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My name is Severus Snape... The head of the Slytherin house, a former Slytherin, mentor to Draco Malfoy, and the closest confidant to Albus Dumbledore... The head of Hogwarts... And my mentor...
My life, as you can see, hasn't always been a straight line... For as you know, I am quite ruthless and serious when it comes to teaching at Hogwarts... As such, everyone feared me with great contempt...
My life, as you can see, hasn't always been a straight line... For as you know, I am quite ruthless and serious when it comes to teaching at Hogwarts... As such, everyone feared me with great contempt...
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My name is Severus Snape... The head of the Slytherin house, a former Slytherin, mentor to Draco Malfoy, and the closest confidant to Albus Dumbledore... The head of Hogwarts... And my mentor...
My life, as you can see, hasn't always been a straight line... For as you know, I am quite ruthless and serious when it comes to teaching at Hogwarts... As such, everyonefeared fears me with great contempt...
My life, as you can see, hasn't always been a straight line... For as you know, I am quite ruthless and serious when it comes to teaching at Hogwarts... As such, everyone
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My story begins as a Slytherin student... Back when I was young, I met Lily and Petunia Evans... Lily. She was the kindest person I've ever met... She was the light of my life... But alas, she fell for James Potter... The leader of the Marauders, who humiliate me as a Slytherin...
As I continued my studies at Hogwarts, I became the Half-Blood Prince... I manage to become the most talented potion maker of all time... That I kept a copy of my own Advanced Potion-Making for future purposes... Unfortunately, this leads to Potter using it against me...
After I graduated from Hogwarts, I joined Voldemort on his crusade against Hogwarts... But when I learned that he wants to kill Lily and her family since Harry was the chosen one... I immediately switched sides... Yet in the end, it was too late... She's gone... Forever...
As I continued my studies at Hogwarts, I became the Half-Blood Prince... I manage to become the most talented potion maker of all time... That I kept a copy of my own Advanced Potion-Making for future purposes... Unfortunately, this leads to Potter using it against me...
After I graduated from Hogwarts, I joined Voldemort on his crusade against Hogwarts... But when I learned that he wants to kill Lily and her family since Harry was the chosen one... I immediately switched sides... Yet in the end, it was too late... She's gone... Forever...
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My story begins as a Slytherin student... Back when I was young, I met Lily and Petunia Evans... Lily. She was the kindest person I've ever met... She was the light of my life... But alas, she fell for James Potter... The leader of the Marauders, who humiliate humiliated me as a Slytherin...
As I continued my studies at Hogwarts, I became the Half-Blood Prince... Imanage managed to become the most talented potion maker of all time... That I kept a copy of my own Advanced Potion-Making for future purposes... Unfortunately, this leads lead to Potter using it against me...
After I graduated from Hogwarts, I joined Voldemort on his crusade against Hogwarts... But when I learned that hewants wanted to kill Lily and her family since Harry was the chosen one... I immediately switched sides... Yet in the end, it was too late... She's gone... Forever...
As I continued my studies at Hogwarts, I became the Half-Blood Prince... I
After I graduated from Hogwarts, I joined Voldemort on his crusade against Hogwarts... But when I learned that he
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One day, everything changes, during the philosopher stone incident... I remember it quite well... It was the beginning of another study year at Hogwarts where new generations of students arrived... Among them are the infamous three: Ronald Weasley, Hermione Granger, and of course, the so-called chosen one... Harry Potter...
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One day, everything changes, changed, during the philosopher stone the
Philosopher's Stone incident... I remember it quite well... It was the beginning of anotherstudy year at Hogwarts where new generations of students arrived... Among them are the infamous three: Ronald Weasley, Hermione Granger, and of course, the so-called chosen one... Harry Potter...
Philosopher's Stone incident... I remember it quite well... It was the beginning of another
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A few days later, things have gotten interesting at Hogwarts... Particularly how Potter manage to earn a spot at the Quidditch games... However, something had happened in the game... As I watched in terror, someone had jinxed his broom mid-game, and despite my cold exterior, I cast a counter spell in order to prevent him from losing... Unfortunately for me, Miss Granger thought that I was the one who jinxed it... As such, she cast a flame spell on my cape... To protect her friend... Ironically, this still caused the jinx to be broken due to its caster being distracted...
Following the games... Mr. Potter, Mrs. Granger, and Mr. Weasley continue to have their little... Misadventures in Hogwarts... Ranging from their encounter with a troll, discovering the secrets of the school, and of course... Confronting Quirinus from getting the stone... Thus earning Gryffindor enough points to win the House cup...
On the next semester... Potter and his friends continue to have their... Adventures in Hogwarts and in their hometown... One where they nearly broke their cover by driving the flying car... Into Hogwarts... All because the door troll was trying to protect... Potter...
Nevertheless, he is severely punished for his foolishness... Along with Mr. Weasley... Who broke his wand...
Following the games... Mr. Potter, Mrs. Granger, and Mr. Weasley continue to have their little... Misadventures in Hogwarts... Ranging from their encounter with a troll, discovering the secrets of the school, and of course... Confronting Quirinus from getting the stone... Thus earning Gryffindor enough points to win the House cup...
On the next semester... Potter and his friends continue to have their... Adventures in Hogwarts and in their hometown... One where they nearly broke their cover by driving the flying car... Into Hogwarts... All because the door troll was trying to protect... Potter...
Nevertheless, he is severely punished for his foolishness... Along with Mr. Weasley... Who broke his wand...
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A few days later, things have had gotten interesting at Hogwarts... Particularly how Potter manage managed to earn a spot at the Quidditch games... However, something had happened in during the game... As I watched in terror, someone had jinxed his broom mid-game, and despite my cold exterior, I cast a counter spell in order to prevent him from losing... Unfortunately for me, Miss Granger thought that I was the one who jinxed it... As such, she cast a flame spell on my cape... To protect her friend... Ironically, this still caused the jinx to be broken due to its caster being distracted...
Following the games... Mr. Potter, Mrs. Granger, and Mr. Weasleycontinue continued to have their little... Misadventures in Hogwarts... Ranging from their encounter with a troll, discovering the secrets of the school, and of course... Confronting Keeping Quirinus from getting the stone... Thus earning Gryffindor enough points to win the House cup...
On the next semester... Potter and his friendscontinue continued to have their... Adventures in Hogwarts and in their hometown... One where they nearly broke their cover by driving the flying car... Into Hogwarts... All because the door troll was trying to protect... Potter...
Nevertheless, heis was severely punished for his foolishness... Along with Mr. Weasley... Who broke his wand...
Following the games... Mr. Potter, Mrs. Granger, and Mr. Weasley
On the next semester... Potter and his friends
Nevertheless, he
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** It is my duty as a Hogwarts professor to protect the students from danger... Some are in enough trouble as it is, so I will not allow any more to come to them.
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** It is my duty as a Hogwarts professor to protect the students from danger... Some are in enough trouble as it is, so so I will not cannot allow any more to come to them.
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** Even those in Slytherin house will be disciplined or punished for being incompetent student... As much as Malfoy keeps Crabbe and Goyle for company, they fail to live up to his example...
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** Even those in Slytherin house will be disciplined or punished for directly going against the rules or being incompetent student...students... As much as Malfoy keeps Crabbe and Goyle for company, they fail to live up to his example...
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Okay... now that we're done with this... we shall begin the test on me... wait, where did my audience go?
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** It is my duty as a Hogwarts professor to protect the students from danger... Some are in enough trouble as it is, so I will not allow any more to come to them...them.
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* ShedTheFamilyName: I never thought much of my... Muggle father... and while I still go by his surname, I ''did'' call myself the Half-Blood Prince for a reason.
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* ShedTheFamilyName: I never thought much of my... Muggle father... and while I still go by his surname, I ''did'' call myself the Half-Blood Prince for a reason.reason.
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(Best read in the voice of the late Creator/AlanRickman)
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* AffectionateNickname: I used to be called "Sev" by... Lily... during our childhood.
* BerserkButton: Remind me of my worst memory... call me a coward... or dare use my own spells against me, and my usual demeanour will vanish.
* ColdHam: I almost never speak above a whisper... and yet, whenever I open my mouth... I will ''always'' grab the attention of anyone near me.
* BerserkButton: Remind me of my worst memory... call me a coward... or dare use my own spells against me, and my usual demeanour will vanish.
* ColdHam: I almost never speak above a whisper... and yet, whenever I open my mouth... I will ''always'' grab the attention of anyone near me.
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** Even those in Slytherin house will be disciplined or punished for being incompetent student... As much as Malfoy keeps Crabbe and Goyle for company, they fail to live up to his example...
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** Even those in Slytherin house will be disciplined or punished for being incompetent student... As much as Malfoy keeps Crabbe and Goyle for company, they fail to live up to his example...example...
* ShedTheFamilyName: I never thought much of my... Muggle father... and while I still go by his surname, I ''did'' call myself the Half-Blood Prince for a reason.
* ShedTheFamilyName: I never thought much of my... Muggle father... and while I still go by his surname, I ''did'' call myself the Half-Blood Prince for a reason.
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On the next semester... Potter and his friends continue to have their... Adventures in Hogwarts and in their hometown... One where they nearly broke their cover by driving the flying car... Into Hogwarts... All because the door troll was trying to protect... Potter...
Nevertheless, he is severely punished for his foolishness... Along with Mr. Weasley... Who broke his wand...
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(Best read in the voice of the late Creator/AlanRickman)
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Following the games... Mr. Potter, Mrs. Granger, and Mr. Weasley continue to have their little... Misadventures in Hogwarts... Ranging from their encounter with a troll, discovering the secrets of the school, and of course... Confronting Quirinus from getting the stone...
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Following the games... Mr. Potter, Mrs. Granger, and Mr. Weasley continue to have their little... Misadventures in Hogwarts... Ranging from their encounter with a troll, discovering the secrets of the school, and of course... Confronting Quirinus from getting the stone... Thus earning Gryffindor enough points to win the House cup...
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* Everyone Has Standards:
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* Everyone Has Standards:EveryoneHasStandards:
** It is my duty as a Hogwarts professor to protect the students from danger... Some are in enough trouble as it is, so I will not allow any more to come to them...
** It is my duty as a Hogwarts professor to protect the students from danger... Some are in enough trouble as it is, so I will not allow any more to come to them...
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A few days later, things have gotten interesting at Hogwarts... Particularly how Potter manage to earn a spot at the Quidditch games... However, something had happened in the game... As I watched in terror, someone had jinxed his broom mid-game, and despite my cold exterior, I cast a counter spell in order to prevent him from losing... Unfortunately for me, Miss Granger thought that I was the one who jinxed it... As such, she cast a flame spell on my cape... To protect her friend...
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A few days later, things have gotten interesting at Hogwarts... Particularly how Potter manage to earn a spot at the Quidditch games... However, something had happened in the game... As I watched in terror, someone had jinxed his broom mid-game, and despite my cold exterior, I cast a counter spell in order to prevent him from losing... Unfortunately for me, Miss Granger thought that I was the one who jinxed it... As such, she cast a flame spell on my cape... To protect her friend...
friend... Ironically, this still caused the jinx to be broken due to its caster being distracted...
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My story begins during the philosopher stone incident... I remember it quite well... It was the beginning of another study year at Hogwarts where new generations of students arrived... Among them are the infamous three: Ronald Weasley, Hermione Granger, and of course, the so-called chosen one... Harry Potter...
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My story begins as a Slytherin student... Back when I was young, I met Lily and Petunia Evans... Lily. She was the kindest person I've ever met... She was the light of my life... But alas, she fell for James Potter... The leader of the Marauders, who humiliate me as a Slytherin...
As I continued my studies at Hogwarts, I became the Half-Blood Prince... I manage to become the most talented potion maker of all time... That I kept a copy of my own Advanced Potion-Making for future purposes... Unfortunately, this leads to Potter using it against me...
After I graduated from Hogwarts, I joined Voldemort on his crusade against Hogwarts... But when I learned that he wants to kill Lily and her family since Harry was the chosen one... I immediately switched sides... Yet in the end, it was too late... She's gone... Forever...
In the following years, I finally declared myself as a double agent for both Dumbledore and Hogwarts to keep the Death Eaters at bay... And keeping Potter safe all these years...
One day, everything changes, during the philosopher stone incident... I remember it quite well... It was the beginning of another study year at Hogwarts where new generations of students arrived... Among them are the infamous three: Ronald Weasley, Hermione Granger, and of course, the so-called chosen one... Harry Potter...
As I continued my studies at Hogwarts, I became the Half-Blood Prince... I manage to become the most talented potion maker of all time... That I kept a copy of my own Advanced Potion-Making for future purposes... Unfortunately, this leads to Potter using it against me...
After I graduated from Hogwarts, I joined Voldemort on his crusade against Hogwarts... But when I learned that he wants to kill Lily and her family since Harry was the chosen one... I immediately switched sides... Yet in the end, it was too late... She's gone... Forever...
In the following years, I finally declared myself as a double agent for both Dumbledore and Hogwarts to keep the Death Eaters at bay... And keeping Potter safe all these years...
One day, everything changes, during the philosopher stone incident... I remember it quite well... It was the beginning of another study year at Hogwarts where new generations of students arrived... Among them are the infamous three: Ronald Weasley, Hermione Granger, and of course, the so-called chosen one... Harry Potter...
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!Read everything carefully about my personal life... I shall test you readers after you memorized everything in this page... Good luck...
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Though I must warned you that everything about myself... Is very complicated for everyone to know... So, let's get started...
Shall we?
My name is Severus Snape... The head of the Slytherin house... Mentor to Draco Malfoy, and the closest confidant to Albus Dumbledore... The head of Hogwarts... And my mentor...
Shall we?
My name is Severus Snape... The head of the Slytherin house... Mentor to Draco Malfoy, and the closest confidant to Albus Dumbledore... The head of Hogwarts... And my mentor...
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Though I must warned you that everything about myself... Is very complicated for everyone to know... So, let's get started...
started... Shall we?
My name is Severus Snape... The head of the Slytherinhouse... Mentor house, a former Slytherin, mentor to Draco Malfoy, and the closest confidant to Albus Dumbledore... The head of Hogwarts... And my mentor...
My name is Severus Snape... The head of the Slytherin
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But I do not mind it at all... For as a teacher, it is my duty to keep everyone disciplined at all time...
When it comes to the philosopher stone incident... I remember it quite well... It was the beginning of another study year at Hogwarts where new generations of students arrived... Among them are the infamous three: Ronald Weasley, Hermione Granger, and of course, the so-called chosen one... Harry Potter...
When it comes to the philosopher stone incident... I remember it quite well... It was the beginning of another study year at Hogwarts where new generations of students arrived... Among them are the infamous three: Ronald Weasley, Hermione Granger, and of course, the so-called chosen one... Harry Potter...
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But I do not mind it at all... For as a teacher, it is my duty to keep everyone disciplined at all time...
When it comestime... And as Dumbledore's agent, I have to keep myself discreet...
My story begins during the philosopher stone incident... I remember it quite well... It was the beginning of another study year at Hogwarts where new generations of students arrived... Among them are the infamous three: Ronald Weasley, Hermione Granger, and of course, the so-called chosen one... Harry Potter...
When it comes
My story begins during the philosopher stone incident... I remember it quite well... It was the beginning of another study year at Hogwarts where new generations of students arrived... Among them are the infamous three: Ronald Weasley, Hermione Granger, and of course, the so-called chosen one... Harry Potter...
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A few days later, things have gotten interesting at Hogwarts... Particularly how Potter manage to earn a spot at the Quidditch games... However, something had happened in the game... As I watched in terror, someone had jinxed his broom mid-game, and despite my cold exterior, I cast a counter spell in order to prevent him from losing... Unfortunately for me, Miss Granger thought that I was the one who jinxed it... As such, she cast a flame spell on my cape... To protect her friend...
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A few days later, things have gotten interesting at Hogwarts... Particularly how Potter manage to earn a spot at the Quidditch games... However, something had happened in the game... As I watched in terror, someone had jinxed his broom mid-game, and despite my cold exterior, I cast a counter spell in order to prevent him from losing... Unfortunately for me, Miss Granger thought that I was the one who jinxed it... As such, she cast a flame spell on my cape... To protect her friend...friend...
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When it comes to the philosopher stone incident... I have some vague memories about it...
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When it comes to the philosopher stone incident... I remember it quite well... It was the beginning of another study year at Hogwarts where new generations of students arrived... Among them are the infamous three: Ronald Weasley, Hermione Granger, and of course, the so-called chosen one... Harry Potter...
During the first years, I taught the students how to brew potions... I also taught them how to bewitch the minds, ensnare their senses, bottle fame, brew glory, and put a stopper in deaths... It was also here that I noticed how unskilled Potter is in following my lessons...
A few days later, things havesome vague memories about it...gotten interesting at Hogwarts... Particularly how Potter manage to earn a spot at the Quidditch games... However, something had happened in the game... As I watched in terror, someone had jinxed his broom mid-game, and despite my cold exterior, I cast a counter spell in order to prevent him from losing... Unfortunately for me, Miss Granger thought that I was the one who jinxed it... As such, she cast a flame spell on my cape... To protect her friend...
During the first years, I taught the students how to brew potions... I also taught them how to bewitch the minds, ensnare their senses, bottle fame, brew glory, and put a stopper in deaths... It was also here that I noticed how unskilled Potter is in following my lessons...
A few days later, things have
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My name is Severus Snape... The head of the Slytherin house... Mentor to Draco Malfoy, and the closest confidant to Albus Dumbledore... The head of Hogwarts...
My life, as you can see, hasn't always been a straight line... For as you know, I am quite ruthless and serious when it comes to teaching at Hogwarts... As such, everyone feared me with great contempt...
My life, as you can see, hasn't always been a straight line... For as you know, I am quite ruthless and serious when it comes to teaching at Hogwarts... As such, everyone feared me with great contempt...
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My name is Severus Snape... The head of the Slytherin house... Mentor to Draco Malfoy, and the closest confidant to Albus Dumbledore... The head of Hogwarts...
Hogwarts... And my mentor...
My life, as you can see, hasn't always been a straight line... For as you know, I am quite ruthless and serious when it comes to teaching at Hogwarts... As such, everyone feared me with greatcontempt...contempt...
But I do not mind it at all... For as a teacher, it is my duty to keep everyone disciplined at all time...
When it comes to the philosopher stone incident... I have some vague memories about it...
My life, as you can see, hasn't always been a straight line... For as you know, I am quite ruthless and serious when it comes to teaching at Hogwarts... As such, everyone feared me with great
But I do not mind it at all... For as a teacher, it is my duty to keep everyone disciplined at all time...
When it comes to the philosopher stone incident... I have some vague memories about it...
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Well, well, well... What do we have here?
It seems that all of you had found my self demonstrating page... Quite a predicament...
I guess I can... Share a bit of myself to all of you... If you wish to know about me...
Though I must warned you that everything about myself... Is very complicated for everyone to know... So, let's get started...
Shall we?
My name is Severus Snape... The head of the Slytherin house... Mentor to Draco Malfoy, and the closest confidant to Albus Dumbledore... The head of Hogwarts...
My life, as you can see, hasn't always been a straight line... For as you know, I am quite ruthless and serious when it comes to teaching at Hogwarts... As such, everyone feared me with great contempt...
It seems that all of you had found my self demonstrating page... Quite a predicament...
I guess I can... Share a bit of myself to all of you... If you wish to know about me...
Though I must warned you that everything about myself... Is very complicated for everyone to know... So, let's get started...
Shall we?
My name is Severus Snape... The head of the Slytherin house... Mentor to Draco Malfoy, and the closest confidant to Albus Dumbledore... The head of Hogwarts...
My life, as you can see, hasn't always been a straight line... For as you know, I am quite ruthless and serious when it comes to teaching at Hogwarts... As such, everyone feared me with great contempt...
