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* The MC looking through his father's old belongings in the attic. It elicits a few sniffles from him. What ''really'' sells it is when he gives an old photograph to [[{{Jerkass}} Jenny]] and she tells him to leave her alone, though he stays outside her door and can hear her crying. A later update turns this into a {{SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoment|s}}, however, where she genuinely thanks him and gives him a hug.
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* The MC looking through his father's old belongings in the attic. It elicits a few sniffles from him. What ''really'' sells it is when he gives an old photograph to [[{{Jerkass}} Jenny]] and she tells him to leave her alone, though he stays outside her door and can hear her crying. A later update turns this into a {{SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoment|s}}, {{SugarWiki/Heartwarming Moment|s}}, however, where she genuinely thanks him and gives him a hug.
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* The MC looking through his father's old belongings in the attic. It elicits a few sniffles from him. What ''really'' sells it is when he gives an old photograph to [[{{Jerkass}} Jenny]] and she tells him to leave her alone, though he stays outside her door and can hear her crying.
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* The MC looking through his father's old belongings in the attic. It elicits a few sniffles from him. What ''really'' sells it is when he gives an old photograph to [[{{Jerkass}} Jenny]] and she tells him to leave her alone, though he stays outside her door and can hear her crying. A later update turns this into a {{SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoment|s}}, however, where she genuinely thanks him and gives him a hug.
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* Eve's and Grace's backstory, particularly with Eve's [[spoiler:parents. Her last moments with them was her saying they should leave her and go before getting into a fatal car crash.]]
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* At the end of the main storyline, [[spoiler:the MC finds a last message from his father written shortly before his murder by Dimitri, calling him his legacy and asking him to take care of his family from now on. Even his socially inept friend Erik wonders if he should give him a hug or something.]]
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* At the end of the main storyline, [[spoiler:the the MC finds a last message from his father written shortly before his murder by Dimitri, calling him his legacy and asking him to take care of his family from now on. Even his socially inept friend Erik wonders if he should give him a hug or something.]]something.
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* At the end of the main storyline, [[spoiler:the MC finds a last message from his father written shortly before his murder by Dimitri, calling him his legacy and asking him to take care of his family from now on.]]
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* At the end of the main storyline, [[spoiler:the MC finds a last message from his father written shortly before his murder by Dimitri, calling him his legacy and asking him to take care of his family from now on. Even his socially inept friend Erik wonders if he should give him a hug or something.]]
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* Eve's and Grace's backstory, particularly with Eve's [[spoiler:parents. Her last moments with them was her saying they should leave her and go before getting into a fatal car crash.]]
* The MC looking through his father's old belongings in the attic. It elicits a few sniffles from him. What ''really'' sells it is when he gives an old photograph to [[{{Jerkass}} Jenny]] and she tells him to leave her alone, though he stays outside her door and can hear her crying.
* At the end of the main storyline, [[spoiler:the MC finds a last message from his father written shortly before his murder by Dimitri, calling him his legacy and asking him to take care of his family from now on.]]
* The MC looking through his father's old belongings in the attic. It elicits a few sniffles from him. What ''really'' sells it is when he gives an old photograph to [[{{Jerkass}} Jenny]] and she tells him to leave her alone, though he stays outside her door and can hear her crying.
* At the end of the main storyline, [[spoiler:the MC finds a last message from his father written shortly before his murder by Dimitri, calling him his legacy and asking him to take care of his family from now on.]]
