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* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Like in the Renegade timeline, the normally stoic Martian Manhunter is ''furious'' after he discovers that the Guardians literally put shackles in the minds of all Martians long ago which is the reason for both the skin based caste system and inherent lack of desire to ever leave their caves.
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* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Like [[Recap/WithThisRingEpisode21 in the Renegade timeline, timeline]], the normally stoic Martian Manhunter is ''furious'' after he discovers that the Guardians literally put shackles in the minds of all Martians long ago which is the reason for both the skin based caste system and inherent lack of desire to ever leave their caves.
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* EvilOldFolks: Doctor Cyber is a woman with no way to extend her youth or life and has been fighting Wonder Woman for years. As such, she's already experiencing the ravages of time when Paul sees her face.
--> The golden metal mask falls free and the woman behind gasps before scowling at me. "''Happy'' now?" The left side of her face bears heavy burn scars from one of her previous encounters with Diana. Her once jet black hair has long since faded to grey and both of her eyes are cybernetic. Even with the low rates of supervillain execution, Diana's agelessness means that she can expect to see virtually everyone she fights die eventually. And some of them take that rather personally.
--> The golden metal mask falls free and the woman behind gasps before scowling at me. "''Happy'' now?" The left side of her face bears heavy burn scars from one of her previous encounters with Diana. Her once jet black hair has long since faded to grey and both of her eyes are cybernetic. Even with the low rates of supervillain execution, Diana's agelessness means that she can expect to see virtually everyone she fights die eventually. And some of them take that rather personally.
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: Doctor Cyber is a woman with no way to extend her youth or life and has been fighting Wonder Woman for years. As such, she's already experiencing the ravages of time when Paul sees her face.
--> The golden metal mask falls free and the woman behind gasps before scowling at me. "''Happy'' now?" The left side of her face bears heavy burn scars from one of her previous encounters with Diana. Her once jet black hair has long since faded to grey and both of her eyes are cybernetic. Even with the low rates of supervillain execution, Diana's agelessness means that she can expect to see virtually everyone she fights die eventually. And some of them take that rather personally.
--> The golden metal mask falls free and the woman behind gasps before scowling at me. "''Happy'' now?" The left side of her face bears heavy burn scars from one of her previous encounters with Diana. Her once jet black hair has long since faded to grey and both of her eyes are cybernetic. Even with the low rates of supervillain execution, Diana's agelessness means that she can expect to see virtually everyone she fights die eventually. And some of them take that rather personally.
