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* RealitySubtext: Amoridere's sister, according to a note, had developed lupus during the writing of the fic, in which case, Satsuki being an {{ill girl}} is this retroactively, while the ending was written as Amoridere came to terms with the diagnosis.
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* RealitySubtext: Amoridere's sister, according to a note, had developed lupus during the writing of the fic, in which case, Satsuki being an {{ill girl}} DelicateAndSickly is this retroactively, while the ending was written as Amoridere came to terms with the diagnosis.
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* RealitySubtext: Amoridere's sister, according to a note, had developed lupus during the writing of the fic, in which case, Satsuki being an {{ill girl}} is this retroactively.retroactively, while the ending was written as Amoridere came to terms with the diagnosis.
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* ScheduleSlip: There is a roughly 50 day timespan between chapters 40 (April 14th) and 41 (June 3rd). Likewise, there were about three weeks between chapters 51 and 52
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*RealitySubtext: Amoridere's sister, according to a note, had developed lupus during the writing of the fic, in which case,
* ScheduleSlip: There is a roughly 50 day timespan between chapters 40 (April 14th) and 41 (June 3rd). Likewise, there were about three weeks between chapters 51 and5252
*WhatCouldHaveBeen: According to the note, Satsuki was supposed to [[spoiler: pass away in the last chapter]] but Amoridere liked the BittersweetEnding better, opting to end the chapter with Satsuki surviving [[spoiler: with a short life expectancy]].
* ScheduleSlip: There is a roughly 50 day timespan between chapters 40 (April 14th) and 41 (June 3rd). Likewise, there were about three weeks between chapters 51 and
*WhatCouldHaveBeen: According to the note, Satsuki was supposed to [[spoiler: pass away in the last chapter]] but Amoridere liked the BittersweetEnding better, opting to end the chapter with Satsuki surviving [[spoiler: with a short life expectancy]].
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