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** The very last scene of ''Slumber Party Alien Abduction'', which lingers on an injured or dying Tank after he takes a two-story fall. Anyone who loves dogs will probably have a hard time watching it.]]
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** The very last scene of ''Slumber Party Alien Abduction'', which lingers on an a heavily injured or dying Tank after he takes a two-story fall. Anyone who loves dogs will probably have a hard time watching it.]]
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** When the cyclist accidentally butt-dials his girlfriend, whose voice reminds him of [[WasOnceAMan who he used to be]] long enough to commit suicide so he won't harm anyone else.
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** The implication that Father is sexually assaulting all the women there, even the children. The ones we see are visibly uncomfortable just being around him.
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** The implication and later admittance that Father is sexually assaulting all the women there, even the children. The ones we see are visibly uncomfortable just being around him.
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** All things considered, this looked like the kids were having a really fun time before the aliens appeared. Which makes their sudden, brutal fates all the more morbid.
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** All things considered, this looked like the kids were having a really fun time before the aliens appeared. Which makes their sudden, brutal fates all the more morbid.morbid.
** The very last scene of ''Slumber Party Alien Abduction'', which lingers on an injured or dying Tank after he takes a two-story fall. Anyone who loves dogs will probably have a hard time watching it.]]
** The very last scene of ''Slumber Party Alien Abduction'', which lingers on an injured or dying Tank after he takes a two-story fall. Anyone who loves dogs will probably have a hard time watching it.]]
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** The whole story is pretty upsetting because of just how unprompted it all is. Poor Herman goes to get an ocular implant and ends up dying a little later all because Ghosts in this setting are quit simply ''pure evil''. There's not even a way to fight back apparently, and all you can do is wait for death.
** Clarissa's only way to cope with the ghosts is to try everything she can to drown them out, like loud music and sex. Imagine how terrible her life must be, poor thing can hardly function from the look of things and appears to be either homeless or just [[WalkingTheEarth wandering around]] in an effort to avoid the dead.
** Clarissa's only way to cope with the ghosts is to try everything she can to drown them out, like loud music and sex. Imagine how terrible her life must be, poor thing can hardly function from the look of things and appears to be either homeless or just [[WalkingTheEarth wandering around]] in an effort to avoid the dead.
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** The whole story is pretty upsetting because of just how unprompted it all is. Poor Herman goes to get an ocular implant and ends up dying a little later all because Ghosts in this setting are quit quite simply ''pure evil''. There's not even a way to fight back apparently, and all you can do is wait for death.
** Clarissa's only way to cope with the ghosts is to try everything she can to drown them out,like such as loud music and sex. Imagine how terrible her life must be, the poor thing can hardly function from the look of things things. When we meet Clarissa, she's just out and appears about and clearly has nowhere to be go, which means she's either homeless or just [[WalkingTheEarth wandering around]] in an effort to avoid the dead.
** Clarissa's only way to cope with the ghosts is to try everything she can to drown them out,
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** The poor protagonist seeing what he's become in a mirror and taking his own life.
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** The poor protagonist Mike seeing what he's become in a mirror and taking mirror. Zombies don't have many facial expressions, but you can make out his own life.sorrow.
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** The implication that Father is sexually assaulting all the women there, even the children. The ones we see look visibly uncomfortable just being around him.
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** The implication that Father is sexually assaulting all the women there, even the children. The ones we see look are visibly uncomfortable just being around him.
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* ''Phase I Clinical Trials''
** The whole story is pretty upsetting because of just how unprompted it all is. Poor Herman goes to get an ocular implant and ends up dying a little later all because Ghosts in this setting are quit simply ''pure evil''. There's not even a way to fight back apparently, and all you can do is wait for death.
** Clarissa's only way to cope with the ghosts is to try everything she can to drown them out, like loud music and sex. Imagine how terrible her life must be, poor thing can hardly function from the look of things and appears to be either homeless or just [[WalkingTheEarth wandering around]] in an effort to avoid the dead.
* ''A Ride In The Park''
** The poor protagonist seeing what he's become in a mirror and taking his own life.
* ''Safe Haven''
** The implication that Father is sexually assaulting all the women there, even the children. The ones we see look visibly uncomfortable just being around him.
* ''Slumber Party Alien Abduction''
** All things considered, this looked like the kids were having a really fun time before the aliens appeared. Which makes their sudden, brutal fates all the more morbid.
** The whole story is pretty upsetting because of just how unprompted it all is. Poor Herman goes to get an ocular implant and ends up dying a little later all because Ghosts in this setting are quit simply ''pure evil''. There's not even a way to fight back apparently, and all you can do is wait for death.
** Clarissa's only way to cope with the ghosts is to try everything she can to drown them out, like loud music and sex. Imagine how terrible her life must be, poor thing can hardly function from the look of things and appears to be either homeless or just [[WalkingTheEarth wandering around]] in an effort to avoid the dead.
* ''A Ride In The Park''
** The poor protagonist seeing what he's become in a mirror and taking his own life.
* ''Safe Haven''
** The implication that Father is sexually assaulting all the women there, even the children. The ones we see look visibly uncomfortable just being around him.
* ''Slumber Party Alien Abduction''
** All things considered, this looked like the kids were having a really fun time before the aliens appeared. Which makes their sudden, brutal fates all the more morbid.
