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* TitleDrop: In Chapter 7.
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* GenderNeutralWriting: Seeing as the series' main character is non-binary, there's a lot of this.
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IUEO now
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* AwesomeMcCoolname: Zeb's full name is Zebediah Cook Bacon.
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[[caption-width-right:350:When "space opera" meets "soap opera." (Icon by April.)]]
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[[caption-width-right:350:When "space opera" meets "soap opera." (Icon by April.Leah.)]]
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[[SelfDemonstrating '''Initializing translation sequence...''']]
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'''Initializing translation sequence...'''
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* WildTeenParty: Benji's party, especially as featured in Chapter 5.
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* WildTeenParty: Introduced though downplayed with Benji's party, especially as featured party in Chapter 5.Act 1, and played fully straight with Amaya's party in Act 3.
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* RotatingProtagonist: The story's focus switches from Tav during Acts 1 and 2 to [[spoiler:Jaden]] in Act 3.
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* TheHedonist: The majority of the cast is this to some degree, which is occasionally [[PlayedForDrama]].
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* TheHedonist: The majority of the cast is this to some degree, which is occasionally [[PlayedForDrama]].PlayedForDrama.
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* TheHedonist: The majority of the cast is this to some degree, which is occasionally [[PlayedForDrama]].
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Hosted on Discord, a text-based social media platform, the story allows its readers to make various choices that drive the plot forward. As of 2019, it is on the second chapter of its second act.
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Hosted on Discord, a text-based social media platform, the story allows its readers to make various choices that drive the plot forward. As of 2019, it is on the second third chapter of its second act.
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* [[spoiler:EarthAllAlong]]: [[spoiler:As revealed in Act 2, Chapter 2, the far-off alien planet of Paucady, where Tav is from, is actually just the city of Chicago... 6,000 years in the future.]]
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* PaintingTheMedium: Utilized frequently. Prominent examples is Chico, whose dialogue is written [[AllLowercaseLetters entirely in lowercase]], and eventually Berria, who [[spoiler:controls Tav's mind by splicing internal dialogue into the [[AudienceParticipation audience voting]] channels around the start of Act 2.]]
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* PaintingTheMedium: Utilized frequently. Prominent examples is include Chico, whose dialogue is written [[AllLowercaseLetters entirely in lowercase]], and eventually Berria, who [[spoiler:controls Tav's mind by splicing internal dialogue into the [[AudienceParticipation audience voting]] channels voting channels]] around the start of Act 2.]]
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* PaintingTheMedium: Utilized frequently. Prominent examples is Chico, whose dialogue is written [[AllLowercaseLetters entirely in lowercase]], and eventually Berria, who [[spoiler:controls Tav's mind by splicing internal dialogue into the [[AudienceParticipation audience voting]] channels around the start of Act 2.]]
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Hosted on Discord, a text-based social media platform, the story allows its readers to make various choices that drive the plot forward. As of 2019, it is on the first chapter of its second act.
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Hosted on Discord, a text-based social media platform, the story allows its readers to make various choices that drive the plot forward. As of 2019, it is on the first second chapter of its second act.
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* NextSundayAD: Act 1 begins in early September of 2019; the series began in June of the same year.
