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* Despite managing to hold it together for most of the time, when Daenerys has a moment alone with Rhaego, the full weight of what she just did finally causes her to have a breakdown as the events of the day comes crashing down on her head. Dany doubles over in agony as she cries and holds on to Rhaego as a lifeline.
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* Just before finding out about Drogo's fate, Dany notes that Drogo was perhaps even more excited than she was about the birth of their son, which makes the moment even sadder as Drogo will never get to meet their son Rhaego.

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* After waking up, Dany asks is where her husband is. Then she finds out Drogo is dead and she is initially heartbroken. Though she quickly recovers her resolve upon hearing her son, Rhaego's cries. It doesn't make the initial devastation any easier.

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* After waking up, Dany asks is Irri where her husband is. Irri calls her Dany, which is alarming because Irri never called her that before. Then she finds out Drogo is dead from the wound he received and she Dany is initially heartbroken.heartbroken at the news. Though she quickly recovers her resolve upon hearing her son, Rhaego's cries. It doesn't make the initial devastation any easier.


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* Just before finding out about Drogo's fate, Dany notes that Drogo was perhaps even more excited than she was about the birth of their son, which makes the moment even sadder as Drogo will never get to meet their son Rhaego.
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* After waking up, Dany asks is where her husband is. Then she finds out Drogo is dead and she is initially heartbroken. Though she quickly recovers her resolve upon hearing her son, Rhaego's cries. It doesn't make the initial devastation any easier.
--> '''Dany''': 'Drogo...no. My...My sun and stars...We were going to remake Essos...Rebuild what was lost. And now, now is it all lost without you? Your bloodriders...Your brothers...Our khalasar that was going to reshape Essos...Broken and fighting amongst themselves before your body was even cold.'

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--> '''Helga''' (tearily): "Me first pa died in the cold in the true north long before we came south of the Wall. Then you...you left us. Don't...Don't leave us again like this...not again."
--> '''Garlen''' (embraces Ansa as well): "I won't. I swear to you both...I will do better this time."
--> '''Helga''': "Ye better. "Cause it won't be just 'us' that you'll be abandonin next time."
* Mixed with Heartwarming. Garlen meeting his son Garion for the first time.
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--> ''Spreading his arms, Garlen braced himself for whatever the elder girl was about to doll out to him. But instead of hitting him, she ran forward and wrapped him tightly in an embrace.''

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--> '''Helga''' (Eyes Garlen warily):warily): "And he's a southern knight, Ansa. Though he could see just behind her eyes that she was fighting with herself. "He got what he wanted...and left us."
--> '''Garlen''' (sadly): "Not...Not by choice, girls. If I had a choice, I would have never left any of you. I swear on my honor and life that I will do better this time. But, if it would make you feel better, Helga...I won't defend myself."
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* Though they're happy to see him, Helga and Ansa are upset that their Papa Garlen left them in the first place.
--> '''Ansa''': "Papa Garlen!" (She first embraces him, then remembers herself and hits him as best she can) "Where have ya been! Ya said you would come back to us! An--"
--> '''Helga''' (Eyes Garlen warily):
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* Chapter 35: Sandor checking his scars or more accurately, where the scars on his face used to be. After seeing that they were gone, he simply thanks Sansa for taking away the scars that'd haunted him for nearly his entire life. Were he a more expressive man, he probably would've cried. Regardless, you'd just want to reach out and give him a hug.
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* As the Northern party is travelling to Harrenhal for the tournament, Ned, remembering the last two times the North went there, prays to the Old Gods that his children won't suffer the horrors of War as he was forced to and for them to know peace. Despite how differently went this time, some things are simply meant to happen and the Stark children are going to know how hellish war is.
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* Dany tells Jon that Viserys dead, she's the last Targaryen in the world. One can remember Maester Aemon's words that "A Targaryen alone in the world is a terrible thing". Of course this isn't the case as Jon proceeds to tell Dany that but it's still a tough thing to say.

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* Dany tells Jon that Viserys dead, she's the last Targaryen in the world. One can remember Maester Aemon's words in that "A Targaryen alone in the world is a terrible thing". Of course this isn't the case as Jon proceeds to tell Dany that but it's still a tough thing to say.
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* Dany tells Jon that Viserys dead, she's the last Targaryen in the world. One can remember Maester Aemon's words that "A Targaryen alone in the world is a terrible thing". Of course this isn't the case as Jon proceeds to tell Dany that but it's still a tough thing to say.
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---> '''Jon''': "There...There was nothing you could have done, Dany. Your brother, he... He broke so many laws of gods and men that he earned his death."
---> '''Dany''': "Maybe. But he...he was my brother. And – And I just stood back and watched him die in that, I watched him die like that. And I...I felt nothing. Even as he was calling out for me and begging for help, or as he was screaming in agony as my husband poured molten gold over his head. I just stood there, watching. And feeling nothing. I – I'm a monster, Jon."

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---> --> '''Jon''': "There...There was nothing you could have done, Dany. Your brother, he... He broke so many laws of gods and men that he earned his death."
---> --> '''Dany''': "Maybe. But he...he was my brother. And – And I just stood back and watched him die in that, I watched him die like that. And I...I felt nothing. Even as he was calling out for me and begging for help, or as he was screaming in agony as my husband poured molten gold over his head. I just stood there, watching. And feeling nothing. I – I'm a monster, Jon."

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* Chapter 33: Though he absolutely deserved it for what he did to Doreah, Dany felt pain for the pain she personally caused him.

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* Chapter 33: Though he absolutely deserved it for what he did to Doreah, Dany felt pain for the pain she personally caused him. her brother Viserys.
* Chapter 34: After Viserys dies, an unnerved Dany contacts Jon via PsychicLink and tells him what happened. Even though he brought his end on himself, Viserys was still Daenarys' own brother and she just stood by and watch him die and feeling absolutely nothing over it. She professes herself to be a monster over it. Jon gives her a pep talk for it but it's still heartwrenching to hear this from her.
---> '''Jon''': "There...There was nothing you could have done, Dany. Your brother, he... He broke so many laws of gods and men that he earned his death."
---> '''Dany''': "Maybe. But he...he was my brother. And – And I just stood back and watched him die in that, I watched him die like that. And I...I felt nothing. Even as he was calling out for me and begging for help, or as he was screaming in agony as my husband poured molten gold over his head. I just stood there, watching. And feeling nothing. I – I'm a monster, Jon."
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* Chapter 33: Though he absolutely deserved it for what he did to Doreah, Dany felt pain for the pain she personally caused him.

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** [[spoiler: When Jon attempts to press Robert about Crown matters, Robert waves him off not wanting to 'play the game' today, saying that while he knows that, there is something else he must truly do before any of that.]]

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** [[spoiler: When Jon attempts to press Robert about Crown matters, Robert waves him off not wanting to 'play the game' today, saying that while he knows that, there is something else he must truly do before any of that.]] Cue Ser Barristan bringing in Myrcella and Tommen. This dying man simply wants to be a father to his children for now.]]
** [[spoiler: Mixed with Heartwarming. Robert wanted to spend with Joffrey as well inspite of the strained relationship between them. Joffrey being Joffrey....]].
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** [[spoiler: Jon is being driven to despair at the news. He is losing his son in all but name. But this is also mixed with Crown matters as the Realm is also losing it's first non-Targaryen King. And Joffrey was nowhere near ready to take up the throne...if he would ever be. Which readers knows he isn't. Though he personally loathes it, he decides to ask Nox for help. Not just because the Realm needed Robert but because Jon needed Robert.]]
** [[spoiler: Though other avenues are being considered for treatment, that's all it is. Treatment. Not a cure. Robert Baratheon is dying. Plain and simple.]]
---> '''Robert''': [[spoiler: So, for now, there is nothing I can do besides sit back and watch as a fucking sickness brings me low. Not some mighty warrior or during a battle...but a fucking sickness I can't even see. What a way for the 'Demon of the Trident' to finally meet his end."]]
** [[spoiler: When Jon attempts to press Robert about Crown matters, Robert waves him off not wanting to 'play the game' today, saying that while he knows that, there is something else he must truly do before any of that.]]

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[[spoiler: "Sickness of the lungs. My death. Not the death of a warrior...but the death of an old sickly man. No offense intended, Jon."]]
---> '''Jon''': [[spoiler:[[spoiler: "How...How long?"]]
---> '''Robert''': [[spoiler: "The Maester isn't sure. Says it depends on how...aggressive it is. And it's still apparently in the early stages, so it's hard to say. He's given me five years. Maybe ten at best before this sickness claims me. And that's if I follow the Maester's treatment exactly. And even then, it's not a guarantee."]]
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* Jon goes to speak with Robert, only to find the King alone simply gazing out of the city. He barely acknowledges Jon's presence until he addresses him solemnly.
---> '''Robert''': I can't remember the faces of my parents. I can barely even remember what Storm's End looks like. And with the gods as my witness...I can't even remember what Lyanna looked like. But what I can remember is that day on the Trident. That day I buried my hammer into that dragon fucker's chest. I felt like a god amongst men that day. No, I was a god amongst men that day. Even with the wound Rhaeger had given me in return, I felt unkillable. Like I could take on the entire army and they would be able to do nothing but cower in fear, waiting for my hammer to end them. And it was on that day, perhaps one of the greatest days of my life, that I realized that that moment was the type of moment I wanted to die in. But...as you're so fond of reminding me Jon...we rarely get what we want in life. Or even death for that matter."
** Concerned at the sudden & unexpected words from the King, Jon moves to comfort him...only for Robert to start violently coughing. Covering his mouth with a cloth, Robert then withdraws it, [[spoiler: only for it to be covered in blood. Then Robert delivers this heartbreaking line]].
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* Chapter 32: Jorah explaining his backstory to Dany of how he came to leave Westeros for Essos. By the end of it Jorah is heavy with shame for the things he did & Dany who was initially unimpressed for his inability to take responsibility for his actions, truly feels sorry for him.
---> '''Dany''': Now Dany truly did feel sorry for the man. He'd given up everything for a woman he loved, his wealth, his home, his family, and his honor. And in the end, she jumped into the arms of the first man she ran across that could offer her a better life. "I am sorry for what you have had to go through, Ser Jorah."
---> '''Jorah'''': "I appreciate your sympathy, Princess."
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Robert wasn't sure just what was worse. The fact that Tommen let out a startled cry and hugged his sister tighter. Or the fact that Myrcella glared at him with a look that did not belong on a young girl her age, or her flat tone when she responded to his presence with a 'your grace' and not 'father,' not 'Robert.' Just...'your grace'. As if she were not his daughter at all. He didn't know why, but it hurt. The hole that'd been created by the loss of Lyanna, hearing that cold tone from his daughter and the reaction of her holding her brother tighter...it made the void left within him ache something fierce.

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--> Robert wasn't sure just what was worse. The fact that Tommen let out a startled cry and hugged his sister tighter. Or the fact that Myrcella glared at him with a look that did not belong on a young girl her age, or her flat tone when she responded to his presence with a 'your grace' and not 'father,' not 'Robert.' Just...'your grace'. As if she were not his daughter at all. He didn't know why, but it hurt. The hole that'd been created by the loss of Lyanna, hearing that cold tone from his daughter and the reaction of her holding her brother tighter...it made the void left within him ache something fierce.

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--> '''Robert''': Robert wasn't sure just what was worse. The fact that Tommen let out a startled cry and hugged his sister tighter. Or the fact that Myrcella glared at him with a look that did not belong on a young girl her age, or her flat tone when she responded to his presence with a 'your grace' and not 'father,' not 'Robert.' Just...'your grace'. As if she were not his daughter at all. He didn't know why, but it hurt. The hole that'd been created by the loss of Lyanna, hearing that cold tone from his daughter and the reaction of her holding her brother tighter...it made the void left within him ache something fierce. ''By the gods...have I really been this shit of a father that my own children act like this just in my mere presence?''

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--> '''Robert''': Robert wasn't sure just what was worse. The fact that Tommen let out a startled cry and hugged his sister tighter. Or the fact that Myrcella glared at him with a look that did not belong on a young girl her age, or her flat tone when she responded to his presence with a 'your grace' and not 'father,' not 'Robert.' Just...'your grace'. As if she were not his daughter at all. He didn't know why, but it hurt. The hole that'd been created by the loss of Lyanna, hearing that cold tone from his daughter and the reaction of her holding her brother tighter...it made the void left within him ache something fierce.
--> '''Robert''':
''By the gods...have I really been this shit of a father that my own children act like this just in my mere presence?''
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** A funeral procession is held for those who died.
* Chapter 17: ''Littlefinger of people gets one.'' No matter how twisted his feelings for Catelyn were, his shocked reaction at her death was genuine. [[spolier: Too bad, he uses her death as greater motivation to make everyone else suffer.]]

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* Chapter 17: ''Littlefinger of people gets one.'' No matter how twisted his feelings for Catelyn were, his shocked reaction at her death was genuine. [[spolier: [[spoiler: Too bad, he uses her death as greater motivation to make everyone else suffer.]]

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* Chapter 17: ''Littlefinger of people gets one.'' No matter how twisted his feelings for Catelyn were, his shocked reaction at her death was genuine. [[spolier: Too bad, he uses her death as greater motivation to make everyone else suffer.]]
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** [[spoiler: The surviving Stark children reacted in their own ways to the events: Robb & Jon, who'd bore witness to Cat's death, [[ItsAllMyFault both blame themselves for not being fast enough to save her & Rickon.]] Bran broken down in tears & held on to Ned until he fell asleep. Arya
** [[spoiler: The one who was affected the most of the ordeal was poor Sansa. Having greatly enjoying herself on the wedding: with its perfect skies, the visiting Lords & Ladies, along with the Knights of the Vale that are nothing short of the epitome of honor & chivalry, Nyra's wedding dress, wearing the cloak that Sansa herself sewed for her, seeing the Maiden herself blessing Nyra (Ashara's ghost), Sansa can only hope that her own wedding is as perfect one day. It's nothing short of a fairy tale come to life for her. Then her life goes straight to hell with the attempted coup. To sum it up: Sansa's faith in chivalry is completely shattered when Ser Lyn Corbray stabs the heavily pregnant Nyra on her wedding day for bearing Nox's child & refuses to defend her friend Jeyne from being raped by his co-conspirators. What truly breaks Sansa is hearing about Cat's death (who she was the closest of the Stark children to), she ''crumbled & wailed uncontrollably.'' Ned's thoughts are what summed it up perfectly]].

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** [[spoiler: The surviving Stark children reacted in their own ways to the events: Robb & Jon, who'd bore witness to Cat's death, [[ItsAllMyFault both blame themselves for not being fast enough to save her & Rickon.]] Bran broken down in tears & held on to Ned until he fell asleep. Arya
Arya simply freezes. At first, it's that she's too young to understand what happened but it's then made very clear that she's in full TranquilFury, something that causes Ned no small amount of worry]].
--> '''Ned''': [[spoiler: Arya's reaction had worried him the most. She hadn't cried, she merely went mute and just stood there while staring off into the distance at nothing. At first, he'd thought that it was simply that she was too young to understand just what was going on. But after seeing Nox's reaction, he knew better. She was reacting to the news of her mother and brother's death in the same manner that Nox had reacted to the news of his own son's death: a quiet rage. One that had him more than slightly worried about what she would do next. She'd already killed one man, something that filled him with no small amount of anguish as no child her age should ever have blood on their hands. But he knew full well that while the first kill was the hardest, it got progressively easier which each additional kill. And given what she was capable of...he would have to keep a close eye on both her and the prisoners until the trials and executions were over and done with]].
** [[spoiler: The Poor Sansa was the one who was affected the most of the ordeal was poor Sansa.ordeal. Having greatly enjoying herself on the wedding: with its perfect skies, the visiting Lords & Ladies, along with the Knights of the Vale that are nothing short of the epitome of honor & chivalry, Nyra's wedding dress, wearing the cloak that Sansa herself sewed for her, seeing the Maiden herself blessing Nyra (Ashara's ghost), Sansa can only hope that her own wedding is as perfect one day. It's nothing short of a fairy tale come to life for her. Then her life goes straight to hell with the attempted coup. To sum it up: Sansa's faith in chivalry is completely shattered when Ser Lyn Corbray stabs the heavily pregnant Nyra on her wedding day for bearing Nox's child & refuses to defend her friend Jeyne from being raped by his co-conspirators. What truly breaks Sansa is hearing about Cat's death (who she was the closest of the Stark children to), she ''crumbled & wailed uncontrollably.'' death. Ned's thoughts are what summed it up perfectly]].
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** The Blackfish's composure cracking for a few brief moments over the deaths of his niece, Catelyn, who he viewed as a daughter & his great nephew Rickon.
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--> '''Ned''': If those had been the extent of the casualties Ned would've considered themselves fortunate. But that was not to be the case. For it wasn't just the nobles nor those in the great hall that had suffered. Or perhaps it was more correct to say that those in the great hall had suffered the least. The damage done across Winterfell and Winter Town had been far more extensive than he could've ever imagined. A hundred strong of the small folks were dead with twice as many now injured. Some so severely that it was doubtful that they would recover. Dozens of men-at-arms belonging to all houses were dead or dying. And at least a dozen women, both young and old, had been found brutalized and raped. While the toll of the attack was indeed high, Ned was not foolish enough to believe it was as worse as it could've been. He'd been through two wars and had seen the immediate aftermath of the Sacking of Kings Landing. If not for the quick, yet inebriated actions, of those that were loyal to House Stark and if not for Nox's quick recovery, then Ned was positive that the death toll would've been far greater. While many had risen to House Stark's defense there were two, outside of Nox, that could truly be credited with bringing an end to the attack within the great hall before rushing out to defend Winterfell. Greatjon Umber and Maege Mormont. Though neither managed to escape from the attempt unharmed. The Greatjon had taken several crossbow bolts and daggers to both his front and back. The fact that the man was even still amongst the living was a testament to Lady Talisa's skill as a healer. But as good as she was, she was no miracle worker. And while the Greatjon would live his left arm was now next to useless and he would be cursed with a limp for the rest of his life. And Maege Mormont had received a dagger across the face, leaving a scar from temple to jaw that cross her left eye and destroying said eye in the process.

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--> '''Ned''': [[spoiler: If those had been the extent of the casualties Ned would've considered themselves fortunate. But that was not to be the case. For it wasn't just the nobles nor those in the great hall that had suffered. Or perhaps it was more correct to say that those in the great hall had suffered the least. The damage done across Winterfell and Winter Town had been far more extensive than he could've ever imagined. A hundred strong of the small folks were dead with twice as many now injured. Some so severely that it was doubtful that they would recover. Dozens of men-at-arms belonging to all houses were dead or dying. And at least a dozen women, both young and old, had been found brutalized and raped. While the toll of the attack was indeed high, Ned was not foolish enough to believe it was as worse as it could've been. He'd been through two wars and had seen the immediate aftermath of the Sacking of Kings Landing. If not for the quick, yet inebriated actions, of those that were loyal to House Stark and if not for Nox's quick recovery, then Ned was positive that the death toll would've been far greater. While many had risen to House Stark's defense there were two, outside of Nox, that could truly be credited with bringing an end to the attack within the great hall before rushing out to defend Winterfell. Greatjon Umber and Maege Mormont. Though neither managed to escape from the attempt unharmed. The Greatjon had taken several crossbow bolts and daggers to both his front and back. The fact that the man was even still amongst the living was a testament to Lady Talisa's skill as a healer. But as good as she was, she was no miracle worker. And while the Greatjon would live his left arm was now next to useless and he would be cursed with a limp for the rest of his life. And Maege Mormont had received a dagger across the face, leaving a scar from temple to jaw that cross her left eye and destroying said eye in the process.process]].

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