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* Derek being forced to put his favorite dog, Ivan, down. After trying to negotiate with the vet, offering to even give him one of his kidneys to give to Ivan, he finally agrees to let the vet do what needs to be done. Watching Derek hold Ivan as the doctor gives the injection, and the subsequent words from the vet (which are surprisingly comforting), make you just want to reach into your television and hold Derek while he cried on your shoulder.
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* Derek being forced to put his favorite dog, Ivan, down. After trying to negotiate with the vet, offering to even give him one of his kidneys to give to Ivan, he finally agrees to let the vet do what needs to be done. Watching Derek hold Ivan as the doctor gives the injection, and the subsequent words from the vet (which are surprisingly comforting), make you just want to reach into your television and hold Derek while he cried cries on your shoulder.
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* Whenever one of the residents pass away.
* One of the residents being left in tears after Geoff basically steals five pounds off of her to buy a paper, and rudely brushes her off when asked if Geoff was able to buy stamps for her letters(which he may of not even bothered to post).
* In the pilot, [[KicktheDog a group of chavs start poking fun at both Derek and Hannah behind their backs during their time at the pub, mocking Derek's clothing and mannerisms and suggesting that he might be Hannah's boyfriend, with one of them going as far as to tell Hannah that see could do better and another one suggesting (a few moments ago) that Derek might be a paedophile.]]
** It becomes a CMOA once Hannah's [[MamaBear mama bear]] instincts kick in.
* One of the residents being left in tears after Geoff basically steals five pounds off of her to buy a paper, and rudely brushes her off when asked if Geoff was able to buy stamps for her letters(which he may of not even bothered to post).
* In the pilot, [[KicktheDog a group of chavs start poking fun at both Derek and Hannah behind their backs during their time at the pub, mocking Derek's clothing and mannerisms and suggesting that he might be Hannah's boyfriend, with one of them going as far as to tell Hannah that see could do better and another one suggesting (a few moments ago) that Derek might be a paedophile.]]
** It becomes a CMOA once Hannah's [[MamaBear mama bear]] instincts kick in.
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* Whenever one of the residents pass away.
* One of the residents being left in tears after Geoff basically steals five pounds off of her to buy a paper, and rudely brushes her off when asked if Geoff was able to buy stamps for her letters(which he may of not even bothered to post).
* In the pilot, [[KicktheDog a group of chavs start poking fun at both Derek and Hannah behind their backs during their time at the pub, mocking Derek's clothing and mannerisms and suggesting that he might be Hannah's boyfriend, with one of them going as far as to tell Hannah that see could do better and another one suggesting (a few moments ago) that Derek might be a paedophile.]]
** It becomes a CMOA once Hannah's [[MamaBear mama bear]] instincts kick in.away.
* One of the residents being left in tears after Geoff basically steals five pounds off of her to buy a paper, and rudely brushes her off when asked if Geoff was able to buy stamps for her letters(which he may of not even bothered to post).
* In the pilot, [[KicktheDog a group of chavs start poking fun at both Derek and Hannah behind their backs during their time at the pub, mocking Derek's clothing and mannerisms and suggesting that he might be Hannah's boyfriend, with one of them going as far as to tell Hannah that see could do better and another one suggesting (a few moments ago) that Derek might be a paedophile.]]
** It becomes a CMOA once Hannah's [[MamaBear mama bear]] instincts kick in.
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* One of the residents being left in tears after Geoff basically steals five pounds off of her to buy a paper, and rudely brushes her off when asked if Geoff was able to buy stamps for her letters (which he may of not even bothered to post).
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* One of the residents being left in tears after Geoff basically steals five pounds off of her to buy a paper, and rudely brushes her off when asked if Geoff was able to buy stamps for her letters (which letters(which he may of not even bothered to post).post).
* In the pilot, [[KicktheDog a group of chavs start poking fun at both Derek and Hannah behind their backs during their time at the pub, mocking Derek's clothing and mannerisms and suggesting that he might be Hannah's boyfriend, with one of them going as far as to tell Hannah that see could do better and another one suggesting (a few moments ago) that Derek might be a paedophile.]]
** It becomes a CMOA once Hannah's [[MamaBear mama bear]] instincts kick in.
* In the pilot, [[KicktheDog a group of chavs start poking fun at both Derek and Hannah behind their backs during their time at the pub, mocking Derek's clothing and mannerisms and suggesting that he might be Hannah's boyfriend, with one of them going as far as to tell Hannah that see could do better and another one suggesting (a few moments ago) that Derek might be a paedophile.]]
** It becomes a CMOA once Hannah's [[MamaBear mama bear]] instincts kick in.
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* One of the residents being left in tears after Geoff basically steals five pounds off of her to buy a paper and rudely brushes her off.
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* One of the residents being left in tears after Geoff basically steals five pounds off of her to buy a paper paper, and rudely brushes her off.off when asked if Geoff was able to buy stamps for her letters (which he may of not even bothered to post).
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* Whenever one of the residents pass away.
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* Whenever one of the residents pass away.away.
* One of the residents being left in tears after Geoff basically steals five pounds off of her to buy a paper and rudely brushes her off.
* One of the residents being left in tears after Geoff basically steals five pounds off of her to buy a paper and rudely brushes her off.
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* Derek being forced to put his favorite dog, Ivan, down. After trying to negotiate with the vet, offering to even give him one of his kidneys to give to Ivan, he finally agrees to let the vet do what needs to be done. Watching Derek hold Ivan as the doctor gives the injection, and the subsequent words from the vet (which are surprisingly comforting), make you just want to reach into your television and hold Derek while he cried on your shoulder.
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* Derek being forced to put his favorite dog, Ivan, down. After trying to negotiate with the vet, offering to even give him one of his kidneys to give to Ivan, he finally agrees to let the vet do what needs to be done. Watching Derek hold Ivan as the doctor gives the injection, and the subsequent words from the vet (which are surprisingly comforting), make you just want to reach into your television and hold Derek while he cried on your shoulder.shoulder.
* Whenever one of the residents pass away.
* Whenever one of the residents pass away.
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*Derek being forced to put his favorite dog, Ivan, down. After trying to negotiate with the vet, offering to even give him one of his kidneys to give to Ivan, he finally agrees to let the vet do what needs to be done. Watching Derek hold Ivan as the doctor gives the injection, and the subsequent words from the vet (which are surprisingly comforting), make you just want to reach into your television and hold Derek while he cried on your shoulder.
