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* FunWithHomophones: When the nerds are discussing how to dispose of [[spoiler:Max's corpse]], Grace states that Steph can "tape" while Pete and Ruth use a hatchet and acid. Steph is horrified, thinking Grace means "tape" as in "get a recording of".
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* FunWithHomophones: When the nerds are discussing how to dispose of [[spoiler:Max's corpse]], Grace states that Steph can "tape" while Pete and Ruth use a hatchet and acid. Steph is horrified, thinking Grace means "tape" as in "get a recording of".of" when the intended meaning is "tape him up in plastic".
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* FunWithHomophones: When the nerds are discussing how to dispose of [[spoiler:Max's corpse]], Grace states that Steph can "tape" while Pete and Ruth use a hatchet and acid. Steph is horrified, thinking Grace means "tape" as in "get a recording of".
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* TheStinger: While a stage show can't have an after-credits scene, the homecoming scene and its song feel a lot like a grand finale, only for one more scene and song to take place afterward: [[spoiler:Grace Chasity still has the Black Book and has begun to harvest the souls of "dirty dudes" for her own means.]]
* SurprisinglyHappyEnding: [[spoiler:Played with. The scene at homecoming ''really seems'' like it's the end of the show, with a big, cheerful group song, the OfficialCouple together, the BigBad defeated, and all the loose ends tied up, making this seem like the first Hatchetfield musical to have a straightforwardly happy ending. But the show ''isn't'' over; there's one more scene and song, revealing Grace has begun to use the Black Book to continue working with the Lords in Black to kill anyone she deems sexually and morally impure. It's less depressing ending than most Hatchetfield stories, since the world at whole isn't in danger (''yet''), and Steph and Pete at least seem to be safe, but it definitely puts the show in BittersweetEnding territory.]]
* SurprisinglyHappyEnding: [[spoiler:Played with. The scene at homecoming ''really seems'' like it's the end of the show, with a big, cheerful group song, the OfficialCouple together, the BigBad defeated, and all the loose ends tied up, making this seem like the first Hatchetfield musical to have a straightforwardly happy ending. But the show ''isn't'' over; there's one more scene and song, revealing Grace has begun to use the Black Book to continue working with the Lords in Black to kill anyone she deems sexually and morally impure. It's less depressing ending than most Hatchetfield stories, since the world at whole isn't in danger (''yet''), and Steph and Pete at least seem to be safe, but it definitely puts the show in BittersweetEnding territory.]]
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* TheStinger: While a stage show can't have an after-credits scene, the homecoming scene and its song feel a lot like a grand finale, only for one more scene and song to take place afterward: [[spoiler:Grace Chasity still has the Black Book and has begun to harvest the souls of "dirty dudes" for her own means.]]
* SurprisinglyHappyEnding: [[spoiler:Played with. The scene at homecoming ''really seems'' like it's the end of the show, with a big, cheerful group song, the OfficialCouple together, the BigBad defeated, and all the loose ends tied up, making this seem like the first Hatchetfield musical to have a straightforwardly happy ending. But the show ''isn't'' over; there's one more scene and song, revealing Grace has begun to use the Black Book to continue working with the Lords in Black to kill anyone she deems sexually and morally impure. It's less depressing ending than most Hatchetfield stories, since the world at whole isn't in danger (''yet''), and Steph and Pete at least seem to be safe, but it definitely puts the show in BittersweetEnding territory.]]
* SurprisinglyHappyEnding: [[spoiler:Played with. The scene at homecoming ''really seems'' like it's the end of the show, with a big, cheerful group song, the OfficialCouple together, the BigBad defeated, and all the loose ends tied up, making this seem like the first Hatchetfield musical to have a straightforwardly happy ending. But the show ''isn't'' over; there's one more scene and song, revealing Grace has begun to use the Black Book to continue working with the Lords in Black to kill anyone she deems sexually and morally impure. It's less depressing ending than most Hatchetfield stories, since the world at whole isn't in danger (''yet''), and Steph and Pete at least seem to be safe, but it definitely puts the show in BittersweetEnding territory.]]
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*SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: Psychology
** Max Jagerman has been to anti-bullying seminars. However, since in reality, standard therapy doesn't work on sociopath/narcissist -type disorders and only teaches them to use Therapy Speak to further abuse people, Max beats up people for walking in 'his' hallway, even if they didn't mean to bother him by doing it, telling them that "there's a difference between intent and impact."
** Grace Chasity [[spoiler: has sex with Max Jagerman, giving up what she treasures most (her virginity) in exchange for the Lords in Black dragging Max to hell. But simply getting laid (especially in a dubcon situation) doesn't fix her deep-rooted [[SexIsEvilAndIAmHorny psychosexual issues]]. She gets even worse and starts seducing boys and then killing them for being 'dirty dudes'.]]
** Max Jagerman has been to anti-bullying seminars. However, since in reality, standard therapy doesn't work on sociopath/narcissist -type disorders and only teaches them to use Therapy Speak to further abuse people, Max beats up people for walking in 'his' hallway, even if they didn't mean to bother him by doing it, telling them that "there's a difference between intent and impact."
** Grace Chasity [[spoiler: has sex with Max Jagerman, giving up what she treasures most (her virginity) in exchange for the Lords in Black dragging Max to hell. But simply getting laid (especially in a dubcon situation) doesn't fix her deep-rooted [[SexIsEvilAndIAmHorny psychosexual issues]]. She gets even worse and starts seducing boys and then killing them for being 'dirty dudes'.]]
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* ThisIsForEmphasisBitch: [[spoiler:Most of Max's murders.]]
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* ThisIsForEmphasisBitch: [[spoiler:Most of Max's murders.]] It gets turned around on him when [[spoiler:Wiggly drags him off to the Black and White at the end of the show.]]
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* UndignifiedDeath: The murders are themed after being lethal versions of the kinds of torment bullies visit on nerds. Officer Bailey immediately picks up on this, noting that Richie's chest lacerations and subsequent drowning in the toilet can be interpreted as having been "purple nurpled and {{swirlie}}d to death". [[spoiler:Ruth's death is a substantially more gruesome version, as she meets her demise via [[{{Wedgie}} Atomic Wedgie]], presumably severing her in half at the perineum.]]
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* UndignifiedDeath: The murders are themed after being as lethal versions mockeries of the kinds of torment cliche torments bullies visit impose on nerds. Officer Bailey immediately picks up on this, noting that Richie's chest lacerations and subsequent drowning in the toilet can be interpreted as him having been "purple nurpled and {{swirlie}}d to death". [[spoiler:Ruth's death is a substantially more gruesome version, as she meets her demise via version of the [[{{Wedgie}} Atomic Wedgie]], presumably severing her in half at the perineum.]]
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** [[spoiler:Inverted in the same instance- Max [[TakingTheBullet blocks the bullet]] from hitting Pete, saving his life (so Max can kill him himself).]]
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** [[spoiler:Inverted in the same instance- Max [[TakingTheBullet [[BulletCatch blocks the bullet]] from hitting Pete, saving his life (so Max can kill him himself).]]
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* AGodAmI: Max declares himself as such on multiple occasions.
-->'''Max:''' I AM JAGERMAN! I AM GOD! ''GOOOOOOO NIGHTHAWKS!''
-->'''Max:''' I AM JAGERMAN! I AM GOD! ''GOOOOOOO NIGHTHAWKS!''
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** "Cup of Roasted Coffee" from "Theatre/TheGuyWhoDidntLikeMusicals" an be heard during [[spoiler: Paul and Emma's conversation at Beanie's before being interrupted by Peter]].
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** "Cup of Roasted Coffee" from "Theatre/TheGuyWhoDidntLikeMusicals" an ''Theatre/TheGuyWhoDidntLikeMusicals'' can be heard during [[spoiler: Paul and Emma's conversation at Beanie's Beanie's]] before being interrupted by Peter]].Peter.
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** "Cup of Roasted Coffee" from "Theatre/TheGuyWhoDidntLikeMusicals" an be heard during [[spoiler: Paul and Emma's conversation at Beanie's before being interrupted by Peter]].
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** While Literal Monster Pt 1 is a TheVillainSucksSong about Max, Literal Monster Pt 2 has Max happily join in and proclaim how terrible he is.
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** While the first half of Literal Monster Pt 1 is a TheVillainSucksSong about Max, Literal Monster Pt 2 the second half has Max happily join in and proclaim how terrible he is.
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* DancePartyEnding: [[spoiler:The second-last scene takes place at Homecoming, with the surviving heroes celebrating their victory and enjoying the school dance with their classmates.]]
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* SurprisinglyHappyEnding: [[spoiler:Played with. The scene at homecoming ''really seems'' like it's the end of the show, with a big, cheerful group song, the OfficialCouple together, the BigBad defeated, and all the loose ends tied up, making this seem like the first Hatchetfield musical to have a straightforwardly happy ending. But the show ''isn't'' over; there's one more scene and song, revealing Grace has begun to use the Black Book to continue working with the Lords in Black to kill anyone she deems sexually and morally impure. It's less depressing ending than most Hatchetfield stories, since the world at whole isn't in danger (''yet''), and Steph and Pete at least seem to be safe, but it definitely puts the show in BittersweetEnding territory.]]
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* QueerColors: Ruth's song "Just For Once" heavily features pink, purple, and blue lighting; which is often associated with bisexuality. She is explicitly stated to be bisexual later on in the show.
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* DangerousInterrogative: Used by Max during the title number when Richie pleads for his life.
--> '''Ensemble:''' ''(singing)'' If I can finally be cool\\
I will know that I'm not a loser!\\
'''Richie:''' ''(singing in unison with the ensemble)'' I'm not a loser!\\
'''Max:''' ''(spoken)'' WHAT DID YOU SAY?!
--> '''Ensemble:''' ''(singing)'' If I can finally be cool\\
I will know that I'm not a loser!\\
'''Richie:''' ''(singing in unison with the ensemble)'' I'm not a loser!\\
'''Max:''' ''(spoken)'' WHAT DID YOU SAY?!
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* RedFilterOfDoom: Used during the title number.
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* BigShutUp: Max gives one [[BreakingTheFourthWall to the audience]] when he comes onstage after "Cool As I Think I Am".
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* BigShutUp: Max gives one [[BreakingTheFourthWall to the audience]] when he comes onstage during the applause after "Cool As I Think I Am".
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* BigShutUp: Max gives one [[BreakingTheFourthWall to the audience]] when he comes onstage after "Cool As I Think I Am".
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* WalkInChimeIn: Max does this at the end of "Cool As I Think I Am", finishing the final line of the song.
--> '''Pete:''' ''(singing)'' Who do I think I am?\\
Who do I think I am?\\
Oh-woah-oh-woah-oh...\\
'''Max:''' ''(spoken)'' OH! ''(to the cheering audience)'' [[BigShutUp SHUT UP!]]
--> '''Pete:''' ''(singing)'' Who do I think I am?\\
Who do I think I am?\\
Oh-woah-oh-woah-oh...\\
'''Max:''' ''(spoken)'' OH! ''(to the cheering audience)'' [[BigShutUp SHUT UP!]]
