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** The interview in Chapter 1, Act 6 would have had a portion where the Parent would talk about the Spouse/the Child's other parent. The author decides to put that in Chapter 3 instead.
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** The interview in Chapter 1, Act 6 would have had a portion where the Parent would talk about the Spouse/the Child's other parent. The author decides to put that in Chapter 3 instead.instead.
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* OfficialFanSubmittedContent: Because interactions between the author and the fans, there are a lot of suggestions that were included in the game. Some of these include the food featured in-game, aliases for heroes and villains, and in-character cameos for parts of the game.
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* OfficialFanSubmittedContent: Because of the interactions between the author and the fans, there are a lot of suggestions that were included in the game. Some of these include the food food/cuisines featured in-game, the aliases for certain heroes and villains, and in-character cameos for in various parts of the game.
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** Some of the characters have their personalities and roles changed overtime. For example, Izzy's personality would have been a bitter DeadpanSnarker and Haggerty was supposed to be cruder and a contestant of the cooking contest.
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** Some of the characters have their personalities and roles changed overtime. over time. For example, Izzy's personality would have been a bitter DeadpanSnarker and Haggerty was supposed to be cruder and was supposed to be a contestant of the cooking contest.
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* ContestWinnerCameo: The author held fanart contests where the winners can customize some details for certain plot-important [=NPCs=].
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* ContestWinnerCameo: The author held two fanart contests (so far), where the winners can customize some details for certain plot-important [=NPCs=].
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** Some of the characters have their personalities and roles changed overtime. For example, Izzy's personality would have been a bitter DeadpanSnarker and Haggerty was supposed to be cruder and a contestant and not a judge.
** Willard Audley was originally Willard ''Dorsey''. It was changed so that the character will not be associated with [[Website/{{Twitter}} Jack Dorsey]].
** Willard Audley was originally Willard ''Dorsey''. It was changed so that the character will not be associated with [[Website/{{Twitter}} Jack Dorsey]].
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** Some of the characters have their personalities and roles changed overtime. For example, Izzy's personality would have been a bitter DeadpanSnarker and Haggerty was supposed to be cruder and a contestant and not a judge.
of the cooking contest.
** Willard Audley was originally Willard ''Dorsey''. It was changed so that the characterwill would not be associated with [[Website/{{Twitter}} Jack Dorsey]].
** Willard Audley was originally Willard ''Dorsey''. It was changed so that the character
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** Some of the characters have their personalities and roles changed overtime. For example, Izzy's personality would have been a bitter DeadpanSnarker and Haggerty was supposed to be contestant and not the judge.
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** Some of the characters have their personalities and roles changed overtime. For example, Izzy's personality would have been a bitter DeadpanSnarker and Haggerty was supposed to be cruder and a contestant and not the a judge.
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* ContestWinnerCameo: The author held a fanart contest where the winners can customize some details for certain plot-important [=NPCs=].
* OfficialFanSubmittedContent: Because interactions between the author and the fans, there are a lot of suggestions that were included in the game. Some of these include the food featured, aliases for heroes and villains, and in-character cameos for parts of the game.
* OfficialFanSubmittedContent: Because interactions between the author and the fans, there are a lot of suggestions that were included in the game. Some of these include the food featured, aliases for heroes and villains, and in-character cameos for parts of the game.
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* ContestWinnerCameo: The author held a fanart contest contests where the winners can customize some details for certain plot-important [=NPCs=].
* OfficialFanSubmittedContent: Because interactions between the author and the fans, there are a lot of suggestions that were included in the game. Some of these include the foodfeatured, featured in-game, aliases for heroes and villains, and in-character cameos for parts of the game.
* OfficialFanSubmittedContent: Because interactions between the author and the fans, there are a lot of suggestions that were included in the game. Some of these include the food
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** Some of the characters have their personalities and roles changed overtime. For example, Izzy's personality would have been a bitter DeadpanSnarker.DeadpanSnarker and Haggerty was supposed to be contestant and not the judge.
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* OfficialFanSubmittedContent: Because interactions between the author and the fans, there are a lot of suggestions that were included in the game. Some of these include food to be featured, aliases for heroes and villains, and in-character cameos for parts of the game.
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* OfficialFanSubmittedContent: Because interactions between the author and the fans, there are a lot of suggestions that were included in the game. Some of these include the food to be featured, aliases for heroes and villains, and in-character cameos for parts of the game.
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** The author toyed with the idea that alcohol abuse played a part on the Parent's history but ultimately decided against because according to her, it felt "too restrictive and preachy".
** Willard Audley was originally Willard 'Dorsey'. It was changed so that the character will not be associated with [[Website/{{Twitter}} Jack Dorsey]].
** The interview in Chapter 1, Act 6 would have had a portion where the Parent would talk about the Spouse/the Child's other parent. The author decides to push it to Chapter 3.
** Willard Audley was originally Willard 'Dorsey'. It was changed so that the character will not be associated with [[Website/{{Twitter}} Jack Dorsey]].
** The interview in Chapter 1, Act 6 would have had a portion where the Parent would talk about the Spouse/the Child's other parent. The author decides to push it to Chapter 3.
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** The author toyed with the idea that alcohol abuse played a part on the Parent's history but is ultimately decided against because according to her, it felt "too restrictive and preachy".
** Izzy's personality would have been a bitter DeadpanSnarker.
** Willard Audley was originally Willard'Dorsey'.''Dorsey''. It was changed so that the character will not be associated with [[Website/{{Twitter}} Jack Dorsey]].
** The interview in Chapter 1, Act 6 would have had a portion where the Parent would talk about the Spouse/the Child's other parent. The author decides topush it to put that in Chapter 3.3 instead.
** Izzy's personality would have been a bitter DeadpanSnarker.
** Willard Audley was originally Willard
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* OfficialFanSubmittedContent: Because interactions between the author and the fans, there are a lot of suggestions that were included in the game.
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* OfficialFanSubmittedContent: Because interactions between the author and the fans, there are a lot of suggestions that were included in the game. Some of these include food to be featured, aliases for heroes and villains, and in-character cameos for parts of the game.
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** Audley was originally Dorsey. It was changed so that the character will not be associated with [[Website/{{Twitter}} Jack Dorsey]].
** The interview in Chapter 1, Act 6 would have had a portion where the Parent about the Spouse/the Child's other parent. The author decides to push it to Chapter 3.
** The author toyed with the idea that alcohol abuse played a part on the Parent's history but ultimately decided against because according to her, it felt "too restrictive and preachy".
** The interview in Chapter 1, Act 6 would have had a portion where the Parent about the Spouse/the Child's other parent. The author decides to push it to Chapter 3.
** The author toyed with the idea that alcohol abuse played a part on the Parent's history but ultimately decided against because according to her, it felt "too restrictive and preachy".
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** The author toyed with the idea that alcohol abuse played a part on the Parent's history but ultimately decided against because according to her, it felt "too restrictive and preachy".
** Willard Audley was originallyDorsey.Willard 'Dorsey'. It was changed so that the character will not be associated with [[Website/{{Twitter}} Jack Dorsey]].
** The interview in Chapter 1, Act 6 would have had a portion where the Parent would talk about the Spouse/the Child's other parent. The author decides to push it to Chapter3.
** The author toyed with the idea that alcohol abuse played a part on the Parent's history but ultimately decided against because according to her, it felt "too restrictive and preachy".3.
** Willard Audley was originally
** The interview in Chapter 1, Act 6 would have had a portion where the Parent would talk about the Spouse/the Child's other parent. The author decides to push it to Chapter
** The author toyed with the idea that alcohol abuse played a part on the Parent's history but ultimately decided against because according to her, it felt "too restrictive and preachy".
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** The interview in Chapter 1, Act 6 would have had a portion where the Parent about the Spouse/the Child's Other Parent.other parent. The author decides to push it to Chapter 3.
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** The interview in Chapter 1, Act 6 would have had a portion about the Spouse/the Child's Other Parent. The author decides to push it to Chapter 3.3.
%%** In the Parent's backstory, there was alcoholism involved but was scrapped.
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** Haggerty's first name was originally Helen/Jonathan instead of Fay/Frank.
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** Audley was originally Dorsey. It was changed so that the character will not be associated with [[Website/{{Twitter}} Jack Dorsey]].
** The interview in Chapter 1, Act 6 would have had a portion about the Spouse/the Child's Other Parent. The authorasked the fans on who would like have cameos in the story.decides to push it to Chapter 3.
* WhatCouldHaveBeen:
** Haggerty's first name was originally Helen/Jonathan instead of Fay/Frank.
%%** In the Parent's backstory, there was alcoholism involved but was scrapped.
** Audley was originally Dorsey. It was changed so that the character will not be associated with [[Website/{{Twitter}} Jack Dorsey]].
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* ContestWinnerCameo: The author held a fanart contest where the winners can decide details for a plot-important [=NPCs=].
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* ContestWinnerCameo: The author held a fanart contest where the winners can decide customize some details for a certain plot-important [=NPCs=].
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* OfficialFanSubmittedContent: The author asked the fans on who would like have cameos in the story.