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* After helping fighting Sahaquiel Shinji shows up in Misato's apartment, unconscious and badly wounded. Asuka holds his hand and sobs, begging him not leaving and crying she needs him.
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* After helping fighting Sahaquiel Shinji shows up in Misato's apartment, unconscious and badly wounded. Asuka holds his hand and sobs, begging him not leaving to leave and crying she needs him.
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!!Administrivia/SpoilersOff applies to all TearJerker pages, so all spoilers are unmarked. Administrivia/YouHaveBeenWarned!
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* As fighting Zeruel [[spoiler:Shinji apparently dies.]] Everybody gets grief-stricken.
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* [[spoiler:A dying Martian Manhunter]] tells Shinji the story of how SEELE [[spoiler:killed off what few superheroes were still active after Second Impact to prevent them from getting in the way of the Instrumentality Project. And after Shinji assures J'onn that he will make things right, the latter finally dies.]]
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* After [[spoiler:helping helping fighting Sahaquiel]] Sahaquiel Shinji shows up in Misato's apartment, unconscious and badly wounded. Asuka holds his hand and sobs, begging him not leaving and crying she needs him.
*[[spoiler:A A dying Martian Manhunter]] Manhunter tells Shinji the story of how SEELE [[spoiler:killed killed off what few superheroes were still active after Second Impact to prevent them from getting in the way of the Instrumentality Project. And after Shinji assures J'onn that he will make things right, the latter finally dies.]]
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* [[spoiler:A dying Martian Manhunter]] telling tells Shinji the story of how SEELE [[spoiler:killed off what few superheroes were still active after Second Impact, Impact to prevent them from getting in the way of the Instrumentality Plan.Project. And after Shinji assures J'onn that he will make things right, the latter finally dies.]]
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* As fighting Zeruel [[spoiler:Shinji apparently dies.]] Everybody gets grief-stricken.
* In the rewrite Ritsuko cries when Superman tries to comfort her because she is convinced that she deserves being abused due to all things she has done to further Gendo's goals.
* After [[spoiler:helping fighting Sahaquiel]] Shinji shows up in Misato's apartment, unconscious and badly wounded. Asuka holds his hand and sobs, begging him not leaving and crying she needs him.
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* As fighting Zeruel [[spoiler:Shinji apparently dies.]] Everybody gets grief-stricken.
* In the rewrite Ritsuko cries when Superman tries to comfort her because she is convinced that she deserves being abused due to all things she has done to further Gendo's goals.
* After [[spoiler:helping fighting Sahaquiel]] Shinji shows up in Misato's apartment, unconscious and badly wounded. Asuka holds his hand and sobs, begging him not leaving and crying she needs him.
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