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* WhatCouldHaveBeen: Mina Nori was originally going to be a WellDoneDaughterGirl who killed people in the hope that she can receive approval of her father Rakshas and had reservations about killing her brother Dyal. After receiving comments that voiced concerns about Mina being made out to be more sympathetic than she really was a la [[Series/ObiWanKenobi Reva Savander]], [=EmeraldAuthor95=] altered Mina's characterization into that of a more unsympathetic BloodKnight who kills to satiate her bloodlust.
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* WhatCouldHaveBeen: Mina Nori was originally going to be a WellDoneDaughterGirl who killed people in the hope that she can receive approval of her father Rakshas and had reservations about killing her brother Dyal. After receiving comments that voiced concerns about Mina possibly being made out to be more sympathetic than she really was a la [[Series/ObiWanKenobi Reva Savander]], UnintentionallyUnsympathetic, [=EmeraldAuthor95=] altered Mina's characterization into that of a more unsympathetic psychotic BloodKnight who kills to satiate her bloodlust.
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* FollowTheLeader: This story is influenced and inspired by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/812055/GamerJay GamerJay]]'s ''VideoGame/Doom2016''/''WebAnimation/{{RWBY}}'' FusionFic: ''Fanfic/RemnantInferisDOOM''.
* WhatCouldHaveBeen: Mina Nori was originally going to be a WellDoneDaughterGirl who killed people in the hope that she can receive approval of her father Rakshas and had reservations about killing her brother Dyal. After receiving a comment from [=DaneNagai=] that voiced concerns about Mina being made out to be more sympathetic than she really was a la [[Series/ObiWanKenobi Reva Savander]], [=EmeraldAuthor95=] altered Mina's characterization into that of a more unsympathetic BloodKnight who kills to satiate her bloodlust.
* WhatCouldHaveBeen: Mina Nori was originally going to be a WellDoneDaughterGirl who killed people in the hope that she can receive approval of her father Rakshas and had reservations about killing her brother Dyal. After receiving a comment from [=DaneNagai=] that voiced concerns about Mina being made out to be more sympathetic than she really was a la [[Series/ObiWanKenobi Reva Savander]], [=EmeraldAuthor95=] altered Mina's characterization into that of a more unsympathetic BloodKnight who kills to satiate her bloodlust.
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* FollowTheLeader: This story is influenced and inspired by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/812055/GamerJay GamerJay]]'s ''VideoGame/Doom2016''/''WebAnimation/{{RWBY}}'' FusionFic: FusionFic ''Fanfic/RemnantInferisDOOM''.
* WhatCouldHaveBeen: Mina Nori was originally going to be a WellDoneDaughterGirl who killed people in the hope that she can receive approval of her father Rakshas and had reservations about killing her brother Dyal. After receivinga comment from [=DaneNagai=] comments that voiced concerns about Mina being made out to be more sympathetic than she really was a la [[Series/ObiWanKenobi Reva Savander]], [=EmeraldAuthor95=] altered Mina's characterization into that of a more unsympathetic BloodKnight who kills to satiate her bloodlust.
* WhatCouldHaveBeen: Mina Nori was originally going to be a WellDoneDaughterGirl who killed people in the hope that she can receive approval of her father Rakshas and had reservations about killing her brother Dyal. After receiving
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* FollowTheLeader: This story is influenced and inspired by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/812055/GamerJay GamerJay]]'s ''VideoGame/Doom2016''/''WebAnimation/{{RWBY}}'' FusionFic: ''Fanfic/RemnantInferisDOOM''.
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* WhatCouldHaveBeen: Mina Nori was originally going to be a WellDoneDaughterGirl who killed people in the hope that she can receive approval of her father Rakshas and had reservations about killing her brother Dyal. After receiving a comment from [=DaneNagai=] that voiced concerns about Mina being made out to be more sympathetic than she really was a la [[Series/ObiWanKenobi Reva Savander]], [=EmeraldAuthor95=] altered Mina's characterization to be more of an unsympathetic BloodKnight who kills to satiate her bloodlust.
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* WhatCouldHaveBeen: Mina Nori was originally going to be a WellDoneDaughterGirl who killed people in the hope that she can receive approval of her father Rakshas and had reservations about killing her brother Dyal. After receiving a comment from [=DaneNagai=] that voiced concerns about Mina being made out to be more sympathetic than she really was a la [[Series/ObiWanKenobi Reva Savander]], [=EmeraldAuthor95=] altered Mina's characterization to be into that of a more of an unsympathetic BloodKnight who kills to satiate her bloodlust.
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* WhatCouldHaveBeen: Mina Nori was originally going to be a WellDoneDaughterGirl who killed people in the hope that she can receive approval of her father Rakshas and had reservations about killing her brother Dyal. After receiving a comment from [=DaneNagai=] that voiced concerns about Mina being made out to be more sympathetic than she really was a la [[Series/KenobiAStarWarsStory Reva Savander]], [=EmeraldAuthor95=] altered Mina's characterization to be more of an unsympathetic BloodKnight who kills to satiate her bloodlust.
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* WhatCouldHaveBeen: Mina Nori was originally going to be a WellDoneDaughterGirl who killed people in the hope that she can receive approval of her father Rakshas and had reservations about killing her brother Dyal. After receiving a comment from [=DaneNagai=] that voiced concerns about Mina being made out to be more sympathetic than she really was a la [[Series/KenobiAStarWarsStory [[Series/ObiWanKenobi Reva Savander]], [=EmeraldAuthor95=] altered Mina's characterization to be more of an unsympathetic BloodKnight who kills to satiate her bloodlust.
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* WhatCouldHaveBeen: Mina Nori was originally going to be a WellDoneDaughterGirl who killed people in the hope that she can receive approval of her father Rakshas and had reservations about killing her brother Dyal. After receiving a comment from [=DaneNagai=] that voiced concerns about Mina being made out to be more sympathetic than she really was a la [[Series/ObiWan Reva Savander]], [=EmeraldAuthor95=] altered Mina's characterization to be more of an unsympathetic BloodKnight who kills to satiate her bloodlust.
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* WhatCouldHaveBeen: Mina Nori was originally going to be a WellDoneDaughterGirl who killed people in the hope that she can receive approval of her father Rakshas and had reservations about killing her brother Dyal. After receiving a comment from [=DaneNagai=] that voiced concerns about Mina being made out to be more sympathetic than she really was a la [[Series/ObiWan [[Series/KenobiAStarWarsStory Reva Savander]], [=EmeraldAuthor95=] altered Mina's characterization to be more of an unsympathetic BloodKnight who kills to satiate her bloodlust.
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* WhatCouldHaveBeen: Mina Nori was originally going to be a WellDoneDaughterGirl who killed people in the hope that she can receive approval of her father Rakshas and had reservations about killing her brother Dyal. After receiving comments that voiced concerns about Mina being made out to be more sympathetic than she really was, [=EmeraldAuthor95=] altered Mina's characterization to be more of an unsympathetic BloodKnight who kills to satiate her bloodlust.
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* WhatCouldHaveBeen: Mina Nori was originally going to be a WellDoneDaughterGirl who killed people in the hope that she can receive approval of her father Rakshas and had reservations about killing her brother Dyal. After receiving comments a comment from [=DaneNagai=] that voiced concerns about Mina being made out to be more sympathetic than she really was, was a la [[Series/ObiWan Reva Savander]], [=EmeraldAuthor95=] altered Mina's characterization to be more of an unsympathetic BloodKnight who kills to satiate her bloodlust.
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* WhatCouldHaveBeen: Mina Nori was originally going to be a WellDoneDaughterGirl who killed people in the hope that she can receive approval of her father Rakshas and had reservations about killing her brother Dyal. After receiving comments that voiced concerns about Mina being made out to be more sympathetic than she really was, [=EmeraldAuthor95=] altered Mina's characterization to be more of a sadistic BloodKnight.
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* WhatCouldHaveBeen: Mina Nori was originally going to be a WellDoneDaughterGirl who killed people in the hope that she can receive approval of her father Rakshas and had reservations about killing her brother Dyal. After receiving comments that voiced concerns about Mina being made out to be more sympathetic than she really was, [=EmeraldAuthor95=] altered Mina's characterization to be more of a sadistic BloodKnight.an unsympathetic BloodKnight who kills to satiate her bloodlust.
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