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* Seeing Brenda, Khalil, and Dalvin years before the former got addicted to crack and the latter two were murdered is bound to make readers of Literature/TheHateUGive shed a few tears.
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* Seeing Brenda, Khalil, and Dalvin years before the former got addicted to crack and the latter two were murdered is bound to make readers of Literature/TheHateUGive shed a few tears.tears.
**It’s even more bittersweet when you note how Brenda’s described as “the life of the party when there ain’t a party.”
**It’s even more bittersweet when you note how Brenda’s described as “the life of the party when there ain’t a party.”
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* Especially the way they fall apart. There's no declaration of "You're not my friend!". Time passes, you slip away, and then one day, you just ''know'' without a word. Just like in real life.
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* Especially the way they fall apart. There's no declaration of "You're not my friend!". Time passes, you slip away, and then one day, you just ''know'' without a word. Just like in real life.life.
* Seeing Brenda, Khalil, and Dalvin years before the former got addicted to crack and the latter two were murdered is bound to make readers of Literature/TheHateUGive shed a few tears.
* Seeing Brenda, Khalil, and Dalvin years before the former got addicted to crack and the latter two were murdered is bound to make readers of Literature/TheHateUGive shed a few tears.
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*Mav trying to wake Dre up after his murder:
-->I pat Dre's face. "Dre, wake up! C'mon, man! Wake up!"
-->He don't move.
-->He don't answer me.
-->He'll never answer me again
*"They put a white sheet over him and left him on the street. He wasn't a person no more. He was a crime scene."
*When Faye asks Mav if, after seventeen years of throwing away her whole life for him, she has failed him.
-->"Have I failed you, Maverick?"
-->Her soft voice hit me hard as a brick. I swallow the lump in my throat. "No, ma'am".
-->"You're sure? Because it feels like it. I've tried my hardest, God knows I have, and yet here we are. Two babies before you're eighteen. It's bad enough your father convinced me to let you join a ''gang'' for protection." She shake her head. "Some mother I am. Loving you isn't enough. ''I'' haven't been enough."
*When King pushes his gun in Mav's chest, and Mav knows that he has just lost his best friend:
**"I don't know the person staring at me. It damn sure ain't my best friend."
**"I think I'm losing another brother, and this hurt just as bad as putting one in the ground."
*Especially the way they fall apart. There's no declaration of "You're not my friend!". Time passes, you slip away, and then one day, you just ''know'' without a word. Just like in real life.
-->I pat Dre's face. "Dre, wake up! C'mon, man! Wake up!"
-->He don't move.
-->He don't answer me.
-->He'll never answer me again
*"They put a white sheet over him and left him on the street. He wasn't a person no more. He was a crime scene."
*When Faye asks Mav if, after seventeen years of throwing away her whole life for him, she has failed him.
-->"Have I failed you, Maverick?"
-->Her soft voice hit me hard as a brick. I swallow the lump in my throat. "No, ma'am".
-->"You're sure? Because it feels like it. I've tried my hardest, God knows I have, and yet here we are. Two babies before you're eighteen. It's bad enough your father convinced me to let you join a ''gang'' for protection." She shake her head. "Some mother I am. Loving you isn't enough. ''I'' haven't been enough."
*When King pushes his gun in Mav's chest, and Mav knows that he has just lost his best friend:
**"I don't know the person staring at me. It damn sure ain't my best friend."
**"I think I'm losing another brother, and this hurt just as bad as putting one in the ground."
*Especially the way they fall apart. There's no declaration of "You're not my friend!". Time passes, you slip away, and then one day, you just ''know'' without a word. Just like in real life.
