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* UnderminedByReality: One of the examples Lisa gives for why it's a good idea for her as an individual to be an "owner" of a city is cities like that worked fine pre-crisis, specifically mentioning the Republic of Minerva... [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Republic_of_Minerva which didn't work out at all.]]
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* WriteWhoYouKnow: Lisa and Todd in the books are fictionalized versions of the author's own children.
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* WriteWhoYouKnow: Lisa and Todd in the books are fictionalized versions of the author's own children.children.
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* WriteWhatYouKnow: The locations used in the book are the actual places in the area the author and his family lived at the time the book was written. Specifically, the house on Grand Avenue where Lisa and Todd initially lived was his family's actual residence. You can use Google Maps to find the locations described in the book, including Grand Avenue, Chidster, Elm, Riford, Lenox, and Glennbard.
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* WriteWhatYouKnow: The locations used in the book are the actual places in the area the author and his family lived at the time the book was written. Specifically, the house on Grand Avenue where Lisa and Todd initially lived was his family's actual residence. You can use Google Maps to find the locations described in the book, including Grand Avenue, Chidster, Elm, Riford, Lenox, and Glennbard.Glenbard.
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* WriteWhatYouKnow: The locations used in the book are the actual places in the area the author and his family lived at the time the book was written. Specifically, the house on Grand Avenue where Lisa and Todd initially lived was his family's actual residence. You can use Google Maps to find the locations described in the book, including Grand Avenue, CHidster, Elm, Riford, Lenox, and Glennbard.
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* WriteWhatYouKnow: The locations used in the book are the actual places in the area the author and his family lived at the time the book was written. Specifically, the house on Grand Avenue where Lisa and Todd initially lived was his family's actual residence. You can use Google Maps to find the locations described in the book, including Grand Avenue, CHidster, Chidster, Elm, Riford, Lenox, and Glennbard.
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* UnderminedByReality: One of the examples Lisa gives for why it's a good idea for her as an individual to be an "owner" of a city is cities like that worked fine pre-crisis, specifically mentioning the Republic of Minerva... [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Republic_of_Minerva which didn't work out at all.]]
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* RealitySubtext: In the beginning of the story, Lisa tells Todd a story about a fictionalized version of him. This is in a book the author wrote about fictionalized versions of his own children.
* UnderminedByReality: One of the examples Lisa gives for why it's a good idea for her as an individual to be an "owner" of a city is cities like that worked fine pre-crisis, specifically mentioning the Republic of Minerva... [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Republic_of_Minerva which didn't work out at all.]]]]
* WriteWhatYouKnow: The locations used in the book are the actual places in the area the author and his family lived at the time the book was written. Specifically, the house on Grand Avenue where Lisa and Todd initially lived was his family's actual residence. You can use Google Maps to find the locations described in the book, including Grand Avenue, CHidster, Elm, Riford, Lenox, and Glennbard.
* WriteWhoYouKnow: Lisa and Todd in the books are fictionalized versions of the author's own children.
* UnderminedByReality: One of the examples Lisa gives for why it's a good idea for her as an individual to be an "owner" of a city is cities like that worked fine pre-crisis, specifically mentioning the Republic of Minerva... [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Republic_of_Minerva which didn't work out at all.
* WriteWhatYouKnow: The locations used in the book are the actual places in the area the author and his family lived at the time the book was written. Specifically, the house on Grand Avenue where Lisa and Todd initially lived was his family's actual residence. You can use Google Maps to find the locations described in the book, including Grand Avenue, CHidster, Elm, Riford, Lenox, and Glennbard.
* WriteWhoYouKnow: Lisa and Todd in the books are fictionalized versions of the author's own children.
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* UnderminedByReality: One of the examples Lisa gives for why it's a good idea for her as an individual to be an "owner" of a city is cities like that worked fine pre-crisis, specifically mentioning the Republic of Minerva... [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Republic_of_Minerva which didn't work out at all.]]
