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*** Worse than that, they're in danger of losing their place in legacy society entirely. Because Margot married and had kids with a human, Sebastian was never born a vampire, Oliver and Elinor committed murders that endangered the secrecy of the community, and Juliette fell in love with a human and wants little to do with the legacy lifestyle anyway, pretty much everyone in Margot's nuclear family is in violation of at least one legacy taboo. The only thing guaranteeing them a spot in the community (aside from Oliver) was that Davina kept Margot as the keeper-in-waiting, but that's now under scrutiny. Margot understands what's at stake here and breaks down in her husband's arms.
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*** Worse than that, they're in danger of losing their place in legacy society entirely. Because Margot married and had kids with a human, Sebastian was never born a vampire, Oliver and Elinor committed murders that endangered the secrecy of the community, and Juliette fell in love with a human and wants little to do with the legacy lifestyle anyway, pretty much everyone in Margot's nuclear family is in violation of at least one legacy taboo. The only thing guaranteeing them a spot in the community (aside from Oliver) was that Davina kept Margot as the keeper-in-waiting, but that's now under scrutiny. Margot understands what's at stake here and breaks down in her husband's arms.
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** Then, of course, Calliope biting Juliette's head off after it's revealed she turned Theo by accident.
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** Then, of course, Calliope [[WhatTheHellHero biting Juliette's head off off]] after it's revealed she turned Theo by accident.
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*** Oliver was clearly close to Elinor before it all went down, so it makes sense that he'd feel betrayed by this. To make matters worse, she only betrayed him because '''she felt like it''', implying she never cared about him at all. He saw her as a sister while she saw him as a pawn in her sick little game. The [[DisappointedByTheMotive look on his face]] really says it all.
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*** Oliver was clearly close to Elinor before it all went down, so it makes sense given that he'd feel betrayed by this.he can't wrap his head around this betrayal. To make matters worse, she only betrayed him because '''she felt like it''', implying she never cared about him at all. He saw her as a sister while she saw him as a pawn in her sick little game. The [[DisappointedByTheMotive look on his face]] really says it all.
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*** Worse than that, they're in danger of losing their place in legacy society entirely. Because Margot married and had kids with a human, Sebastian was never born a vampire, Oliver and Elinor committed murders that endangered the secrecy of the community, and Juliette fell in love with a human and wants little to do with the legacy lifestyle, pretty much everyone in Margot's nuclear family is in violation of at least one legacy taboo. The only thing guaranteeing them a spot in the community (aside from Oliver) was that Davina kept Margot as the keeper-in-waiting, but that's now under scrutiny. Margot understands what's at stake here and breaks down in her husband's arms.
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*** Worse than that, they're in danger of losing their place in legacy society entirely. Because Margot married and had kids with a human, Sebastian was never born a vampire, Oliver and Elinor committed murders that endangered the secrecy of the community, and Juliette fell in love with a human and wants little to do with the legacy lifestyle, lifestyle anyway, pretty much everyone in Margot's nuclear family is in violation of at least one legacy taboo. The only thing guaranteeing them a spot in the community (aside from Oliver) was that Davina kept Margot as the keeper-in-waiting, but that's now under scrutiny. Margot understands what's at stake here and breaks down in her husband's arms.
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[[caption-width-right:623:All it takes is [[PoorCommunicationKills words left unspoken]] and [[ATragedyOfImpulsiveness action without a moment's thought]] hasty action]] and everything comes crashing down.]]
