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** Somewhat unrelated, but the whole situation regarding Leopardfur and Frogleap, especially after the latter's death. It's clear that Frogleap cares deeply about Leopardfur and would like to be in a relationship with her, but the career-oriented Leopardfur ultimately dismisses the possibility of them becoming mates. While disheartened, Frogleap eventually moves on and has kits with Mosspelt...but he ends up dying in a horrible fishing accident. On top of poor Leopardfur beating herself up over not cherishing her good friend more, poor Mosspelt has three very young kittens who barely understand what death means, leading to the little ones asking where their father is / whether or not he still loves them (Woodkit), crying (Robinkit), or simply being too young to comprehend that Frogleap isn't coming back (Dawnkit, as she simply asks if they can eat soon). The whole thing is just horrible, even more so when Robinkit and Woodkit drown and few chapters later. Poor, poor Mosspelt.
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** Somewhat unrelated, but the whole situation regarding Leopardfur and Frogleap, especially after the latter's death. It's clear that Frogleap cares deeply about Leopardfur and would like to be in a relationship with her, but the career-oriented Leopardfur ultimately dismisses the possibility of them becoming mates. While disheartened, Frogleap eventually moves on and has kits with Mosspelt...but he ends up dying in a horrible fishing accident. On top of poor Leopardfur beating herself up over not cherishing her good friend more, poor Mosspelt has three very young kittens who barely understand what death means, leading to the little ones asking where their father is / whether or not he still loves them (Woodkit), crying (Robinkit), or simply being too young to comprehend that Frogleap isn't coming back (Dawnkit, as she simply asks if they can eat soon). The whole thing is just horrible, even more so when Robinkit and Woodkit drown and a few chapters later. Poor, poor Mosspelt.
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* ''Leopardstar's Honor'' gives us the death of Leopardfur's best friend Sunfish as she dies from sepsis brought on by infected wounds. Poor Whitepaw is the one that wakes Leopardfur up by simply muttering that his mother is dead. Stunned, Leopardfur pulls the sobbing apprentice into her nest and holds him tight, enveloped in grief herself as she tries to process the loss. You can just feel the profound despair from both of them and the hollow feeling as they try to grieve afterwards.
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* ''Leopardstar's Honor'' gives us the Honor'':
** The death of Leopardfur's best friend Sunfish as she dies from sepsis brought on by infected wounds. Poor Whitepaw is the one that wakes Leopardfur up by simply muttering that his mother is dead. Stunned, Leopardfur pulls the sobbing apprentice into her nest and holds him tight, enveloped in grief herself as she tries to process the loss. You can just feel the profound despair from both of them and the hollow feeling as they try to grieve afterwards.
** The death of Leopardfur's best friend Sunfish as she dies from sepsis brought on by infected wounds. Poor Whitepaw is the one that wakes Leopardfur up by simply muttering that his mother is dead. Stunned, Leopardfur pulls the sobbing apprentice into her nest and holds him tight, enveloped in grief herself as she tries to process the loss. You can just feel the profound despair from both of them and the hollow feeling as they try to grieve afterwards.
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** Somewhat unrelated, but the whole situation regarding Leopardfur and Frogleap, especially after the latter's death. It's clear that Frogleap cares deeply about Leopardfur and would like to be in a relationship with her, but the career-oriented Leopardfur ultimately dismisses the possibility of them becoming mates. While disheartened, Frogleap eventually moves on and has kits with Mosspelt...but he ends up dying in a horrible fishing accident. On top of poor Leopardfur beating herself up over not cherishing her good friend more, poor Mosspelt has three very young kittens who barely understand what death means, leading to the little ones asking where their father is / whether or not he still loves them (Woodkit), crying (Robinkit), or simply being too young to comprehend that Frogleap isn't coming back (Dawnkit, as she simply asks if they can eat soon). The whole thing is just horrible, even more so when Robinkit and Woodkit drown and few chapters later. Poor, poor Mosspelt.
