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* ImMelting: [[spoiler: Happens in one scene, the person involved get's better though.]]
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* ImMelting: [[spoiler: Happens in one scene, the person involved get's gets better though.]]
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* YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre: Astis tries telling Moira this....unfortunately it doesn't work, Moira has very bad self image and is not ready or willing to believe anything good about herself.
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* YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre: Astis tries telling Moira this....unfortunately it doesn't work, Moira has very bad self image and is not ready or willing to believe anything good about herself.
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* BadassGay: Moira is a highly skilled and competent mercenary/fighter (despite her alcohol problem),and happens to be homosexual.
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* BadassGay: Moira is a highly skilled and competent mercenary/fighter (despite her alcohol problem),and problem), and happens to be homosexual.
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Piss follows the story of Moira, a mercenary with a severe drink problem. Haunted by dreams, and desperate to forget and dull the pain of her past, she’s aimless and depressed, her only motivation seemingly to gain money to buy more alcohol.
But her story becomes far more complex when she finds out that her latest client never intended to pay her, has recently died, and has taken the money he owed her with him to the underworld (on purpose). Moira is furious and determines to attempt to reclaim her money, even if it kills her. On the way more and more of the circumstances that drove her to be the way she is are revealed as she is forced to face her demons and haunted past.
But her story becomes far more complex when she finds out that her latest client never intended to pay her, has recently died, and has taken the money he owed her with him to the underworld (on purpose). Moira is furious and determines to attempt to reclaim her money, even if it kills her. On the way more and more of the circumstances that drove her to be the way she is are revealed as she is forced to face her demons and haunted past.
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Piss follows the story of Moira, a mercenary with a severe drink problem. Haunted by dreams, and desperate to forget and dull the pain of her past, she’s aimless and depressed, her only motivation seemingly to gain money to buy more alcohol. \n But her story becomes far more complex when she finds out that her latest client never intended to pay her, has recently died, and has taken the money he owed her with him to the underworld (on purpose). Moira is furious and determines to attempt to reclaim her money, even if it kills her. On the way more and more of the circumstances that drove her to be the way she is are revealed as she is forced to face her demons and haunted past.
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the link is struck out in the RPS article, but it worked when i tried it, and a comment on the article says it worked back in 2013, so i\'m guessing it\'s fairly legit
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'''Piss''' is an adventure game created by Ben Chandler as part of a collection briefly available in Summer 2012. The game is no longer available but there have been hints of a possible update and re-release in the future.
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'''Piss''' is an adventure game created by Ben Chandler as part of a collection briefly available in Summer 2012. The game is no longer [[https://www.dropbox.com/s/frf7m1hxttnd4j1/PISS%20final.zip available but there have free]], having been hints of a possible update and re-release in the future.
shared by Chandler via Dropbox.
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* HookerWithAHeartOfGold: While the term is not stated outright, it's pretty clear that Astis is a sex worker. She also has a very gentle and sweet, and generally cheeful personality, and is possibly one of the [[EthicalSlut nicest characters in the game]]. She is also one of only three people who seem to genuinely care about Moira, and is trying to look out for her.
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* HookerWithAHeartOfGold: While the term is not stated outright, it's pretty clear that Astis is a sex worker. She also has a very gentle and sweet, and generally cheeful personality, and is possibly one of the [[EthicalSlut nicest characters in the game]]. She is also one of only three people who seem to genuinely care about Moira, and is trying to look out for her.
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* OptionalSexualEncounter: Depending on your choices, doubles as SexForSolace (although unusually for that trope it's not the HurtingHero who initiates the encounter). Moira either agrees to it (hence the scene) or not.
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* OptionalSexualEncounter: Depending on your choices, doubles as SexForSolace (although unusually for that trope it's not the HurtingHero who initiates the encounter). Moira either agrees to it (hence the scene) or not.
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* OptionalSexualEncounter: Depending on your choices, doubles as SexForSolace, although unusually it's not the HurtingHero who initiates the encounter. Moira either agrees to it (hence the scene) or not.
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* OptionalSexualEncounter: Depending on your choices, doubles as SexForSolace, although SexForSolace (although unusually for that trope it's not the HurtingHero who initiates the encounter.encounter). Moira either agrees to it (hence the scene) or not.
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* OptionalSexualEncounter: Depending on your choices, doubles as SexForSolace, although unusually it's not the HurtingHero who initiates the encounter. Moira either agrees to it(hence the scene) or not.
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* OptionalSexualEncounter: Depending on your choices, doubles as SexForSolace, although unusually it's not the HurtingHero who initiates the encounter. Moira either agrees to it(hence it (hence the scene) or not.
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* OptionalSexualEncounter: Depending on your choices, doubles as (attempted) IntimatePsychotherapy and possibly SexForSolace as well.
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* OptionalSexualEncounter: Depending on your choices, doubles as (attempted) IntimatePsychotherapy and possibly SexForSolace as well.SexForSolace, although unusually it's not the HurtingHero who initiates the encounter. Moira either agrees to it(hence the scene) or not.
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* TragicMistake: Moira made one, and it's the cause of all her anger, guilt, and alcoholism.
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* TragicMistake: Moira [[NiceJobBreakingItHero made one, one]], and it's the cause of all her anger, guilt, and alcoholism.
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* HitmanWithAHeart: As a solo mercenary for hire, Moira is sometimes required to kill people, but has a strong reluctance and aversion to harming the innocent, and it's clearly shown that she does have a conscience and sense of morality.
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* HitmanWithAHeart: As a solo mercenary for hire, hire Moira is sometimes required to kill people, but has a strong reluctance and aversion to harming the innocent, innocent and it's clearly shown that she does have a conscience and sense of morality.
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* HookerWithAHeartOfGold: While the term is not stated outright, it's pretty clear that Astis is a sex worker. She also has a very gentle and sweet, and generally cheeful personality, and is possibly one of the [[EthicalSlut nicest characters in the game]]. She is also one of only three people who seem to genuinely care about Moira, and is concerned about Moira and trying to look out for her.
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* HookerWithAHeartOfGold: While the term is not stated outright, it's pretty clear that Astis is a sex worker. She also has a very gentle and sweet, and generally cheeful personality, and is possibly one of the [[EthicalSlut nicest characters in the game]]. She is also one of only three people who seem to genuinely care about Moira, and is concerned about Moira and trying to look out for her.
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* HookerWithAHeartOfGold: While the term is not stated outright, it's pretty clear that Astis is a sex worker. She also has a very gentle and sweet, and generally cheeful personality, and is one of only three people in the game who seem to genuinely care about and be concerned for Moira, and is trying to look out for her.
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* HitmanWithAHeart: As a solo mercenary for hire, Moira is sometimes required to kill people, but has a strong reluctance and aversion to harming the innocent, and it's clearly shown that she does have a conscience and sense of morality.
* HookerWithAHeartOfGold: While the term is not stated outright, it's pretty clear that Astis is a sex worker. She also has a very gentle and sweet, and generally cheeful personality, and is possibly one of the [[EthicalSlut nicest characters in the game]]. She is also one of only three peoplein the game who seem to genuinely care about and be concerned for Moira, and is concerned about Moira and trying to look out for her. her.
* HookerWithAHeartOfGold: While the term is not stated outright, it's pretty clear that Astis is a sex worker. She also has a very gentle and sweet, and generally cheeful personality, and is possibly one of the [[EthicalSlut nicest characters in the game]]. She is also one of only three people
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* HurtingHero: Even if she can't remember exactly what, Moira is aware she did something terrible and is guilt-ridden and self loathing as a result. She is clearly suffering from depression, and possibly a form of PTSD as well, and tries to numb herself and cope by drinking excessive amounts of alcohol. Despite this she is still able to function well enough to continue her work as a mercenary.
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* HurtingHero: Even if she can't remember exactly what, Moira is aware she did something terrible and is guilt-ridden and self loathing as a result. She is clearly suffering from depression, and possibly a form of PTSD as well, and tries to numb herself and cope by drinking excessive amounts of alcohol. Despite this she is still able to function well enough to continue her work as a mercenary.
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-> "There's nothing worse than waking up to the same bad dreams as ever, watching the last of your money pour out of you in a yellow stream and remembering the only reason you got to sleep at all last night was the amount you drank beforehand"
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-> "There's nothing worse than waking up to the same bad dreams as ever, watching the last of your money pour out of you in a yellow stream and remembering the only reason you got to sleep at all last night was the amount you drank beforehand."
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* BrokenBird: Moira is depressed and guilt-ridden due to having made a TragicMistake in her past, and seems completely unable to move on or forgive herself. It's to the point where she suffers from chronic insomnia and gets drunk whenever she can just to repress her memories, dull her pain, and be able to actually get some sleep. Even when she does sleep, she suffers from a recurring nightmare that leaves her sweating and shivering in fear.
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* BrokenBird: Moira is depressed and guilt-ridden due to having made a TragicMistake tragic error in her past, and seems completely unable to move on or forgive herself. It's to the point where she suffers from chronic insomnia and gets drunk whenever she can just to repress her memories, dull her pain, and be able to actually get some sleep. Even when she does sleep, she suffers from a recurring nightmare that leaves her sweating and shivering in fear.
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* BrokenBird: Moira is depressed and guilt-ridden due to having done something horrible in her past, and seems completely unable to move on or forgive herself. It's to the point where she suffers from chronic insomnia and gets drunk whenever she can just to repress her memories, dull her pain, and be able to actually get some sleep. Even when she does sleep, she suffers from a recurring nightmare that leaves her sweating and shivering in fear.
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* BrokenBird: Moira is depressed and guilt-ridden due to having done something horrible made a TragicMistake in her past, and seems completely unable to move on or forgive herself. It's to the point where she suffers from chronic insomnia and gets drunk whenever she can just to repress her memories, dull her pain, and be able to actually get some sleep. Even when she does sleep, she suffers from a recurring nightmare that leaves her sweating and shivering in fear.
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* NamedWeapons: Moira's sword is called "Keith".
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* BrokenBird: Moira is depressed and guilt-ridden due to having done something horrible in her past, and seems completely unable to move on or forgive herself. It's to the point where she suffers from chronic insomnia and gets drunk whenever she can just to repress her memories, dull her pain, and be able to actually get some sleep. Even when she does sleep, she suffers from a recurring nightmare that leaves her sweating and shivering in fear.
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* HurtingHero: Even if she can't remember exactly what, Moira is aware she did something terrible and is guilt-ridden and self loathing as a result. She is clearly suffering from depression, and possibly a form of PTSD as well, and tries to numb herself and cope by drinking excessive amounts of alcohol. Despite this she is still able to function well enough to continue her work as a mercenary.
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* MyGreatestFailure: An odd case as Moira can't actually remember exactly what happened (at least not consciously) for most of the game due to her excessive drinking, but she does remember that she did something terrible, and is still subconsciously aware of the incident, hence the recurring nightmare and feelings of guilt.
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* ScrapHeapHero: Moira views herself as this, and even says as much to Yktor. Yktor, however, disagrees.
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* StraightGay: Moira and Astis are this.
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* StraightGay: Neither Moira and nor Astis are this.fit any particular gay stereotype.
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* EmotionSuppression: Moira has a hard time with his, she cares about her friends but is too afraid and doubtful of her own self worth to let them close. She realises Astis is in love with her, and secretly loves Astis as well, but is very reluctant to admit it even to herself and even strays into outright denial at times, resulting in confusion and pain for both of them.
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* EmotionSuppression: Moira has a hard time with his, this, she cares about her friends but is too afraid and doubtful of her own self worth to let them close. She realises Astis is in love with her, and secretly loves Astis as well, but is very reluctant to admit it even to herself and even strays into outright denial at times, resulting in confusion and pain for both of them.
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* BadassGay: Moira is a highly skilled and competent mercenary/fighter.
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* BadassGay: Moira is a highly skilled and competent mercenary/fighter.mercenary/fighter (despite her alcohol problem),and happens to be homosexual.
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* BadassGay: Moira is both homosexual and a highly skilled and competent mercenary
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* BadassGay: Moira is both homosexual and a highly skilled and competent mercenarymercenary/fighter.
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BadassGay: Moira is both homosexual and a highly skilled and competent mercenary
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* BadassGay: Moira is both homosexual and a highly skilled and competent mercenary
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BadassGay: Moira is both homosexual and a highly skilled and competent mercenary
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* HeroicBSOD: Moira used to work for a mercenary company and was well liked, good at her job, and happy, then the incident happened and she still hasn't come back from the despair event horizon years later
* HeroicBSOD: Moira used to work for a mercenary company and was well liked, good at her job, and happy, then the incident happened and she still hasn't come back from the despair event horizon years later
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