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Aki has been behaving odd lately. One day while showing her friends some recent pictures to her friends he comes by to request that she not bring their date images to school again. He also turns down her request for a date to an upcoming movie premiere she was invited to, claiming to have last-minute practice -something he has been saying frequently- and he takes off. She recalls how close they used to be six months ago when they hooked up, and in class she is mentions this to her friends. They assure her that it's probably due to her birthday being the next day, he might be planning a surprise. Finding this explanation reasonable, she drops the subject.
It's then the group spot a wrapped package addressed to Lala that contains a marionette. Her friends are concerned as two nearby classmates recognize it as something recently sold on an online auction they saw; it's rumored to control the person the current owner loves the most. Lala is doubtful, and believing she has Aki's unconditional love already she tosses it to one of her friends -Junko- and teasingly reminds her that she's the only one without a boyfriend.
After school Lala and Aki hang out at a cafe, where Lala informs him of what happened. When he suggests she is overthinking it as she wonders if she has a stalker, he attempts to say something else but she interrupts to ask if he noticed her new lip gloss yet. He briskly excuses himself to the restroom rather than answer, leaving her concerned until seeing that he left behind his phone. She finds a text from ''Junko'', asking him what side dish he would like for lunch. Barely given time to register this, the distraught Lala throws it back into his bag before he returns. Is this Junko the same one she knows?
Lala's thoughts remain preoccupied by that text the following day when her friends give her their presents and warm wishes. She can't think it's possible because of how plain Junko is, she also has no dating experience. But at that moment she overhears someone mention that a couple of boys asked for Junko's phone number recently, and recalls spotting her look up bento recipes recently. She might have a boyfriend after all. Seeing Aki and Junko's interact causes Lala further anxiety, and by the time class resumes she comes to the decision to break up with Aki and find someone better- but she likes to be the envy of everyone, and if they found out he cheated on her things would only get worse.
It's then the group spot a wrapped package addressed to Lala that contains a marionette. Her friends are concerned as two nearby classmates recognize it as something recently sold on an online auction they saw; it's rumored to control the person the current owner loves the most. Lala is doubtful, and believing she has Aki's unconditional love already she tosses it to one of her friends -Junko- and teasingly reminds her that she's the only one without a boyfriend.
After school Lala and Aki hang out at a cafe, where Lala informs him of what happened. When he suggests she is overthinking it as she wonders if she has a stalker, he attempts to say something else but she interrupts to ask if he noticed her new lip gloss yet. He briskly excuses himself to the restroom rather than answer, leaving her concerned until seeing that he left behind his phone. She finds a text from ''Junko'', asking him what side dish he would like for lunch. Barely given time to register this, the distraught Lala throws it back into his bag before he returns. Is this Junko the same one she knows?
Lala's thoughts remain preoccupied by that text the following day when her friends give her their presents and warm wishes. She can't think it's possible because of how plain Junko is, she also has no dating experience. But at that moment she overhears someone mention that a couple of boys asked for Junko's phone number recently, and recalls spotting her look up bento recipes recently. She might have a boyfriend after all. Seeing Aki and Junko's interact causes Lala further anxiety, and by the time class resumes she comes to the decision to break up with Aki and find someone better- but she likes to be the envy of everyone, and if they found out he cheated on her things would only get worse.
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Aki has been behaving odd lately. One day while showing her friends some recent pictures to her friends of their recent date, he comes by and asks her to request that she not bring their date images to school again. stop doing that. He also turns down her request for a date to an upcoming movie premiere she was invited to, claiming to have last-minute practice -something he has practice. He's been saying frequently- and he takes off. She recalls how this a lot lately, which she fins unusual. They were close they used to be six months ago when they hooked up, and in class she is mentions this to her friends. They up. Her friends assure her that it's probably due to her birthday being the next day, he might be planning a surprise. Finding this explanation reasonable, she drops the subject.
It's then the group spot a wrapped package addressed to Lala that contains a marionette. Her friends are concerned as two nearby classmates recognize it as something recently sold on an online auction theysaw; saw: it's rumored to control the person the current owner loves the most. Lala is doubtful, and believing she has Aki's unconditional love already she tosses it to one of her friends -Junko- and teasingly reminds her that she's the only one without a boyfriend.
After school Lala and Aki hang out at acafe, where cafe. Lala informs him of what happened. When happened but he suggests she is brushes it off as her overthinking it as when she wonders if she has a stalker, he attempts stalker. Aki is about to say something else but she when Lala interrupts to ask if he noticed her new lip gloss yet. gloss. He briskly excuses himself to the restroom rather than answer, leaving her concerned until and Lala uses this as a chance to look through his phone seeing that as he left behind his phone. it behind. She finds is shocked to find a text from ''Junko'', Junko, asking him what side dish he would like for lunch. Barely given time to register this, the distraught Lala throws it back into his bag before he returns. Is this Junko the same one she knows? \n\n
Lala's thoughts remain preoccupied by that text the following day when her friends give her their presents and warm wishes. Shecan't think it's possible finds it hard to believe because of how plain Junko is, is so plain, and she also has no lacks dating experience. But at that moment she overhears someone mention that a couple of boys asked for Junko's phone number recently, and recalls spotting her look up bento recipes recently. She might have a boyfriend after all. the other day. Seeing Aki and Junko's Junko interact causes Lala further anxiety, and by the time class resumes she comes to the decision to break up with Aki and find someone better- but better. But she isn't sure she can, she likes to be the envy of everyone, everyone too, and if they found out he cheated on her things would only get worse.
It's then the group spot a wrapped package addressed to Lala that contains a marionette. Her friends are concerned as two nearby classmates recognize it as something recently sold on an online auction they
After school Lala and Aki hang out at a
Lala's thoughts remain preoccupied by that text the following day when her friends give her their presents and warm wishes. She
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It's then Lala spots the marionette sticking out of her bag, and during break she swipes it and retreats to the girls restroom. She recalls what she was told and puts a strand of Aki's hair into the marionette, along with one of hers and rejoins her friends while holding it behind her back. She begins to move it and mentally requesting that Aki ignores Junko, and to her delight it works when he turns from her to head to practice. Junko is shocked, but she approaches Lala to speak to her, only for Lala to trail behind her boyfriend and offer to make him a bento for his upcoming game.
Seeing Junko's expression eases her mood, but Lala remains vengeful. Throughout the day she and Aki cuddle up together and act very loving, flustering her friends as they observe them and remark on how unusual it is. Seeing how angry it makes Junko -enough that she storms off- satisfies Lala, to the point she regrets not using it sooner.
After Aki requests that Lala wait for him until club ends, her friends gush over how romantic they were today. Lala remains in high spirits as she decides to keep going, she's not had enough yet. She sits down and takes out the marionette while wondering what to make Aki do first. She wants him to focus on club less and her more, he should be pampering her and every need. He should take her out on dates more often, buy her things, and of course get down on his knees to beg for forgiveness.
She decides to start there and poses the marionette, but when Aki doesn't copy it she expresses confusion before collapsing with frustration. Junko arrives to see her and asks if they can talk in private, and they head to the girls restroom. Junko hesitates to start until Lala confronts her with what she discovered, and Junko begins to cry while profusely apologizing for betraying her trust. She explains that she has had feelings for Aki since they were first-years, and how often they used to hang out and talk about things. She knew she would have to move on because he's dating Lala, but she can't help feeling the way she does. She asks for her forgiveness, and Lala coldly informs Junko that Aki could only ever like her, so she needs to stop.
Aki joins the girls much to Lala's joy, until he takes Junko's side and apologizes for not coming clean sooner. He explains that this is why he asked her to wait earlier, because he was going to bring this up. He realized how much he likes Junko in the time they spent together, and she likes him back. Lala insists that she also likes Aki; but he cuts her off by saying he isn't her puppet. She ''never'' loved him, only the popularity that came from it. She only loves herself.
As the duo leave Lala behind, she angrily yanks the marionette from her bag and proclaims she will set Aki free if that is what he really wants. She violently mangles the marionette and throws it out of a nearby window, just in time for her to notice her arm is hurting. It has become bloody and a bruise is forming.
Outside, as some classmates wonder where Lala is they are frightened hearing a scream erupt from the school. They run to he location to find Lala, battered and bloody on the ground; her body posed similarly to the Marionette. Unable to speak, Lala stares at it and slowly comes to a realization. The pain she thought she was causing only happened to her. Every demand she made to Aki was indirectly done through her, such as ignoring Junko after she told him to, and she was the one initiating their romantic mood. When she tried to make him kneel down, it was her who was on the floor.
Seeing Junko's expression eases her mood, but Lala remains vengeful. Throughout the day she and Aki cuddle up together and act very loving, flustering her friends as they observe them and remark on how unusual it is. Seeing how angry it makes Junko -enough that she storms off- satisfies Lala, to the point she regrets not using it sooner.
After Aki requests that Lala wait for him until club ends, her friends gush over how romantic they were today. Lala remains in high spirits as she decides to keep going, she's not had enough yet. She sits down and takes out the marionette while wondering what to make Aki do first. She wants him to focus on club less and her more, he should be pampering her and every need. He should take her out on dates more often, buy her things, and of course get down on his knees to beg for forgiveness.
She decides to start there and poses the marionette, but when Aki doesn't copy it she expresses confusion before collapsing with frustration. Junko arrives to see her and asks if they can talk in private, and they head to the girls restroom. Junko hesitates to start until Lala confronts her with what she discovered, and Junko begins to cry while profusely apologizing for betraying her trust. She explains that she has had feelings for Aki since they were first-years, and how often they used to hang out and talk about things. She knew she would have to move on because he's dating Lala, but she can't help feeling the way she does. She asks for her forgiveness, and Lala coldly informs Junko that Aki could only ever like her, so she needs to stop.
Aki joins the girls much to Lala's joy, until he takes Junko's side and apologizes for not coming clean sooner. He explains that this is why he asked her to wait earlier, because he was going to bring this up. He realized how much he likes Junko in the time they spent together, and she likes him back. Lala insists that she also likes Aki; but he cuts her off by saying he isn't her puppet. She ''never'' loved him, only the popularity that came from it. She only loves herself.
As the duo leave Lala behind, she angrily yanks the marionette from her bag and proclaims she will set Aki free if that is what he really wants. She violently mangles the marionette and throws it out of a nearby window, just in time for her to notice her arm is hurting. It has become bloody and a bruise is forming.
Outside, as some classmates wonder where Lala is they are frightened hearing a scream erupt from the school. They run to he location to find Lala, battered and bloody on the ground; her body posed similarly to the Marionette. Unable to speak, Lala stares at it and slowly comes to a realization. The pain she thought she was causing only happened to her. Every demand she made to Aki was indirectly done through her, such as ignoring Junko after she told him to, and she was the one initiating their romantic mood. When she tried to make him kneel down, it was her who was on the floor.
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It's then Lala spots the marionette sticking out of her bag, and during she waits until break she swipes to swipe it and retreats to hide in the girls restroom. She recalls what she was told and puts a strand of Aki's hair into from both herself and Aki inside of the marionette, along with one of hers marionette and rejoins her friends while holding friends, keeping it behind her back. She begins to move moves it and mentally requesting that tells Aki ignores to ignore Junko, and to her delight it works when he turns from her to head to practice. Junko is shocked, but she approaches Lala to speak to her, only for Lala to trail behind her boyfriend and offer to make him a bento for his upcoming game.
SeeingJunko's expression eases how upset Junko looks makes Lala happy but she remains spiteful until she angers Junko by cuddling up with Aki and acting very lovingly. Aki then requests Lala wait for him until after club and her mood, but friends gush over how romantic they were today. Lala remains vengeful. Throughout in high spirits as she decides to keep going, she's not had enough yet.
She sits down and takes out theday marionette while wondering what to make Aki do first. She wants him to focus on club less and her more, he should be pampering her and tend to every need she has, take her on dates more often, buy her things, and of course get down on his knees to beg for forgiveness. Lala decides to start there and poses the marionette, but for some reason Aki cuddle up together and act very loving, flustering her friends as they observe them and remark on how unusual it is. Seeing how angry it makes doesn't copy it. She collapses in frustration when Junko -enough sees her and asks that she storms off- satisfies Lala, to the point she regrets not using it sooner.they speak in private.
After Aki requests that Lala wait for him until club ends, her friends gush over how romantic they were today. Lala remains in high spirits as she decides to keep going, she's not had enough yet. She sits down and takes out the marionette while wondering what to make Aki do first. She wants him to focus on club less and her more, he should be pampering her and every need. He should take her out on dates more often, buy her things, and of course get down on his knees to beg for forgiveness.
She decides to start there and poses the marionette, but when Aki doesn't copy it she expresses confusion before collapsing with frustration. Junko arrives to see her and asks if they can talk in private, and theyThey head to the girls restroom. restroom and Junko hesitates to start until Lala confronts her with what she discovered, and discovered. This causes Junko begins to cry while as she profusely apologizing apologizes for betraying her trust. She explains that she has trust, she's had feelings for Aki since they were first-years, and how often they used to hang out and talk about things. She knew she would have to move on because he's dating Lala, but she can't help feeling the way she does. She asks for her forgiveness, and Lala coldly informs Junko that Aki could only ever like her, so she needs to stop. \n\n Aki joins the girls much to Lala's joy, until just then, but Lala is frustrate when he takes Junko's side and side. He apologizes for not coming clean sooner. He explains that sooner, and this is was why he asked her to wait earlier, because he was going to bring this up. He realized how much he likes Junko in the time they spent together, and she likes him back. Lala insists that she also likes Aki; but he cuts her off by saying he isn't her puppet. She ''never'' loved him, only the popularity that came from it. She only loves herself.
As the The duo leave Lala behind, behind and she angrily yanks the marionette from her bag and proclaims bag. If he wants to be free that badly then she will set Aki free if that is what he really wants.se him free. She violently mangles the marionette and throws it out of a nearby window, just in time for her to notice her arm is hurting. It has become bloody and a bruise is forming.
Outside, as some classmates wonder where Lala isthey are frightened hearing when a frightening scream erupt erupts from the school. They run to he location to find Lala, battered and bloody on the ground; her body posed similarly to the Marionette. Unable to speak, Lala stares at it and slowly comes to a realization. The as she realizes the pain she thought she was causing to others only happened to her. Every demand she made to Aki was indirectly done through her, such as ignoring Junko after she told him to, and she was the one initiating their romantic mood. When she tried to make him kneel down, it was her who was on the floor.
Seeing
She sits down and takes out the
She decides to start there and poses the marionette, but when Aki doesn't copy it she expresses confusion before collapsing with frustration. Junko arrives to see her and asks if they can talk in private, and they
Outside, as some classmates wonder where Lala is
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She only loved herself.
She was the marionette.
As Lala succumbs to her injuries, Junko and Aki are some distance away from school as Junko mumbles to herself that everything went the way she expected. She is overjoyed, and Aki seems to notice but Junko coyly insists it's nothing. She's just happy that they can finally be together in the open now, happily clinging onto his arm. Aki looks at her with concern and seems to realize something, but he says nothing as they continue on.
She was the marionette.
As Lala succumbs to her injuries, Junko and Aki are some distance away from school as Junko mumbles to herself that everything went the way she expected. She is overjoyed, and Aki seems to notice but Junko coyly insists it's nothing. She's just happy that they can finally be together in the open now, happily clinging onto his arm. Aki looks at her with concern and seems to realize something, but he says nothing as they continue on.
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She only loved herself.herself, so the marionette controlled her.
She was the marionette.
As Lala succumbs to her injuries, Junko and Aki are some distance away from school as school. Junko mumbles to herself that everything went the way she expected. She is overjoyed, expected and she is delighted. Aki seems to notice but Junko coyly insists it's nothing. She's just nothing; she is happy that they can finally be together in the open now, now. She happily clinging clings onto his arm. arm, causing Aki looks at her with concern and seems to realize something, but something. But he says nothing as they continue on.
decides not to say anything.
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: As Lala attempts to control Aki, she indirectly does what she requests. For example, she wanted him to ignore Junko and he abruptly walks away from her. Junko spots Lala and attempts to talk to her but Lala leaves with Aki.
* HereWeGoAgain: Aki is left with another super possessive girlfriend who greatly cares about her own happiness at the end of the story.
* HorrorDoesntSettleForSimpleTuesday: Lala's birthday was celebrated for a majority of the story.
* GoryDiscretionShot: Lala isn't shown falling from the window or hitting the ground, the scene cuts away to some students who hear her scream. The scene then returns to a bloodied and badly injured Lala on the ground.
* HereWeGoAgain: Aki is left with another super possessive girlfriend who greatly cares about her own happiness at the end of the story.
* HorrorDoesntSettleForSimpleTuesday: Lala's birthday was celebrated for a majority of the story.
* GoryDiscretionShot: Lala isn't shown falling from the window or hitting the ground, the scene cuts away to some students who hear her scream. The scene then returns to a bloodied and badly injured Lala on the ground.
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: As Lala attempts to control Aki, she indirectly does what she requests. For example, she wanted him to ignore Junko and he abruptly walks away from her. She ignored Junko spots Lala and attempts left to talk to her but Lala leaves with Aki.
follow Aki right after.
* HereWeGoAgain: Aki is left with another super possessive girlfriend who greatly cares about her ownhappiness at the end of the story.happiness.
* HorrorDoesntSettleForSimpleTuesday: Lala's birthdaywas celebrated for a majority of took place during the story.
story.
* GoryDiscretionShot: Lala isn't shown falling from the window or hitting the ground, the scene cuts away to some students who hear herscream. The scene then scream and returns to a bloodied and badly injured Lala on the ground. as she lays there.
* HereWeGoAgain: Aki is left with another super possessive girlfriend who greatly cares about her own
* HorrorDoesntSettleForSimpleTuesday: Lala's birthday
* GoryDiscretionShot: Lala isn't shown falling from the window or hitting the ground, the scene cuts away to some students who hear her
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* KarmaHoudini: Junko caused Lala to be severely hurt and possibly killed, but nothing happens to her.
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* KarmaHoudini: Junko caused Lala to be severely hurt and possibly killed, die, but nothing happens to her.
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* MurderTheHypotenuse: Junko got the marionette for this, stating at the end of the story that she and Aki can openly date with Lala out of the way.
* SecretlySelfish: Both Lala and Junko, girls who openly [[BitchInSheepsClothing look harmless and innocent but only care about their own wants]].
* TheFakeCutie: Lala when she isn't putting on the "adorable girlfriend" routine.
* VoodooDoll: The Marionette acts as one, requiring the owners love for their target to make it work. Lala was also told to put a lock of Aki's hair in it to control him, but this didn't actually do anything.
* SecretlySelfish: Both Lala and Junko, girls who openly [[BitchInSheepsClothing look harmless and innocent but only care about their own wants]].
* TheFakeCutie: Lala when she isn't putting on the "adorable girlfriend" routine.
* VoodooDoll: The Marionette acts as one, requiring the owners love for their target to make it work. Lala was also told to put a lock of Aki's hair in it to control him, but this didn't actually do anything.
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* MurderTheHypotenuse: Junko got the marionette for this, stating Junko's behavior at the end of the story implies that she bought the marionette for Lala to get rid of her.
* SecretlySelfish: Both Lala andAki can Junko, girls who openly date with Lala out of [[BitchInSheepsClothing look harmless and innocent but only care about themselves]].
* TheFakeCutie: Lala, who puts on theway."adorable girlfriend" routine.
* SecretlySelfish: Both Lala and Junko, girls who openly [[BitchInSheepsClothing look harmless and innocent but only care about their own wants]].
* TheFakeCutie: Lala when she isn't putting on the "adorable girlfriend" routine.
* VoodooDoll: The Marionette acts as one, requiring the owners love for their target -and hair- to make it work. Lala was also told to put a lock of Aki's hair in it to control him, but this didn't actually do anything. work.
* SecretlySelfish: Both Lala and
* TheFakeCutie: Lala, who puts on the
* TheFakeCutie: Lala when she isn't putting on the "adorable girlfriend" routine.
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* {{Yandere}}: Junko is a downplayed version. She set everything up to [[WithFriendsLikeThese get rid of Lala]] one way or the other.
* YourCheatingHeart: Junko and Aki began a relationship behind Lala's back, and it was what spurned her into using the marionette. Aki did seem remorseful but she made it difficult and he never got the chance to say anything, until he lost his patience with her.
* YourCheatingHeart: Junko and Aki began a relationship behind Lala's back, and it was what spurned her into using the marionette. Aki did seem remorseful but she made it difficult and he never got the chance to say anything, until he lost his patience with her.
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* {{Yandere}}: Junko is a downplayed version. She set everything up to [[WithFriendsLikeThese get rid of Lala]] one way or the other. \n* YourCheatingHeart: Junko and Aki began a relationship behind Lala's back, and it was what spurned her into using the marionette. Aki did seem remorseful but she made it difficult and he never got the chance to say anything, until he lost his patience with her.
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Lala Nishino has the perfect life; her beauty is recognized by talent scouts and magazines, she has many admirers, and she has a handsome, talented boyfriend whose a member of the basketball team and is very well-liked.
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Lala Nishino has the perfect life; her beauty is recognized by talent scouts and magazines, she has many admirers, and she has a handsome, talented boyfriend whose a member of the basketball team and is very well-liked.well liked.
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One day, Lala notices how oddly Aki is behaving after he asks her not to bring the picture from their date to school again, then turns down her request for a date at the movie she was invited to see. He claims he has last-minute practice -something that has been happening frequently- and he takes off. She recalls how close they used to be six months ago when they hooked up, and in class she is quick to bring this up with her friends. They don't seem to be worried, reasoning that because her birthday is the next day he is probably planning a surprise. Finding this explanation reasonable, she drops the subject.
Their attention shifts to the wrapped package containing a marionette that someone left for Lala. Her friends are concerned as two nearby classmates recognize it as something recently sold on an online auction they saw; it's rumored to control the person the current owner loves the most. Lala is doubtful, and believing she has Aki's unconditional love already she tosses it to Junko -one of her friends- and teasingly points out how she is the only one within the group without a boyfriend.
After school Lala and Aki hang out at a cafe, where Lala wastes no time informing him of what happened. He assures her that she's probably overthinking it when she wonders if it was a gift from a stalker, and he attempts to say something else but she interrupts to playfully ask him if he noticed her change in lip gloss. But he briskly excuses himself to the restroom rather than answer, leaving her concerned until noticing his phone sitting nearby. She picks it up and checks to see if he has any texts and finds one from ''Junko'', asking him what side dish he would like for lunch.
She is given little time to register this and distraught she throws it back into his bag before he returns. He notices her uneasiness but she claims to be fine, wondering if this is the same Junko as her friend.
Lala's thoughts remain preoccupied with concern the following day when her friends give her their presents and warm wishes. She continues to think about the text and it's meaning, but she can't see how it would be possible. Not only is Junko really plain looking, but she has no dating experience. But she overhears someone mention that a couple of boys asked for Junko's phone number, and she did see her look up bento recipes recently; so it is possible she got a boyfriend.
Seeing how the two interact near each other makes Lala resume worrying, and throughout class she reasons that breaking up with Aki to find someone better would be the best solution. But she enjoys being the envy of everyone, and letting them discover he was cheating on her would only worsen things.
If only she could make Junko go away...
It's then Lala spots the marionette sticking out of her bag, and during break she swipes it and retreats to the girls restroom. She recalls what she was told and puts a strand of Aki's hair into the marionette, along with one of hers and rejoins her friends while holding it behind her back. She begins to move it while mentally requesting that Aki ignores Junko, and to her delight it works when he turns away to head to practice. Junko seems concerned and she spots Lala, but just as she tries to speak to her, Lala trails behind her boyfriend and offers to make him a bento for his upcoming game soon.
Seeing Junko's expression eases her mood, but Lala refuses to quit now. Throughout the day she and Aki cuddle up together and act very loving, flustering her friends as they observe them and remark on how unusual it is. Lala smirks when she notices Junko become enraged and storms off, leaving her to regret not using the marionette sooner.
It's then Aki asks that Lala wait for him until club ends. She agrees as her friends gush over their romantic behavior while she decides that she has to keep going until she gets her revenge. After everyone else leaves Lala pulls out the marionette and wonders what to make Aki do first; she wants him to stop focusing on club so much and pamper her and every need she could have, take her out on dates, buy her things- and of course get down on his knees to beg for forgiveness.
Deciding to start there, Lala poses the marionette but to her confusion she notices Aki seems unaffected. She collapses in frustration, just as Junko arrives to see her and asks if they can talk in private. Lala agrees and they head into the nearby room, where Junko hesitates until Lala confronts her with what she discovered, causing Junko to begin crying. She apologizes for betraying her trust and explains that she has had feelings for Aki since they were first-years. They would often hang out and she would give him advice whenever he got stressed out over club. She knows that because of him dating Lala she had to move on, but she can't help how she feels.
She asks for Lala to forgive her, and Lala remains silent or a moment before briskly informing Junko that Aki could only ever like her, so she needs to stop. It's then Aki shows up much to her joy- until he approaches Junko. He apologizes for not coming clean sooner and explains that when he asked her to wait earlier it was to bring this up. He realized how much he likes Junko in the time they spent together, and she likes him back. Lala insists that she also likes Aki though- only for him to bluntly point out that he isn't her puppet, and she ''never'' loved him, only herself.
Lala is stunned by these words as the duo leave the room. Enraged, Lala yanks the marionette from her bag while proclaiming she will set Aki free if he wants that so badly. She mangles the marionette violently and throws it out of the nearby window; but a moment later she notices her arm is hurting. She is shocked to see it has become battered and bloody.
Outside, as some classmates wonder where Lala is they are frightened when they hear her scream and rush towards the location to find her on the ground, broken and covered in blood with her body posed similar to the marionette. Unable to speak, Lala stares at the marionette and she slowly begins to realize that the pain she caused only happened to her. Every demand she made to Aki was done by her; she ignored Junko, and she was the one enforcing him to act lovingly in class, and when she made him get on the floor it was her who fell down.
Lala slowly reaches over and opens the head of the marionette to find the hair strands she inserted. She realizes Aki was right, in that it was never about him; she only loved herself...
This marionette was herself.
As Lala slowly loses consciousness, Junko and Aki are some distance away from school and Junko mumbles to herself that Lala did just as expected. She is very happy, but when Aki asks if she said something Junko quickly insists it was nothing. She's just happy that they can finally be together in the open now, happily clinging onto his arm. Aki looks at her with concern, as if realizing something before they continue to head down the path.
Their attention shifts to the wrapped package containing a marionette that someone left for Lala. Her friends are concerned as two nearby classmates recognize it as something recently sold on an online auction they saw; it's rumored to control the person the current owner loves the most. Lala is doubtful, and believing she has Aki's unconditional love already she tosses it to Junko -one of her friends- and teasingly points out how she is the only one within the group without a boyfriend.
After school Lala and Aki hang out at a cafe, where Lala wastes no time informing him of what happened. He assures her that she's probably overthinking it when she wonders if it was a gift from a stalker, and he attempts to say something else but she interrupts to playfully ask him if he noticed her change in lip gloss. But he briskly excuses himself to the restroom rather than answer, leaving her concerned until noticing his phone sitting nearby. She picks it up and checks to see if he has any texts and finds one from ''Junko'', asking him what side dish he would like for lunch.
She is given little time to register this and distraught she throws it back into his bag before he returns. He notices her uneasiness but she claims to be fine, wondering if this is the same Junko as her friend.
Lala's thoughts remain preoccupied with concern the following day when her friends give her their presents and warm wishes. She continues to think about the text and it's meaning, but she can't see how it would be possible. Not only is Junko really plain looking, but she has no dating experience. But she overhears someone mention that a couple of boys asked for Junko's phone number, and she did see her look up bento recipes recently; so it is possible she got a boyfriend.
Seeing how the two interact near each other makes Lala resume worrying, and throughout class she reasons that breaking up with Aki to find someone better would be the best solution. But she enjoys being the envy of everyone, and letting them discover he was cheating on her would only worsen things.
If only she could make Junko go away...
It's then Lala spots the marionette sticking out of her bag, and during break she swipes it and retreats to the girls restroom. She recalls what she was told and puts a strand of Aki's hair into the marionette, along with one of hers and rejoins her friends while holding it behind her back. She begins to move it while mentally requesting that Aki ignores Junko, and to her delight it works when he turns away to head to practice. Junko seems concerned and she spots Lala, but just as she tries to speak to her, Lala trails behind her boyfriend and offers to make him a bento for his upcoming game soon.
Seeing Junko's expression eases her mood, but Lala refuses to quit now. Throughout the day she and Aki cuddle up together and act very loving, flustering her friends as they observe them and remark on how unusual it is. Lala smirks when she notices Junko become enraged and storms off, leaving her to regret not using the marionette sooner.
It's then Aki asks that Lala wait for him until club ends. She agrees as her friends gush over their romantic behavior while she decides that she has to keep going until she gets her revenge. After everyone else leaves Lala pulls out the marionette and wonders what to make Aki do first; she wants him to stop focusing on club so much and pamper her and every need she could have, take her out on dates, buy her things- and of course get down on his knees to beg for forgiveness.
Deciding to start there, Lala poses the marionette but to her confusion she notices Aki seems unaffected. She collapses in frustration, just as Junko arrives to see her and asks if they can talk in private. Lala agrees and they head into the nearby room, where Junko hesitates until Lala confronts her with what she discovered, causing Junko to begin crying. She apologizes for betraying her trust and explains that she has had feelings for Aki since they were first-years. They would often hang out and she would give him advice whenever he got stressed out over club. She knows that because of him dating Lala she had to move on, but she can't help how she feels.
She asks for Lala to forgive her, and Lala remains silent or a moment before briskly informing Junko that Aki could only ever like her, so she needs to stop. It's then Aki shows up much to her joy- until he approaches Junko. He apologizes for not coming clean sooner and explains that when he asked her to wait earlier it was to bring this up. He realized how much he likes Junko in the time they spent together, and she likes him back. Lala insists that she also likes Aki though- only for him to bluntly point out that he isn't her puppet, and she ''never'' loved him, only herself.
Lala is stunned by these words as the duo leave the room. Enraged, Lala yanks the marionette from her bag while proclaiming she will set Aki free if he wants that so badly. She mangles the marionette violently and throws it out of the nearby window; but a moment later she notices her arm is hurting. She is shocked to see it has become battered and bloody.
Outside, as some classmates wonder where Lala is they are frightened when they hear her scream and rush towards the location to find her on the ground, broken and covered in blood with her body posed similar to the marionette. Unable to speak, Lala stares at the marionette and she slowly begins to realize that the pain she caused only happened to her. Every demand she made to Aki was done by her; she ignored Junko, and she was the one enforcing him to act lovingly in class, and when she made him get on the floor it was her who fell down.
Lala slowly reaches over and opens the head of the marionette to find the hair strands she inserted. She realizes Aki was right, in that it was never about him; she only loved herself...
This marionette was herself.
As Lala slowly loses consciousness, Junko and Aki are some distance away from school and Junko mumbles to herself that Lala did just as expected. She is very happy, but when Aki asks if she said something Junko quickly insists it was nothing. She's just happy that they can finally be together in the open now, happily clinging onto his arm. Aki looks at her with concern, as if realizing something before they continue to head down the path.
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After school Lala and Aki hang out at a cafe, where Lala
Lala's thoughts remain preoccupied by that text the following day when her friends give her their presents and warm wishes. She can't think it's possible because of how plain Junko is, she also has no dating experience. But at that moment she overhears someone mention that a couple of boys asked for Junko's phone number recently, and recalls spotting her look up bento recipes recently. She might have a boyfriend after all. Seeing Aki and Junko's interact causes Lala further anxiety, and by the time class resumes she comes to the decision to break up with Aki and find someone better- but she likes to be the envy of everyone, and if they found out he cheated on her things would only get worse.
Lala's thoughts remain preoccupied with concern the following day when her friends give her their presents and warm wishes. She continues to think about the text and it's meaning, but she can't see how it would be possible. Not only is Junko really plain looking, but she has no dating experience. But she overhears someone mention that a couple of boys asked for Junko's phone number, and she did see her look up bento recipes recently; so it is possible she got a boyfriend.
Seeing how the two interact near each other makes Lala resume worrying, and throughout class she reasons that breaking up with Aki to find someone better would be the best solution. But she enjoys being the envy of everyone, and letting them discover he was cheating on her would only worsen things.
It's then Lala spots the marionette sticking out of her bag, and during break she swipes it and retreats to the girls restroom. She recalls what she was told and puts a strand of Aki's hair into the marionette, along with one of hers and rejoins her friends while holding it behind her back. She begins to move it
Seeing Junko's expression eases her mood, but Lala
Outside, as some classmates wonder where Lala is they are frightened
Lala slowly reaches over and opens the head of the marionette to find the hair strands she inserted. She realizes Aki was right, in that it was never about
This marionette was herself.
She only loved herself.
She was the marionette.
As Lala
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* KarmaHoudini: Junko is the only main character not to suffer in the story.
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* KarmaHoudini: Junko is the only main character not caused Lala to suffer in the story.be severely hurt and possibly killed, but nothing happens to her.
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* MurderTheHypotenuse: Junko got the marionette for this matter, stating at the end of the story that she and Aki can openly date with Lala out of the way.
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* MurderTheHypotenuse: Junko got the marionette for this matter, this, stating at the end of the story that she and Aki can openly date with Lala out of the way.
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* YourCheatingHeart: Junko and Aki began a relationship behind Lala's back, and it was what spurned her into using the marionette.
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* YourCheatingHeart: Junko and Aki began a relationship behind Lala's back, and it was what spurned her into using the marionette. Aki did seem remorseful but she made it difficult and he never got the chance to say anything, until he lost his patience with her.
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!! Summary
Lala Nishino has the perfect life; her beauty is recognized by talent scouts and magazines, she has many admirers, and she has a handsome, talented boyfriend whose a member of the basketball team and is very well-liked.
Every day she is so happy, she can hardly believe it!
However...
One day, Lala notices how oddly Aki is behaving after he asks her not to bring the picture from their date to school again, then turns down her request for a date at the movie she was invited to see. He claims he has last-minute practice -something that has been happening frequently- and he takes off. She recalls how close they used to be six months ago when they hooked up, and in class she is quick to bring this up with her friends. They don't seem to be worried, reasoning that because her birthday is the next day he is probably planning a surprise. Finding this explanation reasonable, she drops the subject.
Their attention shifts to the wrapped package containing a marionette that someone left for Lala. Her friends are concerned as two nearby classmates recognize it as something recently sold on an online auction they saw; it's rumored to control the person the current owner loves the most. Lala is doubtful, and believing she has Aki's unconditional love already she tosses it to Junko -one of her friends- and teasingly points out how she is the only one within the group without a boyfriend.
After school Lala and Aki hang out at a cafe, where Lala wastes no time informing him of what happened. He assures her that she's probably overthinking it when she wonders if it was a gift from a stalker, and he attempts to say something else but she interrupts to playfully ask him if he noticed her change in lip gloss. But he briskly excuses himself to the restroom rather than answer, leaving her concerned until noticing his phone sitting nearby. She picks it up and checks to see if he has any texts and finds one from ''Junko'', asking him what side dish he would like for lunch.
She is given little time to register this and distraught she throws it back into his bag before he returns. He notices her uneasiness but she claims to be fine, wondering if this is the same Junko as her friend.
Lala's thoughts remain preoccupied with concern the following day when her friends give her their presents and warm wishes. She continues to think about the text and it's meaning, but she can't see how it would be possible. Not only is Junko really plain looking, but she has no dating experience. But she overhears someone mention that a couple of boys asked for Junko's phone number, and she did see her look up bento recipes recently; so it is possible she got a boyfriend.
Seeing how the two interact near each other makes Lala resume worrying, and throughout class she reasons that breaking up with Aki to find someone better would be the best solution. But she enjoys being the envy of everyone, and letting them discover he was cheating on her would only worsen things.
If only she could make Junko go away...
It's then Lala spots the marionette sticking out of her bag, and during break she swipes it and retreats to the girls restroom. She recalls what she was told and puts a strand of Aki's hair into the marionette, along with one of hers and rejoins her friends while holding it behind her back. She begins to move it while mentally requesting that Aki ignores Junko, and to her delight it works when he turns away to head to practice. Junko seems concerned and she spots Lala, but just as she tries to speak to her, Lala trails behind her boyfriend and offers to make him a bento for his upcoming game soon.
Seeing Junko's expression eases her mood, but Lala refuses to quit now. Throughout the day she and Aki cuddle up together and act very loving, flustering her friends as they observe them and remark on how unusual it is. Lala smirks when she notices Junko become enraged and storms off, leaving her to regret not using the marionette sooner.
It's then Aki asks that Lala wait for him until club ends. She agrees as her friends gush over their romantic behavior while she decides that she has to keep going until she gets her revenge. After everyone else leaves Lala pulls out the marionette and wonders what to make Aki do first; she wants him to stop focusing on club so much and pamper her and every need she could have, take her out on dates, buy her things- and of course get down on his knees to beg for forgiveness.
Deciding to start there, Lala poses the marionette but to her confusion she notices Aki seems unaffected. She collapses in frustration, just as Junko arrives to see her and asks if they can talk in private. Lala agrees and they head into the nearby room, where Junko hesitates until Lala confronts her with what she discovered, causing Junko to begin crying. She apologizes for betraying her trust and explains that she has had feelings for Aki since they were first-years. They would often hang out and she would give him advice whenever he got stressed out over club. She knows that because of him dating Lala she had to move on, but she can't help how she feels.
She asks for Lala to forgive her, and Lala remains silent or a moment before briskly informing Junko that Aki could only ever like her, so she needs to stop. It's then Aki shows up much to her joy- until he approaches Junko. He apologizes for not coming clean sooner and explains that when he asked her to wait earlier it was to bring this up. He realized how much he likes Junko in the time they spent together, and she likes him back. Lala insists that she also likes Aki though- only for him to bluntly point out that he isn't her puppet, and she ''never'' loved him, only herself.
Lala is stunned by these words as the duo leave the room. Enraged, Lala yanks the marionette from her bag while proclaiming she will set Aki free if he wants that so badly. She mangles the marionette violently and throws it out of the nearby window; but a moment later she notices her arm is hurting. She is shocked to see it has become battered and bloody.
Outside, as some classmates wonder where Lala is they are frightened when they hear her scream and rush towards the location to find her on the ground, broken and covered in blood with her body posed similar to the marionette. Unable to speak, Lala stares at the marionette and she slowly begins to realize that the pain she caused only happened to her. Every demand she made to Aki was done by her; she ignored Junko, and she was the one enforcing him to act lovingly in class, and when she made him get on the floor it was her who fell down.
Lala slowly reaches over and opens the head of the marionette to find the hair strands she inserted. She realizes Aki was right, in that it was never about him; she only loved herself...
This marionette was herself.
As Lala slowly loses consciousness, Junko and Aki are some distance away from school and Junko mumbles to herself that Lala did just as expected. She is very happy, but when Aki asks if she said something Junko quickly insists it was nothing. She's just happy that they can finally be together in the open now, happily clinging onto his arm. Aki looks at her with concern, as if realizing something before they continue to head down the path.
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!!Tropes:
* {{Expy}}: Junko greatly resembles Riri, the protagonist of "''The Witch of the Library Room''". She also shares a few traits with her.
* {{Foreshadowing}}: As Lala attempts to control Aki, she indirectly does what she requests. For example, she wanted him to ignore Junko and he abruptly walks away from her. Junko spots Lala and attempts to talk to her but Lala leaves with Aki.
* HereWeGoAgain: Aki is left with another super possessive girlfriend who greatly cares about her own happiness at the end of the story.
* HorrorDoesntSettleForSimpleTuesday: Lala's birthday was celebrated for a majority of the story.
* GoryDiscretionShot: Lala isn't shown falling from the window or hitting the ground, the scene cuts away to some students who hear her scream. The scene then returns to a bloodied and badly injured Lala on the ground.
* ItsAllAboutMe: The reason why Lala refused to break up with Aki, and why her attempt to manipulate him failed.
* KarmaHoudini: Junko is the only main character not to suffer in the story.
* KarmicTwistEnding
* MurderTheHypotenuse: Junko got the marionette for this matter, stating at the end of the story that she and Aki can openly date with Lala out of the way.
* SecretlySelfish: Both Lala and Junko, girls who openly [[BitchInSheepsClothing look harmless and innocent but only care about their own wants]].
* TheFakeCutie: Lala when she isn't putting on the "adorable girlfriend" routine.
* VoodooDoll: The Marionette acts as one, requiring the owners love for their target to make it work. Lala was also told to put a lock of Aki's hair in it to control him, but this didn't actually do anything.
* {{Yandere}}: Junko is a downplayed version. She set everything up to [[WithFriendsLikeThese get rid of Lala]] one way or the other.
* YourCheatingHeart: Junko and Aki began a relationship behind Lala's back, and it was what spurned her into using the marionette.
Lala Nishino has the perfect life; her beauty is recognized by talent scouts and magazines, she has many admirers, and she has a handsome, talented boyfriend whose a member of the basketball team and is very well-liked.
Every day she is so happy, she can hardly believe it!
However...
One day, Lala notices how oddly Aki is behaving after he asks her not to bring the picture from their date to school again, then turns down her request for a date at the movie she was invited to see. He claims he has last-minute practice -something that has been happening frequently- and he takes off. She recalls how close they used to be six months ago when they hooked up, and in class she is quick to bring this up with her friends. They don't seem to be worried, reasoning that because her birthday is the next day he is probably planning a surprise. Finding this explanation reasonable, she drops the subject.
Their attention shifts to the wrapped package containing a marionette that someone left for Lala. Her friends are concerned as two nearby classmates recognize it as something recently sold on an online auction they saw; it's rumored to control the person the current owner loves the most. Lala is doubtful, and believing she has Aki's unconditional love already she tosses it to Junko -one of her friends- and teasingly points out how she is the only one within the group without a boyfriend.
After school Lala and Aki hang out at a cafe, where Lala wastes no time informing him of what happened. He assures her that she's probably overthinking it when she wonders if it was a gift from a stalker, and he attempts to say something else but she interrupts to playfully ask him if he noticed her change in lip gloss. But he briskly excuses himself to the restroom rather than answer, leaving her concerned until noticing his phone sitting nearby. She picks it up and checks to see if he has any texts and finds one from ''Junko'', asking him what side dish he would like for lunch.
She is given little time to register this and distraught she throws it back into his bag before he returns. He notices her uneasiness but she claims to be fine, wondering if this is the same Junko as her friend.
Lala's thoughts remain preoccupied with concern the following day when her friends give her their presents and warm wishes. She continues to think about the text and it's meaning, but she can't see how it would be possible. Not only is Junko really plain looking, but she has no dating experience. But she overhears someone mention that a couple of boys asked for Junko's phone number, and she did see her look up bento recipes recently; so it is possible she got a boyfriend.
Seeing how the two interact near each other makes Lala resume worrying, and throughout class she reasons that breaking up with Aki to find someone better would be the best solution. But she enjoys being the envy of everyone, and letting them discover he was cheating on her would only worsen things.
If only she could make Junko go away...
It's then Lala spots the marionette sticking out of her bag, and during break she swipes it and retreats to the girls restroom. She recalls what she was told and puts a strand of Aki's hair into the marionette, along with one of hers and rejoins her friends while holding it behind her back. She begins to move it while mentally requesting that Aki ignores Junko, and to her delight it works when he turns away to head to practice. Junko seems concerned and she spots Lala, but just as she tries to speak to her, Lala trails behind her boyfriend and offers to make him a bento for his upcoming game soon.
Seeing Junko's expression eases her mood, but Lala refuses to quit now. Throughout the day she and Aki cuddle up together and act very loving, flustering her friends as they observe them and remark on how unusual it is. Lala smirks when she notices Junko become enraged and storms off, leaving her to regret not using the marionette sooner.
It's then Aki asks that Lala wait for him until club ends. She agrees as her friends gush over their romantic behavior while she decides that she has to keep going until she gets her revenge. After everyone else leaves Lala pulls out the marionette and wonders what to make Aki do first; she wants him to stop focusing on club so much and pamper her and every need she could have, take her out on dates, buy her things- and of course get down on his knees to beg for forgiveness.
Deciding to start there, Lala poses the marionette but to her confusion she notices Aki seems unaffected. She collapses in frustration, just as Junko arrives to see her and asks if they can talk in private. Lala agrees and they head into the nearby room, where Junko hesitates until Lala confronts her with what she discovered, causing Junko to begin crying. She apologizes for betraying her trust and explains that she has had feelings for Aki since they were first-years. They would often hang out and she would give him advice whenever he got stressed out over club. She knows that because of him dating Lala she had to move on, but she can't help how she feels.
She asks for Lala to forgive her, and Lala remains silent or a moment before briskly informing Junko that Aki could only ever like her, so she needs to stop. It's then Aki shows up much to her joy- until he approaches Junko. He apologizes for not coming clean sooner and explains that when he asked her to wait earlier it was to bring this up. He realized how much he likes Junko in the time they spent together, and she likes him back. Lala insists that she also likes Aki though- only for him to bluntly point out that he isn't her puppet, and she ''never'' loved him, only herself.
Lala is stunned by these words as the duo leave the room. Enraged, Lala yanks the marionette from her bag while proclaiming she will set Aki free if he wants that so badly. She mangles the marionette violently and throws it out of the nearby window; but a moment later she notices her arm is hurting. She is shocked to see it has become battered and bloody.
Outside, as some classmates wonder where Lala is they are frightened when they hear her scream and rush towards the location to find her on the ground, broken and covered in blood with her body posed similar to the marionette. Unable to speak, Lala stares at the marionette and she slowly begins to realize that the pain she caused only happened to her. Every demand she made to Aki was done by her; she ignored Junko, and she was the one enforcing him to act lovingly in class, and when she made him get on the floor it was her who fell down.
Lala slowly reaches over and opens the head of the marionette to find the hair strands she inserted. She realizes Aki was right, in that it was never about him; she only loved herself...
This marionette was herself.
As Lala slowly loses consciousness, Junko and Aki are some distance away from school and Junko mumbles to herself that Lala did just as expected. She is very happy, but when Aki asks if she said something Junko quickly insists it was nothing. She's just happy that they can finally be together in the open now, happily clinging onto his arm. Aki looks at her with concern, as if realizing something before they continue to head down the path.
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!!Tropes:
* {{Expy}}: Junko greatly resembles Riri, the protagonist of "''The Witch of the Library Room''". She also shares a few traits with her.
* {{Foreshadowing}}: As Lala attempts to control Aki, she indirectly does what she requests. For example, she wanted him to ignore Junko and he abruptly walks away from her. Junko spots Lala and attempts to talk to her but Lala leaves with Aki.
* HereWeGoAgain: Aki is left with another super possessive girlfriend who greatly cares about her own happiness at the end of the story.
* HorrorDoesntSettleForSimpleTuesday: Lala's birthday was celebrated for a majority of the story.
* GoryDiscretionShot: Lala isn't shown falling from the window or hitting the ground, the scene cuts away to some students who hear her scream. The scene then returns to a bloodied and badly injured Lala on the ground.
* ItsAllAboutMe: The reason why Lala refused to break up with Aki, and why her attempt to manipulate him failed.
* KarmaHoudini: Junko is the only main character not to suffer in the story.
* KarmicTwistEnding
* MurderTheHypotenuse: Junko got the marionette for this matter, stating at the end of the story that she and Aki can openly date with Lala out of the way.
* SecretlySelfish: Both Lala and Junko, girls who openly [[BitchInSheepsClothing look harmless and innocent but only care about their own wants]].
* TheFakeCutie: Lala when she isn't putting on the "adorable girlfriend" routine.
* VoodooDoll: The Marionette acts as one, requiring the owners love for their target to make it work. Lala was also told to put a lock of Aki's hair in it to control him, but this didn't actually do anything.
* {{Yandere}}: Junko is a downplayed version. She set everything up to [[WithFriendsLikeThese get rid of Lala]] one way or the other.
* YourCheatingHeart: Junko and Aki began a relationship behind Lala's back, and it was what spurned her into using the marionette.