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But [[Literature/TheFeatheredSerpentPartTwo Harry and Steffanie have seen the wicked try to assault God before]], and [[ApocalypseHow it’s never worked out.]]
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But [[Literature/TheFeatheredSerpentPartTwo Harry and Steffanie have seen the wicked try to assault God before]], and [[ApocalypseHow it’s never worked out.]]
]] Whatever they do, they have to do it before the city reaches the tower, or they'll be in for a world of hurt.
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Things are looking ... okay. At the end of the last book, Mary Ben Symeon and Joshua and Rebecca Plimpton were supposed to jump into a time portal that would take them back to their own time, but were delayed by the BigBad. Now, as narrated by Mary, they find themselves in a desolate, stormy desert, with a giant tower in the distance. They missed the jump-off point. ''And'' they lost the seerstone they had when they jumped, meaning they no longer have a powerful source of revelation to guide them. ''And'' ... based on the tower, they seem to be in the time of the Tower of Babel, an especially wicked time, where the Lord [[ApocalypseHow scattered the people all over the earth]] and [[CurseOfBabel the languages of the world were confounded]].
Still, relying on the power of prayer, they decide to walk in the ''opposite'' direction of the tower, hoping to find a settlement somewhere. They also decide to take [[ArtifactOfDoom the Silver Sword]], which fell off the ledge with them. Well-informed about its evil, they decide [[KeepingTheEnemyClose it's better to be aware of who it's influencing than leave it behind for someone else]]. Joshua takes the job of holding it.
Still, relying on the power of prayer, they decide to walk in the ''opposite'' direction of the tower, hoping to find a settlement somewhere. They also decide to take [[ArtifactOfDoom the Silver Sword]], which fell off the ledge with them. Well-informed about its evil, they decide [[KeepingTheEnemyClose it's better to be aware of who it's influencing than leave it behind for someone else]]. Joshua takes the job of holding it.
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Things are looking ... okay. At the end of the last book, Mary Ben Symeon and Joshua and Rebecca Plimpton were supposed to jump into a time portal that would take them back to their own time, but were delayed by the BigBad. Now, as narrated by Mary, they find themselves in a desolate, stormy desert, with a giant tower in the distance. They missed the jump-off point. ''And'' they lost the seerstone they had when they jumped, meaning they no longer have a powerful source of revelation to guide them. ''And'' ... based on the tower, they seem to be in the time of the Tower of Babel, Babel (approximately 3,000 BC) an especially wicked time, where the Lord [[ApocalypseHow scattered the people all over the earth]] and [[CurseOfBabel the languages of the world were confounded]].
Still, relying Relying on the power of prayer, and reluctant to meet anyone from Babel, they decide to walk in the ''opposite'' direction of the tower, hoping to find a settlement somewhere. They also decide to take [[ArtifactOfDoom the Silver Sword]], which fell off the ledge with them. Well-informed about its evil, they decide [[KeepingTheEnemyClose it's better to be aware of who it's influencing than leave it behind for someone else]]. Joshua takes the job of holding it.
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Joshua flees into the hills outside the city as [[ChekhovsGun the rainfall from a distant storm]] finally reaches them, taking the sword with him from its hiding place under a wagon. [[TheCorrupter The sword has been talking to Joshua, convincing him it can help him save the Nephites with its help.]] Becky follows after him trying to chill him out, but he rebuffs her, only to find the purple-clad hunters have caught up with them again. The sword gets him to wield it, and [[ShockAndAwe reflects a lightning flash off its blade]], killing all of the hunters ... and shocking Becky too, [[BlatantLies allegedly by accident]]. Joshua desperately tries to revive her, but in that moment, Akish suddenly appears, coming to reclaim his sword...
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Joshua flees into the hills outside the city as [[ChekhovsGun the rainfall from a distant storm]] finally reaches them, taking the sword with him from its hiding place under a wagon. [[TheCorrupter The sword has been talking to Joshua, convincing him it can help him save the Nephites with its help.Nephites.]] Becky follows after him trying to chill him out, but he rebuffs her, only to find the purple-clad hunters have caught up with them again. The sword gets him to wield it, and [[ShockAndAwe reflects a lightning flash off its blade]], killing all of the hunters ... and shocking Becky too, [[BlatantLies allegedly by accident]]. Joshua desperately tries to revive her, but in that moment, Akish suddenly appears, coming to reclaim his sword...
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‘’The other plots happen in parallel to this.’’
Meanwhile - as narrated, by Steffanie - Harry and Steffanie arrive in the same time ... via geyser! They find themselves overlooking a great battle, where the armies of Japeth and Ham are destroyed by the purple-clad armies of Shinar. The two are spotted, taken prisoner and - due to Harry's mis-wording of their arrival and their modern clothing - [[GodGuise mistaken for angels.]] Despite Steffanie challenging TheEvilPrince Marduk, the two are imprisoned for delivery to his father the Emperor [[HistoricalDomainCharacter Nimrod.]]
That night, Harry and Steff are brought before Marduk's court, and meet a friend of his - [[LazyAlias the traveling lord "Shika"]], who reveals the photo of their family that he stole, letting them know he's a time traveler. He also reveals that he's looking for his sword. And that night, while the army travels, Harry and Steffanie witness a giant, sparkling mass moving through the night sky unaided.
Steffanie and Harry start putting the pieces together. [[ItWasHisSled Shika is obviously Akish.]] But the mass in the sky is even more of a shock - it’s the City of Enoch from the Mormon Book of Moses, which is described as being so righteous that it was taken up into heaven, “in the process of time”.
The Tower of Babel suddenly makes sense - the unrighteous Shinarians have seen the city as it’s slowly ascended, and are trying to literally [[RageAgainstTheHeavens reach heaven by force]]. Marduk himself revealed that [[RaceAgainstTheClock in a few days]], the city will drift close enough to the tower that they will be able to board it. But [[Literature/TheFeatheredSerpentPartTwo Harry and Steffanie have seen the wicked try to assault God before]], and [[ApocalypseHow it’s never worked out well.]]
Meanwhile - as narrated, by Steffanie - Harry and Steffanie arrive in the same time ... via geyser! They find themselves overlooking a great battle, where the armies of Japeth and Ham are destroyed by the purple-clad armies of Shinar. The two are spotted, taken prisoner and - due to Harry's mis-wording of their arrival and their modern clothing - [[GodGuise mistaken for angels.]] Despite Steffanie challenging TheEvilPrince Marduk, the two are imprisoned for delivery to his father the Emperor [[HistoricalDomainCharacter Nimrod.]]
That night, Harry and Steff are brought before Marduk's court, and meet a friend of his - [[LazyAlias the traveling lord "Shika"]], who reveals the photo of their family that he stole, letting them know he's a time traveler. He also reveals that he's looking for his sword. And that night, while the army travels, Harry and Steffanie witness a giant, sparkling mass moving through the night sky unaided.
Steffanie and Harry start putting the pieces together. [[ItWasHisSled Shika is obviously Akish.]] But the mass in the sky is even more of a shock - it’s the City of Enoch from the Mormon Book of Moses, which is described as being so righteous that it was taken up into heaven, “in the process of time”.
The Tower of Babel suddenly makes sense - the unrighteous Shinarians have seen the city as it’s slowly ascended, and are trying to literally [[RageAgainstTheHeavens reach heaven by force]]. Marduk himself revealed that [[RaceAgainstTheClock in a few days]], the city will drift close enough to the tower that they will be able to board it. But [[Literature/TheFeatheredSerpentPartTwo Harry and Steffanie have seen the wicked try to assault God before]], and [[ApocalypseHow it’s never worked out well.]]
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Meanwhile - as narrated, by Steffanie - Harry and Steffanie arrive in the same time ... via geyser! They find themselves overlooking a great battle, where the armies of Japeth and Ham are destroyed by the [[ChekhovsGun purple-clad
That night, Harry and Steff are brought before Marduk's court, and meet a friend of his -
Steffanie and Harry start putting the pieces together. [[ItWasHisSled Shika is obviously Akish.]] But the mass in the sky is even more of a shock - it’s the City of
The Tower of Babel suddenly makes sense - the unrighteous Shinarians have seen the city as it’s slowly ascended, and are trying to literally [[RageAgainstTheHeavens reach heaven by force]]. Marduk himself has revealed that [[RaceAgainstTheClock in a few days]], the city will drift close enough to the tower that they will be able to board
But [[Literature/TheFeatheredSerpentPartTwo Harry and Steffanie have seen the wicked try to assault God before]], and [[ApocalypseHow it’s never worked
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In Gid's time, it's been several years, and in this new timeline he adopted the Christian convert Micah and Jewish orphan Jesse as his wards and took them back to his country. The trio join Harry to rescue Steffanie and their other loved ones and jump through another portal, landing in a water cistern in the tower itself...
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In Gid's time, it's been several years, and in this new timeline he adopted the Christian convert Micah and Jewish orphan Jesse as his wards and took them back to his country. The trio join Harry to rescue Steffanie and their other loved ones and jump through another portal, landing in a water cistern in at the tower itself...top of the tower. Jesse runs off, [[DressingAsTheEnemy obtains some soldier uniforms]], and the group head out to find Steffanie...
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At this moment, Harry and his help arrive. Stealing some uniforms, they get close enough to Steffanie to rescue her just as the city drifts by, [[TitleDrop and a divine lightning storm starts destroying the Tower.]] Members of Nimrod's family try to stop them, but the [[CurseOfBabel confounding of the languages]] begins and they are unable to cooperate. Guided by the stone, the group hop into one of Shinar's flying machines and take off, and Harry uses it to guide them through the storm, relying on faith for hours as they're carried through the sky, far beyond what the machine was ever supposed to travel, deep into the wilderness of Shinar...
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Meanwhile, outside Salem, Mary has just run after Joshua and Becky, Pagag accompanying her. The distant storm is now there, raging fiercely. And in the distance, she suddenly sees a strange, glidercraft touch down, and Harry, the love of her life, emerge. Pagag misunderstands Harry's approach and accidentally shoves Mary down trying to get her behind him, [[SugarWiki/CrowningMomentOfFunny so Steffanie socks him in the face]]. But Harry gets past, takes Mary in his arms, [[BigDamnKiss and finally, the two are reunited.]]
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Meanwhile, outside Salem, Mary has just run after Joshua and Becky, Pagag accompanying her. The distant storm is now there, raging fiercely. And in the distance, she suddenly sees a strange, strange glidercraft touch down, and Harry, the love of her life, emerge.emerges. Pagag misunderstands Harry's approach and accidentally shoves Mary down trying to get her behind him, [[SugarWiki/CrowningMomentOfFunny so Steffanie socks him in the face]]. But Harry gets past, takes Mary in his arms, [[BigDamnKiss and finally, the two are reunited.]]
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In snowy Utah, Jim Hawkins, his wife Sabrina, his sister Jenny, and his daughter and her family are having Sunday dinner. But as they head out, they're cornered by a bald, pockmarked, hook-nosed, sword-wielding geezer and his two sons. It's the sorceror Akish. And he's looking for his sword. He plucks a photo of the Hawkins/Plimpton clan from their wall, tries to kill them, and burns down the house before fleeing. But Jim and his family escape, coming away with one important takeaway - the Sword of Akish, AKA the Silver Sword is back in their lives.
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In snowy Utah, Jim Hawkins, his wife Sabrina, his sister Jenny, and his daughter and her family are having Sunday dinner. But as they head out, they're cornered by a [[LooksLikeOrlok bald, pockmarked, hook-nosed, hook-nosed]], sword-wielding geezer and his two sons. It's [[BigBad the sorceror Akish.Akish]]. And he's looking for his sword. He plucks a photo of the Hawkins/Plimpton clan from their wall, tries to kill them, and burns down the house before fleeing. But Jim and his family escape, coming away with one important takeaway - the Sword of Akish, AKA [[CallBack the Silver Sword Sword]] is back in their lives.
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Things are looking ... okay. At the end of the last book, Mary Ben Symeon and Joshua and Rebecca Plimpton jumped into a time portal hoping it would take them back to their own time, but were delayed by the BigBad. Now, as narrated by Mary, they find themselves in a desolate, stormy desert, with a giant tower in the distance. They missed the jump-off point to get to the right time. ''And'' they lost the seerstone they had when they jumped, meaning they no longer have a powerful source of revelation to guide them. ''And'' ... based on the tower, they seem to be in the time of the Tower of Babel, an especially wicked time, where the Lord [[ApocalypseHow scattered the people all over the earth]] and [[CurseOfBabel the languages of the world were confounded]].
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Things are looking ... okay. At the end of the last book, Mary Ben Symeon and Joshua and Rebecca Plimpton jumped were supposed to jump into a time portal hoping it that would take them back to their own time, but were delayed by the BigBad. Now, as narrated by Mary, they find themselves in a desolate, stormy desert, with a giant tower in the distance. They missed the jump-off point to get to the right time.point. ''And'' they lost the seerstone they had when they jumped, meaning they no longer have a powerful source of revelation to guide them. ''And'' ... based on the tower, they seem to be in the time of the Tower of Babel, an especially wicked time, where the Lord [[ApocalypseHow scattered the people all over the earth]] and [[CurseOfBabel the languages of the world were confounded]].
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That night, while sleeping at a watering hole, Joshua has a dream of saving the Nephites from destruction using the silver sword, which he dismisses as transparent persuasion, but then he awakes as the group is attacked by carnivorous animals, and is [[EmpathicWeapon inexplicably]] an effortless swordsmaster, even ''enjoying'' the battle and asking the fleeing animals to come back. Realizing [[TheCorrupter the sword induced the attack]] ''and'' Josh's response, Mary makes him give it to her, and [[BigSisterInstinct has the kids fall asleep while she keeps watch]].
The next day, they come across a massacred caravan with only one survivor - a small baby. They take it with them, find some milk and supplies amongst the wreckage, and continue on, but discover a group of purple-clad soldiers following them. Despite Mary's best efforts, the group are cornered several times, and the sword - revealing its "voice" - persuades Mary to use it a few times to defend them, and as they flee to safety, the comments of the soldiers make Mary realize who the baby is - Abram, one day to be known as ... [[HistoricalDomainCharacter Abraham, father of nations.]]
While reeling from this revelation, they are discovered by the clan of Jared, [[HistoricalDomainCharacter of the book of Ether in the Book of Mormon]], and finally find some measure of safety amongst fellow Christians. Learning the identity of the baby, they promise to take Abram to his grandparents in the city of Salem in a few weeks, and while there, Mary and the kids will be able to consult with the prophet Shem about how to get back home! The sword might also be given up to him, the person most likely to be able to resist it.
Before the trip, Mary makes the acquaintance of the eldest son of Jared, a handsome man named Pagag. He tries to woo her, but she resists, since her heart belongs to Harry, [[StarCrossedLovers though she's not seen him in two years]]. But Pagag increasingly presses the issue and pokes at [[AbsenceMakesTheHeartGoYonder her deepest insecurities about their relationship]], deeply upsetting her. But then that ceases to matter. A few days before their departure, the sword disappears, although Josh studiously declares it wasn't him.
Once they get to Salem, they meet [[HistoricalDomainCharacter Shem, son of Noah.]] They also meet ... Noah himself, [[ThePatriarch now nine hundred years old.]] He gives each of their party some advice, and then asks Josh to be honest, at which point [[WhamLine Mary realizes Joshua took the sword.]]
Joshua flees into the hills outside the city as rainfall starts, taking the sword with him from its hiding place under a wagon. [[TheCorrupter The sword has been talking to Joshua, convincing him it can help him save the Nephites on his own.]] Becky follows after him trying to chill him out, but he rebuffs her, only to find the purple-clad hunters have caught up with them again. The sword gets him to wield it, and [[ShockAndAwe reflects a lightning flash off its blade]], killing all of the hunters ... and shocking Becky too, [[BlatantLies allegedly by accident]]. Joshua desperately tries to revive her, but in that moment, Akish suddenly appears, coming to reclaim his sword...
The next day, they come across a massacred caravan with only one survivor - a small baby. They take it with them, find some milk and supplies amongst the wreckage, and continue on, but discover a group of purple-clad soldiers following them. Despite Mary's best efforts, the group are cornered several times, and the sword - revealing its "voice" - persuades Mary to use it a few times to defend them, and as they flee to safety, the comments of the soldiers make Mary realize who the baby is - Abram, one day to be known as ... [[HistoricalDomainCharacter Abraham, father of nations.]]
While reeling from this revelation, they are discovered by the clan of Jared, [[HistoricalDomainCharacter of the book of Ether in the Book of Mormon]], and finally find some measure of safety amongst fellow Christians. Learning the identity of the baby, they promise to take Abram to his grandparents in the city of Salem in a few weeks, and while there, Mary and the kids will be able to consult with the prophet Shem about how to get back home! The sword might also be given up to him, the person most likely to be able to resist it.
Before the trip, Mary makes the acquaintance of the eldest son of Jared, a handsome man named Pagag. He tries to woo her, but she resists, since her heart belongs to Harry, [[StarCrossedLovers though she's not seen him in two years]]. But Pagag increasingly presses the issue and pokes at [[AbsenceMakesTheHeartGoYonder her deepest insecurities about their relationship]], deeply upsetting her. But then that ceases to matter. A few days before their departure, the sword disappears, although Josh studiously declares it wasn't him.
Once they get to Salem, they meet [[HistoricalDomainCharacter Shem, son of Noah.]] They also meet ... Noah himself, [[ThePatriarch now nine hundred years old.]] He gives each of their party some advice, and then asks Josh to be honest, at which point [[WhamLine Mary realizes Joshua took the sword.]]
Joshua flees into the hills outside the city as rainfall starts, taking the sword with him from its hiding place under a wagon. [[TheCorrupter The sword has been talking to Joshua, convincing him it can help him save the Nephites on his own.]] Becky follows after him trying to chill him out, but he rebuffs her, only to find the purple-clad hunters have caught up with them again. The sword gets him to wield it, and [[ShockAndAwe reflects a lightning flash off its blade]], killing all of the hunters ... and shocking Becky too, [[BlatantLies allegedly by accident]]. Joshua desperately tries to revive her, but in that moment, Akish suddenly appears, coming to reclaim his sword...
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That night, while sleeping at a watering hole, Joshua has a dream of [[TragicDream saving the Nephites from destruction destruction]] using the silver sword, which he dismisses as transparent persuasion, but then he awakes as the group is attacked by carnivorous animals, and is [[EmpathicWeapon inexplicably]] an effortless swordsmaster, even ''enjoying'' the battle and asking goading the fleeing animals to come back. Realizing [[TheCorrupter the sword induced the attack]] ''and'' Josh's response, Mary makes him give it to her, and [[BigSisterInstinct has the kids fall asleep while she keeps watch]].
The next day, they come across a massacred caravan with only one survivor - a small baby. They take it with them, find some milk and supplies amongst the wreckage, and continue on, but discover a group of [[ChekhovsGun purple-cladsoldiers soldiers]] following them. Despite Mary's best efforts, the group are cornered several times, more than once, and the sword - [[TalkingWeapon revealing its "voice" "voice”]] - persuades Mary to use it a few times to defend them, and as they flee to safety, the comments of what she heard from the soldiers make makes Mary realize who the baby is - Abram, one day to be known as ... [[HistoricalDomainCharacter [[WhamLine Abraham, father of nations.]]
While reeling from this revelation, they are discovered by the clan of Jared, [[HistoricalDomainCharacter of the book of Ether in the Book of Mormon]], and finally find some measure of safety amongst fellow Christians. Learning the identity of the baby, they promise to take Abram to his grandparents in the city of Salem in a few weeks, and while there, Mary and the kids will be able to consult with the prophetShem Shem, son of Noah, about how to get back home! The sword might also be given up to him, the person most likely to be able to resist it.
Before the trip, Mary makes the acquaintance of the eldest son of Jared, a handsome man named Pagag. He tries to woo her, but she resists, since her heart belongs to Harry, [[StarCrossedLovers though she's not seen him in two years]].But Pagag increasingly presses the issue and pokes at [[AbsenceMakesTheHeartGoYonder her deepest insecurities about their relationship]], deeply upsetting her. But then that ceases to matter. A few days before their departure, the sword disappears, although Josh studiously declares it wasn't him.
Once they get to Salem, they meet [[HistoricalDomainCharacter Shem, son of Noah.]] They also meet ... Noah himself,[[ThePatriarch [[LongLived now nine hundred years old.]] He gives each of their party some advice, and then asks Josh to be honest, at which point [[WhamLine Mary realizes [[WhamLine Joshua took the sword.]]
Joshua flees into the hills outside the city as [[ChekhovsGun the rainfallstarts, from a distant storm]] finally reaches them, taking the sword with him from its hiding place under a wagon. [[TheCorrupter The sword has been talking to Joshua, convincing him it can help him save the Nephites on his own.with its help.]] Becky follows after him trying to chill him out, but he rebuffs her, only to find the purple-clad hunters have caught up with them again. The sword gets him to wield it, and [[ShockAndAwe reflects a lightning flash off its blade]], killing all of the hunters ... and shocking Becky too, [[BlatantLies allegedly by accident]]. Joshua desperately tries to revive her, but in that moment, Akish suddenly appears, coming to reclaim his sword...
The next day, they come across a massacred caravan with only one survivor - a small baby. They take it with them, find some milk and supplies amongst the wreckage, and continue on, but discover a group of [[ChekhovsGun purple-clad
While reeling from this revelation, they are discovered by the clan of Jared, [[HistoricalDomainCharacter of the book of Ether in the Book of Mormon]], and finally find some measure of safety amongst fellow Christians. Learning the identity of the baby, they promise to take Abram to his grandparents in the city of Salem in a few weeks, and while there, Mary and the kids will be able to consult with the prophet
Before the trip, Mary makes the acquaintance of the eldest son of Jared, a handsome man named Pagag. He tries to woo her, but she resists, since her heart belongs to Harry, [[StarCrossedLovers though she's not seen him in two years]].
Once they get to Salem, they meet [[HistoricalDomainCharacter Shem, son of Noah.]] They also meet ... Noah himself,
Joshua flees into the hills outside the city as [[ChekhovsGun the rainfall
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''In parallel to this, Harry and Steffanie have their own plot.''
Meanwhile - as narrated, by Steffanie - Harry and Steffanie arrive in the same time ... via geyser! They find themselves overlooking a great battle, where the armies of Japeth and Ham are destroyed by the purple-clad armies of Shinar. The two are spotted, taken prisoner and - due to Harry's mis-wording of their arrival and their modern clothing - [[GodGuise mistaken for angels.]] Despite Steffanie challenging TheEvilPrince Marduk, the two are imprisoned for delivery to his father the Emperor [[HistoricalDomainCharacter Nimrod.]] While in transit, they witness a giant, sparkling mass moving through the night sky, which is visible to everyone.
They're brought before Marduk's court, and meet a friend of his - [[LazyAlias the traveling lord "Shika"]], who reveals the photo of their family that he stole, letting them know he's a time traveler. He also reveals that he's looking for his sword.
[[ItWasHisSled Steffanie and Harry quickly figure out who he is.]] They also figure out what the mass in the sky is - the City of Enoch from the Mormon Book of Moses, which is described as "in the process of time" being taken up to heaven. The Tower of Babel suddenly makes sense! There is a literal, visible place they are trying to reach. And Marduk also reveals that [[RaceAgainstTheClock in a few days]], the city will drift close enough to the finally completed tower that they will finally be able to attack it. And while Harry and Steffanie aren't optimistic about Shinar's chances, [[ForegoneConclusion they don't want to be nearby when they try.]]
Meanwhile - as narrated, by Steffanie - Harry and Steffanie arrive in the same time ... via geyser! They find themselves overlooking a great battle, where the armies of Japeth and Ham are destroyed by the purple-clad armies of Shinar. The two are spotted, taken prisoner and - due to Harry's mis-wording of their arrival and their modern clothing - [[GodGuise mistaken for angels.]] Despite Steffanie challenging TheEvilPrince Marduk, the two are imprisoned for delivery to his father the Emperor [[HistoricalDomainCharacter Nimrod.]] While in transit, they witness a giant, sparkling mass moving through the night sky, which is visible to everyone.
They're brought before Marduk's court, and meet a friend of his - [[LazyAlias the traveling lord "Shika"]], who reveals the photo of their family that he stole, letting them know he's a time traveler. He also reveals that he's looking for his sword.
[[ItWasHisSled Steffanie and Harry quickly figure out who he is.]] They also figure out what the mass in the sky is - the City of Enoch from the Mormon Book of Moses, which is described as "in the process of time" being taken up to heaven. The Tower of Babel suddenly makes sense! There is a literal, visible place they are trying to reach. And Marduk also reveals that [[RaceAgainstTheClock in a few days]], the city will drift close enough to the finally completed tower that they will finally be able to attack it. And while Harry and Steffanie aren't optimistic about Shinar's chances, [[ForegoneConclusion they don't want to be nearby when they try.]]
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Meanwhile - as narrated, by Steffanie - Harry and Steffanie arrive in the same time ... via geyser! They find themselves overlooking a great battle, where the armies of Japeth and Ham are destroyed by the purple-clad armies of Shinar. The two are spotted, taken prisoner and - due to Harry's mis-wording of their arrival and their modern clothing - [[GodGuise mistaken for angels.]] Despite Steffanie challenging TheEvilPrince Marduk, the two are imprisoned for delivery to his father the Emperor [[HistoricalDomainCharacter Nimrod.
They're
That night, Harry and Steff are brought before Marduk's court, and meet a friend of his - [[LazyAlias the traveling lord "Shika"]], who reveals the photo of their family that he stole, letting them know he's a time traveler. He also reveals that he's looking for his sword. And that night, while the army travels, Harry and Steffanie witness a giant, sparkling mass moving through the night sky unaided.
The Tower of Babel suddenly makes
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Harry is guided by the stone to a cave where he encounters [[HistoricalDomainCharacter Terah, the unfeeling father of Abraham.]] He also befriends a falcon named Rafa hunting for him by using his [[SpeaksFluentAnimal Gift of Tongues]]. He also [[BigLippedAlligatorMoment briefly encounters a ''mososaur'']] in an underwater cave, before finally reaching the time portal, which takes him back to the night of Gidgidonnihah's death in Book 7. There he makes a terrible discovery - since his body is already present in this time, reality is trying to reject him like a failed skin graft, [[TemporalSickness inflicting terrible pain]], and the closer to himself he gets, the worse the pain gets! At great personal struggle, Harry navigates the climax of Book 7 unseen and changes events enough to ensure Gid's survival, making it back through the portal just before he collapses. He wakes up in Nephite times with Gid looming over him, [[SugarWiki/CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming and the two are reunited.]]
In Gid's time, it's been several years, and in this new timeline he adopted the Christian convert Micah and Jewish orphan Jesse as his wards and took them back to his country. The trio join Harry to rescue Steffanie and their other loved ones and jump through another portal, landing in a water cistern in a giant tower somewhere...
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Meanwhile, Steffanie has had her own issues. She's been the prize prisoner of Prince Marduk, and presented to King Nimrod, the emperor of Shinar. She discovered they have [[ChekhovsGun rudimentary gliding/flying craft that can hold several people]]. In a presentation before Nimrod and his courtiers/family members, they all sincerely declared themselves the creators of the universe, and she realized [[AloneWithThePsycho just how crazy they were.]] She was walked up the tower itself and beat the Prince in an endurance race to show him up. But now she's reached the top of the tower, the evening before the city passes by it, and she is not looking forward to what will happen...
In Gid's time, it's been several years, and in this new timeline he adopted the Christian convert Micah and Jewish orphan Jesse as his wards and took them back to his country. The trio join Harry to rescue Steffanie and their other loved ones and jump through another portal, landing in a water cistern in a giant tower somewhere...
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Meanwhile, Steffanie has had her own issues. She's been the prize prisoner of Prince Marduk, and presented to King Nimrod, the emperor of Shinar. She discovered they have [[ChekhovsGun rudimentary gliding/flying craft that can hold several people]]. In a presentation before Nimrod and his courtiers/family members, they all sincerely declared themselves the creators of the universe, and she realized [[AloneWithThePsycho just how crazy they were.]] She was walked up the tower itself and beat the Prince in an endurance race to show him up. But now she's reached the top of the tower, the evening before the city passes by it, and she is not looking forward to what will happen...
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Harry is guided by the stone to a cave where he encounters [[HistoricalDomainCharacter Terah, the unfeeling father of Abraham.]] He also befriends a falcon named Rafa hunting for him by using his [[SpeaksFluentAnimal Gift of Tongues]]. He also [[BigLippedAlligatorMoment briefly encounters a ''mososaur'']] mososaur]] in an underwater cave, before finally reaching the time portal, which takes him back to the night of Gidgidonnihah's death in Book 7. There he makes a terrible discovery - since his body is already present in this time, reality is trying to reject him like a failed skin graft, [[TemporalSickness inflicting terrible pain]], and pain]]. And the closer to himself he gets, the worse the pain gets! gets!
At great personal struggle, Harry navigates the climax of Book 7 unseen and changes events enough to ensure Gid's survival, making it back through the portal just before he collapses. He wakes up in Nephite times with Gid looming over him, [[SugarWiki/CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming and the two are reunited.]]
In Gid's time, it's been several years, and in this new timeline he adopted the Christian convert Micah and Jewish orphan Jesse as his wards and took them back to his country. The trio join Harry to rescue Steffanie and their other loved ones and jump through another portal, landing in a water cistern ina giant the tower somewhere...itself...
--
Meanwhile, Steffanie has had her own issues. She's been the prize prisoner of Prince Marduk, and presented to King Nimrod, the emperor of Shinar. She discovered they have [[ChekhovsGun rudimentary gliding/flying craft that can hold several people]]. In a presentation before Nimrod and his courtiers/family members, they all sincerely declared themselves the creators of the universe, and she realized [[AloneWithThePsycho just how crazy they were.]] She was walked up the tower itself and [[CompetitionFreak beat the Prince in an endurance race to show him up. up.]] But now she's reached the top of the tower, the evening before the city passes by it, and she is not looking forward to what will happen...
happen...
At this moment, Harry and his help arrive. Stealing some uniforms, they get close enough to Steffanie to rescue her just as the city drifts by, [[TitleDrop and a divine lightning storm starts destroying the Tower.]] Members of Nimrod's family try to stop them, but the [[CurseOfBabel confounding of the languages]] begins and they are unable to cooperate. Guided by the stone, the group hop into one of Shinar's flying machines and take off, and Harry uses it to guide them through the storm, relying on faith for hours as they're carried through the sky, far beyond what the machine was ever supposed to travel, deep into the wilderness of Shinar...
At great personal struggle, Harry navigates the climax of Book 7 unseen and changes events enough to ensure Gid's survival, making it back through the portal just before he collapses. He wakes up in Nephite times with Gid looming over him, [[SugarWiki/CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming and the two are reunited.]]
In Gid's time, it's been several years, and in this new timeline he adopted the Christian convert Micah and Jewish orphan Jesse as his wards and took them back to his country. The trio join Harry to rescue Steffanie and their other loved ones and jump through another portal, landing in a water cistern in
At this moment, Harry and his help arrive. Stealing some uniforms, they get close enough to Steffanie to rescue her just as the city drifts by, [[TitleDrop and a divine lightning storm starts destroying the Tower.]] Members of Nimrod's family try to stop them, but the [[CurseOfBabel confounding of the languages]] begins and they are unable to cooperate. Guided by the stone, the group hop into one of Shinar's flying machines and take off, and Harry uses it to guide them through the storm, relying on faith for hours as they're carried through the sky, far beyond what the machine was ever supposed to travel, deep into the wilderness of Shinar...
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''Finale''
At this moment, Harry and his help have arrived. Stealing some uniforms, they get close enough to Steffanie to rescue her just as the city drifts by, [[TitleDrop and a divine lightning storm starts destroying the Tower.]] Members of Nimrod's family try to stop them, but the [[CurseOfBabel confounding of the languages]] begins and they lose the ability to cooperate. Guided by the stone, the group hop into one of Shinar's flying machines and take off, and Harry uses the seerstone to guide them through the storm, relying on faith for hours as they're carried through the sky, far beyond what the machine was ever supposed to travel for reasons unbeknownst to them...
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Several hours later, this same storm is beating down outside Salem, where Mary has just run after Joshua and Becky, Pagag accompanying her. In the distance, she suddenly sees a strange, glider-like craft touch down, and Harry, the love her life, emerges. Pagag misunderstands Harry's approach and accidentally shoves Mary down trying to get her behind him, [[SugarWiki/CrowningMomentOfFunny so Steffanie socks him in the face]]. Harry gets past, takes Mary in his arms, [[BigDamnKiss and finally, the two are reunited.]]
But it's not over. They need to find the kids. And their combined group arrives just in time to watch Akish take his sword back from Joshua, [[CargoShip finally reunited with his own love]]. Cocky, he invites the armed men of the group - Harry, Gid, Micah, Jesse, and Pagag - to attack him, trusting the sword can protect him. But they beat him like a drum. [[AnAesop While the sword's power defeats normal people, with God's power countering it, it's just a simple sword.]] [[SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome And there's five of them and one of him.]] But realizing he can't win, Akish makes the most diabolical move he could. He grabs Joshua by the neck, and using the sword, [[EleventhHourSuperpower slices open a portal in time right there]], jumping through it, and taking Joshua with him. The group have lost him. And Becky still looks pretty dead.
The group quickly converge on Becky and give her CPR and a priesthood blessing. She comes back to life, miraculously restored. But the group have lost Joshua. But they still have a seerstone.
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Meanwhile, outside Salem,
But it's not over. They need to find the kids. And their combined group arrives just in time to watch Akish take his sword back from Joshua, [[CargoShip finally reunited with his own love]]. Cocky, he invites the armed men of the group - Harry, Gid, Micah, Jesse, and Pagag - to [[BattleInTheRain attack
The group quickly converge on Becky and give her CPR and a priesthood blessing. She comes back to life, miraculously restored. But the group have lost Joshua.
But they still have a seerstone.
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Joshua Plimpton and Marcos Sanchez have been roped up in a hot tent for a day, waiting for the soldiers who captured them to revisit. The men look like Nephites, but later stage than they've ever seen before, and Garth theorizes that they're in 4th century America, in the years before the Nephites were destroyed.
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Joshua Plimpton and Marcos Sanchez have been roped tied up in a hot tent for a day, waiting for the soldiers who captured them to revisit. The men look like Nephites, but later stage than they've ever seen before, and Garth theorizes that they're in 4th century America, in the years before the Nephites were destroyed.
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Things are looking ... okay. At the end of the last book, Mary Ben Symeon and Joshua and Rebecca Plimpton jumped into a time portal hoping it would take them back to their own time, but were delayed by the BigBad. Now, as narrated by Mary, they find themselves in a desolate, stormy desert, with a giant tower in the distance. They missed the jump-off point to get to the right time. ''And'' they lost the seerstone they had when they jumped, meaning they no longer have a powerful source of revelation to guide them. ''And'' ... based on the tower, they seem to be in the time of the Tower of Babel, an especially wicked time, [[CurseOfBabel where the languages of the world were confounded]].
Still, relying on the power of prayer, they decide to walk in the ''opposite'' direction of the tower, hoping to find a settlement somewhere. They also decide to take [[ArtifactOfDoom the Silver Sword]] - which fell off the ledge with them - too. Well-informed about its evil, they decide [[KeepingTheEnemyClose it's better to be aware of who it's influencing than leave it behind for someone else]]. Joshua takes the job of holding it.
Still, relying on the power of prayer, they decide to walk in the ''opposite'' direction of the tower, hoping to find a settlement somewhere. They also decide to take [[ArtifactOfDoom the Silver Sword]] - which fell off the ledge with them - too. Well-informed about its evil, they decide [[KeepingTheEnemyClose it's better to be aware of who it's influencing than leave it behind for someone else]]. Joshua takes the job of holding it.
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Things are looking ... okay. At the end of the last book, Mary Ben Symeon and Joshua and Rebecca Plimpton jumped into a time portal hoping it would take them back to their own time, but were delayed by the BigBad. Now, as narrated by Mary, they find themselves in a desolate, stormy desert, with a giant tower in the distance. They missed the jump-off point to get to the right time. ''And'' they lost the seerstone they had when they jumped, meaning they no longer have a powerful source of revelation to guide them. ''And'' ... based on the tower, they seem to be in the time of the Tower of Babel, an especially wicked time, where the Lord [[ApocalypseHow scattered the people all over the earth]] and [[CurseOfBabel where the languages of the world were confounded]].
Still, relying on the power of prayer, they decide to walk in the ''opposite'' direction of the tower, hoping to find a settlement somewhere. They also decide to take [[ArtifactOfDoom the SilverSword]] - Sword]], which fell off the ledge with them - too.them. Well-informed about its evil, they decide [[KeepingTheEnemyClose it's better to be aware of who it's influencing than leave it behind for someone else]]. Joshua takes the job of holding it.
Still, relying on the power of prayer, they decide to walk in the ''opposite'' direction of the tower, hoping to find a settlement somewhere. They also decide to take [[ArtifactOfDoom the Silver
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While reeling from this revelation, they are discovered by the clan of Jared, [[HistoricalDomainCharacter of the book of Ether in the Book of Mormon]], and finally find some measure of safety amongst fellow Christians. Learning the identity of the baby, they promise to take Abram to his grandparents in the city of Salem in a few weeks, and while there, Mary and the kids will be able to consult with the prophet Shem about how to get back home! The sword might also be given up to them, the people most likely to be able to resist it.
Before the trip, Mary makes the acquaintance of the eldest son of Jared, a handsome man named Pagag. He tries to woo her, but she resists, since her heart belongs to Harry. But Pagag increasingly presses the issue and pokes at her deepest insecurities about their relationship, deeply upsetting her. But then that ceases to matter. A few days before their departure, the sword disappears, although Josh studiously declares it wasn't him.
Before the trip, Mary makes the acquaintance of the eldest son of Jared, a handsome man named Pagag. He tries to woo her, but she resists, since her heart belongs to Harry. But Pagag increasingly presses the issue and pokes at her deepest insecurities about their relationship, deeply upsetting her. But then that ceases to matter. A few days before their departure, the sword disappears, although Josh studiously declares it wasn't him.
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While reeling from this revelation, they are discovered by the clan of Jared, [[HistoricalDomainCharacter of the book of Ether in the Book of Mormon]], and finally find some measure of safety amongst fellow Christians. Learning the identity of the baby, they promise to take Abram to his grandparents in the city of Salem in a few weeks, and while there, Mary and the kids will be able to consult with the prophet Shem about how to get back home! The sword might also be given up to them, him, the people person most likely to be able to resist it.
Before the trip, Mary makes the acquaintance of the eldest son of Jared, a handsome man named Pagag. He tries to woo her, but she resists, since her heart belongs toHarry. Harry, [[StarCrossedLovers though she's not seen him in two years]]. But Pagag increasingly presses the issue and pokes at [[AbsenceMakesTheHeartGoYonder her deepest insecurities about their relationship, relationship]], deeply upsetting her. But then that ceases to matter. A few days before their departure, the sword disappears, although Josh studiously declares it wasn't him.
Before the trip, Mary makes the acquaintance of the eldest son of Jared, a handsome man named Pagag. He tries to woo her, but she resists, since her heart belongs to
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Joshua flees into the hills outside the city as rainfall starts, taking the sword with him from its hiding place under a wagon. Becky follows after him trying to chill him out, but he rebuffs her, only to find the purple-clad hunters have caught up with them again. The sword, [[TheCorrupter which has been talking to Joshua]], gets him to rely on it, and it reflects a lightning flash off its blade, killing all of the hunters ... and shocking Becky too. Joshua desperately tries to revive her, but in that moment, Akish suddenly appears, coming to reclaim his sword.
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Joshua flees into the hills outside the city as rainfall starts, taking the sword with him from its hiding place under a wagon. [[TheCorrupter The sword has been talking to Joshua, convincing him it can help him save the Nephites on his own.]] Becky follows after him trying to chill him out, but he rebuffs her, only to find the purple-clad hunters have caught up with them again. The sword, [[TheCorrupter which has been talking to Joshua]], sword gets him to rely on wield it, and it [[ShockAndAwe reflects a lightning flash off its blade, blade]], killing all of the hunters ... and shocking Becky too. too, [[BlatantLies allegedly by accident]]. Joshua desperately tries to revive her, but in that moment, Akish suddenly appears, coming to reclaim his sword.
sword...
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That night, Akish tries to kidnap them for interrogation, but the camp is attacked by remnant Japethite forces, letting them make a break for it. Harry escapes, but Steffanie does not. Isolated and without allies, Harry asks the seerstone for advice and receives an unexpected answer - [[TemporalMutability he's going to go back in time and undo the death of Gidgidonnihah, his most stalwart Nephite friend, and get ''his'' help.]]
Harry is guided by the stone to a cave where he encounters [[HistoricalDomainCharacter Terah, the unfeeling father of Abraham.]] He also befriends a falcon named Rafa hunting for him by using his [[SpeaksFluentAnimal Gift of Tongues]]. He also briefly encounters a ''mososaur'' in an underwater cave, before finally reaching the time portal, which takes him back to the night of Gidgidonnihah's death in Book 7. There he makes a terrible discovery - since his body is already present in this time, reality is trying to reject him like a failed skin graft, [[TimeTravelSickness inflicting terrible pain]], and the closer to himself he gets, the worse the pain gets! At great personal struggle, Harry navigates the climax of Book 7 unseen and changes events enough to ensure Gid's survival, making it back through the portal just before he collapses. He wakes up in Nephite times with Gid looming over him, [[SugarWiki/CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming and the two are reunited.]]
Harry is guided by the stone to a cave where he encounters [[HistoricalDomainCharacter Terah, the unfeeling father of Abraham.]] He also befriends a falcon named Rafa hunting for him by using his [[SpeaksFluentAnimal Gift of Tongues]]. He also briefly encounters a ''mososaur'' in an underwater cave, before finally reaching the time portal, which takes him back to the night of Gidgidonnihah's death in Book 7. There he makes a terrible discovery - since his body is already present in this time, reality is trying to reject him like a failed skin graft, [[TimeTravelSickness inflicting terrible pain]], and the closer to himself he gets, the worse the pain gets! At great personal struggle, Harry navigates the climax of Book 7 unseen and changes events enough to ensure Gid's survival, making it back through the portal just before he collapses. He wakes up in Nephite times with Gid looming over him, [[SugarWiki/CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming and the two are reunited.]]
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That night, Akish tries to kidnap them for interrogation, but the camp is attacked by remnant Japethite forces, letting them make a break for it. Harry escapes, but Steffanie does not. Isolated and without allies, Harry asks the seerstone for advice and receives an unexpected answer - [[TemporalMutability he's going to go back in time and undo the death of Gidgidonnihah, his most stalwart Nephite friend, and get ''his'' HIS help.]]
Harry is guided by the stone to a cave where he encounters [[HistoricalDomainCharacter Terah, the unfeeling father of Abraham.]] He also befriends a falcon named Rafa hunting for him by using his [[SpeaksFluentAnimal Gift of Tongues]]. He also [[BigLippedAlligatorMoment briefly encounters a''mososaur'' ''mososaur'']] in an underwater cave, before finally reaching the time portal, which takes him back to the night of Gidgidonnihah's death in Book 7. There he makes a terrible discovery - since his body is already present in this time, reality is trying to reject him like a failed skin graft, [[TimeTravelSickness [[TemporalSickness inflicting terrible pain]], and the closer to himself he gets, the worse the pain gets! At great personal struggle, Harry navigates the climax of Book 7 unseen and changes events enough to ensure Gid's survival, making it back through the portal just before he collapses. He wakes up in Nephite times with Gid looming over him, [[SugarWiki/CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming and the two are reunited.]]
Harry is guided by the stone to a cave where he encounters [[HistoricalDomainCharacter Terah, the unfeeling father of Abraham.]] He also befriends a falcon named Rafa hunting for him by using his [[SpeaksFluentAnimal Gift of Tongues]]. He also [[BigLippedAlligatorMoment briefly encounters a
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Meanwhile, Steffanie has had her own issues. She's been the prize prisoner of Prince Marduk, and presented to King Nimrod, the emperor of Shinar. She discovered they have rudimentary gliding flying machines that can hold several people. In a presentation before Nimrod and his courtiers/family members, they all sincerely declared themselves the creators of the universe, and she realized [[AloneWithThePsycho just how crazy they were.]] She was lobbied up the tower itself and beat the Prince in an endurance race to show him off. But now she's reached the top of the tower, the evening before the city passes by it, and she is not looking forward to what will happen...
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Meanwhile, Steffanie has had her own issues. She's been the prize prisoner of Prince Marduk, and presented to King Nimrod, the emperor of Shinar. She discovered they have [[ChekhovsGun rudimentary gliding flying machines gliding/flying craft that can hold several people.people]]. In a presentation before Nimrod and his courtiers/family members, they all sincerely declared themselves the creators of the universe, and she realized [[AloneWithThePsycho just how crazy they were.]] She was lobbied walked up the tower itself and beat the Prince in an endurance race to show him off.up. But now she's reached the top of the tower, the evening before the city passes by it, and she is not looking forward to what will happen...
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At this moment, Harry and his help have arrived. Stealing some uniforms, they get close enough to Steffanie to rescue her just as the city drifts by, [[OhCrap and a divine assault begins.]] Members of Nimrod's family try to stop her, but the [[CurseOfBabel confounding of the languages]] begins and they lose the ability to cooperate. Guided by the stone, and weathering a terrible storm, the group hop into one of Shinar's flying machines and take off, and Harry uses the seerstone to guide them through it, relying on faith for hours as they're carried through the sky, far beyond what the machine was ever supposed to travel.
This same storm is beating down outside Salem, where Mary has run after Joshua and Becky, Pagag accompanying her. In the distance, she sees a strange, plane-like craft touch down, and Harry, the love her life, emerges. Pagag misunderstands Harry's approach and shoves Mary down accidentally trying to get her behind him, [[SugarWiki/CrowningMomentOfFunny so Steffanie socks him in the face]]. Harry gets past, takes Mary in his arms, [[BigDamnKiss and the two are finally reunited.]]
But it's not over. They need to find the kids. And their combined group arrives just in time to watch Akish take his sword back from Joshua, finally reunited with his own love. Cocky, he invites the armed men of the group - Harry, Gid, Micah, Jesse, and Pagag - to attack him, trusting the sword can protect him. But they beat him like a drum. [[AnAesop While the sword's power defeats normal people, with God's power countering it it's so much steel and bronze]], and [[SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome there's five of them and one of him.]] But realizing he can't win, Akish makes the most diabolical move he could. He grabs Joshua by the neck, and using the sword, [[11thHourSuperpower slices open a portal in time right there]], jumping through it, and taking Joshua with him. The group have lost him. And Becky still looks pretty dead.
The group quickly converge on Becky and give her CPR and a priesthood blessing. She comes back to life, miraculously restored. But the group have lost Joshua; they're still short one man. But they still have a seerstone. Becky and Harry look into it together to figure out what to do and receive an answer - Joshua, and everyone else who's time traveling, can be found in one time. There's a cave nearby that can take them to that time tonight if they leave now. They depart, and Pagag insists on accompanying them, with Harry noting that [[NarniaTime they can make it seem like he was never gone.]] Steffanie, however, notes how Pagag is looking at Mary, and resolves to keep on eye on him...
The group travel to the cave, walk into a fog, and drift off, off on another adventure together. And so the adventure continues, with four (soon to be five) books left...
This same storm is beating down outside Salem, where Mary has run after Joshua and Becky, Pagag accompanying her. In the distance, she sees a strange, plane-like craft touch down, and Harry, the love her life, emerges. Pagag misunderstands Harry's approach and shoves Mary down accidentally trying to get her behind him, [[SugarWiki/CrowningMomentOfFunny so Steffanie socks him in the face]]. Harry gets past, takes Mary in his arms, [[BigDamnKiss and the two are finally reunited.]]
But it's not over. They need to find the kids. And their combined group arrives just in time to watch Akish take his sword back from Joshua, finally reunited with his own love. Cocky, he invites the armed men of the group - Harry, Gid, Micah, Jesse, and Pagag - to attack him, trusting the sword can protect him. But they beat him like a drum. [[AnAesop While the sword's power defeats normal people, with God's power countering it it's so much steel and bronze]], and [[SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome there's five of them and one of him.]] But realizing he can't win, Akish makes the most diabolical move he could. He grabs Joshua by the neck, and using the sword, [[11thHourSuperpower slices open a portal in time right there]], jumping through it, and taking Joshua with him. The group have lost him. And Becky still looks pretty dead.
The group quickly converge on Becky and give her CPR and a priesthood blessing. She comes back to life, miraculously restored. But the group have lost Joshua; they're still short one man. But they still have a seerstone. Becky and Harry look into it together to figure out what to do and receive an answer - Joshua, and everyone else who's time traveling, can be found in one time. There's a cave nearby that can take them to that time tonight if they leave now. They depart, and Pagag insists on accompanying them, with Harry noting that [[NarniaTime they can make it seem like he was never gone.]] Steffanie, however, notes how Pagag is looking at Mary, and resolves to keep on eye on him...
The group travel to the cave, walk into a fog, and drift off, off on another adventure together. And so the adventure continues, with four (soon to be five) books left...
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At this moment, Harry and his help have arrived. Stealing some uniforms, they get close enough to Steffanie to rescue her just as the city drifts by, [[OhCrap [[TitleDrop and a divine assault begins.lightning storm starts destroying the Tower.]] Members of Nimrod's family try to stop her, them, but the [[CurseOfBabel confounding of the languages]] begins and they lose the ability to cooperate. Guided by the stone, and weathering a terrible storm, the group hop into one of Shinar's flying machines and take off, and Harry uses the seerstone to guide them through it, the storm, relying on faith for hours as they're carried through the sky, far beyond what the machine was ever supposed to travel.travel for reasons unbeknownst to them...
This --
Several hours later, this same storm is beating down outside Salem, where Mary has just run after Joshua and Becky, Pagag accompanying her. In the distance, she suddenly sees a strange,plane-like glider-like craft touch down, and Harry, the love her life, emerges. Pagag misunderstands Harry's approach and accidentally shoves Mary down accidentally trying to get her behind him, [[SugarWiki/CrowningMomentOfFunny so Steffanie socks him in the face]]. Harry gets past, takes Mary in his arms, [[BigDamnKiss and finally, the two are finally reunited.]]
But it's not over. They need to find the kids. And their combined group arrives just in time to watch Akish take his sword back from Joshua, [[CargoShip finally reunited with his ownlove.love]]. Cocky, he invites the armed men of the group - Harry, Gid, Micah, Jesse, and Pagag - to attack him, trusting the sword can protect him. But they beat him like a drum. [[AnAesop While the sword's power defeats normal people, with God's power countering it it, it's so much steel and bronze]], and just a simple sword.]] [[SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome And there's five of them and one of him.]] But realizing he can't win, Akish makes the most diabolical move he could. He grabs Joshua by the neck, and using the sword, [[11thHourSuperpower [[EleventhHourSuperpower slices open a portal in time right there]], jumping through it, and taking Joshua with him. The group have lost him. And Becky still looks pretty dead.
The group quickly converge on Becky and give her CPR and a priesthood blessing. She comes back to life, miraculously restored. But the group have lostJoshua; they're still short one man.Joshua. But they still have a seerstone.
Becky and Harry look into it together to figure out what to do and receive an answer - Joshua, and everyone else who's time traveling, can be found in one time. There's a cave nearby that can take them to that time tonight if they leave now. They depart, and Pagag insists on accompanying them, with Harry noting that [[NarniaTime they can make it seem like he was never gone.]] Steffanie, however, notes how Pagag is looking at Mary, and resolves to keep on eye on him...
The group travel to the cave, walk into a fog, and drift off, off on another adventure together. And so the adventure continues, with four(soon ([[LongRunner soon to be five) five]]) books left...
Several hours later, this same storm is beating down outside Salem, where Mary has just run after Joshua and Becky, Pagag accompanying her. In the distance, she suddenly sees a strange,
But it's not over. They need to find the kids. And their combined group arrives just in time to watch Akish take his sword back from Joshua, [[CargoShip finally reunited with his own
The group quickly converge on Becky and give her CPR and a priesthood blessing. She comes back to life, miraculously restored. But the group have lost
Becky and Harry look into it together to figure out what to do and receive an answer - Joshua, and everyone else who's time traveling, can be found in one time. There's a cave nearby that can take them to that time tonight if they leave now. They depart, and Pagag insists on accompanying them, with Harry noting that [[NarniaTime they can make it seem like he was never gone.]] Steffanie, however, notes how Pagag is looking at Mary, and resolves to keep on eye on him...
The group travel to the cave, walk into a fog, and drift off, off on another adventure together. And so the adventure continues, with four
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Joshua Plimpton and Marcos Sanchez have been roped up in a sweaty tent for a day, waiting for the soldiers who captured them to revisit. The men look like Nephites, but later stage than they've ever seen before, and Garth theorizes that they're in 4th century America, in the years before the Nephites were destroyed. But that's not the big news.
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Joshua Plimpton and Marcos Sanchez have been roped up in a sweaty hot tent for a day, waiting for the soldiers who captured them to revisit. The men look like Nephites, but later stage than they've ever seen before, and Garth theorizes that they're in 4th century America, in the years before the Nephites were destroyed.
But that's not the big news.
But that's not the big news.
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Part One
Things are looking ... okay. At the end of the last book, Mary Ben Symeon and Joshua and Rebecca Plimpton jumped into a time portal hoping it would take them back to their own time, but were delayed by the BigBad. Now, as narrated by Mary, they find themselves in a desolate, stormy desert, with a giant, ''giant'' tower in the distance. They missed the jump-off point to get to the right time. ''And'' they lost the seerstone they had when they jumped, meaning they no longer have a powerful source of revelation to guide them. ''And'' ... based on the tower, they seem to be in the time of the Tower of Babel, an especially wicked time, [[CurseOfBabel where the languages of the world were confounded]].
Still relying on the power of prayer, they decide to walk in the ''opposite'' direction of the tower, hoping to find a settlement somewhere. They also decide to take the Sword of Akish - which fell off the ledge with them - too. Well-informed about its evil, they decide it's better to be aware of who it's influencing than leave it behind for someone else. Joshua takes the job of holding it. That night, while sleeping at a watering hole, Joshua has a dream of saving the Nephites from destruction using the silver sword, which he dismisses as transparent persuasion, but then he awakes as the group is attacked by carnivorous animals, and [[EmpathicWeapon inexplicably]] is an effortless swordsmaster, even ''enjoying'' the battle and asking the fleeing animals to come back. Realizing the sword induced this, Mary makes him give it to her, and [[BigSisterInstinct has the kids fall asleep while she keeps watch]].
Things are looking ... okay. At the end of the last book, Mary Ben Symeon and Joshua and Rebecca Plimpton jumped into a time portal hoping it would take them back to their own time, but were delayed by the BigBad. Now, as narrated by Mary, they find themselves in a desolate, stormy desert, with a giant, ''giant'' tower in the distance. They missed the jump-off point to get to the right time. ''And'' they lost the seerstone they had when they jumped, meaning they no longer have a powerful source of revelation to guide them. ''And'' ... based on the tower, they seem to be in the time of the Tower of Babel, an especially wicked time, [[CurseOfBabel where the languages of the world were confounded]].
Still relying on the power of prayer, they decide to walk in the ''opposite'' direction of the tower, hoping to find a settlement somewhere. They also decide to take the Sword of Akish - which fell off the ledge with them - too. Well-informed about its evil, they decide it's better to be aware of who it's influencing than leave it behind for someone else. Joshua takes the job of holding it. That night, while sleeping at a watering hole, Joshua has a dream of saving the Nephites from destruction using the silver sword, which he dismisses as transparent persuasion, but then he awakes as the group is attacked by carnivorous animals, and [[EmpathicWeapon inexplicably]] is an effortless swordsmaster, even ''enjoying'' the battle and asking the fleeing animals to come back. Realizing the sword induced this, Mary makes him give it to her, and [[BigSisterInstinct has the kids fall asleep while she keeps watch]].
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Things are looking ... okay. At the end of the last book, Mary Ben Symeon and Joshua and Rebecca Plimpton jumped into a time portal hoping it would take them back to their own time, but were delayed by the BigBad. Now, as narrated by Mary, they find themselves in a desolate, stormy desert, with a
That night, while sleeping at a watering hole, Joshua has a dream of saving the Nephites from destruction using the silver sword, which he dismisses as transparent persuasion, but then he awakes as the group is attacked by carnivorous animals, and is [[EmpathicWeapon inexplicably]]
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While reeling from this revelation, they are discovered by the clan of Jared, [[HistoricalDomainCharacter of the book of Ether in the Book of Mormon]], and finally find some measure of safety amongst fellow Christians. Learning the identity of the baby, they promise to take Abram to his grandparents in the city of Salem in a few weeks, and while there, Mary and the kids will be able to consult with the prophet Shem about how to get back home! Mary makes the acquaintance of the eldest son of Jared, a handsome man named Pagag, who unsuccessfully tries to woo her. But a few days before their departure, the sword disappears, although Josh studiously declares it wasn't him.
Once they get to Salem, they meet [[HistoricalDomainCharacter Shem, son of Noah.]] They also meet ... Noah himself, [[ThePatriarch now nine hundred years old.]] He gives each of them some advice, and then asks Josh to be honest, at which point [[WhamLine Mary realizes Joshua took the sword.]]
Joshua flees into the hills outside the city as rainfall starts, taking the sword with him from its hiding place under a wagon. Becky follows after him trying to chill him out, but he rebuffs her, only to find the hunters have caught up with them again. The sword, [[TheCorrupter which has been talking to Joshua]], gets him to rely on it, and it reflects a lightning flash off its blade, killing all of the hunters ... and striking Becky. Joshua desperately tries to revive her, but in that moment, Akish suddenly appears, coming to reclaim his sword.
Once they get to Salem, they meet [[HistoricalDomainCharacter Shem, son of Noah.]] They also meet ... Noah himself, [[ThePatriarch now nine hundred years old.]] He gives each of them some advice, and then asks Josh to be honest, at which point [[WhamLine Mary realizes Joshua took the sword.]]
Joshua flees into the hills outside the city as rainfall starts, taking the sword with him from its hiding place under a wagon. Becky follows after him trying to chill him out, but he rebuffs her, only to find the hunters have caught up with them again. The sword, [[TheCorrupter which has been talking to Joshua]], gets him to rely on it, and it reflects a lightning flash off its blade, killing all of the hunters ... and striking Becky. Joshua desperately tries to revive her, but in that moment, Akish suddenly appears, coming to reclaim his sword.
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While reeling from this revelation, they are discovered by the clan of Jared, [[HistoricalDomainCharacter of the book of Ether in the Book of Mormon]], and finally find some measure of safety amongst fellow Christians. Learning the identity of the baby, they promise to take Abram to his grandparents in the city of Salem in a few weeks, and while there, Mary and the kids will be able to consult with the prophet Shem about how to get back home! The sword might also be given up to them, the people most likely to be able to resist it.
Before the trip, Mary makes the acquaintance of the eldest son of Jared, a handsome man namedPagag, who unsuccessfully Pagag. He tries to woo her, but she resists, since her heart belongs to Harry. But Pagag increasingly presses the issue and pokes at her deepest insecurities about their relationship, deeply upsetting her. But a then that ceases to matter. A few days before their departure, the sword disappears, although Josh studiously declares it wasn't him.
Once they get to Salem, they meet [[HistoricalDomainCharacter Shem, son of Noah.]] They also meet ... Noah himself, [[ThePatriarch now nine hundred years old.]] He gives each ofthem their party some advice, and then asks Josh to be honest, at which point [[WhamLine Mary realizes Joshua took the sword.]]
Joshua flees into the hills outside the city as rainfall starts, taking the sword with him from its hiding place under a wagon. Becky follows after him trying to chill him out, but he rebuffs her, only to find the purple-clad hunters have caught up with them again. The sword, [[TheCorrupter which has been talking to Joshua]], gets him to rely on it, and it reflects a lightning flash off its blade, killing all of the hunters ... andstriking Becky.shocking Becky too. Joshua desperately tries to revive her, but in that moment, Akish suddenly appears, coming to reclaim his sword.
Before the trip, Mary makes the acquaintance of the eldest son of Jared, a handsome man named
Once they get to Salem, they meet [[HistoricalDomainCharacter Shem, son of Noah.]] They also meet ... Noah himself, [[ThePatriarch now nine hundred years old.]] He gives each of
Joshua flees into the hills outside the city as rainfall starts, taking the sword with him from its hiding place under a wagon. Becky follows after him trying to chill him out, but he rebuffs her, only to find the purple-clad hunters have caught up with them again. The sword, [[TheCorrupter which has been talking to Joshua]], gets him to rely on it, and it reflects a lightning flash off its blade, killing all of the hunters ... and
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Meanwhile - as narrated, by Steffanie - Harry and Steffanie arrive in the same time ... via geyser! They find themselves overlooking a great battle, where the armies of Japeth and Ham are destroyed by the armies of Shinar. The two are spotted, taken prisoner and - due to Harry's mis-wording of their arrival and their modern clothing - [[GodGuise mistaken for angels.]] Despite Steffanie challenging TheEvilPrince Marduk, the two are imprisoned for delivery to his father the Emperor [[HistoricalDomainCharacter Nimrod.]] While in transit, they witness a giant, sparkling mass moving through the night sky, which is visible to everyone. They're brought before Marduk's court, and meet a friend of his - [[LazyAlias the traveling lord "Shika"]], who reveals the photo of their family that he stole, letting them know he's a time traveler. He also reveals that he's looking for his sword. [[ItWasHisSled Steffanie and Harry quickly figure out who he is.]] They also figure out what the mass in the sky is - the City of Enoch from the Mormon Book of Moses, which is described as "in the process of time" being taken up to heaven. The Tower of Babel suddenly makes sense! There is a literal, visible place they are trying to reach. And Marduk also reveals that in a few days, the city will drift close enough to the completed tower that they will finally be able to attack it. And while Harry and Steffanie aren't optimistic about Shinar's chances, [[ApocalypseHow they don't want to be nearby when they try.]]
That night, Akish tries to kidnap them for interrogation, but the camp is attacked by remnant Japethite forces, letting them make a break for it. Harry escapes, but Steffanie does not. Isolated and without allies, Harry asks the stone for advice and receives an unexpected answer - [[TemporalMutability he's going to go back in time and undo the death of Gidgidonnihah, his most stalwart Nephite friend, and get ''his'' help.]]
That night, Akish tries to kidnap them for interrogation, but the camp is attacked by remnant Japethite forces, letting them make a break for it. Harry escapes, but Steffanie does not. Isolated and without allies, Harry asks the stone for advice and receives an unexpected answer - [[TemporalMutability he's going to go back in time and undo the death of Gidgidonnihah, his most stalwart Nephite friend, and get ''his'' help.]]
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Meanwhile - as narrated, by Steffanie - Harry and Steffanie arrive in the same time ... via geyser! They find themselves overlooking a great battle, where the armies of Japeth and Ham are destroyed by the purple-clad armies of Shinar. The two are spotted, taken prisoner and - due to Harry's mis-wording of their arrival and their modern clothing - [[GodGuise mistaken for angels.]] Despite Steffanie challenging TheEvilPrince Marduk, the two are imprisoned for delivery to his father the Emperor [[HistoricalDomainCharacter Nimrod.]] While in transit, they witness a giant, sparkling mass moving through the night sky, which is visible to everyone. everyone.
They're brought before Marduk's court, and meet a friend of his - [[LazyAlias the traveling lord "Shika"]], who reveals the photo of their family that he stole, letting them know he's a time traveler. He also reveals that he's looking for his sword.
[[ItWasHisSled Steffanie and Harry quickly figure out who he is.]] They also figure out what the mass in the sky is - the City of Enoch from the Mormon Book of Moses, which is described as "in the process of time" being taken up to heaven. The Tower of Babel suddenly makes sense! There is a literal, visible place they are trying to reach. And Marduk also reveals that [[RaceAgainstTheClock in a fewdays, days]], the city will drift close enough to the finally completed tower that they will finally be able to attack it. And while Harry and Steffanie aren't optimistic about Shinar's chances, [[ApocalypseHow [[ForegoneConclusion they don't want to be nearby when they try.]]
That night, Akish tries to kidnap them for interrogation, but the camp is attacked by remnant Japethite forces, letting them make a break for it. Harry escapes, but Steffanie does not. Isolated and without allies, Harry asks thestone seerstone for advice and receives an unexpected answer - [[TemporalMutability he's going to go back in time and undo the death of Gidgidonnihah, his most stalwart Nephite friend, and get ''his'' help.]]
They're brought before Marduk's court, and meet a friend of his - [[LazyAlias the traveling lord "Shika"]], who reveals the photo of their family that he stole, letting them know he's a time traveler. He also reveals that he's looking for his sword.
[[ItWasHisSled Steffanie and Harry quickly figure out who he is.]] They also figure out what the mass in the sky is - the City of Enoch from the Mormon Book of Moses, which is described as "in the process of time" being taken up to heaven. The Tower of Babel suddenly makes sense! There is a literal, visible place they are trying to reach. And Marduk also reveals that [[RaceAgainstTheClock in a few
That night, Akish tries to kidnap them for interrogation, but the camp is attacked by remnant Japethite forces, letting them make a break for it. Harry escapes, but Steffanie does not. Isolated and without allies, Harry asks the
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At this moment, Harry and his help have arrived. Stealing some uniforms, they get close enough to Steffanie to rescue her just as the city drifts by, [[OhCrap and a divine assault begins.]] Members of Nimrod's family try to stop her, but the [[CurseOfBabel confounding of the languages]] begins and they lose the ability to cooperate. Guided by the stone, and weathering a terrible storm, the group hop into one of Shinar's flying machines and take off, and Harry uses the seerstone to guide them through the storm, relying on faith for hours as they're carried through the sky...
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At this moment, Harry and his help have arrived. Stealing some uniforms, they get close enough to Steffanie to rescue her just as the city drifts by, [[OhCrap and a divine assault begins.]] Members of Nimrod's family try to stop her, but the [[CurseOfBabel confounding of the languages]] begins and they lose the ability to cooperate. Guided by the stone, and weathering a terrible storm, the group hop into one of Shinar's flying machines and take off, and Harry uses the seerstone to guide them through the storm, it, relying on faith for hours as they're carried through the sky...sky, far beyond what the machine was ever supposed to travel.
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This same storm is beating down outside Salem, where Mary has run after Joshua and Becky, Pagag accompanying her. In the distance, she sees a strange, plane-like craft touch down, and Harry, the love her life, emerges. Pagag misunderstands Harry's approach and shoves Mary down accidentally trying to get her behind him, [[SugarWiki/CrowningMomentOfFunny so Steffanie socks him in the face]]. Harry gets past, takes Mary in his arms, [[BigDamnKiss and the two are finally reunited.]]
But it's not over. They need to find the kids. And their combined group arrives just in time to watch Akish take his sword back from Joshua, finally reunited with his own love. Cocky, he invites the armed men of the group - Harry, Gid, Micah, Jesse, and Pagag - to attack him, trusting the sword can protect him. But they beat him like a drum. [[AnAesop While the sword's power defeats normal people, with God's power countering it it's so much steel and bronze]], and [[SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome there's five of them and one of him.]] But realizing he can't win, Akish makes the most diabolical move he could. He grabs Joshua by the neck, and using the sword, [[11thHourSuperpower slices open a portal in time right there]], jumping through it, and taking Joshua with him. The group have lost him. And Becky still looks pretty dead.
The group quickly converge on Becky and give her CPR and a priesthood blessing. She comes back to life, miraculously restored. But the group have lost Joshua; they're still short one man. But they still have a seerstone. Becky and Harry look into it together to figure out what to do and receive an answer - Joshua, and everyone else who's time traveling, can be found in one time. There's a cave nearby that can take them to that time tonight if they leave now. They depart, and Pagag insists on accompanying them, with Harry noting that [[NarniaTime they can make it seem like he was never gone.]] Steffanie, however, notes how Pagag is looking at Mary, and resolves to keep on eye on him...
The group travel to the cave, walk into a fog, and drift off, off on another adventure together. And so the adventure continues, with four (soon to be five) books left...
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Joshua Plimpton and Marcos Sanchez have been roped up in a sweaty tent for a day, waiting for the soldiers who captured them to revisit. The men look like Nephites, but later stage than they've ever seen before, and Garth theorizes that they're in 4th century America, in the years before the Nephites were destroyed. But that's not the big news.
The captain of the Nephites arrives, a stern man. But he sees the prisoners, and suddenly and passionately orders them released and fed. Garth looks at the captain - a young man of about nineteen. This man is paler than the Nephites, with frankly white skin. He has a smattering of freckles and bright red hair. And he has an angry look behind his eyes that Garth's seen many times. And Garth realizes - [[NarniaTime the timeline has struck again]]. This is his son Joshua. And in whatever timeline he was part of, [[WhamLine seven years have passed.]]
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This same storm is beating down outside Salem, where Mary has run after Joshua and Becky, Pagag accompanying her. In the distance, she sees a strange, plane-like craft touch down, and Harry, the love her life, emerges. Pagag misunderstands Harry's approach and shoves Mary down accidentally trying to get her behind him, [[SugarWiki/CrowningMomentOfFunny so Steffanie socks him in the face]]. Harry gets past, takes Mary in his arms, [[BigDamnKiss and the two are finally reunited.]]
But it's not over. They need to find the kids. And their combined group arrives just in time to watch Akish take his sword back from Joshua, finally reunited with his own love. Cocky, he invites the armed men of the group - Harry, Gid, Micah, Jesse, and Pagag - to attack him, trusting the sword can protect him. But they beat him like a drum. [[AnAesop While the sword's power defeats normal people, with God's power countering it it's so much steel and bronze]], and [[SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome there's five of them and one of him.]] But realizing he can't win, Akish makes the most diabolical move he could. He grabs Joshua by the neck, and using the sword, [[11thHourSuperpower slices open a portal in time right there]], jumping through it, and taking Joshua with him. The group have lost him. And Becky still looks pretty dead.
The group quickly converge on Becky and give her CPR and a priesthood blessing. She comes back to life, miraculously restored. But the group have lost Joshua; they're still short one man. But they still have a seerstone. Becky and Harry look into it together to figure out what to do and receive an answer - Joshua, and everyone else who's time traveling, can be found in one time. There's a cave nearby that can take them to that time tonight if they leave now. They depart, and Pagag insists on accompanying them, with Harry noting that [[NarniaTime they can make it seem like he was never gone.]] Steffanie, however, notes how Pagag is looking at Mary, and resolves to keep on eye on him...
The group travel to the cave, walk into a fog, and drift off, off on another adventure together. And so the adventure continues, with four (soon to be five) books left...
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Epilogue
Joshua Plimpton and Marcos Sanchez have been roped up in a sweaty tent for a day, waiting for the soldiers who captured them to revisit. The men look like Nephites, but later stage than they've ever seen before, and Garth theorizes that they're in 4th century America, in the years before the Nephites were destroyed. But that's not the big news.
The captain of the Nephites arrives, a stern man. But he sees the prisoners, and suddenly and passionately orders them released and fed. Garth looks at the captain - a young man of about nineteen. This man is paler than the Nephites, with frankly white skin. He has a smattering of freckles and bright red hair. And he has an angry look behind his eyes that Garth's seen many times. And Garth realizes - [[NarniaTime the timeline has struck again]]. This is his son Joshua. And in whatever timeline he was part of, [[WhamLine seven years have passed.]]
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Still relying on the power of prayer, they decide to walk in the ''opposite'' direction of the tower, hoping to find a settlement somewhere. They also decide to take the Sword of Akish - which fell off the ledge with them - too. Well-informed about its evil, they decide it's better to be aware of who it's influencing than leave it behind for someone else. Joshua takes the job of holding it. That night, while sleeping at a watering hole, Joshua has a dream of saving the Nephites from destruction using the silver sword, which he dismisses as transparent persuasion, but then he awakes as the group is attacked by carnivorous animals, and [[EmpathicWeapon inexplicably]] is an effortless swordsmaster, even 'enjoying'' the battle and asking the fleeing animals to come back. Realizing the sword induced this, Mary makes him give it to her, and [[BigSisterInstinct has the kids fall asleep while she keeps watch]].
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Still relying on the power of prayer, they decide to walk in the ''opposite'' direction of the tower, hoping to find a settlement somewhere. They also decide to take the Sword of Akish - which fell off the ledge with them - too. Well-informed about its evil, they decide it's better to be aware of who it's influencing than leave it behind for someone else. Joshua takes the job of holding it. That night, while sleeping at a watering hole, Joshua has a dream of saving the Nephites from destruction using the silver sword, which he dismisses as transparent persuasion, but then he awakes as the group is attacked by carnivorous animals, and [[EmpathicWeapon inexplicably]] is an effortless swordsmaster, even 'enjoying'' ''enjoying'' the battle and asking the fleeing animals to come back. Realizing the sword induced this, Mary makes him give it to her, and [[BigSisterInstinct has the kids fall asleep while she keeps watch]].
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Once they get to Salem, they meet [[HistoricalDomainCharacter Shem, son of Noah. They also meet ... Noah himself, [[ThePatriarch now nine hundred years old.]] He gives each of them some advice, and then asks Josh to be honest, at which point [[WhamLine Mary realizes Joshua took the sword.]]
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Once they get to Salem, they meet [[HistoricalDomainCharacter Shem, son of Noah. ]] They also meet ... Noah himself, [[ThePatriarch now nine hundred years old.]] He gives each of them some advice, and then asks Josh to be honest, at which point [[WhamLine Mary realizes Joshua took the sword.]]
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Meanwhile - as narrated, by Steffanie - Harry and Steffanie arrive in the same time ... via geyser! They find themselves overlooking a great battle, where the armies of Japeth and Ham are destroyed by the armies of Shinar. The two are spotted, taken prisoner and - due to Harry's mis-wording of their arrival and their modern clothing - [[GodGuise mistaken for angels.]] Despite Steffanie challenging TheEvilPrince Marduk, the two are imprisoned for delivery to his father the Emperor [[HistoricalDomainCharacter Nimrod.]] While in transit, they're brought before Marduk's court, and meet a friend of his - [[LazyAlias the traveling lord "Shika"]], who reveals the photo of their family that he stole, letting them know he's a time traveler. He also reveals that he's looking for his sword. [[ItWasHisSled Steffanie and Harry quickly figure out who he is.]]
That night, Akish tries to kidnap them for interrogation, but the camp is attacked by remnant Japethite forces, letting them make a break for it. Harry escapes, but Steffanie does not.
That night, Akish tries to kidnap them for interrogation, but the camp is attacked by remnant Japethite forces, letting them make a break for it. Harry escapes, but Steffanie does not.
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Meanwhile - as narrated, by Steffanie - Harry and Steffanie arrive in the same time ... via geyser! They find themselves overlooking a great battle, where the armies of Japeth and Ham are destroyed by the armies of Shinar. The two are spotted, taken prisoner and - due to Harry's mis-wording of their arrival and their modern clothing - [[GodGuise mistaken for angels.]] Despite Steffanie challenging TheEvilPrince Marduk, the two are imprisoned for delivery to his father the Emperor [[HistoricalDomainCharacter Nimrod.]] While in transit, they're they witness a giant, sparkling mass moving through the night sky, which is visible to everyone. They're brought before Marduk's court, and meet a friend of his - [[LazyAlias the traveling lord "Shika"]], who reveals the photo of their family that he stole, letting them know he's a time traveler. He also reveals that he's looking for his sword. [[ItWasHisSled Steffanie and Harry quickly figure out who he is.]]
]] They also figure out what the mass in the sky is - the City of Enoch from the Mormon Book of Moses, which is described as "in the process of time" being taken up to heaven. The Tower of Babel suddenly makes sense! There is a literal, visible place they are trying to reach. And Marduk also reveals that in a few days, the city will drift close enough to the completed tower that they will finally be able to attack it. And while Harry and Steffanie aren't optimistic about Shinar's chances, [[ApocalypseHow they don't want to be nearby when they try.]]
That night, Akish tries to kidnap them for interrogation, but the camp is attacked by remnant Japethite forces, letting them make a break for it. Harry escapes, but Steffanie does not. Isolated and without allies, Harry asks the stone for advice and receives an unexpected answer - [[TemporalMutability he's going to go back in time and undo the death of Gidgidonnihah, his most stalwart Nephite friend, and get ''his'' help.]]
Harry is guided by the stone to a cave where he encounters [[HistoricalDomainCharacter Terah, the unfeeling father of Abraham.]] He also befriends a falcon named Rafa hunting for him by using his [[SpeaksFluentAnimal Gift of Tongues]]. He also briefly encounters a ''mososaur'' in an underwater cave, before finally reaching the time portal, which takes him back to the night of Gidgidonnihah's death in Book 7. There he makes a terrible discovery - since his body is already present in this time, reality is trying to reject him like a failed skin graft, [[TimeTravelSickness inflicting terrible pain]], and the closer to himself he gets, the worse the pain gets! At great personal struggle, Harry navigates the climax of Book 7 unseen and changes events enough to ensure Gid's survival, making it back through the portal just before he collapses. He wakes up in Nephite times with Gid looming over him, [[SugarWiki/CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming and the two are reunited.]]
In Gid's time, it's been several years, and in this new timeline he adopted the Christian convert Micah and Jewish orphan Jesse as his wards and took them back to his country. The trio join Harry to rescue Steffanie and their other loved ones and jump through another portal, landing in a water cistern in a giant tower somewhere...
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Meanwhile, Steffanie has had her own issues. She's been the prize prisoner of Prince Marduk, and presented to King Nimrod, the emperor of Shinar. She discovered they have rudimentary gliding flying machines that can hold several people. In a presentation before Nimrod and his courtiers/family members, they all sincerely declared themselves the creators of the universe, and she realized [[AloneWithThePsycho just how crazy they were.]] She was lobbied up the tower itself and beat the Prince in an endurance race to show him off. But now she's reached the top of the tower, the evening before the city passes by it, and she is not looking forward to what will happen...
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At this moment, Harry and his help have arrived. Stealing some uniforms, they get close enough to Steffanie to rescue her just as the city drifts by, [[OhCrap and a divine assault begins.]] Members of Nimrod's family try to stop her, but the [[CurseOfBabel confounding of the languages]] begins and they lose the ability to cooperate. Guided by the stone, and weathering a terrible storm, the group hop into one of Shinar's flying machines and take off, and Harry uses the seerstone to guide them through the storm, relying on faith for hours as they're carried through the sky...
That night, Akish tries to kidnap them for interrogation, but the camp is attacked by remnant Japethite forces, letting them make a break for it. Harry escapes, but Steffanie does not. Isolated and without allies, Harry asks the stone for advice and receives an unexpected answer - [[TemporalMutability he's going to go back in time and undo the death of Gidgidonnihah, his most stalwart Nephite friend, and get ''his'' help.]]
Harry is guided by the stone to a cave where he encounters [[HistoricalDomainCharacter Terah, the unfeeling father of Abraham.]] He also befriends a falcon named Rafa hunting for him by using his [[SpeaksFluentAnimal Gift of Tongues]]. He also briefly encounters a ''mososaur'' in an underwater cave, before finally reaching the time portal, which takes him back to the night of Gidgidonnihah's death in Book 7. There he makes a terrible discovery - since his body is already present in this time, reality is trying to reject him like a failed skin graft, [[TimeTravelSickness inflicting terrible pain]], and the closer to himself he gets, the worse the pain gets! At great personal struggle, Harry navigates the climax of Book 7 unseen and changes events enough to ensure Gid's survival, making it back through the portal just before he collapses. He wakes up in Nephite times with Gid looming over him, [[SugarWiki/CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming and the two are reunited.]]
In Gid's time, it's been several years, and in this new timeline he adopted the Christian convert Micah and Jewish orphan Jesse as his wards and took them back to his country. The trio join Harry to rescue Steffanie and their other loved ones and jump through another portal, landing in a water cistern in a giant tower somewhere...
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Meanwhile, Steffanie has had her own issues. She's been the prize prisoner of Prince Marduk, and presented to King Nimrod, the emperor of Shinar. She discovered they have rudimentary gliding flying machines that can hold several people. In a presentation before Nimrod and his courtiers/family members, they all sincerely declared themselves the creators of the universe, and she realized [[AloneWithThePsycho just how crazy they were.]] She was lobbied up the tower itself and beat the Prince in an endurance race to show him off. But now she's reached the top of the tower, the evening before the city passes by it, and she is not looking forward to what will happen...
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At this moment, Harry and his help have arrived. Stealing some uniforms, they get close enough to Steffanie to rescue her just as the city drifts by, [[OhCrap and a divine assault begins.]] Members of Nimrod's family try to stop her, but the [[CurseOfBabel confounding of the languages]] begins and they lose the ability to cooperate. Guided by the stone, and weathering a terrible storm, the group hop into one of Shinar's flying machines and take off, and Harry uses the seerstone to guide them through the storm, relying on faith for hours as they're carried through the sky...
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Still relying on the power of prayer, they decide to walk in the ''opposite'' direction of the tower, hoping to find a settlement somewhere. They also decide to take the Sword of Akish - which fell off the ledge with them - too. Well-informed about its evil, they decide it's better to be aware of who it's influencing than leave it behind for someone else. Joshua takes the job of holding it. That night, while sleeping at a watering hole, Joshua has a dream of saving the Nephites from destruction using the silver sword, which he dismisses as transparent persuasion, but then he awakes and is attacked by carnivorous animals, and successfully uses the sword to defend them, despite his lack of sword skills.
The next day, they come across a massacred caravan full of people, with only one survivor - a small baby who was hidden under the body of his wetnurse. They take the baby with them, find some milk and supplies amongst the wreckage, and continue on.
Soon after, they discover a group of purple-clad soldiers pursuing them.
The next day, they come across a massacred caravan full of people, with only one survivor - a small baby who was hidden under the body of his wetnurse. They take the baby with them, find some milk and supplies amongst the wreckage, and continue on.
Soon after, they discover a group of purple-clad soldiers pursuing them.
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Still relying on the power of prayer, they decide to walk in the ''opposite'' direction of the tower, hoping to find a settlement somewhere. They also decide to take the Sword of Akish - which fell off the ledge with them - too. Well-informed about its evil, they decide it's better to be aware of who it's influencing than leave it behind for someone else. Joshua takes the job of holding it. That night, while sleeping at a watering hole, Joshua has a dream of saving the Nephites from destruction using the silver sword, which he dismisses as transparent persuasion, but then he awakes and as the group is attacked by carnivorous animals, and successfully uses [[EmpathicWeapon inexplicably]] is an effortless swordsmaster, even 'enjoying'' the battle and asking the fleeing animals to come back. Realizing the sword induced this, Mary makes him give it to defend them, despite his lack of sword skills.her, and [[BigSisterInstinct has the kids fall asleep while she keeps watch]].
The next day, they come across a massacred caravanfull of people, with only one survivor - a small baby who was hidden under the body of his wetnurse. baby. They take the baby it with them, find some milk and supplies amongst the wreckage, and continue on.on, but discover a group of purple-clad soldiers following them. Despite Mary's best efforts, the group are cornered several times, and the sword - revealing its "voice" - persuades Mary to use it a few times to defend them, and as they flee to safety, the comments of the soldiers make Mary realize who the baby is - Abram, one day to be known as ... [[HistoricalDomainCharacter Abraham, father of nations.]]
While reeling from this revelation, they are discovered by the clan of Jared, [[HistoricalDomainCharacter of the book of Ether in the Book of Mormon]], and finally find some measure of safety amongst fellow Christians. Learning the identity of the baby, they promise to take Abram to his grandparents in the city of Salem in a few weeks, and while there, Mary and the kids will be able to consult with the prophet Shem about how to get back home! Mary makes the acquaintance of the eldest son of Jared, a handsome man named Pagag, who unsuccessfully tries to woo her. But a few days before their departure, the sword disappears, although Josh studiously declares it wasn't him.
Soon after, Once they discover a group get to Salem, they meet [[HistoricalDomainCharacter Shem, son of purple-clad soldiers pursuing them.
Noah. They also meet ... Noah himself, [[ThePatriarch now nine hundred years old.]] He gives each of them some advice, and then asks Josh to be honest, at which point [[WhamLine Mary realizes Joshua took the sword.]]
Joshua flees into the hills outside the city as rainfall starts, taking the sword with him from its hiding place under a wagon. Becky follows after him trying to chill him out, but he rebuffs her, only to find the hunters have caught up with them again. The sword, [[TheCorrupter which has been talking to Joshua]], gets him to rely on it, and it reflects a lightning flash off its blade, killing all of the hunters ... and striking Becky. Joshua desperately tries to revive her, but in that moment, Akish suddenly appears, coming to reclaim his sword.
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''In parallel to this, Harry and Steffanie have their own plot.''
The next day, they come across a massacred caravan
While reeling from this revelation, they are discovered by the clan of Jared, [[HistoricalDomainCharacter of the book of Ether in the Book of Mormon]], and finally find some measure of safety amongst fellow Christians. Learning the identity of the baby, they promise to take Abram to his grandparents in the city of Salem in a few weeks, and while there, Mary and the kids will be able to consult with the prophet Shem about how to get back home! Mary makes the acquaintance of the eldest son of Jared, a handsome man named Pagag, who unsuccessfully tries to woo her. But a few days before their departure, the sword disappears, although Josh studiously declares it wasn't him.
Joshua flees into the hills outside the city as rainfall starts, taking the sword with him from its hiding place under a wagon. Becky follows after him trying to chill him out, but he rebuffs her, only to find the hunters have caught up with them again. The sword, [[TheCorrupter which has been talking to Joshua]], gets him to rely on it, and it reflects a lightning flash off its blade, killing all of the hunters ... and striking Becky. Joshua desperately tries to revive her, but in that moment, Akish suddenly appears, coming to reclaim his sword.
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''In parallel to this, Harry and Steffanie have their own plot.''
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Prologue
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In snowy Utah, Jim Hawkins, his wife Sabrina, his sister Jenny, and his daughter and her family are having Sunday dinner. But as they head out, they're cornered by a bald, pockmarked, hook-nosed, sword-wielding geezer and his two sons. It's the sorceror Akish. And he's looking for his sword. He plucks a photo of the Hawkins/Plimpton clan from their wall, tries to kill them, and burns down the house before fleeing. But Jim and his family escape, coming away with one important takeaway - the Sword of Akish, AKA the Silver Sword is back in their lives.
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Part One
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In snowy Utah, Jim Hawkins, his wife Sabrina, his sister Jenny, and his daughter and her family are having Sunday dinner. But as they head out, they're cornered by a bald, pockmarked, hook-nosed, sword-wielding geezer and his two sons. It's the sorceror Akish. And he's looking for his sword. He plucks a photo of the Hawkins/Plimpton clan from their wall, tries to kill them, and burns down the house before fleeing. But Jim and his family escape, coming away with one important takeaway - the Sword of Akish, AKA the Silver Sword is back in their lives.
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Part One
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Still relying on the power of prayer, they decide to walk in the ''opposite'' direction of the tower, hoping to find a settlement somewhere. They also decide to take the Sword of Akish - which fell off the ledge with them - too. Well-informed about its evil, they decide it's better to be aware of who it's influencing than leave it behind for someone else. Joshua takes the job of holding it.
Meanwhile, Harry and Steffanie arrive in the same time ... via geyser! They find themselves overlooking a great battle, where the armies of Japeth and Ham are destroyed by the armies of Shinar. The two are spotted, taken prisoner and - due to Harry's mis-wording of their arrival and their modern clothing - [[GodGuise mistaken for angels.]] Steffanie goads TheEvilPrince Marduk into a wrestling match for their release, but despite winning he merely spares them torture and slave branding, and has them imprisoned for delivery to his father the Emperor [[HistoricalDomainCharacter Nimrod.]]
Meanwhile, Harry and Steffanie arrive in the same time ... via geyser! They find themselves overlooking a great battle, where the armies of Japeth and Ham are destroyed by the armies of Shinar. The two are spotted, taken prisoner and - due to Harry's mis-wording of their arrival and their modern clothing - [[GodGuise mistaken for angels.]] Steffanie goads TheEvilPrince Marduk into a wrestling match for their release, but despite winning he merely spares them torture and slave branding, and has them imprisoned for delivery to his father the Emperor [[HistoricalDomainCharacter Nimrod.]]
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Still relying on the power of prayer, they decide to walk in the ''opposite'' direction of the tower, hoping to find a settlement somewhere. They also decide to take the Sword of Akish - which fell off the ledge with them - too. Well-informed about its evil, they decide it's better to be aware of who it's influencing than leave it behind for someone else. Joshua takes the job of holding it. That night, while sleeping at a watering hole, Joshua has a dream of saving the Nephites from destruction using the silver sword, which he dismisses as transparent persuasion, but then he awakes and is attacked by carnivorous animals, and successfully uses the sword to defend them, despite his lack of sword skills.
Meanwhile, The next day, they come across a massacred caravan full of people, with only one survivor - a small baby who was hidden under the body of his wetnurse. They take the baby with them, find some milk and supplies amongst the wreckage, and continue on.
Soon after, they discover a group of purple-clad soldiers pursuing them.
Meanwhile - as narrated, by Steffanie - Harry and Steffanie arrive in the same time ... via geyser! They find themselves overlooking a great battle, where the armies of Japeth and Ham are destroyed by the armies of Shinar. The two are spotted, taken prisoner and - due to Harry's mis-wording of their arrival and their modern clothing - [[GodGuise mistaken for angels.]] Despite Steffaniegoads challenging TheEvilPrince Marduk into a wrestling match for their release, but despite winning he merely spares them torture and slave branding, and has them Marduk, the two are imprisoned for delivery to his father the Emperor [[HistoricalDomainCharacter Nimrod.]]]] While in transit, they're brought before Marduk's court, and meet a friend of his - [[LazyAlias the traveling lord "Shika"]], who reveals the photo of their family that he stole, letting them know he's a time traveler. He also reveals that he's looking for his sword. [[ItWasHisSled Steffanie and Harry quickly figure out who he is.]]
That night, Akish tries to kidnap them for interrogation, but the camp is attacked by remnant Japethite forces, letting them make a break for it. Harry escapes, but Steffanie does not.
Soon after, they discover a group of purple-clad soldiers pursuing them.
Meanwhile - as narrated, by Steffanie - Harry and Steffanie arrive in the same time ... via geyser! They find themselves overlooking a great battle, where the armies of Japeth and Ham are destroyed by the armies of Shinar. The two are spotted, taken prisoner and - due to Harry's mis-wording of their arrival and their modern clothing - [[GodGuise mistaken for angels.]] Despite Steffanie
That night, Akish tries to kidnap them for interrogation, but the camp is attacked by remnant Japethite forces, letting them make a break for it. Harry escapes, but Steffanie does not.
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Things are looking ... okay. At the end of the last book, Mary Ben Symeon and Joshua and Rebecca Plimpton jumped into a time portal hoping it would take them back to their own time, but were delayed by the BigBad. Now, as narrated by Mary, they find themselves in a desolate, stormy desert, with a giant, ''giant'' tower in the distance. They missed the jump-off point to get to the right time. ''And'' they lost the seerstone they had when they jumped, meaning they no longer have a powerful source of revelation to guide them. ''And'' ... based on the tower, they seem to be in the time of the Tower of Babel, an especially wicked time, [[CurseOfBabel where the languages of the world were confounded]].
Still relying on the power of prayer, they decide to walk in the ''opposite'' direction of the tower, hoping to find a settlement somewhere. They also decide to take the Sword of Akish - which fell off the ledge with them - too. Well-informed about its evil, they decide it's better to be aware of who it's influencing than leave it behind for someone else. Joshua takes the job of holding it.
Meanwhile, Harry and Steffanie arrive in the same time ... via geyser! They find themselves overlooking a great battle, where the armies of Japeth and Ham are destroyed by the armies of Shinar. The two are spotted, taken prisoner and - due to Harry's mis-wording of their arrival and their modern clothing - [[GodGuise mistaken for angels.]] Steffanie goads TheEvilPrince Marduk into a wrestling match for their release, but despite winning he merely spares them torture and slave branding, and has them imprisoned for delivery to his father the Emperor [[HistoricalDomainCharacter Nimrod.]]
Still relying on the power of prayer, they decide to walk in the ''opposite'' direction of the tower, hoping to find a settlement somewhere. They also decide to take the Sword of Akish - which fell off the ledge with them - too. Well-informed about its evil, they decide it's better to be aware of who it's influencing than leave it behind for someone else. Joshua takes the job of holding it.
Meanwhile, Harry and Steffanie arrive in the same time ... via geyser! They find themselves overlooking a great battle, where the armies of Japeth and Ham are destroyed by the armies of Shinar. The two are spotted, taken prisoner and - due to Harry's mis-wording of their arrival and their modern clothing - [[GodGuise mistaken for angels.]] Steffanie goads TheEvilPrince Marduk into a wrestling match for their release, but despite winning he merely spares them torture and slave branding, and has them imprisoned for delivery to his father the Emperor [[HistoricalDomainCharacter Nimrod.]]