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* CasualDangerDialog: Phantom Girl's reaction to the thing on her wrist beeping just before the ceiling explodes:
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* CasualDangerDialog: CasualDangerDialogue: Phantom Girl's reaction to the thing on her wrist beeping just before the ceiling explodes:
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--->'''M'comm''': When only two of twenty-nine children are A'ashin, love is not enough. Our parents failed to teach tolerance and acceptance even in their own home.\\
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--->'''M'comm''': When only two of twenty-nine children are A'ashin, A'ashen, love is not enough. Our parents failed to teach tolerance and acceptance even in their own home.\\
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* NotAfraidToDie: M'comm's reaction to being told the bomb may very well killed mixed-race Martians (with a specific point out to his own mixed heritage) is not to be fearful of his own death, but to see the end result as more important.
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* NotAfraidToDie: M'comm's reaction to being told the bomb may very well killed kill mixed-race Martians (with a specific point out to his own mixed heritage) is not to be fearful of his own death, but to see the end result as more important.
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* OutsideContextProblem: Because everyone on Mars is psychic, murder is considered impossible since it would be quick to find the culprit. King S'turrn's murder proves difficult for the Manhunters to solve due to their lack of experience with such a case. This is why, despite R'ess's objections, the queen and Prince J'emm entrust the case to the Earth heroes, who have dealt with solving murder mysteries in real life and on TV.
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* OutsideContextProblem: Because everyone on Mars is psychic, murder is considered impossible to get away with since it would be quick to find the culprit. King S'turrn's murder proves difficult for the Manhunters to solve due to their lack of experience with such a case. This is why, despite R'ess's objections, the queen and Prince J'emm entrust the case to the Earth heroes, who have dealt with solving murder mysteries in real life and on TV.
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** When M'comm is ranting about the oppression the Green Martians have inflicted upon them and how they all deserve to die, M'comm's mother (who is Green) asks him if he thinks the same of her. M'Comm can't respond to that.
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** When M'comm is ranting about the oppression the Green Martians have inflicted upon them and how they all deserve accuses his father of being a "grease mat" to die, them, M'comm's mother (who is Green) asks him if that is what he thinks the same of her. M'Comm can't respond only glares in response to that.her.
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* GetARoom!: Garfield does a version of this when Conner and M'gann get mushy around him.
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* GetARoom!: GetARoom: Garfield does a version of this when Conner and M'gann get mushy around him.
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--->'''Garfield''': Jeez, get a honeymoon suite.
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--->'''Garfield''': Jeez, get a honeymoon suite.//
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--->'''Garfield''': Jeez, get a honeymoon suite.//
