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* RapePillageAndBurn: Kell Rhavenfell's default tactics when dealing with the Rabbit tribes is to raid their villages for slaves while murdering all those who resist before eventually putting them to the torch, as seen in the interlude *The March of the Burning Sky*.
** Kell even "makes an example" out of the surviving warriors by ''[[CruelAndUnusualDeath crucifying]]'' them in the remains of their homes. ''Yikes...''
** Kell even "makes an example" out of the surviving warriors by ''[[CruelAndUnusualDeath crucifying]]'' them in the remains of their homes. ''Yikes...''
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* RapePillageAndBurn: Kell Rhavenfell's default tactics when dealing with the Rabbit tribes is to raid their villages for slaves while murdering all those who resist before eventually putting them to the torch, as seen in the interlude *The March of the Burning Sky*.
**Sky*. Kell even "makes an example" out of the surviving warriors by ''[[CruelAndUnusualDeath crucifying]]'' them in the remains of their homes. ''Yikes...''
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--> '''Kytheus''': What’s going on?! Why is mom screaming? Is she hurt?
--> '''Kell''': It hurts, when a woman gives birth. Rennea and the midwives are taking care of her. The only thing we can do is wai—
--> '''Adrianna''': [[SugarWiki/FunnyMoments KELL, YOU SON OF A SYPHILIS INFESTED WHORE! I’M GOING TO]] '''''[[SugarWiki/FunnyMoments SODOMIZE]]''''' [[SugarWiki/FunnyMoments YOU WITH SKYPIERCER FOR THIS!]]
--> '''Kell''': All we can do is wait. *nods at his own words*
--> '''Kell''': It hurts, when a woman gives birth. Rennea and the midwives are taking care of her. The only thing we can do is wai—
--> '''Adrianna''': [[SugarWiki/FunnyMoments KELL, YOU SON OF A SYPHILIS INFESTED WHORE! I’M GOING TO]] '''''[[SugarWiki/FunnyMoments SODOMIZE]]''''' [[SugarWiki/FunnyMoments YOU WITH SKYPIERCER FOR THIS!]]
--> '''Kell''': All we can do is wait. *nods at his own words*
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--> '''Kytheus''': What’s going on?! Why is mom screaming? Is she hurt?
-->hurt?\\
'''Kell''': It hurts, when a woman gives birth. Rennea and the midwives are taking care of her. The only thing we can do iswai—
-->wai--\\
'''Adrianna''': [[SugarWiki/FunnyMoments KELL, YOU SON OF A SYPHILIS INFESTED WHORE! I’M GOING TO]] '''''[[SugarWiki/FunnyMoments SODOMIZE]]''''' [[SugarWiki/FunnyMoments YOU WITH SKYPIERCER FORTHIS!]]
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'''Kell''': All we can do is wait. *nods at his own words*
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'''Kell''': It hurts, when a woman gives birth. Rennea and the midwives are taking care of her. The only thing we can do is
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'''Adrianna''': [[SugarWiki/FunnyMoments KELL, YOU SON OF A SYPHILIS INFESTED WHORE! I’M GOING TO]] '''''[[SugarWiki/FunnyMoments SODOMIZE]]''''' [[SugarWiki/FunnyMoments YOU WITH SKYPIERCER FOR
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'''Kell''': All we can do is wait. *nods at his own words*
* {{Thunderbird}}: In the interlude "The Myth, the Legend, the King of the Sky", the titular King is an enormous thunderbird made out of storm channels, blotting out the entire sky. Kytheus compares its size to that of the earth dragon his grandfather had slain before his birth and whose bones have the ''main city of the Rhavenfell built into them''.
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* WildMagic: Magic in this universe comes from a dimension of sheer chaos, referred to as the Maelstrom. Those who use magic either naturally "dive" into the Maelstrom and simply "grab" the energy they need, or use a rigid [[RitualMagic spell structure]] to more safely tap into their magic. Considered a safer version of the Warp from ''TabletopGame/Warhammer40000''.
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* WildMagic: Magic in this universe comes from a dimension of sheer chaos, referred to as the Maelstrom. Those who use magic either naturally "dive" into the Maelstrom and simply "grab" the energy they need, or use a rigid [[RitualMagic spell structure]] to more safely tap into their magic. Considered a safer version of the Warp from ''TabletopGame/Warhammer40000''.''TabletopGame/Warhammer40000''.
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--> '''Adrianna''': [[CrowningMomentOfFunny KELL, YOU SON OF A SYPHILIS INFESTED WHORE! I’M GOING TO]] '''''[[CrowningMomentOfFunny SODOMIZE]]''''' [[CrowningMomentOfFunny YOU WITH SKYPIERCER FOR THIS!]]
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--> '''Adrianna''': [[CrowningMomentOfFunny [[SugarWiki/FunnyMoments KELL, YOU SON OF A SYPHILIS INFESTED WHORE! I’M GOING TO]] '''''[[CrowningMomentOfFunny '''''[[SugarWiki/FunnyMoments SODOMIZE]]''''' [[CrowningMomentOfFunny [[SugarWiki/FunnyMoments YOU WITH SKYPIERCER FOR THIS!]]
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* DoubleKnockout: In "Harder, Better, Faster, Stronger" Kytheus and Lyon have a practice duel in which they achieve this after breaking both their weapons.
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* DoubleKnockout: In "Harder, Better, Faster, Stronger" "Harder! Better! Faster! Stronger!" Kytheus and Lyon have a practice duel in which they achieve this after breaking both their weapons.
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*DoubleKnockout: In "Harder, Better, Faster, Stronger" Kytheus and Lyon have a practice duel in which they achieve this after breaking both their weapons.
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* GiantFlyer: The titular King of the Sky from the interlude *The Myth, The Legend, The King of The Sky* is an enormous Thunderbird composed of storm channels, blotting out the entire sky. Kytheus compares its size to that of the earth dragon his grandfather had slain before his birth, and whose bones have the ''main city of the province built into them.''
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* GiantFlyer: The titular King of the Sky from the interlude *The Myth, The Legend, The King of The Sky* is an enormous Thunderbird composed capable of storm channels, blotting out the entire sky. Kytheus compares its size to that of the earth dragon his grandfather had slain before his birth, and whose bones have the ''main city of the province built into them.''
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* DefeatMeansFriendship: In the interlude *Meet the Neighbors*, Kytheus befriends Cardin Brutus, an heir to one of the neighboring provinces, by beating him thoroughly in a spar.
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* ScoutOut: The Boy Scouts, Rhavenfell edition is created when Kytheus stumbles upon the group of boys Lyon had taken to training together, while connecting it to Valerian's idea for a training camp for the noble sons of Rhavenfell.
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* CurbStompBattle: The interlude *Banish The Darkness/Find The Light* showcases the ''absolute massacre'' of every beast of the swamp that ambushes the camp at Swampbreak by the 22nd legion when they are empowered by the power of Julianne and Hestia, through Lena's prayer. They rightfully earn the moniker of "the Champions of the Flame," empowered of the Hearth and Civilization.
** Kytheus proceeds to cleave the heads of a hydra in one swing, before killing the dark-robed figure riding it with another blow. Kytheus destroyed the boss monster and enemy leader/hero in ''two swings.''
** Kytheus proceeds to cleave the heads of a hydra in one swing, before killing the dark-robed figure riding it with another blow. Kytheus destroyed the boss monster and enemy leader/hero in ''two swings.''
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* ThePlague: The plague of Swampbreak is described as a disease that causes pus-filled boils to rise all over the bodies of the afflicted, while causing their flesh to rot. It is only the intervention of Julianne and Hestia, through a simple yet heartfelt shrine, that manages to cure the plague in a grand pulse of energy. Before the divine miracle, their faithful were barely able to make any progress at all.
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* FestivalEpisode: The Festival mini-turn, accompanied by the *The Tyrant's Fall Festival* features Kytheus and his friends enjoying the colorful celebrations following the defeat of the Hardy Beast, the Tyrant. Helen and Victoria, two of the possible marriage candidates for Kytheus, also attend the celebrations to grow more used to Rhavenfell's atmosphere and closer to Kytheus.
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* CrushBlush: When Helen Sailstar first catches sight of Kytheus in the interlude *Fascination*, she finds herself captivated by his [[WhatBeautifulEyes "''fascinating''" green eyes]], as her cheeks flush with heat. Her father has to startle her out of [[EatingTheEyeCandy staring at the rest of him.]]
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* CrushBlush: When Helen Sailstar first catches sight of Kytheus in the interlude *Fascination*, she finds herself captivated by his [[WhatBeautifulEyes "''fascinating''" "fascinating" green eyes]], eyes]] as her cheeks flush with heat. Her father has to startle her out of [[EatingTheEyeCandy staring at the rest of him.]]
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* CrushBlush: When Helen Sailstar first catches sight of Kytheus in the interlude *Fascination*, she finds herself captivated by his [[WhatBeautifulEyes "''fascinating''" green eyes]], as her cheeks flush with heat. Her father has to startle her out of [[EatingTheEyeCandy staring at the rest of him.]]
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* CryIntoChest: In the interlude *Let it All Out*, Adrianna is able to get over her personal disdain for demihumans after and allows Delilah to weep into her chest over the loss of her family. Their relationship grows considerably after this event.
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* VitriolicBestBuds: Lyon and Valerian originally despised each other, due to Lyon finding Valerian as stuck up and dishonest and Valerian thinking of Lyon as a barbaric idiot, though he held his tongue due to his respect for Kytheus. After the interlude *Vale and Ly's Excellent Adventure*, they've evolved into this trope, with Lyon insulting Valerian as usual and Valerian no longer holding back his true thoughts.
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* DeadPersonConversation: In the final interlude of the *Sons of the Storm* storyline, Rennea finds herself in a vision and has one final conversation face to face with the dead spirit of Kryton, and finally finds the strength to move on from his death and live on for herself-- just as Kryton wished.
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** In this setting, Hestia was actually created by the 'actual' "Goddess of the Hearth," Julianne. According to WordOfGod, Julianne is the only goddess known to be kind most of the time instead of acting kind when feeling like it. She is also known to be the reason why "monsters fear the light," and was one of civilization's first protectors.
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* FireOfComfort: Inspired by Greek mythology, Hestia appears in this quest as the "Great Spirit of the Hearth." As demonstrated by her followers, her powers mostly come in the form of a comforting and cleansing flame, useful for strengthening armies, healing the wounded, and curing victims of plague and sickness.
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* FlyingPostman: For the marching cohorts of the armies of Rhavenfell (and possibly the rest of the Empire), messages are carried via ravens. Couriers for actual mail in the Empire proper can be handled by anyone, but the use of Harpies, who can fly, is slowly growing more popular in Rhavenfell due to their alliance with the humans.
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* GiantFlyer: The titular King of the Sky from the interlude *The Myth, The Legend, The King of The Sky* is an enormous Thunderbird composed of storm channels, blotting out the entire sky. Kytheus compares its size to that of the earth dragon his grandfather had slain in Rhavenfell, whose bones have the ''main city of the province built into them.''
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* GiantFlyer: The titular King of the Sky from the interlude *The Myth, The Legend, The King of The Sky* is an enormous Thunderbird composed of storm channels, blotting out the entire sky. Kytheus compares its size to that of the earth dragon his grandfather had slain in Rhavenfell, before his birth, and whose bones have the ''main city of the province built into them.''
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* GiantFlyer: The titular King of the Sky from the interlude *The Myth, The Legend, The King of The Sky* is an enormous Thunderbird composed of storm channels, blotting out the entire sky. Kytheus compares its size to that of the earth dragon his grandfather had slain in Rhavenfell, whose bones have the ''main city of the province built into them.''
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* HeroicVow: Serving as his first proper [[EstablishingCharacterMoment character establishing moment]], Kytheus [[BloodOath cuts his palm with a knife]] while swearing to protect Rhavenfell at all costs, as part of a traditional ceremony. As a result of a natural 100 out of a d100, it's....very impressive for someone six years old, to say the least.
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* HeroicVow: Serving as his first proper [[EstablishingCharacterMoment character establishing moment]], Kytheus [[BloodOath cuts his palm with a knife]] while swearing to protect Rhavenfell at all costs, as part of a traditional ceremony. As a result of a natural 100 out of a d100, it's....very impressive for someone just six years old, to say the least.
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* OminousFog: During a supposedly safe patrol into the Thousand Needles, Kytheus and his friends grow uncomfortable when an ominous mist surrounds them, leading him to request more scouts to move ahead at the bemusement of the leading centurion. As it turns out, Kytheus was right to be suspicious as their legion cohort is ambushed by hundreds of Drex soldiers.
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* ScreamingBirth: The interlude *Protector's Pride* focuses on the birth of Kyte's younger twin siblings, Adrastus and Aella. In the many hours it takes, Adrianna is noted to only stop screaming and cursing at the very end of her labor.
--> '''Kytheus''': What’s going on?! Why is mom screaming? Is she hurt?
--> '''Kell''': It hurts, when a woman gives birth. Rennea and the midwives are taking care of her. The only thing we can do is wai—
--> '''Adrianna''': [[CrowningMomentOfFunny KELL, YOU SON OF A SYPHILIS INFESTED WHORE! I’M GOING TO]] '''''[[CrowningMomentOfFunny SODOMIZE]]''''' [[CrowningMomentOfFunny YOU WITH SKYPIERCER FOR THIS!]]
--> '''Kell''': All we can do is wait. *nods at his own words*
--> '''Kytheus''': What’s going on?! Why is mom screaming? Is she hurt?
--> '''Kell''': It hurts, when a woman gives birth. Rennea and the midwives are taking care of her. The only thing we can do is wai—
--> '''Adrianna''': [[CrowningMomentOfFunny KELL, YOU SON OF A SYPHILIS INFESTED WHORE! I’M GOING TO]] '''''[[CrowningMomentOfFunny SODOMIZE]]''''' [[CrowningMomentOfFunny YOU WITH SKYPIERCER FOR THIS!]]
--> '''Kell''': All we can do is wait. *nods at his own words*
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* ShrineToTheFallen: In the interlude *Til' Our Dying Breaths*, Kell leads Kytheus to a memorial of the 'Sons of the Storm', which was the group led by Kryton Westwind, the first ruler of Rhavenfell and Kytheus' fallen grandfather. Statues of each fallen member are presented in the memorial, including one of Kryton himself. A number of old armor, standards, and banners are also kept within the room.
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** Kell even "makes an example" out of the surviving warriors by ''crucifying'' them. ''Yikes...''
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* RapePillageAndBurn: Kell Rhavenfell's default tactics when dealing with the Rabbit tribes is to raid their villages for slaves while murdering all those who resist before eventually putting them to the torch, as seen in the interlude *The March of the Burning Sky
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* RapePillageAndBurn: Kell Rhavenfell's default tactics when dealing with the Rabbit tribes is to raid their villages for slaves while murdering all those who resist before eventually putting them to the torch, as seen in the interlude *The March of the Burning Sky
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** Kell even "makes an example" out of the surviving warriors by ''crucifying'' them. ''Yikes...''
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* HeroicVow: Serving as his first proper [[EstablishingCharacterMoment character establishing moment]], Kytheus [[BloodOath cuts his palm with a knife]] while swearing to protect Rhavenfell at all costs, as part of a traditional ceremony. As a result of a natural 100 out of a d100, it's....very impressive for someone six years old, to say the least.
--> “I, Kytheus Rhavenfell, Swear upon Kythuna, all the gods, my blood, my father’s blood, and all our ancestor’s blood to safeguard Rhavenfell and its people against all that would wish it harm! I swear to hold the line! '''Even if my bones break! Even if I have to''' '''''burn to ashes!''''' '''Even if my soul''' '''''shatters!''''' '''I swear to you, I swear to all of you! Rhavenfell will endure!”'''
** This causes the GM [[GenreShift to change his plans for the series]] to become [[LighterAndSofter brighter and more optimistic]] than originally intended, and thus altered his plans for the roleplay to resemble a HighFantasy instead of a DarkFantasy.
--> “I, Kytheus Rhavenfell, Swear upon Kythuna, all the gods, my blood, my father’s blood, and all our ancestor’s blood to safeguard Rhavenfell and its people against all that would wish it harm! I swear to hold the line! '''Even if my bones break! Even if I have to''' '''''burn to ashes!''''' '''Even if my soul''' '''''shatters!''''' '''I swear to you, I swear to all of you! Rhavenfell will endure!”'''
** This causes the GM [[GenreShift to change his plans for the series]] to become [[LighterAndSofter brighter and more optimistic]] than originally intended, and thus altered his plans for the roleplay to resemble a HighFantasy instead of a DarkFantasy.
