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* FacePalm: Charlie does this slowly when the other members of the Hazbin Hotel make a betting pool on whether Mokushiroku or Lucifer and Lilith will win their fight.
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* NotSoAboveItAll: Vaggie, one of the sternest members of the hotel, joins in on the betting pool the other members made on the outcome of Mokushiroku vs. Lucifer and Lilith.
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* {{Hell}}: Mokushiroku travels to the [[WebAnimation/HazbinHotel Hazbin Hotel]]/[[WebAnimation/HelluvaBoss Helluva Boss]] version of this location. He nearly goes full-on KnightTemplar on the place before choosing a path similar to Charlie's.
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* {{Hell}}: Mokushiroku travels to the [[WebAnimation/HazbinHotel [[WesternAnimation/HazbinHotel Hazbin Hotel]]/[[WebAnimation/HelluvaBoss Helluva Boss]] version of this location. He nearly goes full-on KnightTemplar on the place before choosing a path similar to Charlie's.
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* AtopAMountainOfCorpses: Moxxie stands on top of a mountain of zombies while [[GunsAkimbo firing two sniper rifles.]]
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* AtopAMountainOfCorpses: Moxxie stands on top of a mountain of zombies while [[GunsAkimbo firing two sniper rifles.]] rifles]].
** Just as Mokushiroku is going to execute Lucifer and Lilith, Charlie walks up to the creature and sings to it, which manages to get him to stop his rampage when he senses that her intentions are genuine.
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* CurbStompBattle: Every battle against Mokushiroku ends decisively in Moku’s favor.
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* CurbStompBattle: Every battle against Mokushiroku ends decisively in Moku’s Moku's favor.
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* DidYouJustPunchOutCthulhu: Mokushiroku manages to defeat Lucifer and Lilith, the rulers of Hell itself!
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* DidYouJustPunchOutCthulhu: Mokushiroku manages to defeat and came very close to killing Lucifer and Lilith, the rulers of Hell itself!
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* GetAholdOfYourselfMan: Blitzo slaps Moxxie while he’s panicking over the undead army to get him to focus on their job.
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* GetAholdOfYourselfMan: Blitzo slaps Moxxie while he’s he's panicking over the undead army to get him to focus on their job.
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* KickTheDog: Mokushiroku killing Millie and Sallie May’s family because they [[PunchClockVillain were doing their job]] trying to catch the Lost Souls. Even after his [[HazyFeelTurn Hazy-Feel Turn]], he doesn't mention this moment.
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* KickTheDog: Mokushiroku killing Millie and Sallie May’s May's family because they [[PunchClockVillain were doing their job]] trying to catch the Lost Souls. Even after his [[HazyFeelTurn Hazy-Feel Turn]], he doesn't mention this moment.
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* MassOhCrap: Everyone (Except for Lucifer and Alastor) in the colosseum has one when they see Mokushiroku’s undead army. Especially over what was revived:
--->'''Moxxie:''' “Blitz! We need to retreat! He has Angels! FUCKING [[TheDreaded ANGELS]]!”
--->'''Moxxie:''' “Blitz! We need to retreat! He has Angels! FUCKING [[TheDreaded ANGELS]]!”
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* MassOhCrap: Everyone (Except for Lucifer and Alastor) in the colosseum has one when they see Mokushiroku’s Mokushiroku's undead army. Especially over what was revived:
--->'''Moxxie:'''“Blitz! "Blitz! We need to retreat! He has Angels! FUCKING [[TheDreaded ANGELS]]!”ANGELS]]!"
--->'''Moxxie:'''
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* PunctuatedForEmphasis: Millie screams “I. WANT. HIS. HEAD.” when the I.M.P. crew (Minus Loona) and Sallie May are heading out to find Mokushiroku.
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* PunctuatedForEmphasis: Millie screams “I."I. WANT. HIS. HEAD.” " when the I.M.P. crew (Minus (minus Loona) and Sallie May are heading out to find Mokushiroku.
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* ScrewTheMoneyThisIsPersonal: Blitz decides to go assassinate Mokushiroku for free after he killed one of his coworker's/her sister’s entire family.
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* ScrewTheMoneyThisIsPersonal: Blitz decides to go assassinate Mokushiroku for free after he killed one of his coworker's/her sister’s sister's entire family.
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* SoleSurvivor: Sallie May is the only member of Millie’s family to survive Moku’s attack on the farm.
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* SoleSurvivor: Sallie May is the only member of Millie’s Millie's family to survive Moku’s Moku's attack on the farm.
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* {{Tsundere}}: Husk tries to convince Charlie not to save her parents form Mokushiroku killing them by telling her they’re not sure what he wants. [[JerkWithAHeartOfGold And it’s not because he cares about her or anything.]]
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* {{Tsundere}}: Husk tries to convince Charlie not to save her parents form Mokushiroku killing them by telling her they’re not sure what he wants. [[JerkWithAHeartOfGold And it’s it's not because he cares about her or anything.]]
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--->'''Sallie May:''' “Our family… they’re all dead.”
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--->'''Sallie May:''' “Our "Our family… they’re all dead.”"
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* YourSoulIsMine: The winner of Lucifer’s Tournament would have won a huge batch of Lost Souls, had it not been for [[OutsideContextProblem Mokushiroku's interference]].
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* YourSoulIsMine: The winner of Lucifer’s Lucifer's Tournament would have won a huge batch of Lost Souls, had it not been for [[OutsideContextProblem Mokushiroku's interference]].
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“Taking place after “Welcome to United Equestria”, Mokushiroku continues on a wholly new path! A path that will lead him into the realm of Hell! He has plans for this place. Plans that’ll put him on a collision course with many familiar faces. The bigger question is, though, whom will be left standing after he once again unleashes his power? Can he be tamed by the kindness of a certain demon princess and just what did he do to earn the ire of I.M.P.? Come and find out as his saga continues!”
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* YourSoulIsMine: The winner of Lucifer’s Tournament will get a huge batch of Lost Souls.
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* YourSoulIsMine: The winner of Lucifer’s Tournament will get would have won a huge batch of Lost Souls.Souls, had it not been for [[OutsideContextProblem Mokushiroku's interference]].
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* AtopAMountainOfCorpses: Moxie stands on top of a mountain of zombies while [[GunsAkimbo firing two sniper rifles.]]
* BabiesEverAfter: It’s heavily implied in the last chapter that Moxxie’s considering having a kid with Millie.
* BabiesEverAfter: It’s heavily implied in the last chapter that Moxxie’s considering having a kid with Millie.
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* AtopAMountainOfCorpses: Moxie Moxxie stands on top of a mountain of zombies while [[GunsAkimbo firing two sniper rifles.]]
* BabiesEverAfter: It’s heavily implied in the last chapter that Moxxie’s considering having akid child with Millie.
* BabiesEverAfter: It’s heavily implied in the last chapter that Moxxie’s considering having a
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--->What had he ACTUALLY done? Had he fixed anything? The Lost Souls were free, but everything else...[[DestructiveSavior all of this destruction]]...what did it solve? [[PayEvilUntoEvil More violence?]] [[TerrorHero More fear?]] [[NotSoDifferent More of what Starfleet had done to the world he loved?]] So many questions that [[DespairEventHorizon he wasn’t prepared for]]. Therefore, he just let out another roar, [[HowlOfSorrow only it was deeper in pitch and somber in tone.]]
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--->What had he ACTUALLY done? Had he fixed anything? The Lost Souls were free, but everything else...[[DestructiveSavior all of this destruction]]...what did it solve? [[PayEvilUntoEvil More violence?]] [[TerrorHero More fear?]] [[NotSoDifferent More of what Starfleet had done to the world he loved?]] loved? So many questions that [[DespairEventHorizon he wasn’t prepared for]]. Therefore, he just let out another roar, [[HowlOfSorrow only it was deeper in pitch and somber in tone.]]
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* WhamLine: When Sallie May barges into the I.M.P. building, looking all disheveled, Millie asks what happened. Sallie May’s response:
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* WhamLine: When Sallie May barges into the I.M.P. building, looking all disheveled, Millie asks what happened. Sallie May’s response:response shakes everyone in the room (especially Millie):
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* RightBehindMe: Mokushiroku makes himself known to Charlie during their second meeting by surprising her by speaking telepathically. Eventually, she turns around to see him crouched on the roof with her.
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* SillyRabbitIdealismIsForLosers: Charlie's way of solving Mokushiroku's rampage (by appealing to his empathy) is seen as foolish by everyone else, even AFTER it works. Vaggie goes ahead and says that her [[AssholeVictim parents should have died due to them already ruining Hell as it was]] and she almost got herself killed for her idea.
* StandingRightBehindMe: Mokushiroku makes himself known to Charlie during their second meeting by surprising her by speaking telepathically. Eventually, she turns around to see him crouched on the roof with her.
* StandingRightBehindMe: Mokushiroku makes himself known to Charlie during their second meeting by surprising her by speaking telepathically. Eventually, she turns around to see him crouched on the roof with her.
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* SillyRabbitIdealismIsForLosers: SillyRabbitIdealismIsForKids: Charlie's way of solving Mokushiroku's rampage (by appealing to his empathy) is seen as foolish by everyone else, even AFTER it works. Vaggie goes ahead and says that her [[AssholeVictim parents should have died due to them already ruining Hell as it was]] and she almost got herself killed for her idea.
* StandingRightBehindMe: Mokushiroku makes himself known to Charlie during their second meeting by surprising her by speaking telepathically. Eventually, she turns around to see him crouched on the roof with her.idea.
* StandingRightBehindMe: Mokushiroku makes himself known to Charlie during their second meeting by surprising her by speaking telepathically. Eventually, she turns around to see him crouched on the roof with her.
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* KickTheDog: Mokushiroku killing Millie and Sallie May’s family because they [[PunchClockVillain were doing their job]] trying to catch the Lost Souls. Even after his HazyFaceTurn, he doesn't mention this moment.
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* KickTheDog: Mokushiroku killing Millie and Sallie May’s family because they [[PunchClockVillain were doing their job]] trying to catch the Lost Souls. Even after his HazyFaceTurn, [[HazyFeelTurn Hazy-Feel Turn]], he doesn't mention this moment.
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* AppropriatedAppellation: Mokushiroku admits to Charlie that he never had a name, but he gladly took on his RedBaron like title with pride. It helps he was going to bring the apocalypse to Hell before he was talked down.
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* StrawNihilist: Mokushiroku gives a speech reeking of this to Charlie, though it's less of a villainous speech and more of a plea to ask her if there's ANYTHING worth saving about Hell or why she goes on despite the crap she gets. Her answer manages to make him the AntiNihilist for good.
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* StandingRightBehindMe: Mokushiroku makes himself known to Charlie during their second meeting by surprising her by speaking telepathically. Eventually, she turns around to see him crouched on the roof with her.
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* SillyRabbitIdealismIsForLosers: Charlie's way of solving Mokushiroku's rampage (by appealing to his empathy) is seen as foolish by everyone else, even AFTER it works. Vaggie goes ahead and says that her [[AssholeVictim parents should have died due to them already ruining Hell as it was]] and she almost got herself killed for her idea.
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--->'Gone for judgement of this world. Will be back later. Trespassers are welcome to try and break in. I left sandwiches on the left side.'
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* AffablyEvil: Apart from the canon characters that display this trait, Mokushiroku leaves this sign behind after he creates his new fortress in Hell when I.M.P tries to break in.
--->'Gone for judgement of this world. Will be back later. Trespassers are welcome to try and break in. I left sandwiches on the left side.'
--->'Gone for judgement of this world. Will be back later. Trespassers are welcome to try and break in. I left sandwiches on the left side.'
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: During his HeelRealization, Mokushiroku is beside himself when he looks over Charlie's mind, finding her to be pure and making him reflect on what he had done up to that point.
--->What had he ACTUALLY done? Had he fixed anything? The Lost Souls were free, but everything else...[[DestructiveSavior all of this destruction]]...what did it solve? [[PayEvilUntoEvil More violence?]] [[TerrorHero More fear?]] [[NotSoDifferent More of what Starfleet had done to the world he loved?]] So many questions that [[DespairEventHorizon he wasn’t prepared for]]. Therefore, he just let out another roar, [[HowlOfSorrow only it was deeper in pitch and somber in tone.]]
--->What had he ACTUALLY done? Had he fixed anything? The Lost Souls were free, but everything else...[[DestructiveSavior all of this destruction]]...what did it solve? [[PayEvilUntoEvil More violence?]] [[TerrorHero More fear?]] [[NotSoDifferent More of what Starfleet had done to the world he loved?]] So many questions that [[DespairEventHorizon he wasn’t prepared for]]. Therefore, he just let out another roar, [[HowlOfSorrow only it was deeper in pitch and somber in tone.]]
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* PayEvilUntoEvil: As usual, Mokushiroku dishes out some VICIOUS damage to those he deems corrupt. This is true of Lucifer, whom he plans to execute in front of everybody after he violently fights him and Lilith.
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* ImmediateSequel: This takes place almost right after Mokushiroku flew into a rift in time/space.
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* PutThemAllOutOfMyMisery: Mokushiroku originally plans to do this to Equestria and Hell for their crimes, having grown hateful and resentful of both of their corruption. He's talked down from this by Charlie.
* RescueSex: Angel CLEARLY intends to do this Mokushiroku, true to form. He's ignored on this front.
* RescueSex: Angel CLEARLY intends to do this Mokushiroku, true to form. He's ignored on this front.
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* BirdsOfAFeather: As they both realize, Mokushiroku and Charlie have a lot in common. They both struggle in a world filled with corruption, strive to change it (albeit, the monster's solution is much more violent), and they enjoy singing.
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* BirdsOfAFeather: As they both realize, Mokushiroku and Charlie have a lot in common. They both struggle in a world filled with corruption, strive to change it (albeit, the monster's solution is much more violent), [[ArsonMurderAndJayWalking and they enjoy singing.singing]].
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* BirdsOfAFeather: As they both realize, Mokushiroku and Charlie have a lot in common. They both struggle in a world filled with corruption, strive to change it (albeit, the monster's solution is much more violent), and they enjoy singing.
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* HeelRealization: It's implied Charlie's song and speech to Mokushiroku made him realize he's going about his time in Hell all wrong, as he decides to join her in redeeming the souls there in his own way...while still [[FantasticRacism harboring vengeful thoughts to the Space Ponies.]]
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* ShipTease: A fair bit between Mokushiroku and Charlie.
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* AWorldHalfFull: Charlie's speech to Mokushiroku is that she KNOWS Hell is an utterly corrupt and hopeless shithole...but somebody has to give it hope. He's so touched by this that he cancels his plans to annihilate Hell, resulting in him having an epiphany.
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* YouRemindMeOfX: After hearing Charlie's impassioned speech, Mokushiroku warmly comments that she reminds him of a past friend. It's quite obvious he's talking about the deceased Twilight Sparkle.
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* AssShove: Cherri Bomb threatens to shove up a bomb up Angel’s ass after he flirts with Mokushiroku.
* AtopAMountainOfCorpses: Moxie stands on top of a mountain of zombies while firing two sniper rifles.
* AtopAMountainOfCorpses: Moxie stands on top of a mountain of zombies while firing two sniper rifles.
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* AssShove: Cherri Bomb threatens to shove up a bomb up Angel’s Mokushiroku's ass after he Angel flirts with Mokushiroku.
the beast.
* AtopAMountainOfCorpses: Moxie stands on top of a mountain of zombies while [[GunsAkimbo firing two sniperrifles. rifles.]]
* AtopAMountainOfCorpses: Moxie stands on top of a mountain of zombies while [[GunsAkimbo firing two sniper
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* BigDamnHeroes: Mokushiroku inadvertently saves Angel from what was likely going to be a very rough fucking from Valentino and a hammer smashing his head in from Velvet.
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* BigDamnHeroes: Mokushiroku inadvertently saves Angel from what was likely going to be a very rough fucking rape from Valentino and Valentino. Happens again when Velvet attacks Angel with a hammer smashing his head in from Velvet.hammer.
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* CrazyEnoughToWork: Charlie’s plan to stop Mokushiroku from killing her dad? Singing a song to it, which allows Moku to sense that Charlie’s motives are genuine and stops his attack on Hell.
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* CrazyEnoughToWork: Charlie’s plan to stop Mokushiroku from killing her dad? [[MusicSoothesTheSavageBeast Singing a song to it, the monster]], which allows Moku to sense that Charlie’s motives are genuine and stops his attack on Hell.Hell, as well as gives him [[HeelRealization an attack of remorse.]]
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* CurbStompCushion: While Lucifer and Lilith do lose badly against Mokushiroku, they are the only characters up to this point that manage to land some good hits on him.
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* FantasticRacism: When Lilith notes that there’s lass souls than last year, Lucifer says he’ll have a talk with those hillbillies when the tournament’s over.
* FictionalCurrency: When an impaled bouncer gets flung into a slot machine, it causes literal Monopoly money to come out of it.
* FictionalCurrency: When an impaled bouncer gets flung into a slot machine, it causes literal Monopoly money to come out of it.
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* FantasticRacism: When Lilith notes that there’s lass less souls than last year, Lucifer says he’ll have a talk with those hillbillies when the tournament’s over.
over, referring to Millie's family. Makes sense, given Imps are apparently at the lower caste of Hell.
* FictionalCurrency: When an impaled bouncer gets flung into a slot machine, it causes literal Monopoly money to come out of it. The guests are NOT amused when they find out.
* FictionalCurrency: When an impaled bouncer gets flung into a slot machine, it causes literal Monopoly money to come out of it. The guests are NOT amused when they find out.
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* {{Hell}}: Mokushiroku travels to the [[WebAnimation/HazbinHotel Hazbin Hotel]]/[[WebAnimation/HelluvaBoss Helluva Boss]] version of this location.
* ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice: Mokushiroku kills a bouncer by putting his tail through his face.
* ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice: Mokushiroku kills a bouncer by putting his tail through his face.
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* {{Hell}}: Mokushiroku travels to the [[WebAnimation/HazbinHotel Hazbin Hotel]]/[[WebAnimation/HelluvaBoss Helluva Boss]] version of this location.
location. He nearly goes full-on KnightTemplar on the place before choosing a path similar to Charlie's.
* ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice: Mokushiroku kills a bouncer byputting slamming his tail tail-crystal through his face.
* ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice: Mokushiroku kills a bouncer by
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* KickTheDog: Mokushiroku killing Millie and Sallie May’s family because they [[PunchClockVillain were doing their job]] trying to catch the Lost Souls.
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* KickTheDog: Mokushiroku killing Millie and Sallie May’s family because they [[PunchClockVillain were doing their job]] trying to catch the Lost Souls. Even after his HazyFaceTurn, he doesn't mention this moment.
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* MindProbe: Mokushiroku does this to Valentino to get information on where he is. One of the thoughts he gathers is a [[{{Foreshadowing}} Lost Souls Tournament]].
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* MindProbe: Mokushiroku does this to Valentino to get information on where he is. One of the thoughts he gathers is a [[{{Foreshadowing}} Lost Souls Tournament]]. Other times he does this, he's far more benign.
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* NonIndicativeName: The “Tournament” that Lucifer’s holding is more of a Battle Royale, with the name having been a typo and it stuck.
* OrcusOnHisThrone: Alastor spends his time in the colosseum watching everyone fight for their lives against the undead army while he just enjoys the show.
* OrcusOnHisThrone: Alastor spends his time in the colosseum watching everyone fight for their lives against the undead army while he just enjoys the show.
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* NonIndicativeName: The “Tournament” that Lucifer’s holding is more of a Battle Royale, with the name having been a typo and it stuck.
stuck. Lucifer contemplates this for a brief moment.
*OrcusOnHisThrone: PassThePopcorn: Alastor spends his time in the colosseum watching everyone fight for their lives against the undead army while he just enjoys the show.
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* ScrewTheMoneyThisIsPersonal: Blitz decides to go assassinate Mokushiroku for free after he killed one of his coworkers and her sister’s entire family.
* SequelHook: Once Mokushiroku leaves Hell, he decided to give the [[Fanfic/MyBravePonyStarfleetMagic Prison Planet Conva]] a visit…
* SequelHook: Once Mokushiroku leaves Hell, he decided to give the [[Fanfic/MyBravePonyStarfleetMagic Prison Planet Conva]] a visit…
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* ScrewTheMoneyThisIsPersonal: Blitz decides to go assassinate Mokushiroku for free after he killed one of his coworkers and her coworker's/her sister’s entire family.
* SequelHook: Once Mokushiroku leaves Hell, he decided to give the [[Fanfic/MyBravePonyStarfleetMagic Prison Planet Conva]] avisit…visit, fully showing that he's ReformedButNotTamed.
* SequelHook: Once Mokushiroku leaves Hell, he decided to give the [[Fanfic/MyBravePonyStarfleetMagic Prison Planet Conva]] a
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* SmallRoleBigImpact: Despite Millie’s family’s deaths and I.M.P.s involvement in the plot being negligible in this, it does cause all of I.M.P. [[Recap/TheSilverscaleArenaS2E16October2022 to appear in a future Arena]], [[spoiler:with one of them even winning it]].
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* SmallRoleBigImpact: Despite Millie’s family’s deaths and I.M.P.s involvement in the plot being negligible in this, it does cause all of I.M.P. [[Recap/TheSilverscaleArenaS2E16October2022 to appear in a future Arena]], [[spoiler:with one of them even winning it]]. Time will tell if this goes any further.
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* SpotlightStealingCrossover: Despite being listed as a Hazbin Hotel/Helluva Boss/Godzilla/My Little Pony crossover, The world of Equestria is only brought up by Moku at the beginning shortly before he goes to Hell with none of the [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipisMagic My Little Pony]] or [[Fanfic/MyBravePonyStarfleetMagic Starfleet]] characters appearing and those on the Helluva Boss side end up not affecting the plot at all.
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* SpotlightStealingCrossover: Despite being listed as a Hazbin Hotel/Helluva Boss/Godzilla/My Little Pony crossover, The the world of Equestria is only brought up by Moku at the beginning shortly before he goes to Hell with none of the [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipisMagic My Little Pony]] or [[Fanfic/MyBravePonyStarfleetMagic Starfleet]] characters appearing and those appearing. Those on the Helluva Boss side end up not affecting the plot at all.all, aside from some angst and a possible future confrontation.
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* TsunDere: Husk tries to convince Charlie not to save her parents form Mokushiroku killing them by telling her they’re not sure what he wants. And it’s not because he cares about her or anything.
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* TsunDere: {{Tsundere}}: Husk tries to convince Charlie not to save her parents form Mokushiroku killing them by telling her they’re not sure what he wants. [[JerkWithAHeartOfGold And it’s not because he cares about her or anything.]]
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* MindProbe: Mokushiroku does this to Valentino to get information on where he is. One of the thoughts he gathers is a [[Foreshadowing Lost Souls Tournament]].
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* MindProbe: Mokushiroku does this to Valentino to get information on where he is. One of the thoughts he gathers is a [[Foreshadowing [[{{Foreshadowing}} Lost Souls Tournament]].
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* SmallRoleBigImpact: Despite Millie’s family’s deaths and I.M.P.s involvement in the plot being negligible in this, it does cause all of I.M.P. [[Recap/TheSilverscaleArenaS2E16October2022 to appear in a future Arena]], [[spoiler:with one of them even winning it]].
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* KilledOffForReal: Millie’s entire family except for Sallie May gets killed when Mokushiroku destroys their farm. [[[[spoilers:At least until [[BackFromTheDead after the 21st Silverscale Arena that is]]]].
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* KilledOffForReal: Millie’s entire family except for Sallie May gets killed when Mokushiroku destroys their farm. [[[[spoilers:At [[spoiler:At least until [[BackFromTheDead after the 21st Silverscale Arena that is]]]].
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* {{Hell}}: Mokushiroku travels to the [[WebAnimation/HazbinHotel Hazbin Hotel]] /[[WebAnimation/HelluvaBoss Helluva Boss]] version of this location.
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* {{Hell}}: Mokushiroku travels to the [[WebAnimation/HazbinHotel Hazbin Hotel]] /[[WebAnimation/HelluvaBoss Hotel]]/[[WebAnimation/HelluvaBoss Helluva Boss]] version of this location.
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* KilledOffForReal: Millie’s entire family except for Sallie May gets killed when Mokushiroku destroys their farm. [[spoilers:At [[[[spoilers:At least until [[BackFromTheDead after the 21st Silverscale Arena that is]]]].
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“Taking place after “Welcome to United Equestria”, Mokushiroku continues on a wholly new path! A path that will lead him into the realm of Hell! He has plans for this place. Plans that’ll put him on a collision course with many familiar faces. The bigger question is, though, whom will be left standing after he once again unleashes his power? Can he be tamed by the kindness of a certain demon princess and just what did he do to earn the ire of I.M.P.? Come and find out as his saga continues!”
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* AndThenJohnWasAZombie: Millie and Sallie May’s parents become crystalized zombies.
* AssShove: Cherri Bomb threatens to shove up a bomb up Angel’s ass after he flirts with Mokushiroku.
* AtopAMountainOfCorpses: Moxie stands on top of a mountain of zombies while firing two sniper rifles.
* BabiesEverAfter: It’s heavily implied in the last chapter that Moxxie’s considering having a kid with Millie.
* BigDamnHeroes: Mokushiroku inadvertently saves Angel from what was likely going to be a very rough fucking from Valentino and a hammer smashing his head in from Velvet.
* BoomHeadshot: Mokushiroku kills one of Millie and Sallie’s brothers Cal with a crystalized bullet.
* BulletCatch: Mokushiroku catches one of Valentino’s bullets with his mouth.
* CatchAndReturn: Mokushiroku does this with Cal’s bullet and Sallie May’s knife. Sallie May only receives a slash to her arm while Cal [[BoomHeadshot gets the bullet through his brain]].
* CrazyEnoughToWork: Charlie’s plan to stop Mokushiroku from killing her dad? Singing a song to it, which allows Moku to sense that Charlie’s motives are genuine and stops his attack on Hell.
* CurbStompBattle: Every battle against Mokushiroku ends decisively in Moku’s favor.
* CurbStompCushion: While Lucifer and Lilith do lose badly against Mokushiroku, they are the only characters up to this point that manage to land some good hits on him.
* DidYouJustPunchOutCthulhu: Mokushiroku manages to defeat Lucifer and Lilith, the rulers of Hell itself!
* FantasticRacism: When Lilith notes that there’s lass souls than last year, Lucifer says he’ll have a talk with those hillbillies when the tournament’s over.
* FictionalCurrency: When an impaled bouncer gets flung into a slot machine, it causes literal Monopoly money to come out of it.
* GetAholdOfYourselfMan: Blitzo slaps Moxxie while he’s panicking over the undead army to get him to focus on their job.
* {{Hell}}: Mokushiroku travels to the [[WebAnimation/HazbinHotel Hazbin Hotel]] /[[WebAnimation/HelluvaBoss Helluva Boss]] version of this location.
* ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice: Mokushiroku kills a bouncer by putting his tail through his face.
** Two of Millie and Sallie May’s siblings get killed by crystals impaling them.
* IRegretNothing: Lucifer shouts this to the undead angels who are scolding him for his actions.
* KickTheDog: Mokushiroku killing Millie and Sallie May’s family because they [[PunchClockVillain were doing their job]] trying to catch the Lost Souls.
* KilledMidSentence: Cal gets a crystalized bullet through his head while he’s complaining that Mokushiroku is cheating.
* KilledOffForReal: Millie’s entire family except for Sallie May gets killed when Mokushiroku destroys their farm. [[spoilers:At least until [[BackFromTheDead after the 21st Silverscale Arena that is]]]].
* MassOhCrap: Everyone (Except for Lucifer and Alastor) in the colosseum has one when they see Mokushiroku’s undead army. Especially over what was revived:
--->'''Moxxie:''' “Blitz! We need to retreat! He has Angels! FUCKING [[TheDreaded ANGELS]]!”
* MindProbe: Mokushiroku does this to Valentino to get information on where he is. One of the thoughts he gathers is a [[Foreshadowing Lost Souls Tournament]].
* NeckLift: Mokushiroku does this to Valentino so he can get information from the Overlord.
* NoodleIncident: The last time Angel Dust was in one of Valentino’s orgies, he wound up in a dumpster.
* NonIndicativeName: The “Tournament” that Lucifer’s holding is more of a Battle Royale, with the name having been a typo and it stuck.
* OrcusOnHisThrone: Alastor spends his time in the colosseum watching everyone fight for their lives against the undead army while he just enjoys the show.
* PunctuatedForEmphasis: Millie screams “I. WANT. HIS. HEAD.” when the I.M.P. crew (Minus Loona) and Sallie May are heading out to find Mokushiroku.
* ScrewTheMoneyThisIsPersonal: Blitz decides to go assassinate Mokushiroku for free after he killed one of his coworkers and her sister’s entire family.
* SequelHook: Once Mokushiroku leaves Hell, he decided to give the [[Fanfic/MyBravePonyStarfleetMagic Prison Planet Conva]] a visit…
* ShoutOut: When Cherri Bomb throws a bomb at Mokushiroku but doesn’t hear an explosion, she has this to say:
--->'''Cherri Bomb:''' “[[WesternAnimation/LooneyTunes Where’s the kaboom? There’s supposed to be an ear-shattering kaboom!]]”
* SmallRoleBigImpact: Despite Millie’s family’s deaths and I.M.P.s involvement being negligible in this, it does cause all of I.M.P. [[Recap/TheSilverscaleArenaS2E16October2022 to appear in a future Arena]], [[spoiler:with one of them even winning it]].
* SoleSurvivor: Sallie May is the only member of Millie’s family to survive Moku’s attack on the farm.
* SpotlightStealingCrossover: Despite being listed as a Hazbin Hotel/Helluva Boss/Godzilla/My Little Pony crossover, The world of Equestria is only brought up by Moku at the beginning shortly before he goes to Hell with none of the [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipisMagic My Little Pony]] or [[Fanfic/MyBravePonyStarfleetMagic Starfleet]] characters appearing and those on the Helluva Boss side end up not affecting the plot at all.
* TakeThat: Anti-Vaxxers are stated to have increased Hell’s population by a third.
* TranquilFury: Upon hearing of her family’s death, Millie calmly asks a few questions, before slamming her axe down screaming that she [[OffWithHisHead wants Mokushiroku’s head]].
* TrashTheSet: Every location that has a Mokushiroku fight gets destroyed in the process.
* TsunDere: Husk tries to convince Charlie not to save her parents form Mokushiroku killing them by telling her they’re not sure what he wants. And it’s not because he cares about her or anything.
* VomitIndiscretionShot: Sallie May vomits after Mokushiroku leaves, being unable to process what just happened at the farm yet.
* WhamLine: When Sallie May barges into the I.M.P. building, looking all disheveled, Millie asks what happened. Sallie May’s response:
--->'''Sallie May:''' “Our family… they’re all dead.”
* YourSoulIsMine: The winner of Lucifer’s Tournament will get a huge batch of Lost Souls.
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* AndThenJohnWasAZombie: Millie and Sallie May’s parents become crystalized zombies.
* AssShove: Cherri Bomb threatens to shove up a bomb up Angel’s ass after he flirts with Mokushiroku.
* AtopAMountainOfCorpses: Moxie stands on top of a mountain of zombies while firing two sniper rifles.
* BabiesEverAfter: It’s heavily implied in the last chapter that Moxxie’s considering having a kid with Millie.
* BigDamnHeroes: Mokushiroku inadvertently saves Angel from what was likely going to be a very rough fucking from Valentino and a hammer smashing his head in from Velvet.
* BoomHeadshot: Mokushiroku kills one of Millie and Sallie’s brothers Cal with a crystalized bullet.
* BulletCatch: Mokushiroku catches one of Valentino’s bullets with his mouth.
* CatchAndReturn: Mokushiroku does this with Cal’s bullet and Sallie May’s knife. Sallie May only receives a slash to her arm while Cal [[BoomHeadshot gets the bullet through his brain]].
* CrazyEnoughToWork: Charlie’s plan to stop Mokushiroku from killing her dad? Singing a song to it, which allows Moku to sense that Charlie’s motives are genuine and stops his attack on Hell.
* CurbStompBattle: Every battle against Mokushiroku ends decisively in Moku’s favor.
* CurbStompCushion: While Lucifer and Lilith do lose badly against Mokushiroku, they are the only characters up to this point that manage to land some good hits on him.
* DidYouJustPunchOutCthulhu: Mokushiroku manages to defeat Lucifer and Lilith, the rulers of Hell itself!
* FantasticRacism: When Lilith notes that there’s lass souls than last year, Lucifer says he’ll have a talk with those hillbillies when the tournament’s over.
* FictionalCurrency: When an impaled bouncer gets flung into a slot machine, it causes literal Monopoly money to come out of it.
* GetAholdOfYourselfMan: Blitzo slaps Moxxie while he’s panicking over the undead army to get him to focus on their job.
* {{Hell}}: Mokushiroku travels to the [[WebAnimation/HazbinHotel Hazbin Hotel]] /[[WebAnimation/HelluvaBoss Helluva Boss]] version of this location.
* ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice: Mokushiroku kills a bouncer by putting his tail through his face.
** Two of Millie and Sallie May’s siblings get killed by crystals impaling them.
* IRegretNothing: Lucifer shouts this to the undead angels who are scolding him for his actions.
* KickTheDog: Mokushiroku killing Millie and Sallie May’s family because they [[PunchClockVillain were doing their job]] trying to catch the Lost Souls.
* KilledMidSentence: Cal gets a crystalized bullet through his head while he’s complaining that Mokushiroku is cheating.
* KilledOffForReal: Millie’s entire family except for Sallie May gets killed when Mokushiroku destroys their farm. [[spoilers:At least until [[BackFromTheDead after the 21st Silverscale Arena that is]]]].
* MassOhCrap: Everyone (Except for Lucifer and Alastor) in the colosseum has one when they see Mokushiroku’s undead army. Especially over what was revived:
--->'''Moxxie:''' “Blitz! We need to retreat! He has Angels! FUCKING [[TheDreaded ANGELS]]!”
* MindProbe: Mokushiroku does this to Valentino to get information on where he is. One of the thoughts he gathers is a [[Foreshadowing Lost Souls Tournament]].
* NeckLift: Mokushiroku does this to Valentino so he can get information from the Overlord.
* NoodleIncident: The last time Angel Dust was in one of Valentino’s orgies, he wound up in a dumpster.
* NonIndicativeName: The “Tournament” that Lucifer’s holding is more of a Battle Royale, with the name having been a typo and it stuck.
* OrcusOnHisThrone: Alastor spends his time in the colosseum watching everyone fight for their lives against the undead army while he just enjoys the show.
* PunctuatedForEmphasis: Millie screams “I. WANT. HIS. HEAD.” when the I.M.P. crew (Minus Loona) and Sallie May are heading out to find Mokushiroku.
* ScrewTheMoneyThisIsPersonal: Blitz decides to go assassinate Mokushiroku for free after he killed one of his coworkers and her sister’s entire family.
* SequelHook: Once Mokushiroku leaves Hell, he decided to give the [[Fanfic/MyBravePonyStarfleetMagic Prison Planet Conva]] a visit…
* ShoutOut: When Cherri Bomb throws a bomb at Mokushiroku but doesn’t hear an explosion, she has this to say:
--->'''Cherri Bomb:''' “[[WesternAnimation/LooneyTunes Where’s the kaboom? There’s supposed to be an ear-shattering kaboom!]]”
* SmallRoleBigImpact: Despite Millie’s family’s deaths and I.M.P.s involvement being negligible in this, it does cause all of I.M.P. [[Recap/TheSilverscaleArenaS2E16October2022 to appear in a future Arena]], [[spoiler:with one of them even winning it]].
* SoleSurvivor: Sallie May is the only member of Millie’s family to survive Moku’s attack on the farm.
* SpotlightStealingCrossover: Despite being listed as a Hazbin Hotel/Helluva Boss/Godzilla/My Little Pony crossover, The world of Equestria is only brought up by Moku at the beginning shortly before he goes to Hell with none of the [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipisMagic My Little Pony]] or [[Fanfic/MyBravePonyStarfleetMagic Starfleet]] characters appearing and those on the Helluva Boss side end up not affecting the plot at all.
* TakeThat: Anti-Vaxxers are stated to have increased Hell’s population by a third.
* TranquilFury: Upon hearing of her family’s death, Millie calmly asks a few questions, before slamming her axe down screaming that she [[OffWithHisHead wants Mokushiroku’s head]].
* TrashTheSet: Every location that has a Mokushiroku fight gets destroyed in the process.
* TsunDere: Husk tries to convince Charlie not to save her parents form Mokushiroku killing them by telling her they’re not sure what he wants. And it’s not because he cares about her or anything.
* VomitIndiscretionShot: Sallie May vomits after Mokushiroku leaves, being unable to process what just happened at the farm yet.
* WhamLine: When Sallie May barges into the I.M.P. building, looking all disheveled, Millie asks what happened. Sallie May’s response:
--->'''Sallie May:''' “Our family… they’re all dead.”
* YourSoulIsMine: The winner of Lucifer’s Tournament will get a huge batch of Lost Souls.
