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* AccidentalMurder: The [[spoiler:source of both Ellis's trauma. Happened ''twice'', poor sod.]]
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* AccidentalMurder: The [[spoiler:source of both Ellis's trauma. Happened ''twice'', poor sod. He killed an innocent woman while trying to hide from enemy soldiers and he shot an unarmed teenage boy during a store robbery. Both deaths haunt him over the game’s course, mostly the woman’s death.]]
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* ShellShockedVeteran: Ellis is a Gulf War veteran that contracted Post-Traumatic Stress Disorder from his experiences, which included the ambush and death of his entire squad ''and'' his AccidentalMurder of a woman whose room he ran into to get away from the enemy during that ambush. This resulted in tensions with his wife Jane, and is how he got Bullet, to use as a therapy dog.
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* ShellShockedVeteran: Ellis is a Gulf War veteran that contracted Post-Traumatic Stress Disorder from his experiences, which included the ambush and death of his entire squad ''and'' his AccidentalMurder of a woman whose room he ran into to get away from the enemy during that ambush. This resulted in tensions with his wife Jane, Jess, and is how he got Bullet, to use as a therapy dog.
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* WarIsHell: As a traumatized veteran (given the game's timeframe, presumably of the Gulf War), Ellis is made to relieve this in the twisted hallucinations he suffers in the forest.
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* WarIsHell: As a traumatized veteran (given the game's timeframe, presumably of the Gulf War), Ellis is made to relieve this in the [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SjDo74ro8KI twisted hallucinations hallucinations]] he suffers in the forest.
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* BilingualBonus: [[spoiler: The Arabic text peppered throughout the game foreshadows certain elements of the plot, and its very existence informs players of Ellis' previous experience as a soldier.]]
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--> ''Ellis'' : What did you think was gonna happen, Ellis?
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--> ''Ellis'' : '''Ellis:''' What did you think was gonna happen, Ellis?
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* AccidentalMurder: The [[spoiler:source of both Ellis's trauma. Happened 'twice', poor sod.]]
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* AccidentalMurder: The [[spoiler:source of both Ellis's trauma. Happened 'twice', ''twice'', poor sod.]]
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* DevelopersForesight: [[spoiler: If the player opts to call the Sherrif after fucking his corpse, Ellis will note to himself how dumb that is.]]
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* DevelopersForesight: [[spoiler: If the player opts to call the Sherrif after fucking finding his corpse, Ellis will note to himself how dumb that is.]]
