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* The game and its players make a bunch of pop culture references.
** A magecraft instructor NPC on the first floor is an old man wearing a Hogwarts uniform from the movies named "Old [[Franchise/HarryPotter Harry]]."
** The [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin Museum of Suspicious Furniture]] is run by a fidgety man wearing a hat embroidered with the word "magus" (misspelled) and holds wares that include "an oversized traveling trunk set on tens of little rolling wheels with a motif like a gaping mouth full of teeth along the rim."
--->'''The Fretworker:''' It's fine to try your best and fail, but if you hesitate, the things lurking behind you will get you, without any mercy, no, especially not if they're [[Literature/{{Discworld}} luggage]].
** Agil names his invented [[PlayingWithFire fire-element sword skill]] Heat Hawk as a ''Anime/MobileSuitGundam'' reference. The Ether variation of the Heat Hawk spell is named [[IncrediblyLamePun Psy]] [[Franchise/{{Pokemon}} Duck]].
** One Snow wants to use the familiars spell tree to create a [[Manga/{{Bleach}} zanpakuto]].
** Diabel strongly suspects Kibaou modeled the Boarding School on "[[Franchise/HarryPotter a certain magical castle and boarding school from a certain super-popular British novel series]]."
** Ilya commissions a table with underlighting like the one in a ''Franchise/JamesBond'' movie.
** Kirito muses that Ilya [[VideoGame/{{Civilization}} goes for immediate military victory instead of trying to develop spaceflight and that her ideology is Despotism]].
** When offered a third sword while already holding two, Kirito puts one in his mouth and pretends to use one of [[Manga/OnePiece Zoro's three-sword style moves]]. Later in the same scene Shirou remembers Kirito inventing a spell called [[Franchise/TheLegendOfZelda Linker]] [[SwordBeam Beam]].
** An onlooking player compares the magical effect another is using to the "Notice-Me-Not" charm from ''Harry Potter''.
** A boss called [King Krab] drops [Krab Meat?] when defeated. Asuna cooks some to make a burger-type food item called [[[WesternAnimation/SpongebobSquarepants Krabby Pattie]]]. Meanwhile, two players are having a team battle where their familiars fight while they shout orders "like dueling Pokémon masters."
** A magecraft instructor NPC on the first floor is an old man wearing a Hogwarts uniform from the movies named "Old [[Franchise/HarryPotter Harry]]."
** The [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin Museum of Suspicious Furniture]] is run by a fidgety man wearing a hat embroidered with the word "magus" (misspelled) and holds wares that include "an oversized traveling trunk set on tens of little rolling wheels with a motif like a gaping mouth full of teeth along the rim."
--->'''The Fretworker:''' It's fine to try your best and fail, but if you hesitate, the things lurking behind you will get you, without any mercy, no, especially not if they're [[Literature/{{Discworld}} luggage]].
** Agil names his invented [[PlayingWithFire fire-element sword skill]] Heat Hawk as a ''Anime/MobileSuitGundam'' reference. The Ether variation of the Heat Hawk spell is named [[IncrediblyLamePun Psy]] [[Franchise/{{Pokemon}} Duck]].
** One Snow wants to use the familiars spell tree to create a [[Manga/{{Bleach}} zanpakuto]].
** Diabel strongly suspects Kibaou modeled the Boarding School on "[[Franchise/HarryPotter a certain magical castle and boarding school from a certain super-popular British novel series]]."
** Ilya commissions a table with underlighting like the one in a ''Franchise/JamesBond'' movie.
** Kirito muses that Ilya [[VideoGame/{{Civilization}} goes for immediate military victory instead of trying to develop spaceflight and that her ideology is Despotism]].
** When offered a third sword while already holding two, Kirito puts one in his mouth and pretends to use one of [[Manga/OnePiece Zoro's three-sword style moves]]. Later in the same scene Shirou remembers Kirito inventing a spell called [[Franchise/TheLegendOfZelda Linker]] [[SwordBeam Beam]].
** An onlooking player compares the magical effect another is using to the "Notice-Me-Not" charm from ''Harry Potter''.
** A boss called [King Krab] drops [Krab Meat?] when defeated. Asuna cooks some to make a burger-type food item called [[[WesternAnimation/SpongebobSquarepants Krabby Pattie]]]. Meanwhile, two players are having a team battle where their familiars fight while they shout orders "like dueling Pokémon masters."
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* The game and its players make a bunch of pop culture references.
**A magecraft instructor NPC on the first floor is an old man wearing a Hogwarts uniform from the movies named "Old [[Franchise/HarryPotter Harry]]."
** * The [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin Museum of Suspicious Furniture]] is run by a fidgety man wearing a hat embroidered with the word "magus" (misspelled) and holds wares that include "an oversized traveling trunk set on tens of little rolling wheels with a motif like a gaping mouth full of teeth along the rim."
--->'''The -->'''The Fretworker:''' It's fine to try your best and fail, but if you hesitate, the things lurking behind you will get you, without any mercy, no, especially not if they're [[Literature/{{Discworld}} luggage]].
** * Agil names his invented [[PlayingWithFire fire-element sword skill]] Heat Hawk as a ''Anime/MobileSuitGundam'' reference. The Ether variation of the Heat Hawk spell is named [[IncrediblyLamePun Psy]] [[Franchise/{{Pokemon}} Duck]].
** * One Snow wants to use the familiars spell tree to create a [[Manga/{{Bleach}} zanpakuto]].
** * Diabel strongly suspects Kibaou modeled the Boarding School on "[[Franchise/HarryPotter a certain magical castle and boarding school from a certain super-popular British novel series]]."
** * Ilya commissions a table with underlighting like the one in a ''Franchise/JamesBond'' movie.
** * Kirito muses that Ilya [[VideoGame/{{Civilization}} goes for immediate military victory instead of trying to develop spaceflight and that her ideology is Despotism]].
** * When offered a third sword while already holding two, Kirito puts one in his mouth and pretends to use one of [[Manga/OnePiece Zoro's three-sword style moves]]. Later in the same scene Shirou remembers Kirito inventing a spell called [[Franchise/TheLegendOfZelda Linker]] [[SwordBeam Beam]].
** * An onlooking player compares the magical effect another is using to the "Notice-Me-Not" charm from ''Harry Potter''.
** * A boss called [King Krab] drops [Krab Meat?] when defeated. Asuna cooks some to make a burger-type food item called [[[WesternAnimation/SpongebobSquarepants Krabby Pattie]]]. Meanwhile, two players are having a team battle where their familiars fight while they shout orders "like dueling Pokémon masters."
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* Diabel tries to guess Kayaba's motives in the fic and basically hits the motivations of both the canonical Kayaba and the antagonist from the Alfheim arc.
-->Why? Diabel didn't know. Maybe he was experimenting on their brains to develop Mind Control Software. Maybe he was an egoist who genuinely wanted them to play his game.
-->Why? Diabel didn't know. Maybe he was experimenting on their brains to develop Mind Control Software. Maybe he was an egoist who genuinely wanted them to play his game.
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-->Why? Diabel didn't know. Maybe he was experimenting on their brains to develop Mind Control Software. Maybe he was an egoist who genuinely wanted them to play his game.
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* The game and its players make a bunch of pop culture references.
** A magecraft instructor NPC on the first floor is an old man wearing a Hogwarts uniform from the movies named "Old [[Franchise/HarryPotter Harry]]."
** The [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin Museum of Suspicious Furniture]] is run by a fidgety man wearing a hat embroidered with the word "magus" (misspelled) and holds wares that include "an oversized traveling trunk set on tens of little rolling wheels with a motif like a gaping mouth full of teeth along the rim."
--->'''The Fretworker:''' It's fine to try your best and fail, but if you hesitate, the things lurking behind you will get you, without any mercy, no, especially not if they're [[Literature/{{Discworld}} luggage]].
** Agil names his invented [[PlayingWithFire fire-element sword skill]] Heat Hawk as a ''Anime/MobileSuitGundam'' reference. The Ether variation of the Heat Hawk spell is named [[IncrediblyLamePun Psy]] [[Franchise/{{Pokemon}} Duck]].
** One Snow wants to use the familiars spell tree to create a [[Manga/{{Bleach}} zanpakuto]].
** Diabel strongly suspects Kibaou modeled the Boarding School on "[[Franchise/HarryPotter a certain magical castle and boarding school from a certain super-popular British novel series]]."
** Ilya commissions a table with underlighting like the one in a ''Franchise/JamesBond'' movie.
** Kirito muses that Ilya [[VideoGame/{{Civilization}} goes for immediate military victory instead of trying to develop spaceflight and that her ideology is Despotism]].
** When offered a third sword while already holding two, Kirito puts one in his mouth and pretends to use one of [[Manga/OnePiece Zoro's three-sword style moves]]. Later in the same scene Shirou remembers Kirito inventing a spell called [[Franchise/TheLegendOfZelda Linker]] [[SwordBeam Beam]].
** An onlooking player compares the magical effect another is using to the "Notice-Me-Not" charm from ''Harry Potter''.
** A boss called [King Krab] drops [Krab Meat?] when defeated. Asuna cooks some to make a burger-type food item called [[[WesternAnimation/SpongebobSquarepants Krabby Pattie]]]. Meanwhile, two players are having a team battle where their familiars fight while they shout orders "like dueling Pokémon masters."
* Diabel tries to guess Kayaba's motives in the fic and basically hits the motivations of both the canonical Kayaba and the antagonist from the Alfheim arc.
-->Why? Diabel didn't know. Maybe he was experimenting on their brains to develop Mind Control Software. Maybe he was an egoist who genuinely wanted them to play his game.
** A magecraft instructor NPC on the first floor is an old man wearing a Hogwarts uniform from the movies named "Old [[Franchise/HarryPotter Harry]]."
** The [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin Museum of Suspicious Furniture]] is run by a fidgety man wearing a hat embroidered with the word "magus" (misspelled) and holds wares that include "an oversized traveling trunk set on tens of little rolling wheels with a motif like a gaping mouth full of teeth along the rim."
--->'''The Fretworker:''' It's fine to try your best and fail, but if you hesitate, the things lurking behind you will get you, without any mercy, no, especially not if they're [[Literature/{{Discworld}} luggage]].
** Agil names his invented [[PlayingWithFire fire-element sword skill]] Heat Hawk as a ''Anime/MobileSuitGundam'' reference. The Ether variation of the Heat Hawk spell is named [[IncrediblyLamePun Psy]] [[Franchise/{{Pokemon}} Duck]].
** One Snow wants to use the familiars spell tree to create a [[Manga/{{Bleach}} zanpakuto]].
** Diabel strongly suspects Kibaou modeled the Boarding School on "[[Franchise/HarryPotter a certain magical castle and boarding school from a certain super-popular British novel series]]."
** Ilya commissions a table with underlighting like the one in a ''Franchise/JamesBond'' movie.
** Kirito muses that Ilya [[VideoGame/{{Civilization}} goes for immediate military victory instead of trying to develop spaceflight and that her ideology is Despotism]].
** When offered a third sword while already holding two, Kirito puts one in his mouth and pretends to use one of [[Manga/OnePiece Zoro's three-sword style moves]]. Later in the same scene Shirou remembers Kirito inventing a spell called [[Franchise/TheLegendOfZelda Linker]] [[SwordBeam Beam]].
** An onlooking player compares the magical effect another is using to the "Notice-Me-Not" charm from ''Harry Potter''.
** A boss called [King Krab] drops [Krab Meat?] when defeated. Asuna cooks some to make a burger-type food item called [[[WesternAnimation/SpongebobSquarepants Krabby Pattie]]]. Meanwhile, two players are having a team battle where their familiars fight while they shout orders "like dueling Pokémon masters."
* Diabel tries to guess Kayaba's motives in the fic and basically hits the motivations of both the canonical Kayaba and the antagonist from the Alfheim arc.
-->Why? Diabel didn't know. Maybe he was experimenting on their brains to develop Mind Control Software. Maybe he was an egoist who genuinely wanted them to play his game.
