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* Chapter 25, ''Layers of Truth'':
** Riley's Plan B is finally revealed: to never wake up and stay in the Mind World forever.
** On a meta level, the fact that the story has been on hiatus since 2016 and this was the last chapter. After the reveal that Riley has essentially been DrivenToSuicide, we the readers have absolutely no idea how or even ''if'' this conflict is resolved, and it's entirely possible that we never will.
** Riley's Plan B is finally revealed: to never wake up and stay in the Mind World forever.
** On a meta level, the fact that the story has been on hiatus since 2016 and this was the last chapter. After the reveal that Riley has essentially been DrivenToSuicide, we the readers have absolutely no idea how or even ''if'' this conflict is resolved, and it's entirely possible that we never will.
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* Chapter 25, ''Layers of Truth'':
**Truth'': Riley's Plan B is finally revealed: to never wake up and stay in the Mind World forever.
** On a meta level, the fact that the story has been on hiatus since 2016 and this was the last chapter. After the reveal that Riley has essentially been DrivenToSuicide, we the readers have absolutely no idea how or even ''if'' this conflict is resolved, and it's entirely possible that we never will.forever.
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** On a meta level, the fact that the story has been on hiatus since 2016 and this was the last chapter. After the reveal that Riley has essentially been DrivenToSuicide, we the readers have absolutely no idea how or even ''if'' this conflict is resolved, and it's entirely possible that we never will.
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!!Administrivia/SpoilersOff applies to all TearJerker pages, so all spoilers are unmarked. Administrivia/YouHaveBeenWarned!
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** The chapter was given a rewrite so Joy [[spoiler:leaves on her own to gather the Core Memories instead of getting sucked out accidentally]]. What really makes it sad is that she knows this is what's best for Riley, as she couldn't help her feel joy now anyway.
** [[spoiler: Riley learning the intercom can ''never'' be fixed, meaning she's stuck hearing voices for the rest of her life]]. Hearing the mind workers talk about it causes Riley to shed tears of regret, fear and sadness, mixing with the rain falling down around her.
** Seeing Riley experience something akin to SanitySlippage, proposing a drastic action to take [[spoiler: Antipsychotic drugs to try blocking out the emotions without consulting her parents or a doctor first.]] She even sounds like Anger last year in her crazed attempts to try and fix herself now.
** [[spoiler: Riley learning the intercom can ''never'' be fixed, meaning she's stuck hearing voices for the rest of her life]]. Hearing the mind workers talk about it causes Riley to shed tears of regret, fear and sadness, mixing with the rain falling down around her.
** Seeing Riley experience something akin to SanitySlippage, proposing a drastic action to take [[spoiler: Antipsychotic drugs to try blocking out the emotions without consulting her parents or a doctor first.]] She even sounds like Anger last year in her crazed attempts to try and fix herself now.
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** The chapter was given a rewrite so Joy [[spoiler:leaves leaves on her own to gather the Core Memories instead of getting sucked out accidentally]].accidentally. What really makes it sad is that she knows this is what's best for Riley, as she couldn't help her feel joy now anyway.
**[[spoiler: Riley learning the intercom can ''never'' be fixed, meaning she's stuck hearing voices for the rest of her life]].life. Hearing the mind workers talk about it causes Riley to shed tears of regret, fear and sadness, mixing with the rain falling down around her.
** Seeing Riley experience something akin to SanitySlippage, proposing a drastic action to take[[spoiler: Antipsychotic drugs to try blocking out the emotions without consulting her parents or a doctor first.]] first. She even sounds like Anger last year in her crazed attempts to try and fix herself now.
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** Seeing Riley experience something akin to SanitySlippage, proposing a drastic action to take
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** When Riley returns home, her parents sit her down to talk about the new information they've recovered/learned. While it's sad enough seeing Riley stressed about being sent away, the real kicker is when they reveal their knowing about [[spoiler: her drawings of the emotions]].
*** Riley goes into mini panic mode that they found it first, then goes into a mini spiral of emotions, first thinking to herself that even if the symptoms fit, she doesn't think she could keep up [[spoiler: a mind world illusion for so long]]. Then getting hung up on the small fact that [[spoiler: her parents went into her room without permission]], she starts screaming at them about how betrayed she feels.
*** Riley goes into mini panic mode that they found it first, then goes into a mini spiral of emotions, first thinking to herself that even if the symptoms fit, she doesn't think she could keep up [[spoiler: a mind world illusion for so long]]. Then getting hung up on the small fact that [[spoiler: her parents went into her room without permission]], she starts screaming at them about how betrayed she feels.
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** When Riley returns home, her parents sit her down to talk about the new information they've recovered/learned. While it's sad enough seeing Riley stressed about being sent away, the real kicker is when they reveal their knowing about [[spoiler: her drawings of the emotions]].
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*** Riley goes into mini panic mode that they found it first, then goes into a mini spiral of emotions, first thinking to herself that even if the symptoms fit, she doesn't think she could keep up[[spoiler: a mind world illusion for so long]]. long. Then getting hung up on the small fact that [[spoiler: her parents went into her room without permission]], permission, she starts screaming at them about how betrayed she feels.
*** Riley goes into mini panic mode that they found it first, then goes into a mini spiral of emotions, first thinking to herself that even if the symptoms fit, she doesn't think she could keep up
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** [[spoiler: Family Island begins collapsing]]. The first [[spoiler: new island made after the move, and from Riley's paranoia and short temper, it's falling apart without the core.]] Even from Long Term, [[spoiler: Joy]] froze in horror, recognizing that sound from last year.
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** [[spoiler: Family Island begins collapsing]]. collapsing. The first [[spoiler: new island made after the move, and from Riley's paranoia and short temper, it's falling apart without the core.]] core. Even from Long Term, [[spoiler: Joy]] Joy froze in horror, recognizing that sound from last year.
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** Riley's Plan B is finally revealed: [[spoiler: to never wake up and stay in the Mind World forever]].
** On a meta level, the fact that the story has been on hiatus since 2016 and this was the last chapter. After the reveal that Riley [[spoiler: has essentially been DrivenToSuicide]], we the readers have absolutely no idea how or even ''if'' this conflict is resolved, and it's entirely possible that we never will.
** On a meta level, the fact that the story has been on hiatus since 2016 and this was the last chapter. After the reveal that Riley [[spoiler: has essentially been DrivenToSuicide]], we the readers have absolutely no idea how or even ''if'' this conflict is resolved, and it's entirely possible that we never will.
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** Riley's Plan B is finally revealed: [[spoiler: to never wake up and stay in the Mind World forever]].
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** On a meta level, the fact that the story has been on hiatus since 2016 and this was the last chapter. After the reveal that Riley[[spoiler: has essentially been DrivenToSuicide]], DrivenToSuicide, we the readers have absolutely no idea how or even ''if'' this conflict is resolved, and it's entirely possible that we never will.
** On a meta level, the fact that the story has been on hiatus since 2016 and this was the last chapter. After the reveal that Riley
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** On a meta level, the fact that the story has been on hiatus since 2016 and this was the last chapter. After the reveal that Riley [[spoiler: has essentially been DrivenToSuicide]], we the readers have absolutely no idea how/if how or even ''if'' this conflict is resolved, and it's entirely possible that we never will.
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** On a meta level, the fact that the story has been on hiatus since 2016 and this was the last chapter. After the reveal that Riley has essentially been DrivenToSuicide, we the readers have absolutely no idea how/if this conflict is resolved, and it's entirely possible that we never will.
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** On a meta level, the fact that the story has been on hiatus since 2016 and this was the last chapter. After the reveal that Riley [[spoiler: has essentially been DrivenToSuicide, DrivenToSuicide]], we the readers have absolutely no idea how/if this conflict is resolved, and it's entirely possible that we never will.
