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* In the After Dark episode covering "Diary of Luan Loud", Luan is clearly appalled and is nearly brought to tears by the fic's [[RonTheDeathEater portrayal]] of her as doing reprehensible things like wishing death on her siblings (and [[BadPeopleAbuseAnimals kitten]]), [[NoYay raping Lincoln]], berating Luna for being bi, telling antisemitic jokes, screwing Bobby, and turning the twins against each other while getting sexually excited over it.
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* In the After Dark episode covering "Diary of Luan Loud", Luan is clearly appalled and is nearly brought to tears by the fic's [[RonTheDeathEater portrayal]] portrayal of her as doing reprehensible things like wishing death on her siblings (and [[BadPeopleAbuseAnimals kitten]]), [[NoYay raping Lincoln]], berating Luna for being bi, telling antisemitic jokes, screwing Bobby, and turning the twins against each other while getting sexually excited over it.
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* In the After Dark episode covering "Diary of Luan Loud", Luan is clearly appalled and is nearly brought to tears by the fic's [[RonTheDeathEater portrayal]] of her as doing reprehensible things like wishing death on her siblings (and [[BadPeopleAbuseAnimals kitten]]), [[NoYay raping Lincoln]], berating Luna for being bi, telling antisemitic jokes, screwing Bobby, and turning the twins against each other.
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* In the After Dark episode covering "Diary of Luan Loud", Luan is clearly appalled and is nearly brought to tears by the fic's [[RonTheDeathEater portrayal]] of her as doing reprehensible things like wishing death on her siblings (and [[BadPeopleAbuseAnimals kitten]]), [[NoYay raping Lincoln]], berating Luna for being bi, telling antisemitic jokes, screwing Bobby, and turning the twins against each other.other while getting sexually excited over it.
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* In the After Dark episode covering "Diary of Luan Loud", Luan is clearly appalled and is nearly brought to tears by the fic's [[RonTheDeathEater portrayal]] of her as doing reprehensible things like wishing death on her siblings (and [[CruellaToAnimals kitten]]), [[NoYay raping Lincoln]], berating Luna for being bi, telling antisemitic jokes, screwing Bobby, and turning the twins against each other.
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* In the After Dark episode covering "Diary of Luan Loud", Luan is clearly appalled and is nearly brought to tears by the fic's [[RonTheDeathEater portrayal]] of her as doing reprehensible things like wishing death on her siblings (and [[CruellaToAnimals [[BadPeopleAbuseAnimals kitten]]), [[NoYay raping Lincoln]], berating Luna for being bi, telling antisemitic jokes, screwing Bobby, and turning the twins against each other.
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* While his reaction is admittedly pretty funny, when episode 31 ("Hide and Seek") ends with a TwistEnding that none of the sisters are actually really, Lincoln freaks out and starts making sure that the sisters he's watching the episode with are real.
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* While his reaction is admittedly pretty funny, when episode 31 ("Hide and Seek") ends with a TwistEnding that none of the sisters are actually really, real, Lincoln freaks out and starts making sure that the sisters he's watching the episode with are real.
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-->'''Luan''' ''(after Leni says, 'Let's finish the story')'' Do we have to?
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-->'''Luan''' ''(after Leni says, 'Let's finish the story')'' Do we have to?to?
* While his reaction is admittedly pretty funny, when episode 31 ("Hide and Seek") ends with a TwistEnding that none of the sisters are actually really, Lincoln freaks out and starts making sure that the sisters he's watching the episode with are real.
* While his reaction is admittedly pretty funny, when episode 31 ("Hide and Seek") ends with a TwistEnding that none of the sisters are actually really, Lincoln freaks out and starts making sure that the sisters he's watching the episode with are real.
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* Both Lola and Lincoln start to cry in "Diary of a Loud" when Fic!Lincoln attacks Fic!Lola and Lola cowers away from Lincoln.
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* Both Lola and Lincoln start to cry in "Diary of a Loud" when Fic!Lincoln Lincoln attacks Fic!Lola Lola and Lola cowers away from Lincoln.
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-->'''Lisa''': I'm...I'm appalled. What an ugly, abhorrent thing to say. It was already reprehensible of me to describe my own brother as "dispensable," but ''this?'' Is...is this really how the author sees me? What horrific stories has he heard about me?!
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-->'''Lisa''': I'm...I'm appalled. What an ugly, abhorrent thing to say. It was already reprehensible of me to describe my own brother as "dispensable," but ''this?'' Is...is this really how the author sees me? What horrific stories has he heard about me?!me?!
* In the After Dark episode covering "Diary of Luan Loud", Luan is clearly appalled and is nearly brought to tears by the fic's [[RonTheDeathEater portrayal]] of her as doing reprehensible things like wishing death on her siblings (and [[CruellaToAnimals kitten]]), [[NoYay raping Lincoln]], berating Luna for being bi, telling antisemitic jokes, screwing Bobby, and turning the twins against each other.
-->'''Luan''': ''(squirming on the couch, on the verge of tears)'' I- I don't like this.
-->'''Luan''' ''(after Leni says, 'Let's finish the story')'' Do we have to?
* In the After Dark episode covering "Diary of Luan Loud", Luan is clearly appalled and is nearly brought to tears by the fic's [[RonTheDeathEater portrayal]] of her as doing reprehensible things like wishing death on her siblings (and [[CruellaToAnimals kitten]]), [[NoYay raping Lincoln]], berating Luna for being bi, telling antisemitic jokes, screwing Bobby, and turning the twins against each other.
-->'''Luan''': ''(squirming on the couch, on the verge of tears)'' I- I don't like this.
-->'''Luan''' ''(after Leni says, 'Let's finish the story')'' Do we have to?
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'''Lisa''': I'm...I'm appalled. What an ugly, abhorrent thing to say. It was already reprehensible of me to describe my own brother as "dispensable," but ''this?'' Is...is this really how the author sees me? What horrific stories has he heard about me?!
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* The fanfic portrayal of Ronnie Anne in episode 22 ("A Second Chance") upsets her so much that she storms out of the living room. When Lincoln manages to bring her back, it's clear that she's been crying.
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* The fanfic portrayal of Ronnie Anne in episode 22 ("A Second Chance") upsets her so much that she storms out of the living room. When Lincoln manages to bring her back, it's clear that she's been crying.crying.
* Lisa's horrified reaction to an incredibly heartless piece of dialogue ("I've nine other siblings. No one will notice that one of them will be missing.") from her fic self in episode 27 ("A Town Hates a Boy").
'''Lisa''': I'm...I'm appalled. What an ugly, abhorrent thing to say. It was already reprehensible of me to describe my own brother as "dispensable," but ''this?'' Is...is this really how the author sees me? What horrific stories has he heard about me?!
* Lisa's horrified reaction to an incredibly heartless piece of dialogue ("I've nine other siblings. No one will notice that one of them will be missing.") from her fic self in episode 27 ("A Town Hates a Boy").
'''Lisa''': I'm...I'm appalled. What an ugly, abhorrent thing to say. It was already reprehensible of me to describe my own brother as "dispensable," but ''this?'' Is...is this really how the author sees me? What horrific stories has he heard about me?!
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* Both Lola and Lincoln start to cry in "Diary of a Loud" when fic!Lincoln attacks fic!Lola and Lola cowers away from Lincoln.
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* Both Lola and Lincoln start to cry in "Diary of a Loud" when fic!Lincoln Fic!Lincoln attacks fic!Lola Fic!Lola and Lola cowers away from Lincoln.Lincoln.
* The fanfic portrayal of Ronnie Anne in episode 22 ("A Second Chance") upsets her so much that she storms out of the living room. When Lincoln manages to bring her back, it's clear that she's been crying.
* The fanfic portrayal of Ronnie Anne in episode 22 ("A Second Chance") upsets her so much that she storms out of the living room. When Lincoln manages to bring her back, it's clear that she's been crying.
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* In the episode about "Trustworthy", during the fire scene, EverybodyCries.
* Both Lola and Lincoln start to cry in "Diary of a Loud" when fic!Lincoln attacks fic!Lola and Lola cowers away from Lincoln.
* Both Lola and Lincoln start to cry in "Diary of a Loud" when fic!Lincoln attacks fic!Lola and Lola cowers away from Lincoln.
