about the same old stuff happening every day in there. Pom missed absolutely nothing.]] It's by going against this kind of fulfillment trappings from social medias that Pom gets the Good Ending. [[spoiler: [[SubvertedTrope Except not really, she still wants her wifi back to avoid being left out of these]].]]
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** To drive the point home, look no further than the actual motivation behind Pom wanting her wifi back so desperately. At the beginning of the game, there's a choice of four social medias that Pom can check, in any order the player may please, to continue onward with the story. Pom gives a dismissive one-liner line about the news in these, lampshading how dull and boring they've become recently... Except she doesn't have a chance to check on the one left for last, [[SkewedPriorities because she was too busy dying IRL]]. The whole game happens because she's way too anxious to check what news she missed there, maybe make this whole shebang worth the trouble, which is exactly what happens in the Bad Ending. [[spoiler: No, it wasn't. It was yet another canned, jaded one-liner, dismissal, about the same old stuff happening every day in there. Pom missed absolutely nothing.nothing important.]] It's by going against this kind of fulfillment trappings from social medias that Pom gets the Good Ending. [[spoiler: [[SubvertedTrope Except not really, she still wants her wifi back to avoid being left out of these]].]]
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** To drive the point home, look no further than the actual motivation behind Pom wanting her wifi back so desperately. At the beginning of the game, there's a choice of four social medias that Pom can check, in any order the player may please, to continue onward with the story. Pom gives a dismissive one-liner about the news in these, lampshading how dull and boring they've become recently... Except she doesn't have a chance to check on the one left for last, [[SkeweredPriorities because she was too busy dying IRL]]. The whole game happens because she's way too anxious to check what news she missed there, maybe make this whole shebang worth the trouble, which is exactly what happens in the Bad Ending. [[spoiler: No, it wasn't. It was yet another canned, jaded one-liner, about the same old stuff happening every day in there. Pom missed absolutely nothing.]] It's by going against this kind of fulfillment trappings from social medias that Pom gets the Good Ending. [[spoiler: [[SubvertedTrope Except not really, she still wants her wifi back to avoid being left out of these]].]]
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** To drive the point home, look no further than the actual motivation behind Pom wanting her wifi back so desperately. At the beginning of the game, there's a choice of four social medias that Pom can check, in any order the player may please, to continue onward with the story. Pom gives a dismissive one-liner about the news in these, lampshading how dull and boring they've become recently... Except she doesn't have a chance to check on the one left for last, [[SkeweredPriorities [[SkewedPriorities because she was too busy dying IRL]]. The whole game happens because she's way too anxious to check what news she missed there, maybe make this whole shebang worth the trouble, which is exactly what happens in the Bad Ending. [[spoiler: No, it wasn't. It was yet another canned, jaded one-liner, about the same old stuff happening every day in there. Pom missed absolutely nothing.]] It's by going against this kind of fulfillment trappings from social medias that Pom gets the Good Ending. [[spoiler: [[SubvertedTrope Except not really, she still wants her wifi back to avoid being left out of these]].]]
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** To drive the point home, look no further than the actual motivation behind Pom wanting her wifi back so desperately. At the beginning of the game, there's a choice of four social medias that Pom can check, in any order the player may please, to continue onward with the story. Pom gives a dismissive one-liner about the news in these, lampshading how dull and boring they've become recently... Except she doesn't have a chance to check on the one left for last, [[SkeweredPriorities because she was too busy dying IRL]]. The whole game happens because she's way too anxious to check what news she missed there, maybe make this whole shebang worth the trouble, which is exactly what happens in the Bad Ending. [[spoiler: No, it wasn't. It was yet another canned, jaded one-liner, about the same old stuff happening every day in there. Pom missed absolutely nothing.]] It's by going against this kind of fulfillment trappings from social medias that Pom gets the Good Ending. [[spoiler: [[SubvertedTrope Except not really, she still wants her wifi back to avoid being left out of these]].]]
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''Pom Gets Wi-Fi'' is an indie Comedy-RPG about [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin a Pomeranian called Pom who is desperately looking for internet access]], made in [=RPGMaker=] 2003 and released in late 2013.
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''Pom Gets Wi-Fi'' is an indie Comedy-RPG about [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin a Pomeranian called Pom who is desperately looking for internet access]], made in [=RPGMaker=] VideoGame/RPGMaker 2003 and released in late 2013.
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The game is free and available for download [[http://rpgmaker.net/games/5441/ here]].
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The game is free [[FreewareGames free]] and available for download [[http://rpgmaker.net/games/5441/ here]].
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* YourMom: Half of Pom's combat options are made up of randomised "Yo Mama" jokes.
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* YourMom: Half of Pom's combat options are made up of randomised "Yo Mama" jokes.jokes.
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** When Pom's house catches fire at the beginning of the game, she begins [[{{Franchise/Pokemon}} "koffing" and "wheezing"]] from the smoke.
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* ThemeNaming: Every character's name is derived from their breed (Pom = Pomeranian, Shibe = Shibe Inu, Hus = Husky etc.)
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* ThemeNaming: Every character's name is derived from their breed (Pom = Pomeranian, Shibe = Shibe Shiba Inu, Hus = Husky etc.)
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* DogStereotype: Averted. Each dog has a personality in line with what the breed is actually like, rather than how it's stereotyped. Pom seems to be an exception, [[spoiler: but her speech she gives to Shibe in the good ending suggests that her aggressive attitude comes from failing at several things, and becoming disillusioned about what she'll amount to.]]
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* DogStereotype: Averted. Each dog has a personality in line with what the breed is actually like, rather than how it's stereotyped. Pom seems to be an exception, [[spoiler: but her speech she gives to Shibe in the good ending suggests that her aggressive attitude comes from failing at several things, and becoming disillusioned about what she'll amount to.to; a personality much more in line with the Pomeranian breed.]]
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* DogStereotype: Averted. Each dog has a personality in line with what the breed is actually like, rather than how it's stereotyped. Pom seems to be an exception, [[spoiler: but her speech she gives to Shibe in the good ending suggests that her aggressive attitude comes from failing at several things, and becoming disillusioned about what she'll amount to.]]