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I think it fits more in Nightmare Fuel.
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* The CruelAndUnusualDeath of falling into the piranha pit in ''3''; it's supposed to be cartoony, with a BigBallOfViolence to [[GoryDiscretionShot cover things up]], but the shredding noises and the fact that your fuzzy Norn (or Grendel, or Ettin) is being ''eaten and torn apart alive'' would make anyone cringe.
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MerNorns aren't official.
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* [=MerNorns=]. Completely land-bound at birth, their lungs slowly wither as they get older and their gills develop. When they reach adulthood, they sprout a lovely piscean tail and spend the rest of their lives in water, [[ButNowIMustGo never again to return to land.]] Fanfiction authors used to have a field day with them.
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* The whimpering death cry of a norn. Admit it, it tears you up to hear that sound. Compound that with the fact that even though Norns only live for a few hours at a time, it's most likely not continuous and can stretch out over several days, giving you ''just'' enough time to get attached to them before they get yanked away. What the hell, programmers?!
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* The whimpering death cry of a norn.Norn. Admit it, it tears you up to hear that sound. Compound that with the fact that even though Norns only live for a few hours at a time, it's most likely not continuous and can stretch out over several days, giving you ''just'' enough time to get attached to them before they get yanked away. What the hell, programmers?!
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* [=MerNorns=]. Completely land-bound at birth, their lungs slowly wither as they get older and their gills develop. When they reach adulthood, they sprout a lovely piscean tail and spend the rest of their lives in water, [[ButNowIMustGO never again to return to land.]] Fanfiction authors used to have a field day with them.
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* [=MerNorns=]. Completely land-bound at birth, their lungs slowly wither as they get older and their gills develop. When they reach adulthood, they sprout a lovely piscean tail and spend the rest of their lives in water, [[ButNowIMustGO [[ButNowIMustGo never again to return to land.]] Fanfiction authors used to have a field day with them.
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* [=MerNorns=]. Completely land-bound at birth, their lungs slowly wither as they get older and their gills develop. When they reach adulthood, they sprout a lovely piscean tail and spend the rest of their lives in water, never again to return to land. Fanfiction authors used to have a field day with them.
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* [=MerNorns=]. Completely land-bound at birth, their lungs slowly wither as they get older and their gills develop. When they reach adulthood, they sprout a lovely piscean tail and spend the rest of their lives in water, [[ButNowIMustGO never again to return to land. land.]] Fanfiction authors used to have a field day with them.
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* MerNorns. Completely land-bound at birth, their lungs slowly wither as they get older and their gills develop. When they reach adulthood, they sprout a lovely piscean tail and spend the rest of their lives in water, never again to return to land. Fanfiction authors used to have a field day with them.
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* MerNorns.[=MerNorns=]. Completely land-bound at birth, their lungs slowly wither as they get older and their gills develop. When they reach adulthood, they sprout a lovely piscean tail and spend the rest of their lives in water, never again to return to land. Fanfiction authors used to have a field day with them.
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* The CruelAndUnusualDeath of falling into the piranha pit in ''3''; it's supposed to be cartoony, with a BigBallOfViolence to [[GoryDiscretionShot cover things up]], but the shredding noises and the fact that your fuzzy Norn (or Grendel, or Ettin) is being ''eaten and torn apart alive'' would make anyone cringe.
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* The CruelAndUnusualDeath of falling into the piranha pit in ''3''; it's supposed to be cartoony, with a BigBallOfViolence to [[GoryDiscretionShot cover things up]], but the shredding noises and the fact that your fuzzy Norn (or Grendel, or Ettin) is being ''eaten and torn apart alive'' would make anyone cringe.cringe.
* MerNorns. Completely land-bound at birth, their lungs slowly wither as they get older and their gills develop. When they reach adulthood, they sprout a lovely piscean tail and spend the rest of their lives in water, never again to return to land. Fanfiction authors used to have a field day with them.
* MerNorns. Completely land-bound at birth, their lungs slowly wither as they get older and their gills develop. When they reach adulthood, they sprout a lovely piscean tail and spend the rest of their lives in water, never again to return to land. Fanfiction authors used to have a field day with them.
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* The CruelAndUnusualDeath of falling into the piranha pit in ''3''; it's supposed to be cartoony, with a BigBallOfViolence to [[GoryDiscretionShot cover things up]], but the shredding noises and the fact that your fuzzy norn is being ''eaten and torn apart alive'' would make anyone cringe.
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* The CruelAndUnusualDeath of falling into the piranha pit in ''3''; it's supposed to be cartoony, with a BigBallOfViolence to [[GoryDiscretionShot cover things up]], but the shredding noises and the fact that your fuzzy norn Norn (or Grendel, or Ettin) is being ''eaten and torn apart alive'' would make anyone cringe.
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* The whimpering death cry of a norn. Admit it, it tears you up to hear that sound. Compound that with the fact that even though Norns only live for a few hours at a time, it's most likely not continuous and can stretch out over several days, giving you ''just'' enough time to get attached to them before they get yanked away. What the hell, programmers?!
* The CruelAndUnusualDeath of falling into the piranha pit in ''3''; it's supposed to be cartoony, with a BigBallOfViolence to [[GoryDiscretionShot cover things up]], but the shredding noises and the fact that your fuzzy norn is being ''eaten and torn apart alive'' would make anyone cringe.
* The CruelAndUnusualDeath of falling into the piranha pit in ''3''; it's supposed to be cartoony, with a BigBallOfViolence to [[GoryDiscretionShot cover things up]], but the shredding noises and the fact that your fuzzy norn is being ''eaten and torn apart alive'' would make anyone cringe.
