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* Tya returning to Laugk Tj'is, to find that everything has changed to the point that it no longer feels like home.
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* Tya returning Tya's return to Laugk Tj'is, to find where she states that everything has changed to the point that it no longer feels like home.
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* When our heroes are forced to escape the city, Lucifer decides to stay behind with his books. Enirah tells him that if he stays here, he'll die, but he doesn't care at all. [[GoOutWithASmile It doesn't help that he's smiling the whole time.]]
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* When our heroes are forced to escape the city, Lucifer decides to stay behind with his books. Enirah tells him that if he stays here, he'll die, but he doesn't care at all. [[GoOutWithASmile It doesn't help that he's smiling the whole time.]]]]
* Tya returning to Laugk Tj'is, to find that everything has changed to the point that it no longer feels like home.
* Tya returning to Laugk Tj'is, to find that everything has changed to the point that it no longer feels like home.
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* Anything involving Rose and Alice, especially [[http://taranan.com/Act1/Shorts/Rose1.html "Short: Rose"]], which actually shows us Alice's death (could also qualify as NightmareFuel.) Rose's expression upon seeing the corpse of her girlfriend is ''heartrending''.
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* Anything involving Rose and Alice, especially [[http://taranan.com/Act1/Shorts/Rose1.html "Short: Rose"]], which actually shows us Alice's death (could also qualify as NightmareFuel.) Rose's expression upon seeing the corpse of her girlfriend is ''heartrending''.''heartrending''.
* When our heroes are forced to escape the city, Lucifer decides to stay behind with his books. Enirah tells him that if he stays here, he'll die, but he doesn't care at all. [[GoOutWithASmile It doesn't help that he's smiling the whole time.]]
* When our heroes are forced to escape the city, Lucifer decides to stay behind with his books. Enirah tells him that if he stays here, he'll die, but he doesn't care at all. [[GoOutWithASmile It doesn't help that he's smiling the whole time.]]
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* Anything involving Rose and Alice, especially [[http://taranan.com/Act1/Shorts/Rose1.html "Short: Rose"]], which actually shows us Alice's death (could also qualify as NightmareFuel.) Rose's expression upon seeing the corpse of her girlfriend is ''heartrending''.
