Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Spelling/grammar fix(es)
Changed line(s) 14 (click to see context) from:
* ExactWords: Shockwave claims to have yielded "promising results" after experimenting on CNA, based on an old excavated specimen from Cybertron. When Starcream questions why the Decepticons should wait for the experiment to be completed while the Autobots are on the run, Shockwave clarifies that it ''is'' already completed and store in his lab.
to:
* ExactWords: Shockwave claims to have yielded "promising results" after experimenting on CNA, based on an old excavated specimen from Cybertron. When Starcream questions why the Decepticons should wait for the experiment to be completed while the Autobots are on the run, Shockwave clarifies that it ''is'' already completed and store stored in his lab.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 9,10 (click to see context) from:
Megatron is enraged by the increasing number of failures to find the Autobots, and Shockwave suggests a pet project of his from fossilized CNA. The scientist returns to Cybertron and returns with the ultimate Autobot hunter - a massive Cybertronian dragon.
to:
Megatron is enraged by the increasing number of failures to find the Autobots, and Shockwave suggests a pet project of his from fossilized CNA. The scientist returns to Cybertron and returns with the ultimate "ultimate Autobot hunter hunter" - a massive Cybertronian dragon.
Changed line(s) 37 (click to see context) from:
* OnceDoneNeverForgotton: Starscream once again brags about killing off Cliffjumper, letting Shockwave know he "avenged" him.
to:
* OnceDoneNeverForgotton: OnceDoneNeverForgotten: Starscream once again brags about killing off Cliffjumper, letting Shockwave know he "avenged" him.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 14 (click to see context) from:
* ExactWords: Shockwave claims to have yielded "promising results" after experimenting on CNA, based on an old excavated specimen from Cybertron. When Starcream questions why the Decepticons should wait for the experiment to be completed while the Autobots are trying to reunite, Shockwave clarifies that it ''is'' already completed and store in his lab.
to:
* ExactWords: Shockwave claims to have yielded "promising results" after experimenting on CNA, based on an old excavated specimen from Cybertron. When Starcream questions why the Decepticons should wait for the experiment to be completed while the Autobots are trying to reunite, on the run, Shockwave clarifies that it ''is'' already completed and store in his lab.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* ExactWords: Shockwave claims to have yielded "promising results" after experimenting on CNA, based on an old excavated specimen from Cybertron. When Starcream questions why the Decepticons should wait for the experiment to be completed while the Autobots are trying to reunite, Shockwave clarifies that it ''is'' already completed and store in his lab.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 24 (click to see context) from:
-->'''Ratchet:''' You'll have to start without me. This is someone else's fight now.
to:
-->'''Ratchet:''' You'll have to start "start" without me. This is someone else's fight now.
Changed line(s) 26 (click to see context) from:
-->'''Ratchet:''' Please! Just let me...rust in peace.
to:
-->'''Ratchet:''' Please! Just let me... rust in peace.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* {{Hypocrite}} : Starscream quietly complains about Shockwave "sucking up" to Megetron, stating that respect is earned with deeds, not words. His deeds did earn Megatron's respect when he stops betraying or groveling before him, but has been sucking up to him as well.
Added DiffLines:
* OnceDoneNeverForgotton: Starscream once again brags about killing off Cliffjumper, letting Shockwave know he "avenged" him.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Has nothing to do with familiarity with in-universe fiction.
Deleted line(s) 14 (click to see context) :
* GenreSavvy: Wheeljack figured out Starscream's plan to let him escape and turns the tracking device planted on him against the Decepticons.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 30 (click to see context) from:
-->"What a cop out."
to:
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* GenreSavvy: Wheeljack figured out Starscream's plan to let him escape and turns the tracking device planted on him against the Decepticons.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 14 (click to see context) from:
* HeroicBSOD: Ratchet feels the war is lost now that they lost the base and (presumably) Optimus. He snaps out of it later, though.
to:
* HeroicBSOD: Ratchet feels the war is lost now that they lost the base and (presumably) Optimus. Optimus.
-->'''Ratchet:''' We can't stop Megatron, not anymore. The war is over, and we lost.
-->'''Raf:''' You're giving up?! We can't just give up!
-->'''Ratchet:''' Then tell me what we can do without communications, without a ground bridge, without a base of operations or resources of any kind!
-->(Bumblebee beeps)
-->'''Raf:''' Bee's right. We know [[ContinuityNod Starscream had access to a ground bridge while he was operating solo.]]
-->'''Ratchet:''' Yes, yes, he'd clearly been using the derelict Decepticon ship the Harbinger. What does that have to do with anything?!
-->'''Raf:''' It could be full of Cybertronian tech, and it's probably abandoned again now that Starscream's back with the 'Cons.
-->'''Ratchet:''' Well, resources won't be of much use, not without someone to - lead us.
-->'''Raf:''' It's a start!
-->'''Ratchet:''' You'll have to start without me. This is someone else's fight now.
-->'''Raf:''' There is no one else, Ratchet just us, just the team.
-->'''Ratchet:''' Please! Just let me...rust in peace.
** He snaps out of it later, though.
-->'''Ratchet:''' We can't stop Megatron, not anymore. The war is over, and we lost.
-->'''Raf:''' You're giving up?! We can't just give up!
-->'''Ratchet:''' Then tell me what we can do without communications, without a ground bridge, without a base of operations or resources of any kind!
-->(Bumblebee beeps)
-->'''Raf:''' Bee's right. We know [[ContinuityNod Starscream had access to a ground bridge while he was operating solo.]]
-->'''Ratchet:''' Yes, yes, he'd clearly been using the derelict Decepticon ship the Harbinger. What does that have to do with anything?!
-->'''Raf:''' It could be full of Cybertronian tech, and it's probably abandoned again now that Starscream's back with the 'Cons.
-->'''Ratchet:''' Well, resources won't be of much use, not without someone to - lead us.
-->'''Raf:''' It's a start!
-->'''Ratchet:''' You'll have to start without me. This is someone else's fight now.
-->'''Raf:''' There is no one else, Ratchet just us, just the team.
-->'''Ratchet:''' Please! Just let me...rust in peace.
** He snaps out of it later, though.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 5,6 (click to see context) from:
Raf and Bumblebee find a brooding Ratchet in a junkyard. Ratchet asks them to leave him alone, as the Autobots have pretty much lost. Raf says they can use the ''Harbinger'' 's groundbridge and Cybertronian tech as a start, but Ratchet still remains despondent as he believes Optimus has died. The wounded Optimus suggests Smokescreen seek the Forge of Solus Prime, which the young Autobot reasons Optimus will be able to repair himself with it. Wheeljack finally meets up with Miko and Bulkhead, and Starscream sends his Seeker armada after them... but they are killed in an explosion from a grenade Wheeljack strapped to his tracking device, which he found by himself. Wheeljack leads the trio elsewhere to find a way to make themselves findable for the others.
to:
Raf and Bumblebee find a brooding Ratchet in a junkyard. Ratchet asks them to leave him alone, as the Autobots have pretty much lost. Raf says they can use the ''Harbinger'' 's ''Harbinger'''s groundbridge and Cybertronian tech as a start, but Ratchet still remains despondent as he believes Optimus has died. The wounded Optimus suggests Smokescreen seek the Forge of Solus Prime, which the young Autobot reasons Optimus will be able to repair himself with it. Wheeljack finally meets up with Miko and Bulkhead, and Starscream sends his Seeker armada after them... but they are killed in an explosion from a grenade Wheeljack strapped to his tracking device, which he found by himself. Wheeljack leads the trio elsewhere to find a way to make themselves findable for the others.
Changed line(s) 22 (click to see context) from:
* [[ReportsOfMyDeathWereGreatlyExaggerated Reports Of My Demise Were Greatly... Premature]]: Said word-for-word by Shockwave.
to:
* [[ReportsOfMyDeathWereGreatlyExaggerated Reports Of My Demise Were Greatly... Premature]]: ReportsOfMyDeathWereGreatlyExaggerated: Said nearly word-for-word by Shockwave.Shockwave:
-->"Reports of my demise were greatly...''premature''."
-->"Reports of my demise were greatly...''premature''."
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Misuse. It\'s Genre Savvy, not just \"savvy\".
Deleted line(s) 14 (click to see context) :
* GenreSavvy: Starscream allowed Wheeljack to escape because he planted a homing device on him. However, Wheeljack suspected something was up and checked under his hood before meeting up with Bulkhead--leading to a surprise for Starscream's Armada.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 13 (click to see context) from:
* TheCavalry: The arrival of [[spoiler:Ultra Magnus]] is treated this way by Arcee.
to:
* TheCavalry: The arrival of [[spoiler:Ultra Magnus]] Ultra Magnus is treated this way by Arcee.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 1,2 (click to see context) from:
The Autobots search for signs of each other, but start to lose hope while the Decepticons welcome a key player to their ranks. A win for Wheeljack may ultimately lead to an Autobot defeat.
to:
Jack worries that they are the only ones who can fight the Decepticons, but Arcee admits there were other Autobots who were scattered from the crew of the Ark, out there somewhere. Raf's search
Raf and Bumblebee find a brooding Ratchet in a junkyard. Ratchet asks them to leave him alone, as the Autobots have pretty much lost. Raf says they can use the ''Harbinger'' 's groundbridge and Cybertronian tech as a start, but Ratchet still remains despondent as he believes Optimus has died. The wounded Optimus suggests Smokescreen seek the Forge of Solus Prime, which the young Autobot
Arcee and Jack are on the open road when they're stopped by a massive Autobot ship, and out comes no one else than Ultra Magnus.
Megatron is enraged by the increasing number of failures to find the Autobots, and Shockwave suggests a pet project of his from fossilized CNA. The scientist returns to Cybertron and returns with the ultimate Autobot hunter - a massive Cybertronian dragon.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 14 (click to see context) from:
* OhCrap: Starscream, as Shockwave questions him over why he was left for dead.
to:
* OhCrap: [[OhCrap Oh Scrap]]: Starscream, as Shockwave questions him over why he was left for dead.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 1,4 (click to see context) from:
Spoiler warning!
[[spoiler: The Autobots search for signs of each other, but start to lose hope while the Decepticons welcome a key player to their ranks. A win for Wheeljack may ultimately lead to an Autobot defeat.]] Airs 3/29/2013.
[[spoiler: The Autobots search for signs of each other, but start to lose hope while the Decepticons welcome a key player to their ranks. A win for Wheeljack may ultimately lead to an Autobot defeat.]] Airs 3/29/2013.
to:
[[spoiler:
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 13 (click to see context) from:
* MythologyGag: The original Darkmount has a smelting pool, which prisoners were thrown into.
to:
* MythologyGag: The original Darkmount has a smelting pool, which prisoners were thrown into.just like its Generation One namesake.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* MythologyGag: The original Darkmount has a smelting pool, which prisoners were thrown into.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* [[ReportsOfMyDeathWereGreatlyExaggerated Reports Of My Demise Were Greatly... Premature]]: Said word-for-word by Shockwave.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 5,6 (click to see context) from:
!!Trops:
* NoEscapeButDown: Wheeljack is lead to a smelting pit for execution. His captors demand he jump. Then, after asking his nearest captor if he can fly, throws him into the pit first. Before the others can shoot he then jumps in of his own accord. And procceds to ride the flyer he'd tossed down a moment before to escape Darkmount.
* NoEscapeButDown: Wheeljack is lead to a smelting pit for execution. His captors demand he jump. Then, after asking his nearest captor if he can fly, throws him into the pit first. Before the others can shoot he then jumps in of his own accord. And procceds to ride the flyer he'd tossed down a moment before to escape Darkmount.
to:
* ActuallyPrettyFunny: The dancing monkey photo that Raf swaps in place of a photo of Ratchet. The other Decepticons appear quite annoyed by Starscream pointing it out, but Knock Out laughs out loud.
* TheCavalry: The arrival of [[spoiler:Ultra Magnus]] is treated this way by Arcee.
* GenreSavvy: Starscream allowed Wheeljack to escape because he planted a homing device on him. However, Wheeljack suspected something was up and checked under his hood before meeting up with Bulkhead--leading to a surprise for Starscream's Armada.
* HeroicBSOD: Ratchet feels the war is lost now that they lost the base and (presumably) Optimus. He snaps out of it later, though.
* LampshadeHanging: Starscream deriding Soundwave's "vow of silence."
* ManHug: How Bulkhead greets Wheeljack.
* NeverFoundTheBody: Starscream claims that this is why he never ordered a rescue party to search for Shockwave, who deems that a logical move.
* NoEscapeButDown: Wheeljack is lead to a smelting pit for execution. His captors demand he jump. Then, after asking his nearest captor if he can fly, throws him into the pit first. Before the others can shoot he then jumps in of his own accord. And procceds to ride the flyer he'd tossed down a moment before to escape
* OhCrap: Starscream, as Shockwave questions him over why he was left for dead.
* YouHaveToBelieveMe: Starscream found a photo of Ratchet's location on the Internet, but before the other Decepticons could see it, Raf swapped it with a dancing monkey. Starscream had this reaction.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 3 (click to see context) from:
[[spoiler: The Autobots search for signs of each other, but start to lose hope while the Decepticons welcome a key player to their ranks. A win for Wheeljack may ultimately lead to an Autobot defeat.]] Airs 3/29/2013.
to:
[[spoiler: The Autobots search for signs of each other, but start to lose hope while the Decepticons welcome a key player to their ranks. A win for Wheeljack may ultimately lead to an Autobot defeat.]] Airs 3/29/2013.3/29/2013.
!!Trops:
* NoEscapeButDown: Wheeljack is lead to a smelting pit for execution. His captors demand he jump. Then, after asking his nearest captor if he can fly, throws him into the pit first. Before the others can shoot he then jumps in of his own accord. And procceds to ride the flyer he'd tossed down a moment before to escape Darkmount.
!!Trops:
* NoEscapeButDown: Wheeljack is lead to a smelting pit for execution. His captors demand he jump. Then, after asking his nearest captor if he can fly, throws him into the pit first. Before the others can shoot he then jumps in of his own accord. And procceds to ride the flyer he'd tossed down a moment before to escape Darkmount.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
Spoiler warning!
[[spoiler: The Autobots search for signs of each other, but start to lose hope while the Decepticons welcome a key player to their ranks. A win for Wheeljack may ultimately lead to an Autobot defeat.]] Airs 3/29/2013.
[[spoiler: The Autobots search for signs of each other, but start to lose hope while the Decepticons welcome a key player to their ranks. A win for Wheeljack may ultimately lead to an Autobot defeat.]] Airs 3/29/2013.
