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* The Penguin's funeral when the penguins gather around him and drag his body into the toxic waste-filled pool.
-->'''Penguin''': Oh, shit... I picked the cute one! (''groans in agony'') This heat's getting to me... ''(painfully gasps)'' I'll murder you momentarily. ''(gagging)'' [[AlasPoorVillain But first... I need a cool drink. Of iced... water]]. ''(pauses)'' AAARRUUNKH! (''collapses and dies from his injuries'')
-->'''Penguin''': Oh, shit... I picked the cute one! (''groans in agony'') This heat's getting to me... ''(painfully gasps)'' I'll murder you momentarily. ''(gagging)'' [[AlasPoorVillain But first... I need a cool drink. Of iced... water]]. ''(pauses)'' AAARRUUNKH! (''collapses and dies from his injuries'')
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* The Penguin's funeral when the penguins gather around him and drag his body into the toxic waste-filled pool.
pool. It's made even sadder by Penguin [[TheDyingWalk slowly limping out of it]] first, barely holding out for [[TakingYouWithMe one last attempt to kill Batman with one of his trick umbrellas]]. However, it comes to naught as he accidentally pulls out the harmless, toy-covered one.
-->'''Penguin''': Oh, shit... I picked thecute '''cute''' one! (''groans ''(drops it as he gurgles in agony'') agony)'' This heat's getting to me... ''(painfully gasps)'' I'll murder you momentarily. ''(gagging)'' [[AlasPoorVillain But first... I need a cool drink. Of iced... water]]. ''(pauses)'' AAARRUUNKH! (''collapses ''(with a rattle, he collapses and dies from his injuries'')injuries on the spot)''
-->'''Penguin''': Oh, shit... I picked the
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** Later as Bruce's research into Cobblepot and the Red Triangle gang turns out disturbing results, as Bruce genuinely wanted to believe the Penguin's claims.
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** Later as Bruce's research into Cobblepot and the Red Triangle gang Gang turns out disturbing results, as Bruce genuinely wanted to believe the Penguin's claims.
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* When the Red triangle Gang attacks the tree lighting ceremony and the police activate the Bat-signal, we cut to Bruce, who’s sitting there, alone, in the dark, as if he's just been waiting for this for who knows how long. With Vicky gone and no one else to relate to, this is it; being Batman is all he has.
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* When the Red triangle Triangle Gang attacks the tree lighting ceremony and the police activate the Bat-signal, we cut to Bruce, who’s sitting there, alone, in the dark, as if he's just been waiting for this for who knows how long. With Vicky gone and no one else to relate to, this is it; being Batman is all he has.
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* When the Red triangle Gang attacks the tree lighting ceremony and the police activate the Bat-signal, we cut to Bruce, who is sitting there, alone, in the dark, as if he's just been waiting for this for who knows how long. With Vicky gone and no one else to relate to, this is it; being Batman is all he has.
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* When the Red triangle Gang attacks the tree lighting ceremony and the police activate the Bat-signal, we cut to Bruce, who is who’s sitting there, alone, in the dark, as if he's just been waiting for this for who knows how long. With Vicky gone and no one else to relate to, this is it; being Batman is all he has.
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-->'''Alfred''': Well, come what may. Merry Christmas, Mister Wayne.
-->'''Bruce''': Merry Christmas, Alfred. Goodwill to all men... (''sadly'') ...and women.
-->'''Bruce''': Merry Christmas, Alfred. Goodwill to all men... (''sadly'') ...and women.
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'''Bruce:''' Merry Christmas, Alfred. Goodwill to all men... (''sadly'') ...and women.
