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* After his "Purity" form is defeated, Odio reverts back to Oersted and begs the party to finish him off. The party refuses and attempts to leave.
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* After his "Purity" form is defeated, Odio reverts back to Oersted and begs the party to finish him off. The party refuses and attempts to leave. [[labelnote:note]]If they agree, it's presumed that they can never return home.[[/labelnote]]
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* After Sun Tzu Wang's defeat, the Shifu is horrified upon returning to his home and seeing it utterly lain to waste. Two of his students are dead, and the third (hereafter called the Successor) is barely clinging to life. (The one that survives [[spoiler:is the one you gave the most days of training to during the training segment]].)
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* After Sun Tzu Wang's defeat, the Shifu is horrified upon returning to his home and seeing it utterly lain to waste. Two of his students are dead, and the third (hereafter called the Successor) is barely clinging to life. (The one that survives [[spoiler:is the one you gave sparred the most days of training to with during the training segment]].)
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* After the fight, the prisoner realizes he forgot to introduce himself and reveals himself to be UsefulNotes/SakamotoRyoma. Ryoma then extends an offer to Oboromaru to help him unify and rebuild Japan. The player chooses whether Oboromaru goes with Ryoma or returns to the Enma clan.
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* After the fight, the prisoner realizes he forgot to introduce himself and reveals himself to be UsefulNotes/SakamotoRyoma. Ryoma then extends an offer to Oboromaru to help him unify and rebuild Japan. The player chooses whether Oboromaru goes with will serve under Ryoma or returns return to the Enma clan.
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* After the duel, Sundown continues wandering, but no longer seeks death, having been reminded of what it was like to do good and protect the innocent.
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* After the duel, Sundown departs from Success and continues wandering, but no longer seeks death, having been reminded of what it was like to do good and protect the innocent.
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* Years later, Akira, now a tough teenager with psychic powers, gets into a skirmish with the Crusaders, only for Matsu to come and help him. Afterwards, Matsu takes Akira back to the Bright Sparks Orphanage, but leaves for an unspecified reason.
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* Years later, Akira, now a tough rebellious teenager with psychic powers, gets into a skirmish with the Crusaders, only for Matsu to come and help him. Afterwards, Matsu takes Akira back to the Bright Sparks Orphanage, but leaves for an unspecified reason.
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* After taking over Matsu's taiyaki stand and tending to the customers, Akira is suddenly kidnapped by Odio through time and space.
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* After taking over While tending to the customers at Matsu's taiyaki stand and tending to the customers, stand, Akira is suddenly kidnapped by Odio through time and space.
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* In a fit of mad, desperate rage, Odio summons all the latent hatred throughout reality into himself, transforming into Sin of Odio, a massive armored demon, in a final attempt to kill the party. However, the party's steadfast refusal to give up slowly but surely reawakens Oersted's formerly heroic resolve, and he tears himself out of Odio and strikes the final blow against the Lord of Dark. [[labelnote:Note]]The Sin of Odio sequence is exclusive to the remake.[[/labelnote]]
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* In a fit of mad, desperate rage, Odio summons all the latent hatred throughout reality into himself, transforming into Sin of Odio, a massive armored demon, in a final attempt to kill the party. However, the party's steadfast refusal to give up slowly but surely reawakens Oersted's formerly heroic resolve, and he tears himself out of Odio and strikes the final blow against the Lord of Dark. [[labelnote:Note]]The [[labelnote:note]]The Sin of Odio sequence is exclusive to the remake.[[/labelnote]]
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* Once the last hero has been vanquished, Odio basks in his victory. But his joy is short-lived, as he realizes he has no one to share that victory with as he desperately calls for someone, anyone, to believe in him.
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* Once the last hero has been vanquished, Odio basks in his victory. But his joy is short-lived, as he realizes he has no one to share that victory with as he with, desperately calls calling for someone, anyone, to believe in him.
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* Backed into a corner and unwilling to let the heroes win a second time, he activates the "Armageddon" spell, which causes all his incarnations to detonate in an all-consuming explosion.
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* Backed into a corner and unwilling to let the heroes win a second time, he activates casts the "Armageddon" spell, which causes all his incarnations to detonate in an all-consuming explosion.
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* [[BigBad Odio]]'s hatred manifests itself for the first time as a ''Tyrannosaurus rex'' called Odo, which is worshiped by the Kuu Tribe.
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* [[BigBad Odio]]'s hatred manifests itself for the first time as a ''Tyrannosaurus rex'' called Odo, which is worshiped by the Kuu Tribe. Meanwhile, Pogo's tribe leader Elder kills a similar T-rex and leaves the skeleton up as a BattleTrophy for his tribe to admire, bringing relative peace to their side of the region.
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* Pogo and Gori escape the trap. and find the Kuu Tribe's base. Gori sees female gorillas and attacks the guards.
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* Pogo and Gori escape the trap. trap and find the Kuu Tribe's base. Gori sees female gorillas and attacks the guards.
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* An unspecified amount of time later, Odio [[RoaringRampageOfRevenge goes on a rampage]], killing everyone in Lucrece.
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* An unspecified amount of time later, Odio [[RoaringRampageOfRevenge goes on a rampage]], rampage, killing everyone in Lucrece.
