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There are many in ''Roleplay/SurvivalOfTheFittest'', although given the [[KillEmAll premise]] of the roleplay, that isn't really surprising.
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There are many in ''Roleplay/SurvivalOfTheFittest'', although given the [[KillEmAll premise]] premise of the roleplay, that isn't really surprising.
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** Not long after this his brother [[spoiler:Glenn Hughes]] dies trying to help [[spoiler:Mallory DeLuca]]. They get attacked by the duo of [[spoiler:Peri Barclay]] and [[spoiler:Stevan Hyde]] who forces [[spoiler:Mallory]] to choose who lives. She chooses [[spoiler:Glenn]]. [[spoiler:Peri then kills Glenn and gloats at her before leaving her behind with his corpse.]]
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** Not long after this his brother [[spoiler:Glenn Hughes]] dies trying to help [[spoiler:Mallory DeLuca]].[[spoiler:[=Mallory DeLuca=]]]. They get attacked by the duo of [[spoiler:Peri Barclay]] and [[spoiler:Stevan Hyde]] who forces [[spoiler:Mallory]] to choose who lives. She chooses [[spoiler:Glenn]]. [[spoiler:Peri then kills Glenn and gloats at her before leaving her behind with his corpse.]]
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* V3. Three people needlessly die in under a minute, and the rest realize just how empty the game has really made them. [[http://z10.invisionfree.com/SOTF_V2/index.php?showtopic=2564&st=90 Words cannot do it justice.]]
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* V3. Three people needlessly die in under a minute, and the rest realize just how empty the game has really made them. [[http://z10.invisionfree.com/SOTF_V2/index.php?showtopic=2564&st=90 [[http://sotfmini.com/SurvivalOfTheFittest/viewtopic.php?f=452&t=3361&start=90 Words cannot do it justice.]]
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* As long as we're on the subject of v3 deaths, the death of [[spoiler:Jake Henkie]] counts. All the guy does is yell his best friend's name upon seeing her - unfortunately, a student hiding in the bushes nearby is startled, and shoots him in the head, blowing off half of his jaw. [[spoiler:He dies in the arms of Trish [=McCarroll=], unable to even speak to her, and Trish is completely devastated.]] [[http://z10.invisionfree.com/SOTF_V2/index.php?showtopic=2561 Read it here for the depressing details.]]
* [[http://z10.invisionfree.com/SOTF_V2/index.php?showtopic=3002 The Answer]], from v3, gives us a threefer:
* [[http://z10.invisionfree.com/SOTF_V2/index.php?showtopic=3002 The Answer]], from v3, gives us a threefer:
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* As long as we're on the subject of v3 deaths, the death of [[spoiler:Jake Henkie]] counts. All the guy does is yell his best friend's name upon seeing her - unfortunately, a student hiding in the bushes nearby is startled, and shoots him in the head, blowing off half of his jaw. [[spoiler:He dies in the arms of Trish [=McCarroll=], unable to even speak to her, and Trish is completely devastated.]] [[http://z10.invisionfree.com/SOTF_V2/index.php?showtopic=2561 [[http://sotfmini.com/SurvivalOfTheFittest/viewtopic.php?f=458&t=3286 Read it here for the depressing details.]]
*[[http://z10.invisionfree.com/SOTF_V2/index.php?showtopic=3002 [[http://sotfmini.com/SurvivalOfTheFittest/viewtopic.php?f=470&t=3277 The Answer]], from v3, gives us a threefer:
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* [[http://s10.zetaboards.com/SOTF_V2/topic/7336656/1 A White and Soundless Place]]. The death of [[spoiler:Dutchy Ayers]] as he bleeds out in the arms of a friend.
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* [[http://s10.zetaboards.com/SOTF_V2/topic/7336656/1 [[http://sotfmini.com/SurvivalOfTheFittest/viewtopic.php?f=312&t=1363 A White and Soundless Place]]. The death of [[spoiler:Dutchy Ayers]] as he bleeds out in the arms of a friend.
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** [[http://s10.zetaboards.com/SOTF_V2/topic/9002181/1/ [[http://sotfmini.com/SurvivalOfTheFittest/viewtopic.php?f=70&t=2972 All About My Mother]] details how V6 student Noah Whitley's family falls apart after his abduction, providing ups and downs worthy of a telenovela.
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* [[http://sotfmini.com/SurvivalOfTheFittest/viewtopic.php?f=524&t=7084 The Quiet Things That No One Ever Knows]]. Two friends talk about where the game has brought them. Connor Lorenzon's slow but certain realisation of the route the conversation is taking and his attempts to appeal to Ace Ortega and steer him away from the killing that he's talking himself into are heart wrenching. His final few words, a mixture of defiance and acceptance, are brutal.
--> '''Connor, bleeding out:''' You— you're gonna have to live with this for— for a long time.
--> '''Connor, bleeding out:''' You— you're gonna have to live with this for— for a long time.
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* [[http://sotfmini.com/SurvivalOfTheFittest/viewtopic.php?f=542&t=6853 Amber Yates]] is shot in the head. And then she doesn't die. What's left is someone with he personhood ripped away, unable to understand anything but that she's in pain and her 'friend' (Blue, her tulpa she's been chatting with all game) isn't there with her, her only comfort someone who had a moment ago been trying to kill her. The double tap from Erika, her killer, is well and truly a mercy kill.
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** [[spoiler:Madison Springer killing Nathan Coleman.]] A brutal death involving the victim getting his neck snapped and his face beaten in with a rock. On anyone else it'd be horrific, but the relationship between these two characters and the context of their entire island story just makes it completely heartbreaking.
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** [[spoiler:Madison Springer killing Nathan Coleman.]] A brutal death involving the victim getting his neck snapped and his face beaten in with a rock. On anyone else it'd be horrific, but the relationship between these two characters and the context of their entire island story just makes it completely heartbreaking.
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* [[spoiler:Tori Johnson]] getting wounded at the hands of [[spoiler:Mariavel Varella]] in retribuiton for [[spoiler:Seth's]] death, she dies as she's murmuring about the beach she and her boyfriend used to meet at as said boyfriend, [[spoiler:Bryan Calvert]] desperately tries to save her.
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* [[spoiler:Tori Johnson]] getting wounded at the hands of [[spoiler:Mariavel Varella]] in retribuiton for [[spoiler:Seth's]] death, she dies as she's murmuring about the beach she and her boyfriend used to meet at as said boyfriend, [[spoiler:Bryan Calvert]] desperately tries to save her.
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* [[spoiler:Seth Mathlock's]] death, after saving [[spoiler.lTori Johnson's]] life he gets wounded and asks [[spoiler:Bryan Calvert]], [[spoiler:Tori's]] boyfriend and one of his friends to mercy kill him, also asking him to kill [[spoiler:Mariavel Varella]], a member of their gang and the killer with the biggest kill count, convinced she's beyond saving at that point.
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* [[spoiler:Seth Mathlock's]] death, after saving [[spoiler.lTori [[spoiler:Tori Johnson's]] life he gets wounded and asks [[spoiler:Bryan Calvert]], [[spoiler:Tori's]] boyfriend and one of his friends to mercy kill him, also asking him to kill [[spoiler:Mariavel Varella]], a member of their gang and the killer with the biggest kill count, convinced she's beyond saving at that point.
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* [[spoiler:Seth Mathlock's]] death, after saving Tori Johnson's life he gets wounded and asks Bryan Calvert, Tori's boyfriend and one of his friends to mercy kill him, also telling him to kill Mariavel, convinced she's beyond saving at this point.
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* [[spoiler:Seth Mathlock's]] death, after saving Tori Johnson's [[spoiler.lTori Johnson's]] life he gets wounded and asks Bryan Calvert, Tori's [[spoiler:Bryan Calvert]], [[spoiler:Tori's]] boyfriend and one of his friends to mercy kill him, also telling asking him to kill Mariavel, [[spoiler:Mariavel Varella]], a member of their gang and the killer with the biggest kill count, convinced she's beyond saving at this that point.
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* One example is the death of [[spoiler:Andrew Lipson.]] He is [[spoiler: hit by lightning, and survives, however, the electronics on his wheelchair are shorted out. This leaves him attempting to arrest his descent down a slope, an endeavour in which he fails, causing him to fall from a cliff.]] ''He doesn't die'', and is [[spoiler: left, immobile, on the beach below as the tide comes in, causing him to slowly drown]]. The fact that he was talking to his best friend on the phone when [[spoiler:the lightning struck]] makes it even more saddening.
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* One example is the death of [[spoiler:Andrew Lipson.]] He is [[spoiler: hit by lightning, and survives, however, the electronics on his wheelchair are shorted out. This leaves him attempting to arrest his descent down a slope, an endeavour in which he fails, causing him to fall from a cliff.]] ''He doesn't die'', and is [[spoiler: left, immobile, on the beach below as the tide comes in, causing him to slowly drown]]. drown. The fact that he was talking to his best friend on the phone when [[spoiler:the the lightning struck]] struck makes it even more saddening.
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* [[spoiler: Fred Hughes trying to save Lyndi Thibodeaux from Cody Jenson by fighting him. He dies because of this. Not long after this his brother Glenn Hughes dies trying to help Mallory DeLuca.]]
* [[spoiler: Jeremy Torres holding Heather Pendegrast as she dies of her wounds after spending days apart from each other. With Heather's last thought being how Jeremy has been like a good luck charm to her.]]
** [[spoiler: Later on is the death of Jeremy himself, after having had a car chase with Lucinda Garret across the island that results in her death. Sitting in his car not far off and in a bad shape. Jeremy has a handwritten note left for his family before turning his gun on himself, content with how he'd refused the game.]]
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** [[spoiler: Later on is the death of Jeremy himself, after having had a car chase with Lucinda Garret across the island that results in her death. Sitting in his car not far off and in a bad shape. Jeremy has a handwritten note left for his family before turning his gun on himself, content with how he'd refused the game.]]
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* [[spoiler: Fred Hughes [[spoiler:Fred Hughes]] trying to save Lyndi Thibodeaux [[spoiler:Lyndi Thibodeaux]] from Cody Jenson [[spoiler:Cody Jenson]] by fighting him.him off with a wrench outside the building his group is in. He dies because of this.
** Not long after this his brotherGlenn Hughes [[spoiler:Glenn Hughes]] dies trying to help Mallory DeLuca.[[spoiler:Mallory DeLuca]]. They get attacked by the duo of [[spoiler:Peri Barclay]] and [[spoiler:Stevan Hyde]] who forces [[spoiler:Mallory]] to choose who lives. She chooses [[spoiler:Glenn]]. [[spoiler:Peri then kills Glenn and gloats at her before leaving her behind with his corpse.]]
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* Joshua Moore's life before the game. A gay teen raised in a religious household, he was sent to church by his parents to "pray the gay away", traumatising him. He later ends up in a relationship with another boy whom gets found out by his family and he's forcibly moved to Denton, with his boyfriend left behind and sent to conversion therapy which he pretends works. The two have a last conversation through the phone proclemaining proclaiming their love for each other. [[ForegoneConclusion And then he's sent into the game]].
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* Joshua Moore's life before the game. A gay teen raised in a religious household, he was sent to church by his parents to "pray the gay away", traumatising him. He later ends up in a relationship with another boy whom gets found out by his family and he's forcibly moved to Denton, with his boyfriend left behind and sent to conversion therapy, therapy which he pretends works. The two have a last conversation through the phone proclemaining their love for each other. [[ForegoneConclusion And then he's sent into the game]].
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* [[spoiler: Edgar Judah's]] fight with [[spoiler: Dan Johnson]], trying desperately to survive against his bigger and stronger opponent, before succumbing to a syringe to the neck. Punctuated by [[spoiler:Dan]] apologising to the dead boy before saying that he'd at least get to see his dead brother.
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* [[spoiler: Bryan Calvert accidentally shooting Whitney Acosta thinking she was Mariavel Varella in front of Ricky Callahan, a friend of Whitney's who had spent most of the game with the goal of Whitney winning. After forcing Bryan out of the room, Ricky holds Whitney in his arms as she dies and tells him that he needs to live. Distraught at her death, Ricky apologises before shooting himself in the head.]]
* [[spoiler: Bryan Calvert accidentally shooting Whitney Acosta thinking she was Mariavel Varella in front of Ricky Callahan, a friend of Whitney's who had spent most of the game with the goal of Whitney winning. After forcing Bryan out of the room, Ricky holds Whitney in his arms as she dies and tells him that he needs to live. Distraught at her death, Ricky apologises before shooting himself in the head.]]
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