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The Renegade takes his fleet to confront Grayven 16, interrupting the depopulation of another world by the violent cannibalistic Citizenry, and captures Astarte, Wonder Woman's memory-wiped aunt, who was leading the assault. Wonder Woman challenges Astarte to a formal duel in hopes of reforming the Citizenry, and defeats her.
Grayven 16 then attacks Vega, damaging several worlds and kidnapping Lynne. The Renegade kills the remaining kidnapper and gives pursuit, successfully forcing Grayven into a retreat with Lynne's help, but Grayven then activates an ancient artefact, the Orrery, that controls the Vega Systems, intending to undermine the Renegade's divine domain by destroying what he has built.
The Renegade issues a challenge, which Grayven accepts, but Grayven is able to neutralise the Renegade's yellow constructs, and overpowers him, until the Renegade uses his orange ring to merge their souls together. Grayven initially thinks that he has won and killed the Renegade, whose body vanishes, but indications of the Renegade's presence start leaking through in his thoughts and actions, and then Artemis uses her own god-powers to bring the Renegade to the fore. The resulting Grayven is a little confused, but has both Grayvens' memories and essentially the Renegade's personality.
Grayven 16 then attacks Vega, damaging several worlds and kidnapping Lynne. The Renegade kills the remaining kidnapper and gives pursuit, successfully forcing Grayven into a retreat with Lynne's help, but Grayven then activates an ancient artefact, the Orrery, that controls the Vega Systems, intending to undermine the Renegade's divine domain by destroying what he has built.
The Renegade issues a challenge, which Grayven accepts, but Grayven is able to neutralise the Renegade's yellow constructs, and overpowers him, until the Renegade uses his orange ring to merge their souls together. Grayven initially thinks that he has won and killed the Renegade, whose body vanishes, but indications of the Renegade's presence start leaking through in his thoughts and actions, and then Artemis uses her own god-powers to bring the Renegade to the fore. The resulting Grayven is a little confused, but has both Grayvens' memories and essentially the Renegade's personality.
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!! Short version
The Renegade confronts Grayven 16, and their souls merge together, with the Renegade's personality being dominant.
!! Longer version
The Renegade takes his fleet to confront Grayven 16, interrupting the depopulation of anotherworld by world, but instead of Grayven, he finds the violent cannibalistic Citizenry, and captures Astarte, Wonder Woman's memory-wiped aunt, who was leading the assault. Wonder Woman challenges Astarte to a formal duel in hopes for leadership of reforming the Citizenry, and defeats her.
her, intending to lead them to reform; the Renegade is skeptical, but lets her try.
Grayven 16 then attacksVega, Vega and the Crown Imperium, damaging several worlds and kidnapping Lynne. The Renegade kills the remaining kidnapper and gives pursuit, successfully forcing Grayven into a retreat pursuit; with Lynne's help, but he successfully forces Grayven into a retreat. However, Grayven then activates an ancient artefact, the Orrery, that controls the Vega Systems, intending to undermine the Renegade's divine domain by destroying what he has built.
The Renegade issues achallenge, challenge to single combat, which Grayven accepts, but Grayven is able to neutralise the Renegade's yellow constructs, and overpowers him, until him. In desperation, the Renegade uses his orange ring to merge their souls together. Grayven initially thinks that he has won and killed the Renegade, whose body vanishes, but indications of the Renegade's presence start leaking through in his thoughts and actions, and then Artemis Artemis, whom he has summoned to bow to him, uses her own god-powers to bring the Renegade to the fore. The resulting Grayven is a little confused, but has both Grayvens' memories and essentially the Renegade's personality.
personality. With Artemis and Lynne's support, he takes on Grayven 16's identity and claims victory in order to stand down the attacking fleet.
The Renegade confronts Grayven 16, and their souls merge together, with the Renegade's personality being dominant.
!! Longer version
The Renegade takes his fleet to confront Grayven 16, interrupting the depopulation of another
Grayven 16 then attacks
The Renegade issues a
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Takes place 1 September 2012-ongoing.
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Takes place 1 September 2012-ongoing.
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Sentient instead of animal, as the Citizenry kill all of the people and animals to make their porridge.
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** Astarte, working for Grayven 16, is using omnivorous snakes to [[ApocalypseHow/Class4 completely depopulate worlds of animal life]].
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** Astarte, working for Grayven 16, is using omnivorous snakes to [[ApocalypseHow/Class4 completely depopulate worlds of animal sentient life]].
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** After being mind-whammied by merging with Grayven 16 and then shot with personality arrows to turn back into himself, the Renegade reveals to Artemis that his name wasn't originally Grayven and he was originally just faking it.
