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* CallBack: Valmont brings up that Shendu had him dig into Valerie's background in the beginning of the fic, which led to him also learning about the crooks in Hollowlands whom her father arrested.
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* NonAnswer: Valerie and Shendu have this exchange in his cell:
-->'''Valerie''': Do you even know what love is Shendu? Do you even know how to feel a positive emotion for anyone other than yourself?\\
'''Shendu''': I know a great many things. The pleasures of the body are not a mystery unto demons.\\
'''Valerie''': Th-that's not what I meant…
-->'''Valerie''': Do you even know what love is Shendu? Do you even know how to feel a positive emotion for anyone other than yourself?\\
'''Shendu''': I know a great many things. The pleasures of the body are not a mystery unto demons.\\
'''Valerie''': Th-that's not what I meant…
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* PervertedSniffing: While vowing to win Valerie's love, Shendu takes an obvious inhale of her scent.
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* ThatLiarLies: When Valerie lies to Shendu that she threw away all his letters, he sees through it and harshly calls her a liar even as he looks at her smugly.
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* ChekhovsSkill: Jackie teaches Valerie to do a counter attack right after a sweeping block. She utilizes this lesson in the next chapter.
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After Shendu intentionally has the Dark Hand locked up in Hollowland's penitentiary where the second Demon Portal is and Jackie infiltrates them as an inmate, Valerie ends up getting herself in the prison as well. A retelling of [[Recap/JackieChanAdventuresS2E9RumbleInTheBigHouse]].
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After Shendu intentionally has the Dark Hand locked up in Hollowland's penitentiary where the second Demon Portal is and Jackie infiltrates them as an inmate, Valerie ends up getting herself in the prison as well. A retelling of [[Recap/JackieChanAdventuresS2E9RumbleInTheBigHouse]].[[Recap/JackieChanAdventuresS2E9RumbleInTheBigHouse "Rumble in the Big House"]].
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* AdaptationalBadass: A minor example; when Xiao Fung told Shendu that he's sick of trying to navigate the underground tunnels in the canon episode, Shendu tried to hide inside Valmont to avoid his brother's wrath. He doesn't do that in this story because he has to make sure Xiao Fung won't eat Valerie.
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* VillainHasAPoint: Shendu convinces Valerie to stay with him in his cell by reasoning that she has a better chance of leaving the prison unharmed by remaining with him rather than trying to venture in the main cell block amongst inmates that have not only murderers and rapists among them, but some of them might want to hurt her as revenge against her late father for helping capture them.
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* VillainHasAPoint: Shendu convinces tells Valerie to stay with him in his cell by reasoning that she has a she'd better chance of leaving the prison unharmed by remaining with him rather than trying not to venture in the main cell block amongst because her chances of leaving the prison unharmed are better with him rather than inmates that who have not only murderers and rapists among them, but some of them might want to would likely hurt her as revenge against to get back at her late father for helping capture them.father. She begrudgingly admits to herself that he's right.
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* CryIntoChest: When Valerie runs by chance into her father's killer in the prison and realizes that he doesn't remember her, she's outraged by grief. After Shendu scares the man away, she breaks down against his chest, forgetting for a moment from who she's seeking comfort.
* FromDressToDressing: After Valerie cuts her palm in the tunnels, she tears a strip out of her blouse and uses it as a bandage.
* FromDressToDressing: After Valerie cuts her palm in the tunnels, she tears a strip out of her blouse and uses it as a bandage.
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* HonoraryUncle: One of the guards in Hollowland's penitentiary is an old friend of Valerie's father, and she calls him "Uncle Lee".
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* InternalReveal: Xiao Fung discovers Valerie's Other-connection with Shendu and proceeds to share it with the rest of his siblings.
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* InternalReveal: Xiao Fung discovers Valerie's Other-connection with Shendu and proceeds to share it with the rest of his siblings.siblings.
* LoveLetter: Shendu has started sending these to Valerie in response to her "challenge" of making her fall in love with him.
-->'''Valerie''': So you picked letters for romance?\\
'''Shendu''': The romanticism in letter writing is becoming a lost art in the modern age, I thought it quite the pretty little message.
* OhCrap: Valerie has this when she discovers that the inmate she came to visit in a locked cell is Shendu instead of Jackie.
* PunctuatedForEmphasis: Valerie does this while arguing with Shendu about the latter's decision to complete her "challenge" and make her fall in love with him.
-->'''Valerie''': When are you going to get it through your thick skull?! That. Won't. Happen!
* RightForTheWrongReasons: When Valerie's palm bleeds in the tunnels, Shendu acts like he's trying to restrain himself. Guessing that her blood's scent has triggered a predatory instinct in him, she bandages her wound, and Shendu settles down. Xiao Fung's thoughts reveal that Shendu was actually reacting to the chi in Valerie's blood calling out for his own.
* SinsOfOurFathers: Discussed. In order to mock Shendu, Valmont reveals that many criminals Valerie's father arrested are their fellow inmates and guesses that since they likely know he's dead, they'd hurt Valerie in his stead if they ever encountered her. Shendu later brings this up to Valerie in order to convince her to remain in the solitary confinement wing with him.
* ToServeMan: When Xiao Fung gets tired of trying to find a way out of the maze of underground tunnels, he considers eating Valerie for snatch before Shendu forbids it.
* TraumaButton: Running into the young man who killed her father results in Valerie screaming her grief and horror at the top of her lungs.
* VillainHasAPoint: Shendu convinces Valerie to stay with him in his cell by reasoning that she has a better chance of leaving the prison unharmed by remaining with him rather than trying to venture in the main cell block amongst inmates that have not only murderers and rapists among them, but some of them might want to hurt her as revenge against her late father for helping capture them.
* LoveLetter: Shendu has started sending these to Valerie in response to her "challenge" of making her fall in love with him.
-->'''Valerie''': So you picked letters for romance?\\
'''Shendu''': The romanticism in letter writing is becoming a lost art in the modern age, I thought it quite the pretty little message.
* OhCrap: Valerie has this when she discovers that the inmate she came to visit in a locked cell is Shendu instead of Jackie.
* PunctuatedForEmphasis: Valerie does this while arguing with Shendu about the latter's decision to complete her "challenge" and make her fall in love with him.
-->'''Valerie''': When are you going to get it through your thick skull?! That. Won't. Happen!
* RightForTheWrongReasons: When Valerie's palm bleeds in the tunnels, Shendu acts like he's trying to restrain himself. Guessing that her blood's scent has triggered a predatory instinct in him, she bandages her wound, and Shendu settles down. Xiao Fung's thoughts reveal that Shendu was actually reacting to the chi in Valerie's blood calling out for his own.
* SinsOfOurFathers: Discussed. In order to mock Shendu, Valmont reveals that many criminals Valerie's father arrested are their fellow inmates and guesses that since they likely know he's dead, they'd hurt Valerie in his stead if they ever encountered her. Shendu later brings this up to Valerie in order to convince her to remain in the solitary confinement wing with him.
* ToServeMan: When Xiao Fung gets tired of trying to find a way out of the maze of underground tunnels, he considers eating Valerie for snatch before Shendu forbids it.
* TraumaButton: Running into the young man who killed her father results in Valerie screaming her grief and horror at the top of her lungs.
* VillainHasAPoint: Shendu convinces Valerie to stay with him in his cell by reasoning that she has a better chance of leaving the prison unharmed by remaining with him rather than trying to venture in the main cell block amongst inmates that have not only murderers and rapists among them, but some of them might want to hurt her as revenge against her late father for helping capture them.
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After Shendu intentionally has the Dark Hand locked up in Hollowland's penitentiary where the second Demon Portal is and Jackie infiltrates them as an inmate, Valerie ends up getting herself in the prison as well. A retelling of [[Recap/JackieChanAdventuresS2E9RumbleInTheBigHouse]].
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* AffectionateNickname: Lee, the old friend of Valerie's father, calls her "Sunshine", while she in turn calls him "Uncle Lee".
* {{Cliffhanger}}: Xiao Fung reunites with his siblings in the Netherworld to tell them that Valerie is Shendu's Other.
* HeroicVow: Shendu surprises Valerie by vowing that no matter how long it'll take, he'll win her affection without harming her or forcing her into something she doesn't want to.
* IdiotBall: Valerie calls Hollowland's penitentiary to ask about Jackie despite not knowing his false name, and when she's told that one of the newest prisoners has landed himself in solitary confinement, she assumes without solid proof that it's Jackie and rushes to meet him. She ends up berating herself after she finds herself in a locked cell with Shendu.
* InternalReveal: Xiao Fung discovers Valerie's Other-connection with Shendu and proceeds to share it with the rest of his siblings.
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* AffectionateNickname: Lee, the old friend of Valerie's father, calls her "Sunshine", while she in turn calls him "Uncle Lee".
* {{Cliffhanger}}: Xiao Fung reunites with his siblings in the Netherworld to tell them that Valerie is Shendu's Other.
* HeroicVow: Shendu surprises Valerie by vowing that no matter how long it'll take, he'll win her affection without harming her or forcing her into something she doesn't want to.
* IdiotBall: Valerie calls Hollowland's penitentiary to ask about Jackie despite not knowing his false name, and when she's told that one of the newest prisoners has landed himself in solitary confinement, she assumes without solid proof that it's Jackie and rushes to meet him. She ends up berating herself after she finds herself in a locked cell with Shendu.
* InternalReveal: Xiao Fung discovers Valerie's Other-connection with Shendu and proceeds to share it with the rest of his siblings.
